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    Hiruko Uzumaki

    Basic Information
    Name:Hiruko Uzumaki
    Nickname:Blue Flash
    Gender:Male
    Age:15
    Clan:Uzumaki Clan,Hyuuga Clan(Mother's Side)

    Looks:
    Hiruko bears a striking resemblence to his mother and father.He has his mother's hair colour,while his father's spiky hair design.He also has his Mother's face and a mixture of both his parent's eyes,getting a blue byakugan(Note:not developed byakugan till Jounin).
    Hiruko with his Younger sister,Hikari Uzumaki.

    Personality
    Hiruko at his Childhood is characterised as shy, thoughtful, serene, kind, and very polite, as noted from him always addressing people with honorifics.As he grows older,he begins to act more like his father,such as pulling pranks,etc.
    After the advice his father gave him him,he begins to act more mature.Thanks to this,He wishes to surpass both his parents one day,and stand up for others.He is also having a rivalry with Itachi Uchiha,son of the Uchiha Clan head,Sasuke Uchiha.

    Village Info
    Village of Birth:Konohagakure
    Village of Alliance:Konohagakure
    Rank/Chakra Info
    Ninja Rank:Chunnin
    Specialty:Suiton/Fuuton
    Elements:
    Katon:Training
    Suiton:E rank Techniques
    Fuuton:E rank techniques
    Raiton:Training
    Doton:Training
    Your Ninjutsu
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    Background Info
    History:
    Hiruko was the First child of Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze,Rokudaime Hokage and Hinata Hyuga(Uzumaki),Former Clan head of the Hyuga clan.

    So,What do you think about this bio?
     
         
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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Orange flash GTFO
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Well, you know....your guy should have the Rinnegan.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    i dont like how he looks it just doesnt fit right
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Saikyokage View Post
    Orange flash GTFO
    Here, fixed.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by GwemBaba View Post
    Well, you know....your guy should have the Rinnegan.
    Only Nagato bio's Can have Rinnegan.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Sorry but you can't make bios of children of characters that have yet to show in the anime/manga.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    I don't believe you fit the requirements for hiruko you might wanna check as you have to be tested on this character as well.

    Ah I c what you did custom character with that name. Gl getting that approved as there is already hiruko bio's out there so not sure they will allow this.
     
         
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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    Sorry but you can't make bios of children of characters that have yet to show in the anime/manga.
    I'm not trying to prove you wrong or anything,but why are some fictional characters from OTHER Anime/Manga be approved when fictional(Made up) characters,basically from this Anime/Manga not be allowed?
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by NidaimeRikudouSennin View Post
    I'm not trying to prove you wrong or anything,but why are some fictional characters from OTHER Anime/Manga be approved when fictional(Made up) characters,basically from this Anime/Manga not be allowed?
    As long as their history is naruto related and follow the bio template then they are fine. But when it comes to children of main characters in the anime/manga they are not allowed. If those two characters were never shown having a kid then you cannot make it. I asked Caliburn this a few months ago and he told me bios that are offsprings of characters from the anime/manga aren't allowed.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
    As long as their history is naruto related and follow the bio template then they are fine. But when it comes to children of main characters in the anime/manga they are not allowed. If those two characters were never shown having a kid then you cannot make it. I asked Caliburn this a few months ago and he told me bios that are offsprings of characters from the anime/manga aren't allowed.
    that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by From the Dark Spire View Post
    that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
    :sy:

    This bio will be declined, end of story

    For the exact reasons in the posts above
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by From the Dark Spire View Post
    that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
    Feel free to look at my vms to caliburn about this if you don't believe. Also, Naruto and Hinata are only 16 years old so they are way too young to even have a kid or kids for that matter.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    well for 1 you don't really fit requirments for Hyuuga as you need 1500 posts for that


    for 2, you can't make bio which is children of character that doesn't have any child, i mean, for example Naruto and Hinata both might die in the war meaning your bio would never exist


    Quote Originally Posted by From the Dark Spire View Post
    that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
    you do understand you're telling him to break the rules which would make him to get infraction and possibly get him banned, right?
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    How do you expect to get approval when you didn't even follow the template or any rules. Also your history is one line long... Everything else has been said above^^



    These links will help you.

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    Restrictions for abilities and characters: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=115551

    Bio Template- You must stick to this when making bio http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1950
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Well,I am thinking of dropping this bio.
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    might aswell just make a new one
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    I like this bio. But as well I don't understand how the bio thing work lol, keep re-reading the rules and threads about it but still, nah. Can't understand
     
         

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    Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

    Remake it. Complete parts of the template are missing, you do not fit the requirements for a Hyuuga bio, so remove everything about that. Also even if you had it, it's not allowed to have two clans in the same bio. Remove all specialties as you have none, remove all those elements, you had zero training so don't lie and say you did. In your first bio you can only post the first element you want to learn and add that you still need training in it. Finally write more history, you had one sentence and it's one that breaks the rules.
     
         

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