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    Chapter three Orochimaru dies to the minions of Five tails.

    Prologue: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=310484
    Chapter 1: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...5#post10079865
    Chapter 2: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=310539

    Chapter three Orochimaru dies to the minions of Five tails.

    Hokage: Orchimaru is dead.
    Everyone in the room jaw drops. The room was so quiet that birds chirping could be heard.
    Hokage: Orchimaru died because of five rogue shinobi from the village hidden in the Stone.
    Naruto: How is that possible that 5 shinobi killed one of the legendary Sannin.
    Hokage: They went rogue and despite what they say the jinchuuriki of the five tails is trying to kill them for betray the village and killing the kage. They says that the five tails gave them powers. They say that they are part of an army so be careful and I urge you to proceed with your students shinobi training as fast as possible.
    Everyone looks stunned.
    Hokage: You are all dismissed.
    Everyone departs talking about the news of Orchimaru. As Hinata and Naruto leave the Hokage mansion Naruto tells her the test he came up with to see how good the students he would get.
    Naruto: I have the perfect test. It the same one that Kakashi sensei gave me. I will add the stipulation that they have to have work together as a team. Any way lets go home.
    Hinata: I can not believe orchimaru is dead it seemed impossible that he would get killed.
    Kushina gets home before her parents and tells the guys she will try to find out what the test will be.
    Naruto and Hinata get home and ask Kushina how practice was.
    Kushina: Oh yes it was great so what the test going to be on tomorrow.
    Naruto: (laughs) I figured you would ask so no I am not going to tell you.
    Everyone goes to bed and Naruto has a strange dream where the sage of six path is trying to warn him about a wolf.
    The next day the sun is up and Kushina finds that her dad is all ready at the testing sight. She meets up with Shinamura and Neji and tells them that her dad would not talk about the test. When they get to the training grounds they are shocked that Naruto is wearing three bells under the flack jacket he is wearing when he became a Jonin.
    Naruto: You have 48 hours to get these bells or you fail. Remember use the terrain to your advantage. One more rule no sage mode or ocular power until the first day ends. Remember make sure that the one you are attacking is me not a clone or substitution. No killing is allowed but other than that anything goes. The test begins now.
    Naruto drops a smoke bomb. The smoke bomb release a cloud of red smoke out of respect to Kurama. Once the smoke clears they see Naruto is gone.
    Kushina: We have to tread carefully my dad already has the advantage of territory since he has shadow clones and wind and fire style.
    Neji: Lets go and be careful then.
    They go into the forest where they find four shadow clones.
    Very silently shinamura whistles and Kushina and Neji look
    Shinamura: (mouths) attack.
    Suddenly three kunia come out from the branches from the side of the four clones. All three kunia hit the clones but one clone deflects one that took one clone out and was meant to take the fourth one out. Really quickly the clone jumps to a branch but is quickly taken out by a fourth kunia.
    Quickly realizing that shadow clones could be any where just like the real Naruto. They search for another couple of hours but nothing happens.
    Shinamura: Damn it sensei is to fast and we still have to contend with the clones. At least now its almost night fall and tomorrow we can use ocular powers.
    Kushina: Do not forget dad can also use sage mode. He is still teaching a piece of sage mode but the problem is I still have not mastered frog kumite but other than that I can still use sage mode.
    Neji: You did not tell us this earlier why?
    Kushina: I did not tell you because dad has the upper hand their so going into is a bit of a waste.
    Shinamura: True Sensei does know about but we do have an advantage he does not have which is that we can sense where he is with the sharrigan and sage mode but we still have to get the original and find a safe place to sleep.
    Naruto is listening in on the conversation in the tree line thinking damn it they took down all four clones down to fast but I can fix that. I am defiantly going to have to a think about a better strategy. Besides it time to see how they do against the original.
    Naruto suddenly appears behind Neji with a kunia to his neck because he was facing away from Naruto.
    Naruto: Clever if I did not just hear your entire plan.

    The last day of the Final concludes in the next story.
    Success for the students and the villains. link: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...0#post10100640
     
         
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    Re: Chapter three Orochimaru dies to the minions of Five tails.

    Nice collection of the alphabet you have there :drive:
     
         

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    Thanks
     
         

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    Re: Chapter three Orochimaru dies to the minions of Five tails.

    Kushina has Sage Mode and Orochimaru is dead? Interesting chapter, man. I wonder if Orochimaru is really dead though. That guy always trolls death. Hmmm...
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by ItachiLeeHatake View Post
    Kushina has Sage Mode and Orochimaru is dead? Interesting chapter, man. I wonder if Orochimaru is really dead though. That guy always trolls death. Hmmm...
    Well for now he is dead but if he comes back you will just have to wait and see.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter three Orochimaru dies to the minions of Five tails.

    impressive work. mark a true genious
     
         

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    impressive work. mark a true genious
    Thank you for your input
     
         

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    nice job maby you could help kishi with akkupuden
     
         

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