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My First Bio!!!!
Shirokami
Basic Information
Name: Niiroshikaku Shirokami[レッドビジョン 白髪]
Nickname:Red Vision
Gender:Male
Age:18
Height:152.4cm
Birthday:Jan 25
Horoscope:Aquarius
Eyes:Reddish/Auburn
Blood Type:O
Clan: /
Looks
Pale skin ,long white hair, with red intense eyes. Has a strong build, tall, and wears his favorite leather jacket on occasions. He wears long leather jeans, with a slit that can be found on the left pant legg on his knee. Has a scar on his back from when he was kidnapped by Orochimaru as a child, the scar stretches from his neck, down to his lower back, from being a test subject.
Personality
An introvert, Wise, Apprehensive , Kindred Spirit, that knows nothing of his origin, since he lost his memory at the age of seven. Shirokami believes that every human being has a dark side in them, so we should not judge. He has little friends, as chaotic as his life is, he doesn't have much time for them. Shirokami has been tricked many times by the people he's considered "friends", which is why he became apprehensive. His ex-wife(Married young) was a spy from the rock village, and tried to capture him to be tested on by the Rock Village. Shirokami is constantly on his tippy toes, having to sneak from place to place.
Village Info:
Village of Birth:Konoha
Village of Alliance:None
Rank//Chakra Info
Rank:JOUNIN
Specialty:
None
Elements:
Fire Release-Need Training
Your Ninjutsu:
Background Info
History: Shirokami's was born in Konoha, but was kidnapped by Orochimaru. At the age of thirteen, he managed to escape. A woman with a leaf village headband by the name Anko was currently on a long mission, she stayed in a cabin to get rest, as she rests she sees a homeless child with a huge scar on his back, she could smell that the boy belonged to Orochimaru, since she was once his student. Anko took care of him for a while, but only until the mission was over, the mission was over, but Shiromaki begged for her to take him with her, but she refused, as it would give Orochimaru a reason to attack the village. Knowing how dissapointed the boy was, Anko decided to teach Shirokami ways to live undercover without being found, so that he could survive. Every since that day he's been running away, never finding peace.
Other
Pictures:
Theme Song and Background Music:
Battles
Wins: 0
Lost: 0
~Approved~ edited stuff, next time follow the template correctly. Have fun RPing.
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Last edited by Caliburn; 02-20-2013 at 03:39 PM.
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
Nice bio!
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
 Originally Posted by Kages
Nice bio! 
Thanks bud, took me a while to make it!
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
You might want to put these [CENTER] [/CENTE] around your pic to put it in the middle. That would make it look better. :D
( I purposely removed the r to show you but yeah xD
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Last edited by The Shogun; 02-08-2013 at 01:17 AM.
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
 Originally Posted by TheGreatUchiha
You might want to put these [CENTER] [/CENTE] around your pic to put it in the middle. That would make it look better. :D
( I purposely removed the r to show you but yeah xD
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
 Originally Posted by Dreckerplayer
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No problem bro. :D But umm add the last r for center so it should look like this [/CENTER]
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
 Originally Posted by TheGreatUchiha
No problem bro. :D But umm add the last r for center so it should look like this [/CENTER]
Lmao, yeah I noticed.
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
Nice bio and all but I think you should re-read the RP rules. You can't have Lava, Scorch and Swift on one bio not only that but I don't think you meet the requirments for any of those abilities as they need you to have mastered at least 2 of the basic 5 elements(Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, and Lightning). You also need to put Jounin down as your rank since your Rp rank goes by your post count. Also, since you are Jounin you need to pick 4 out of the 5 basic elements to start out with and when you do pick them you need to put "Need Training" next to them.
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
to add to what abel said you also can have a specility,you can only specilise in something if you have mastered it,other then that it seems everyone else has already explain what was wrong and youve changed it so its a nice bio well done
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
 Originally Posted by X_Deltareon_X
to add to what abel said you also can have a specility,you can only specilise in something if you have mastered it,other then that it seems everyone else has already explain what was wrong and youve changed it so its a nice bio well done
Thanks man
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
Much better. Good job. ^^
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Re: My First Bio!!!!
 Originally Posted by Kuroh..
Much better. Good job. ^^
Thanks!I just hope this gets approved...
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