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    life2(poem)

    hope u like it guys...

    With certain issues to deal with,
    I can't help but be sincere.
    The way I perceive and remember
    those times when I was in pain.

    On the height of my affliction,
    I was like a man with no sense of direction;
    I walked by, looked around and thought of someone
    Hardly could I get what I was looking for.

    Perhaps, it might take a while
    To go within and be plunged into the mainstream;
    To hold on time and keep pace with reason
    where a good perspective becomes a guiding mirror.

    I'm convinced though that life must go on,
    Amid some discomforts and frustrations;
    The goal towards reconciliation
    makes me believe that Hope can conquer them all.

    Leafing through the pages where I've been to
    there's one, singularly marked with precaution.
    It's on the edge with deep heights and cliffs,
    at the crossroads lie the struggles involved.
     
         

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    Bet I got some weed, bet I got
    some weed, bet she on her
    knees; bet she swallow ****,
    bet she love my swag, bet she
    leave yo ass
     

    Re: life2(poem)

    Pretty good. Some who have no understanding of what poetry is will say they dislike it because it doesn't rhythm and to them I say you missed the point. + Rep to a fellow poet.
     
         

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    Nice.
     
         

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