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      Hiruko Uzumaki

      Basic Information
      Name:Hiruko Uzumaki
      Nickname:Blue Flash
      Gender:Male
      Age:15
      Clan:Uzumaki Clan,Hyuuga Clan(Mother's Side)

      Looks:
      Hiruko bears a striking resemblence to his mother and father.He has his mother's hair colour,while his father's spiky hair design.He also has his Mother's face and a mixture of both his parent's eyes,getting a blue byakugan(Note:not developed byakugan till Jounin).
      Hiruko with his Younger sister,Hikari Uzumaki.

      Personality
      Hiruko at his Childhood is characterised as shy, thoughtful, serene, kind, and very polite, as noted from him always addressing people with honorifics.As he grows older,he begins to act more like his father,such as pulling pranks,etc.
      After the advice his father gave him him,he begins to act more mature.Thanks to this,He wishes to surpass both his parents one day,and stand up for others.He is also having a rivalry with Itachi Uchiha,son of the Uchiha Clan head,Sasuke Uchiha.

      Village Info
      Village of Birth:Konohagakure
      Village of Alliance:Konohagakure
      Rank/Chakra Info
      Ninja Rank:Chunnin
      Specialty:Suiton/Fuuton
      Elements:
      Katon:Training
      Suiton:E rank Techniques
      Fuuton:E rank techniques
      Raiton:Training
      Doton:Training
      Your Ninjutsu
      (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
      Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

      (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

      (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

      (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:N/A
      Damage Points:N/A
      The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

      (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

      (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

      (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

      Background Info
      History:
      Hiruko was the First child of Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze,Rokudaime Hokage and Hinata Hyuga(Uzumaki),Former Clan head of the Hyuga clan.

      So,What do you think about this bio?
       
           
      Last edited by NidaimeRikudouSennin; 02-01-2013 at 04:04 PM.

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Orange flash GTFO
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Well, you know....your guy should have the Rinnegan.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      i dont like how he looks it just doesnt fit right
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Quote Originally Posted by Saikyokage View Post
      Orange flash GTFO
      Here, fixed.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Quote Originally Posted by GwemBaba View Post
      Well, you know....your guy should have the Rinnegan.
      Only Nagato bio's Can have Rinnegan.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Sorry but you can't make bios of children of characters that have yet to show in the anime/manga.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      I don't believe you fit the requirements for hiruko you might wanna check as you have to be tested on this character as well.

      Ah I c what you did custom character with that name. Gl getting that approved as there is already hiruko bio's out there so not sure they will allow this.
       
           
      Last edited by Juha; 02-01-2013 at 04:15 PM.

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
      Sorry but you can't make bios of children of characters that have yet to show in the anime/manga.
      I'm not trying to prove you wrong or anything,but why are some fictional characters from OTHER Anime/Manga be approved when fictional(Made up) characters,basically from this Anime/Manga not be allowed?
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Quote Originally Posted by NidaimeRikudouSennin View Post
      I'm not trying to prove you wrong or anything,but why are some fictional characters from OTHER Anime/Manga be approved when fictional(Made up) characters,basically from this Anime/Manga not be allowed?
      As long as their history is naruto related and follow the bio template then they are fine. But when it comes to children of main characters in the anime/manga they are not allowed. If those two characters were never shown having a kid then you cannot make it. I asked Caliburn this a few months ago and he told me bios that are offsprings of characters from the anime/manga aren't allowed.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Quote Originally Posted by Albel Nox View Post
      As long as their history is naruto related and follow the bio template then they are fine. But when it comes to children of main characters in the anime/manga they are not allowed. If those two characters were never shown having a kid then you cannot make it. I asked Caliburn this a few months ago and he told me bios that are offsprings of characters from the anime/manga aren't allowed.
      that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Quote Originally Posted by From the Dark Spire View Post
      that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.


      This bio will be declined, end of story

      For the exact reasons in the posts above
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by From the Dark Spire View Post
      that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
      Feel free to look at my vms to caliburn about this if you don't believe. Also, Naruto and Hinata are only 16 years old so they are way too young to even have a kid or kids for that matter.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      well for 1 you don't really fit requirments for Hyuuga as you need 1500 posts for that


      for 2, you can't make bio which is children of character that doesn't have any child, i mean, for example Naruto and Hinata both might die in the war meaning your bio would never exist


      Quote Originally Posted by From the Dark Spire View Post
      that's a bunch of bullsh*t. Makes you not want to make a bio at all on this website. And besides, it's his character, he created it. Don't listen to anybody, original poster, if your bio isn't approved, screw it, just use it anyway.
      you do understand you're telling him to break the rules which would make him to get infraction and possibly get him banned, right?
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      How do you expect to get approval when you didn't even follow the template or any rules. Also your history is one line long... Everything else has been said above^^



      These links will help you.

      Link to Basic RP Rules: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=27963

      Restrictions for abilities and characters: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=115551

      Bio Template- You must stick to this when making bio http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1950
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Well,I am thinking of dropping this bio.
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      might aswell just make a new one
       
           

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      I like this bio. But as well I don't understand how the bio thing work lol, keep re-reading the rules and threads about it but still, nah. Can't understand
       
           

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      Re: Hiruko Uzumaki

      Remake it. Complete parts of the template are missing, you do not fit the requirements for a Hyuuga bio, so remove everything about that. Also even if you had it, it's not allowed to have two clans in the same bio. Remove all specialties as you have none, remove all those elements, you had zero training so don't lie and say you did. In your first bio you can only post the first element you want to learn and add that you still need training in it. Finally write more history, you had one sentence and it's one that breaks the rules.
       
           

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