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    Chapter Seven: The New Member of Team Seven

    Chapter 4: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=311334
    Chapter 5: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=312595
    Chapter 6: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=313487

    Chapter Seven: The New Member of Team Seven
    After leaving the Hokage mansion, team seven was annoyed because their mission was postponed. Another thing that made them angry was the fact that they had managed to face off against one of people who had killed Orochimura and let him get away. The last thing that pissed them off was that their sensei, Naruto could not go on a mission for two weeks because his leg would still not hold his full weight.
    Naruto: I hope the Hokage can get information out on the guy we captured.
    Neji: Sorry Sensei, if I had paid more attention I would have seen that kunai coming.
    Naruto: Do not worry about Neji. Everyone from time to time will get hurt on a mission. Beside once I have recovered we still have to complete the mission.
    Kushina: What I want to know is what those two temples mean. One unleashed a wolf of some sort but what did the other?
    Shinamura: Well perhaps the Wolf is a Bijuu sort of like Kyuubi is. Well if we assume that the wolf is a Bijuu, then perhaps the second temple will give the wolf back his charka.
    Naruto: You’re wrong with that Shinamura. Remembe,r he powered at least nine people to varying levels. Besides, the second temple might hold something else entirely.
    Shinamura: Well whatever is in the second temple, I just hope that it’s good and will help us. If it will help, the wolf then it should stay in its own temple.

    Meanwhile a hidden room in the second temple opened as a kid got out.
    ????: (Thinks to himself) So sensei's bijuu was defeated a second time. Well, this is just great! This means the temple I hid in, in what is now called the Land of Lighting, has appeared. Oh well, at least the disease I had ten thousand years ago is no longer in my body. Well time to get out of this dark room. It is time to go to the Hidden Leaf to see Kurama's jinchuuriki. I hope he remembers my charka, otherwise I will have to use a genjustu on the Hokage to protect him.
    A hidden door opens up in the temple and a kid whose age is about sixteen steps out of a dark room. He wears a blue shirt and blue pants. Right where the shirt ends he wears a silver sash with the five elements on it. On top of the shirt he wears a silver cloak that has the five elements in the middle of his back.

    The scene fades into the 3 days at Hidden Leaf training grounds where team 7 is training. When all of a sudden the mystery kid arrives. Everyone in team seven wonders who the mysterious person is with all this charka.
    Deep within Naruto subconscious Kurama senses the charka.
    Kurama: Impossible. This charka should not be here.
    Naruto: Wait Kurama, you know this charka?
    Kurama: He was the first student the Sage of Six Paths had. At that point the Sage did not have kids yet.
    Naruto: Wait, why did you say this is impossible?
    Kurama: (In a sad voice) The kid had a mysterious disease that started to kill him every time he used too much charka.
    Naruto: I see but why is he here now.
    Kurama: In order to make sure that his bijuu did not run wild, the Sage of six paths agreed to remove the disease from his body and put him in a coma until that happened.
    Naruto: Wait so how powerful is his bijuu?
    Kurama: It does not matter because his buuji has three special abilities. First the buuji has immunity to all element attacks. The second is that the buuji can use all five elements. The third thing is that he has immunity to genjustu.
    Naruto: So how did this kid beat it?
    Kurama: His clan specialized in the manipulation of all five elements if they were as strong as him. They also specialized in sealing justu.
    Naruto: Do you happen to remember his name?
    Kurama: Give me an hour, it’s been a while.
    Naruto: Well you won't get that much time because he is close and is heading towards the Hokage's mansion.
    Kurama: Well he probably wants to join team seven and he has the ability to achieve that.
    Naruto: He is a bit old isn't he?
    Kurama: He looks young for his age.
    Naruto: Well training is over so let’s go meet him and while we are doing that you have to remember his name.

    The meeting chapter 8 Link: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...6#post10265676
     
         
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    Re: Chapter Seven: The New Member of Team Seven

    Hey, split apart your conversation and text. Description should be italicized. Just fyi.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter Seven: The New Member of Team Seven

    Thanks for the tip.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter Seven: The New Member of Team Seven

    what is it about team 7
     
         

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    Re: Chapter Seven: The New Member of Team Seven

    Quote Originally Posted by godzillard View Post
    what is it about team 7
    So what did you think of the story?
    I picked team seven because it will foreshadow something in the future
     
         

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