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    [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Greetings, Professor Sarutobi.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    ϗ Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    ϗ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    ϗ Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    ϗ Terrain: Where Sasuke & Ay fought at the Kage summit
    ϗ You may use The Raikage's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    ϗ We start mid range from each other.
    ϗ If you have any questions please ask them through VM.

    I will be using a pair of Kage ranked Suigetsu Hozuki & MS Sauske Uchiha for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

    May the Gods be on your side, mate.
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=307320

    thank you for conducting bro let's have a good fight
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi


    Good luck, man. Be thoughtful of your replies and don't be predictable.
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    Suigetsu and Sasuke hear Karins works about something huge coming. They look up due to the slamming sound from the ceiling high above them. "This isn't good.." Suigetsu thought to himself - know that the kages at this summit were not to be messed with. Sasuke still looks clam, steady, not a care.. SUDDENLY!! The ceiling comes crumbling down, Suigetsu blocks his eyes while the dust of the falling rocks covers the air. As it clears, three men stand.

    "Sasuke! The huge one in the middle is the Raikage!! Don't get close!!"

    Sasuke looks at the Raikage, slight rage in his eyes due to this beast of a man blocking his way. The two men next to the Raikage speak to him but it's hard to hear. The Raikage suddenly yells something pertaining about his so called brother Bee, the 8 tails host. Suigetsu seems to take a defensive stance, unsure about the next turn of events. Looking at Sasuke he thinks and sweat drips down his face "This won't be easy, even with the sharingan on our side.." Shortly after that, Suigetsu hears the Raikage speak of the sharingan..he assumes Sasuke has activated it. Suigetsu gets ready, staring at the Raikage.

    "You will not enjoy this, Raikage. But it will be over quickly.."

    Doujutsu: Sharingan | Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye /passive
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
    Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
    Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
    Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

    In a burst of speed, Sasuke begins to run directly at the Raikage while removing his katana and channeling a strong current of lighting through it - greatly increasing the cutting power of the katana to a very high extent. At the same time Sasuke bursts towards the Raikage, Suigetsu thinks "Oh sh*t, it's time!" he quickly slams his hands on the ground causing a water to rise up around the Raikage. The orb surrounds the Raikage, trapping him inside. As the orb covered him, Sasukes thrusts the lighting sword directly into the orb, electrifying the water while also stabbing the Raikage.

    Chō Biburāto Raitontō | Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
    Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

    Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko | Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
    Note: Technique creates its own water source

     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    A and his bodyguards explode through the wall of the Kage's summit after snapping the White Zetsu's neck. The nerve of a criminal toying with one of the five kage!

    As the Kumogakure trio runs through the hall the Raikage's bodyguard C informs A that he can sense multiple chakra sources disappearing directly below them, it must be Sasuke Uchiha. Upon hearing this A wastes no time in smashing the thick stone floor below them with a single blow letting the three ninja drop down to the floor below in a cloud of dust and debris. The cloud is quickly dispersed by the Raikage as he swings his right arm, throwing off his Kage jacket in preparation for battle.


    Brat! I'll teach you to fear my anger!!!

    As A has said this Sasuke activates his Sharingan eyes.

    Those eyes, the eyes of hatred from your clan, I'll tear them out of your skull!

    A's anger has reached a boiling point seeing his brother's killer draw his sword and running towards him, Darui and C move away from the Raikage and engage the rest of Sasuke's team.

    As the water begins to gush up around the Raikage's feet he glances down away from his main target, both hearing and feeling the water forming below him and only being slightly annoyed by it, even though his anger is focused towards the missing nin Sasuke his years of experience as both a ninja and Kage force him to make note of all of the surrondings and enemies nearby. Seeing the criminal' s white haired helper slamming his hands on the ground A assumes he is the one using water release as well as having previous information on Uchiha Sasuke that the two elements he is proficient in are Fire and Lightning. Using his immense physical strength and speed he spins as the water is around his legs his massive leg muscles able to easily toss the water away as he performs a spinning back kick, beginning to move forward as he tosses the water off of him A coats his hands in lightning and meets the Akatsuki scum, grabbing his blade with his left lightning coated hand (you never said who was one which side so in my head sasuke was to A's right and Suigetsu to the left hand side) and dealing a right blow to Sasuke's chest at half power as a warning sending the teenager flying back into his accomplice, splattering him as Sasuke soars through his liquid body. A's rage stays focused on his brother's killer as he stomps forward with blood shot eyes, his hands still crackling with lightning as he prepares to end the life of the uchiha before him.

    No, this won't be over quickly... I'm going to enjoy breaking every bone in your body!

    konoha Gōriki Senpū ) - Leaf Strong Whirlwind

    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: A taijutsu using a combination of speed and power. The essence of this technique is concentrated in a spinning back kick, with such speed that makes it hard to follow the user's movement, smashing his enemy with overwhelming strength. This is a more Powerful leaf great whirlwind.


    (Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.
     
         

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    "You can't compete with these eyes, Raikage!!"

    As Sasuke is bursting towards the Raikage with his lighting katana in his right hand. Using his sharingan to it's utmost abilities, seeing in slow motion the Raikage burst his legs out in a back kick knocking away Suigetsu's water. "Damn!!" thinks Suigetsu. As the Riakage rips from the water orb, Sasuke stops short and in one motion tosses his lighting infused katana directed just towards the ground around the Raikage's feet. The lightning blade would strike the water that is still on the ground and even though you busted out of the orb you would still be wet while standing in the water on the ground - this causing you to be conducted by the lightning. Not killing but numbing certainly. Suigetsu smiles "That's Sasuke!! Always thinking of a way!" Suigetsu, starts by bursting off to the right ride of the Raikage while he's being conducted and while he runs Suigetsu removes the Kubikiribōchōand off his back and swings it towards the Raikage releasing a power condensed slice of water towards him. At this same time, Sasuke actives his MS, while siding off to the left of the Raikage. This happens while you're numbed up - giving them enough time to at least send the water slice at you.

    Suiton: Mizu Kendan | Water Release: Water Blade Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Suigetsu will concentrate his water chakra into Kubikiribōchōand then releasing it around the sword he will then shoot it towards his opponent.
    Note: Can only be used by Suigetsu.

    Doujutsu: Mangekyou Sharingan | Eye Technique: Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50 (-25 per turn to keep active)
    Damage: N/A (-10 per turn)
    Description:
    The Mangekyo Sharingan, literally meaning "Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye", is the highest known form of Sharingan, said to be feared as the strongest form of Sharingan. Awakening MS requires the user to have possession of 3 Tomoe Sharingan and to witness or simply go through some extremely dramatic emotional event. Upon this event, the user awakens MS. The most noticeable MS users gained it by witnessing the death of someone important to them, sometimes by their own hand. Once activated the appearance of the pupil drastically changes, differing from the tomoe seals, and gains a shape unique to each user. When active the user can track speeds even further beyond that of the third stage sharingan. The timing of the users counters, the chaining speed of multiple techniques and the ability to see through the enemy's moves greatly increases. Not only that but the user gains the ability to see through visual illusions A-rank and below. The link to Genjutsu is further increased and, if the user has gained full mastery over Genjutsu, he gains the ability to cast any and every genjutsu without the need for Handseals as long as he has a line of sight to the target. Also, the Mangekyo Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques, unique to each user. Extended use of the Mangekyo Sharingan after some time, deteriorates the user's eyesight to the point of blindness. The chakra cost is so high that it drains the users stamina and chakra at increasingly high speeds. Once the side effects of it's use take place, the user is left blind and unable to activate his sharingan. While keeping it active is already quite hard, the user will drain the time he can keep it active at each MS technique he uses. While some can decrease one turn, others can decrease even more.
    Note: The user needs to have activated his 3T Sharingan beforehand
    Note: Can only be activated twice, requiring a 2 turn coldown to activate again
    Note: Lasts a maximum of 8 turns for the first activation and 4 turns for the second
    Note: After the first activation wears down, his eyes revert to their normal appearance and the user can't activate his sharingan for 1 turn
    Note: The first activation drains the users stamina and leaves him tired, while the second activation leaves the user blinded and almost unable to move if he doesn't deactivate it before the time ends
    Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
    Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique


    "Sasuke..I feel his hatred.."

    Following the activation of the Ms, Sauske Releases a powerful fireball directly at the Raikage - water blade form left side, fireball from right. Sauske and the Raikage are in short range, while Suigetsu is mid range from the Raikage. The powerful fireball looking like a comet soaring towards the Raikage at near point black range.

    Katon: Hiendan | Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense, Deffence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    The Raikage, tossing away the water prison with minimum effort is caught by the electric sword thrown into the water between Sasuke and himself eliciting a grunt and momentary pause in the giant man's movements. Suigetsu takes this time to run to A's right side and releasing a blade of water as Sasuke's eyes change shape. Keeping track of both of them A sees the white haired ninja criminal swinging his sword releasing an attack to capatalize on Sasuke's electrical assault. A then quickly glances back seeing Sasuke running to his left and his eyes having transformed.

    *thinking to himself* Is that the Mangekyou Sharingan?

    Knowing this dangerous level of dojutsu to be feared across the world wielding power said to be undodgeable and being in a two on one situation the Raikage decides its time for his signature technique, Lightning Release Armour!

    Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30(-10per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapse to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra,wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by a Raikage biography


    A's body, though numbed by Sasuke's lightning responds to his powerful willpower as A activates his Lightning Release Armor as sasuke begins spewing a massive fireball at point blank range and Suigetsu's water blade is headed at him. As the Armor coats his body his brain's neural synapses and physical abilities reach their absolute limit and A bursts away from his position to the right dodging both attacks letting them explode at his original location, seemingly caught by the blast having vanished at untraceable speeds. A reappears next to Suigetsu with his left fist clenched and drawn back, throwing a powerful left punch with an immense amount of lightning chakra concentrated into it, releasing it all in an explosion that would kill any normal human. Right after demolishing Sasuke's helper A utilizes another burst of speed and once again seemingly teleports behind sasuke, having run in a arc to sasuke's left and brings his left hand in a chop to sasuke's neck breaking the young outlaw's neck with his immense speed and power, enough to sever the horn of the Hachibi in the past.

    (Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up

    Rank: A
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    You think some small shock like that is enough to defeat the likes of the Raikage! Raigyaku Suihei!!
     
         

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    As the Raikage activates his lightning armor, Sasuke with use of his MS easily follows the movements of the Raikage as he begins to head towards the Suigetsu. Suigetsu last second see's the lighting ball from the Raikage off to his side as it explodes - the last second just gave him enough time to turn his body into water, however since it was a lightning explosion it did leave a discharge which has numbed Suigetsu in a liquid state for a few. (If you remember in the anime, when the Raikage originally was about to strike Sasuke, Suigetsu was able to stop his attack before he stuck - using his sword)

    "Gah..I'll be good in a few, Sasuke.."

    Suiton: Suika no Jutsu | Water Release: Hydrification technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to liquefy the whole body at will, this technique makes it impossible to receive damage from physical attacks. From a single hair to the skin and muscles, everything can be liquefied and solidified at will. Be it to evade an enemy's attack during a short range battle, to infiltrate a structure, or to launch a surprise attack in a liquefied state, this technique boasts a high strategic value. Using this, the user can also re-shape their body parts for suitable situations. The only way to contain a user of this technique is to lock them up in an airtight container so they cannot move about. When the user passes out, they turn into a jelly-like state. As this technique turns the body into water, the user is vulnerable to lightning techniques. The Second Mizukage when using this technique has a more oily state allowing it to into Gaara's sand element and nullify the techniques. (this oily ability can only be used by the Second Mizukage).
    Note: Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan.

    Following that, Sasuke see's the Raikage coming towards him. Ssaukes creates a chidori in his right hand and rushes towards the Raikage. As the Raikage is bring down his hand to strike Sauske, he quickly slides along the ground - remember sharingan gives Sasuke very quick reaction. As he slides, he strikes the Raikage in the rights knee with a slash motion. Even though the lightning armor cloaks the Raikage, chidori was proven to be able to puncture it enough to strike skin. Striking the knee, causes the Raikages knee to buckle and be slashed up a bit causing it to be much harder to move. He would still be able to move at high speeds but less than if he was healthy in the knees.

    Raiton: Raikiri | Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.

    As Sasuke slides past after the strike, in one fluid motion, he pushes himself up spins to face the back of the Raikage whom would have fallen to the ground after the knee hit. Sauske now up in the air after pushing himself up and spinning towards the Raikage, he preforms the tiger seal then unleashes many dragon fireheads towards the back of the Raikage - causing burning and impact damage.

    Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu | Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.
    "Be GONE!!!"
     
         

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    Red flesh cloud's choking out
    the morning sky, they said
    it'd never come, we knew it
    was a lie. All forms of life
    die now, the humans all
    succumb. Time to kiss your ass
    goodbye. the end has just
    begun.
     

    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    A on his determined path towards sasuke has his full focus on the teenage criminal and sees as his hand becomes coated in lightning. With his reactions and thought process sped up by his Lightning Armor A quickly recognizes the technique invented by copy ninja Kakashi, based on his own father's Hellstab techniques. Knowing this he watches the arm movements and tries to predict where he will strike, deciding not to use his horizontal chop until the right time. When sasuke begins sliding going low across the floor A quickly jumps up and flips forward doing a front flip over him as he slides avoiding the Uchiha's reach then landing and quickly turning to begin another attack. A watches as Sasuke spins to face him and at the instant his body leaves the ground from his slide charges Sasuke with his top speed and smashes his left forearm into him sending him flying, leaving a bloody mess left of the fearsome Sharingan user.

    Die Uchiha! Lariat!!

    Rariatto) - Lightning Plough Hot Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. Killer Bee was shown using this technique in his chakra cloak form, and the Raikage was shown using the Lightning Armour technique.
    Note: Technique can only be used whilst in a chakra cloak and can only be used and taught by a Raikage bio or Killer Bee bio
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi


    I'm a little unsure on your timing there but it's not off enough for me to complain that much.
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    As Sauske misses the knee cap of the Raikage and continues sliding. He sees the Raikag flip over him and he turns his head back watching his moves. He continues to jump up and spin around as he see's the Raikage rushing at him. By using his Sharignan, he figured he'll place the Raikage in the same genjutsu as his brother, "You're done for.." Sasuke thinks. The Raikage promptly in reality falls to the ground while in his mind he is trapped spikes that seeing to have his stuck in place - mind rape.

    Magen: Kasegui no Jutsu | Demonic Illusion Shackling Stakes
    Rank: A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion. This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.
    Note: Requires Tomo 3 sharingan.
    "YES SASUKE!!"

    Suigetsu, now fully formed back up runs to the right side of the fallen Raikage. Also at this time, Sasuke jumps back, knowing that the Raikage is a strong foe so he could have tricks. However as he jumps back, he activates the Susanno that surrounds him with both hands of the Susanno at the ready in front.

    Doujutsu: Susanoo | Eye Technique: Tempestuous God of Valor
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 120 (-30 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user per turn)
    Description:
    Susanoo, also known as the Tempestuous God of Valor, or literally "He with the ability to help by all means", is the third ability granted by the Mangekyō Sharingan to those who awaken the abilities: Tsukuyomi — which symbolises the "darkness of the spiritual world" and Amaterasu — which denotes the "light of the material world". It creates a gigantic, humanoid, ethereal warrior that surrounds the user. Even though it envelopes the user, they can move around within Susanoo freely, use techniques from inside of it, as well as manifest only parts of Susanoo — as the situation calls for it. Despite Susanoo's impressive defensive capabilities, the protection it grants its user is not absolute. The user can be thrown out of the upper half of Susanoo by an enemy manipulating the substance underneath Susanoo (the ground basically). Also, a sufficiently powerful attack will still result in damage, especially during the technique's initial stages. The only known ways to attack the user while Susanoo is active is either to draw the wielder out of the technique and then attack, bind and restrict its movements, or to break the defence with overwhelming force. Susanoo users are also vulnerable to attacks which don't actually deal physical damage to it, such as strong lights and sounds, that can also impair their ability to sustain Susanoo. Normal and Sound-based genjutsu can also bypass Susanoo's impressive defense. Sasuke's Susanoo possesses a sword and a bow that doubles as a weapon and shield. It is able to produce chakra arrows to use with the bow via an orb held by a third hand, which can be fired at such a speed that evading them is nearly impossible. It can also use the arrows as a makeshift melee weapon. Sasuke is able to switch between his Susanoo's various weapons regardless of which stage it is in. In both its incomplete and complete forms, it has a more demonic appearance in contrast to Itachi's, which have a more "normal" human-like appearance, possessing horns and a malevolent grin. In its final form, it also possesses jagged teeth around its hood and magatama earrings. In addition to its secondary right hand, Sasuke's Susanoo has been depicted with a secondary left hand as well, a trait similar to all Susano known so far that have been shown to have 4 arms. After Sasuke gains the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, the second layer of armour changes its appearance. The orb is now made entirely of the flames of Amaterasu and the arrows are passively coated in the black flames. Sasuke can also throw the flames in a tomoe shape, using a wide spread attack from his own palm setting his foes on fire, similar to a Magatama attack but with the characterisitics of Amaterasu.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha and must have MS/EMS
    Note: While active user can't use Eye Techniques except for Amaterasu and those pertaining to Susanoo.
    Note: Takes 1 full turn to stabilize into the full final form, during which his body bestows only a B-Rank defense.
    Note: The body of Susanoo grants an A-Rank defense against most elemental attacks, specially tangible ones.
    Note: The warrior can shoot up to 2 arrows per turn, counting as a move (regardless of shooting one or 2) and having a strength of an S-Rank long range attack each.
    Note: When the user has gained EMS, the warrior bestows an S-Rank defense when in complete form to most attacks and its arrows carry the characteristics of Amaterasu flames. The wide spread Amaterasu projectile attack used from his palm counts as a move and can only be done twice, being Long-Range and equal to S-Rank.
    Note: With Susano active the user is only able to use two other techniques per turn due to the extreme chakra consumption and can't make clones of any kind.
    Note: User can manifest it partially (an Arm, or a leg, only the ribcage, etc) 4 times per battle, with each partial manifestation lasting only a moment and having an A-Rank defensive/offensive power.
    Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of 6 turns after which the user will be left blind in both eyes and extremely exhausted if he hasn't attained EMS. If he has not only can he use Susano twice but he'll feel no ill effect from it while, upon deactivation, he'll only need to wait 2 turns to activate his EMS again and 3 turns to use Susano again.
    "What is this darkness.."

    Suigetu has the beheader at the ready off to the side, since the Raikage would be in the illusion - he wouldn't see Suigetsu right away and would be baffled by the skelly like thing surrounding Sasuke..whom is calm and giving off a more sinister presence than before..
     
         

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    A, on his furious charge towards his enemy is suddenly impaled by several huge spikes. Having not noticed them come from anywhere , as well as a lack of pain from the spikes and the fact that the Uchiha are infamous for their Genjutsu talent A's sped up thought process allows him to quickly deduce that he is in an illusion. Knowing he could be struck with another attack at any moment A wastes no time and bites into his tongue biting it off causing blood to spurt from his mouth and the terrible pain to break the illusion.

    Coming to reality and seeing sasuke enveloped in a large purple skeletal form his resolve never buckles despite the great power given to the young criminal by his eyes A tosses a flash bomb with his left hand just above his head and using his great speed runs to his left then charging sasuke' s right side slamming his right elbow into the rib cage acting as armor for Sasuke, his back turned to the flash as it goes off and blinds both his foes (the bomb goes off just before the elbow strikes Susanoo).

    The Raikage's great speed and power enhanced by his armor smashes the bones of chakra leaving an opening in Susanoo.'s defenses. Right after smashing the ribs with his elbow A grabs sasuke's face with his right hand, covering his eyes with his giant palm and man handles him like a rag doll tossing him above his head into a powerbomb position as he roars, fury and thoughts of his family filling his mind his vice grip on sasuke's ribs as he brings his young criminal enemy crashing down into the floor of the samurai's building dust erupts from their area with the appearance of an explosion going off from the force of his Liger Bomb.

    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    (Raigā Bomu) - Liger Bomb
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning amour, the user grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a power bomb manoeuvre. This is devastating enough to shatter a large area of the ground itself on impact.
    Note: Can only be used of Taught by a Raikage bio
     
         
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    Sasuke and Suigetsu notice the blood run from the Raikage's mouth. "Ouch, that must have been painfull!" Suigetsu thought. Sasuke and Suigetsu both see the flash bomb thrown above the Raikage's head, Suigetsu quickly uses the beheaded to block his vision by holding it out in front of him while Sasuke stares down the Raikage regardless. As the flash goes off, it only blinds Sasuke momentarily but not enough to keep him completely blocked out like most shinobi. In a burst of flash, Sasuke swings his eyes to the side seeing the Raikage about to strike his skelly. Nearly instantaneously, the Skell is covered with black flames as Sasukes eye begins to bleed slightly. Perhaps causing you to hesitate before you strike my flames.

    Doujutsu: Toku Amaterasu | Eye Technique: Shield of Amaterasu
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 70 (-30 per turn to maintain)
    Damage: 120 (-20 to the user)
    Description:
    Sasuke Uchiha uses this technique on his Susano's body to engulf it in black flames that will spread through it acting as an effective defense from most melee attackers. The technique itself ignites the susano parts of choice in black flames that will keep burning as long as the user fuels them with chakra. Through the use of (Enton: Kagutsuchi) Blaze Release: Fire God, the user can further increase the existing flames and even spread them further to produce a bigger area of effect. However, the user himself is not immune to the black flames and must be extremely careful not to be caught in his own defense.
    Note: Can only be used by Sasuke Uchiha bios and requires the user to have his MS/EMS active.
    Note: Reduces the MS duration by 2 turn per use.
    Note: If the user has gained EMS he will take no damage from using this technique and no duration penalty.

    "Your faith will be tested now.."


    As The Raikage either is about to strike or hesitates for a second like he did the manga, Suigetsu whom during this time has made his way around to the back and side of Susanoo and out of view of the Raikage, He then throws the great beheader towards the Raikage in a spirally manner while also leaving water chakra within the sword and as it flies forwards it releases a blade of water that travels juts ahead of the spirally beheader - if you were to notice it, you would only see the water and not the beheader traveling behind it.

    Rasen Funkei no Jutsu | Spiral Decapitation Technique

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Zabuza will throw his Decapitating Carving Knife towards the a target in a sprialling motion that acts like a boomerang and when striking the target it will return afterwards back to his hand. This technique can be used to also strike multiple targets.
    Note: Can only be used by Zabuza or Suigetsu

    Suiton: Mizu Kendan | Water Release: Water Blade Bullet
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Suigetsu will concentrate his water chakra into Kubikiribōchōand then releasing it around the sword he will then shoot it towards his opponent.
    Note: Can only be used by Suigetsu.

     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Had my move typed out but left and closed it expecting the auto restore to still be there and its not poping up so here goes a remake >.<

    A on his infuriated charge clad in his lightning armor, his increased reaction time allows him to perceive that his target suddenly becomes a blaze in black flames. Stomping his right foot to the ground and halting his immense momentum on the spot with his steel-like leg muscles his armor flickers and fades like it was thrown off of him from the sudden stop, having a split second reaction of instinct to avoid death as quickly as the impulse came it was washed away in a flood of memories.

    The day he met Bee, working together as they grew together as brothers, the night his cousin told him about the void in your heart left by being made a jinchuuriki, his father's funeral and banning his little brother from leaving the village in fear that he will lose him like they lost his father....and finally the news of his brother being taken by members of Akatsuki, by Sasuke Uchiha!! That moment, losing his brother is what brought him to this moment in time, this exact second is what resulted of his love of his family, giving everything to bring justice for taking him away. A will at all costs destroy the man who took his little brother!

    Awash with the immense determination of justice and renewed rage A's body is once again lit with his lightning armor, the chakra shroud even larger then the first eyes turning bloodshot and his hair standing on end A, with his arm currently bent at the elbow channels immense chakra into his right arm giving him increased speed instantly consuming the chakra as he swung his right hand in a backhand chop instead of his planned Elbow.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    As A's hand swings smashing through Sussanoo's ribs and the hell fire engulfing them (the bones, not all of A) A's great speed will blitz past even Sasuke's reaction times. Even if Sasuke reads the movement and sees it coming he will merely see the chop smashing into his neck in slow motion as his body fails to react in time. As the raikage's hand connects with Sasuke's neck his mouth releases a spurt of blood and his eyes close from the sheer pain of the blow as he is knocked side ways off his feet.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    A, having knocked Sasuke out of the way with his chop, his right forearm now engulfed in black flames as well sees a blade of water coming at him thinking only "Damn, why is that guy still alive, I'll finish him off quickly then come back for Uchiha!" Charging lightning chakra into his left fist he coats his hand in a chidori and then thrusts his hand upwards releasing multiple lightning bolts in a circle around him roaring as he does so. The lightning assaulting both Sasuke's weakened defense and blowing Suigetsu's water blade apart and knocking the sword behind it off track with other lightning bolts heading for Suigetsu since he shot them in a curve instead of straight in front of him he should have full powered bolts coming at him.

    (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.


    After releasing the bolts A quickly forms his hand into a chop, shaping his lightning armor around his left hand sharpening the lightning then performing a self-amputation on his right hand without a second thought. With sasuke and Suigetsu subdued (or in the time before their attacks come if not already close) he then channels fire chakra into his palm and holds it to the bloody limb cauterizing it quickly stopping his blood loss as his right hand disappears in a cloud of fire, the flames vanishing as they leave not even a single bone behind. All without a flinch, a truly unbelievable pain tolerance! Having detached the arm A turns his focus back to Sasuke lying on the ground nearby A draws his fist back and (assuming its like in the manga where he has an opening above him with the ribs active) drives it into Sasuke's chest smashing through his breatplate and giving Sasuke a painful death deserving of a criminal of his status.
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi


    "Sasuke!!!"

    "Ugh!!"

    Sasuke being hit with the piercing back hand of the Raikage goes flying back from the location of the Raikage, Susanoo keeps him protected from the impact damage for the most part. suigetsu watching the Raikage as he begins to gather lightning chakra with him his hands - In a burst of speed he rushes towards the beheader and grabs it while it's flying. when suddenly he see's the lightning erupt for the Raikages hands in to bolt manner. Sauske would be unharmed - susanoo would still be effective. Suigetsu however, plans ahead of time and releases a massive amount of water from his mouth into a huge torrent in which only part of the lightning would hit since it goes all around. The sheer amount of nearly instantaneous water is more then enough to diffuse it enough so that the water isn't fully electrical.

    Suiton: Suijinchū | Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.
    Due to the huge amount and speed and ground it covers the Raikge would back away from it towards Sauske since he seems to be the weaker target. However, as the Raikage looks at Sasuke, he whom is already looking back..


    The Raikage suddenly finds himself in a drap world - on a cross. Hanging there and feeling completely immobile. The Raikage looks down seeing his Father - the Third.

    "Son, you've failed me. You've failed your brother, you've failed your village. You've failed as the RAIKAGE!!"

    As the Third, yells his final word he stabs Ay in the stomach with a katana and begins to cut it through over and over again. The pain is immense! Ay looks up over his Fathers shoulders and sees Sasuke Uchiha with his MS flared red..

    "In the Tsukuyomi, your pain is no illusion.."

    In the illusion, this happens for nearly 2 weeks in the Raikage's mind. In reality, the Raikage fell upon the ground..

    Doujutsu: Tsukuyomi | Eye Technique: Nightmare Realm
    Rank: Forbidden rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage Points: 120 (-20 to user per use)
    Description:
    One of the basic techniques awoken with MS, this illusion renders the victim at the total mercy of the user. The user has full control over space and time in the jutsu and can place the one affected through any hell they desire for any length desired. The only limitation of the technique is the users own imagination and skill, a fact proven by Itachi Uchiha who was must more masterful with its use than any other Uchiha before him. The technique itself only lasts for but a mere second in reality, but the one affected could have suffered through the equivalent of several weeks of torture which will manifest in severe mental damage and physical fatigue.
    Note: Requires direct Eye Contact and the user to have MS active
    Note: Each use reduces the duration of MS by 2 turns
    Note: Its unblockable and unreleasable
    Note: If the target doesn't possess at least a 3 Tomoe Sharingan, he is left unconscious
    Note: Doesn't work on enemies who have MS/EMS active and use their own Tsukuyomi to counter
    Sasuke's MS diminishes away..
     
         
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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    Removing his blazing arm and stopping the bleeding A sees Suigetsu releasing a large amount of water at him, Knowing he doesn't have time to worry about Sasuke just yet and that he should be recovering from his blow still A channels his lightning chakra and creates a vortex of wind and lightning around him that flies at the white haired criminal drawing the water into the wind current as it heads for him resulting in a water/lightning combo as the electricity strikes the water electrifying it again and washing over Suigetsu paralyzing him as he, the water and the raging dragon wash over the room.
    A utters a final grunt having dealt with the annoyance once and for all and slowly starts turning to Sasuke looking at the burning bones surrounding him.

    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado

    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    preparing to finish off his target A breathes shortly and deeply then leaps with great force leaving behind a miniature crater from the force of his kick off, soaring up to the ceiling A back flips to turn in mid air and comes to a halt with his feet connecting with the ceiling aiming himself at Sasuke's prone form A kicks off the stone ceiling sending himself rocketing towards his target, directing the soles of his feet towards the young Uchiha's waist, his eyes focused on Sasuke's body and Sussanno.

    (Doroppu Kikku) - Drop Kick

    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 35
    Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.


    The Beast of Kumogakure soars down with both feet together in a straight line coated in his famous lightning armor like a lightning bolt descending from the skies to vanquish evil from this world crashing and causing a huge dust cloud to erupt from their location. Once the dust has cleared the Raikage is seen standing, right arm missing, blood running out of his mouth dripping down his chin, lightning crackling around him as the armor slowly flickers away, the dust revealing the rest of his body from the head down then clearing at the bottom of the crater left from the attack Sasuke's bloody arms and legs are seen barely sticking out from the dirt the rest of his body buried.

    A stares down at the results feeling his rage subside, his heartbeat slows and his eyes close. A single tear falls from beneath his eyelids. Killing this young villain didn't bring his brother back but he knew now he wouldn't have the chance to take anyone else from this world.


    Rest in peace...Bee

    *time skip and "Madara" shows up demanding the two bijuu, revealing that Bee escaped Sasuke's clutches*

    "THAT INGRATEFUL LITTLE....!! HE USED THIS WHOLD DAMNED AFFAIR TO RUN AWAY FROM THE VILLAGE AND HAVE FUN SOMEWHERE ON HIS OWN?!!! UNFORGIVABLE! OH, HE'LL TASTE MY IRON CLAW!!
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi


    ~Test Closed~

    Okay so, I thought you did rather well in this test but I don't like your last move. I wanted you to showcase some skill to deal with Nightmare Realm but you didn't - I thought I was clear on how I wanted you to go about things. But regardless, even if you jumped onto the ceiling and looks down at Sauske to attack him - you still would have been trapped in the genjutsu, I don't honestly believe that he would just be looking at his waist - the Raikage is a honorable Man he looks into the eyes.

    But either way, I thought you did good! But the last move I'm not pleased with but still an overall good test! Good luck on grading!
     
         

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    Re: [4th Raikage] - Professor Sarutobi

    ~Test Failed~

    I don't like your first move at all, while that Konoha whirlwind defense would be well creative, it wouldn't be effective, because of the water that rises from below you, the current would cause your balance to be disrupted a bit, wouldn't give you enough balance to perform the kick, not to mention Water isn't a solid structure that can be knocked away, your kick would simply pass through the water brushing some of it away that if you were capable of performing the kick, the water rises from around you and beneath you as the sphere is filled with water, meaning you'd be suspended in the air which wouldn't let you perform the kick either...a few inaccurate details here and there, like the Elbow breaking through Susanoo leaving an opening, this is not true, in Susanoo's initial form it has a B-rank defense, the Elbow is B-ranked, so it wouldn't do anything to the Susanoo, but simply knock Sasuke backwards, you didn't show the Raikage's combos, your moves were too forward and not enough Taijutsu proficiency was shown, and Coyote, you can't use Tsukyumi while Susanoo is active and if you deactivated Susanoo your eyes would be blind, read the description before you use it, you can't use any MS techs other than Amaterasu and the ones related to Susanoo like the Shield of Amaterasu, the test was a near pass to be honest, had you not used that counter to the water in the first move and described your defense against Tsukyumi better than this, keeping in character of the Raikage, but from what i see Coyote is right, you may retake the test in one month.

    Another note, the Illusion technique Shakling Stakes, you could countered that easily if you thought about it, it isn't a perfect decapitation, as you can see in the description powerful enough characters can attempt to break through it, with the lightning armor's help you could've broken through the bind considering the amount of raw strength it gives the Raikage combined with the Raikage's original raw strength, would've helped in the grading instead of biting your tongue off like that, biting tongue off meaning slow death and extreme exhaustion, which in the move after that when you said that the Raikage saw Sasuke's bones covered in Amaterasu so the raikage stopped the attack before it connects, he wouldn't be able to do that in time, you should've just continued with the assault lol like you did in the same move later.
     
         
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