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    Chapter 6 Team Seven vs. Five rogue Hidden Stone shinobi and their minions

    Chapter 3: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=310643
    Chapter 4: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=311334
    Chapter 5: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=312595

    Team Seven vs. Five rogue Hidden Stone shinobi and their minions

    Team Seven has left the village for their mission.
    Naruto: Ok Neji and Shinamura, since we have officially begun our mission, let me tell you the details.
    Neji: About time…
    Shinamura: So what is the mission?
    Naruto briefly stops on a tree branch and the rest of his team follows. Team Seven was only about a mile off of the Hidden Leaf. Naruto thought, just as he left the hidden leaf, that someone was following them, but he imagined it was just his anxiety for the mission. However, now he was sure someone was following them.
    Naruto: You-
    Before Naruto could finish five kunia come out from behind the tree and to his left. Naruto and team 7 disperse. Four shinobi go after team 7 and one shinobi goes after Naruto.
    Naruto: Fire style: Fire Ball Jutsu!
    ?????: Water style: Water Dragon Bullet
    Naruto's Fire ball gets destroyed and the water dragon continues on its way to Naruto, however, Naruto used a shadow clone to move himself out of the way. Naruto thinks to himself, “what the hell! I thought only the Second Hokage could do that?”
    Naruto: Crap. No wonder these shinobi killed Orochimaru. These guys are good.
    ?????: My team and I serve the people who killed Orochimaru.
    Naruto thinks to himself, “Damn, I have to beat him to get answers.”
    Naruto: Fire style: Fire Wave!
    ?????: Fire style again. How is this guy a threat to our master? Water style: Exploding Water Colliding Wave.

    When the two justus collide and explode, they release a massive amount of steam covering a three mile radius. Naruto disappears as the two justu hit, and finds that the mysterious shinobi cannot see anything.
    Naruto goes into Kyuubi charka mode. Naruto thinks to himself, “Now I can sense him and he cannot do anything.”
    Naruto: Fire style: Multi Firefox Bombs!
    In a flash suddenly hundreds of fire bombs appear. This justu consist of a huge amount of fire charka condensed and launched at the enemy in huge numbers. In a flash, after the explosions of the justu, the steam cleared and the shinobi Naruto was facing were lying half dead in a giant pile of ash, that used to be trees. 60 feet in diameter each at a random interval, killing three out of the four shinobi that chased team 7 and the last one had time to hide in the earth.
    Back in the village, Hinata and Sai where sparring with each other when Naruto unleashed the torrent of fire style; which caused everyone in the hidden leaf to stop and watch the justu. Hinata immediately saw what was going on. They both went to report to the Hokage.
    Naruto left Kyuubi mode. He quickly picked up the shinobi, who apparently was from the hidden mist village. Naruto quickly saw where his squad was and went to meet up with them.

    As Naruto's fight was going on team 7 engaged the four shinobi that went after them.
    Kushina: Fire style: Fire Dragon Flame
    ??????: Crap, the only water style shinobi we have went after Kyuubi.
    The mysterious voice and the rest of the people there disperse and avoid the justu.
    ??????: That girl is good….
    Neji: Wind Style: Rotating Shuriken
    ??????: Oh hell no. Those kids are both attacking and using each other as a distracting.
    The mysterious voice almost gets killed as the shuriken comes close to cutting off his head. But, he used a justu to hide himself in the Earth. Then Naruto's justu happened.

    Back in the village Hinata and Sai run back to the Hokage mansion and knocked on the door but the Hokage says comes in just as they are about to do it.
    Hinata: Hokage, did…. (Pause to breath)
    Sai: (Picks ups were Hinata left off) did you see what just happened?
    Hokage: Yes, now go back Naruto up. Whoever could force him to go into Kyuubi charka mode is indeed strong.
    Hinata,Sai: Yes sir.

    Naruto arrives to see Kushina and Neji panting, but they appeared to be unharmed. Naruto goes up to them.
    Naruto: Hey, are you guys all right?
    Kushina: Yes.
    Neji: Where is Shinamura? Yea, I’m fine.
    Shinamura arrives and answers Neji
    Shinamura: Right here. Sensei, next time watch where you fire your justu. I almost got killed after I accidentally created a painted bird and attached bombs to it. Then your justu went off and almost got me, but incinerated him. Sorry.
    Naruto: No need. First we deliver this guy to the Hokage and then we continue with our mission. Damn it! Seems one of the guys hid under the earth as my justu went off and survived without any damage.
    ?????: It seems that we underestimated you. You definitely are better than Orochimura. My team and I lead our master’s five armies. He was not even worth our time. You, however, have lived up to our expectations.
    Naruto: Where are you so I can pulverize you?
    Suddenly an explosive Kunia comes out of the ground right next to Naruto's foot and starts to blow up. As this happens Naruto grabs his three students and throws them away from the kunia.
    Hinata and Sai arrive at the scene just as the explosion happens. As Naruto tries to escape the force of the blast, it breaks his leg. Hinata sees the man flee and quickly realizes that chasing after him is a waste of time, so she quickly searches for the rest of team Seven . She finds Neji, Kushina, and Shinamura tired but otherwise unhurt. As the smoke clears Hinata can clearly see Naruto is injured. She helps Naruto up, and they quickly return to the Leaf. Once Naruto's leg was healed, they reported to the Hokage. After they report to the Hokage, he quickly sends messenger hawks to report Naruto's skirmish to the other Kages.

    Chapter 7: The new team member for team 7 link: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...5#post10189255
     
         
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    Re: Chapter 6 Team Seven vs. Five rogue Hidden Stone shinobi and their minions

    Nice work!
     
         

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    Nice work!
    Thank you. So did you read all of chapters
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 6 Team Seven vs. Five rogue Hidden Stone shinobi and their minions

    Great chapter! Man, you're getting good at detailing battle scenes. I love this team 7 wayyyyy more than the original team seven.
     
         

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    Great chapter! Man, you're getting good at detailing battle scenes. I love this team 7 wayyyyy more than the original team seven.
    Thank you. I am still working out the kinks with describing none battle scenes
     
         

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    impressive work. mark a true genious
     
         

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