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    [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Greetings, William24.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

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    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    Terrain: A Rocky Barren Wasteland with clear skies.
    You may use Sandaime Raikage's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    We start mid range from each other.
    If you have any questions please ask them through VM.

    I will be using a pair of Cannon Kage Rank Uzumaki Naruto (with Sage Mode and 9 Tails Mode) and Dodai for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Shunsui "Sandaime Raikage"

    Thanks for conducting this test Yusuke Sensei. Hope to have a fun fighting. ^_^
     
         

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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Quote Originally Posted by william24 View Post
    Shunsui "Sandaime Raikage"

    Thanks for conducting this test Yusuke Sensei. Hope to have a fun fighting. ^_^
    Lord Raikage, I am truly sorry, but I must do what I must do! For the safety of the Ninja World, you shall be vanquished from the face of the universe!

    I don't know who the hell that guy is, but he's in for one hell of a beating! *holds right fist out at Sandaime*


    Immediately, Dodai begins a series of handseals that ends with the Bird handseal. At the same time Dodai makes the third handseal, Naruto retracts his right arm and begins his own sequence of handseals, thus, the activation of both Melting Apparition Technique and Earth Flow Wave are near simultaneous. Dodai spews out a considerably large amount of thick, dense lava from his mouth, which spreads out like a blanket in the air that falls over you from the sky and consumes your body, not even leaving your bones behind. While the lava begins it's descend, the earth beneath you rises and wraps around your legs, up to the area slightly above your knees, which disables your ability to even bend or move.

    Now's my chance!

    Dodai shoots a short, momentary glance at Naruto out of curiousity, while at the same time, maintains a close eye on the Sandaime Raikage. Dodai was obviously, confused as to what Naruto was plotting. Naruto pulled out a large scroll on his back, which he was carrying, and unravels it in one-go as he pulls and tosses it onto the ground in front of him. Cover me, old man! Naruto slams a palm onto the very centre of the summoning seal, transporting a meditating clone with toad-like features, onto the battlefield. The clone isn't dispersed immediately and remains for the battlefield, as to not waste the time duration Sage Mode provides. Ah, I see! You are going to use Sage Mode! With this, we may just stand a chance against the Raikage!

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing Dog → Boar → Tiger → Ox → Rat → Bird hand seals the user releases a large amount of lava from their mouth, which spreads into a broad, thin sheet as it travels through the air. Since the lava is shot upwards in an arc, so as to descend onto the targets from above, it prevents the intended individuals from jumping up to avoid the attack. A great deal of steam is created afterwards by the effects of the lava, so should the targets still be alive, a follow-up attack can be conducted while their vision remains obscured.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving



    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is the counterpart of the summoning technique, in which it allows an animal to summon the human that they have a contract with. This technique can also be used to summon shadow clones like fukasaku did with naruto’s clones.

     
         

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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Quote Originally Posted by Yūsuke View Post
    Lord Raikage, I am truly sorry, but I must do what I must do! For the safety of the Ninja World, you shall be vanquished from the face of the universe!

    I don't know who the hell that guy is, but he's in for one hell of a beating! *holds right fist out at Sandaime*


    Immediately, Dodai begins a series of handseals that ends with the Bird handseal. At the same time Dodai makes the third handseal, Naruto retracts his right arm and begins his own sequence of handseals, thus, the activation of both Melting Apparition Technique and Earth Flow Wave are near simultaneous. Dodai spews out a considerably large amount of thick, dense lava from his mouth, which spreads out like a blanket in the air that falls over you from the sky and consumes your body, not even leaving your bones behind. While the lava begins it's descend, the earth beneath you rises and wraps around your legs, up to the area slightly above your knees, which disables your ability to even bend or move.

    Now's my chance!

    Dodai shoots a short, momentary glance at Naruto out of curiousity, while at the same time, maintains a close eye on the Sandaime Raikage. Dodai was obviously, confused as to what Naruto was plotting. Naruto pulled out a large scroll on his back, which he was carrying, and unravels it in one-go as he pulls and tosses it onto the ground in front of him. Cover me, old man! Naruto slams a palm onto the very centre of the summoning seal, transporting a meditating clone with toad-like features, onto the battlefield. The clone isn't dispersed immediately and remains for the battlefield, as to not waste the time duration Sage Mode provides. Ah, I see! You are going to use Sage Mode! With this, we may just stand a chance against the Raikage!

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing Dog → Boar → Tiger → Ox → Rat → Bird hand seals the user releases a large amount of lava from their mouth, which spreads into a broad, thin sheet as it travels through the air. Since the lava is shot upwards in an arc, so as to descend onto the targets from above, it prevents the intended individuals from jumping up to avoid the attack. A great deal of steam is created afterwards by the effects of the lava, so should the targets still be alive, a follow-up attack can be conducted while their vision remains obscured.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving



    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is the counterpart of the summoning technique, in which it allows an animal to summon the human that they have a contract with. This technique can also be used to summon shadow clones like fukasaku did with naruto’s clones.

    Hmm, Dodai of the lava release eh? It has been a long time since I've seen that face, and who is this youngster with you? Well, it really doesn't matter because you're both going in a grave soon for the sake of Kumogakure!

    As the lava is being spewed out of Dodai's mouth and Naruto is manipulating the earth into a muddy flow, the Raikage quickly analyzes the situation and wonders why he is getting in such a hostile situation with a kid and a fellow kumoan. Without a second thought he uses his doton chakra to manipulate the ground directly beneath him and mold it in such a way that a golem begins rising through the muddy substance before the lava can reach near our position. As the golem is rising the Raikage would be positioned comfortably on its head while it reaches its right arm outward in order to swipe at the blanket of lava and hit it off course thus effectively protecting the Raikage from being burned alive.
    At the same time as the golem is extending his right arm to block the lava it also extends its left arm but this arm would be being used to throw a punch 5 meters in front of Dodai and Naruto thus breaking the ground in front of them and shooting small rock debris at them, but it's intended to be used as a "bridge" for the Raikage to get to his opponents.
    About a second or two before the golems punch reaches its target Shunsui decides to begin a swift sprint along the golems arm so that by the time it hits the ground he'd already be near close range to them. As he makes his way down the golems arm he creates a chidori in his right hand but manipulates it in such a way that it breaks down into thousands of small senbon in which he shoots forward towards Naruto and Dodai in attempts to impale them with an abundance of chidori senbon thus leaving them highly injured. All the while he moves into close range, though he keeps his senses on peek in case he has to counter on the fly.

    (Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) -Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short -Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.


    (Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.
     
         

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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Quote Originally Posted by william24 View Post
    Hmm, Dodai of the lava release eh? It has been a long time since I've seen that face, and who is this youngster with you? Well, it really doesn't matter because you're both going in a grave soon for the sake of Kumogakure!

    As the lava is being spewed out of Dodai's mouth and Naruto is manipulating the earth into a muddy flow, the Raikage quickly analyzes the situation and wonders why he is getting in such a hostile situation with a kid and a fellow kumoan. Without a second thought he uses his doton chakra to manipulate the ground directly beneath him and mold it in such a way that a golem begins rising through the muddy substance before the lava can reach near our position. As the golem is rising the Raikage would be positioned comfortably on its head while it reaches its right arm outward in order to swipe at the blanket of lava and hit it off course thus effectively protecting the Raikage from being burned alive.
    At the same time as the golem is extending his right arm to block the lava it also extends its left arm but this arm would be being used to throw a punch 5 meters in front of Dodai and Naruto thus breaking the ground in front of them and shooting small rock debris at them, but it's intended to be used as a "bridge" for the Raikage to get to his opponents.
    About a second or two before the golems punch reaches its target Shunsui decides to begin a swift sprint along the golems arm so that by the time it hits the ground he'd already be near close range to them. As he makes his way down the golems arm he creates a chidori in his right hand but manipulates it in such a way that it breaks down into thousands of small senbon in which he shoots forward towards Naruto and Dodai in attempts to impale them with an abundance of chidori senbon thus leaving them highly injured. All the while he moves into close range, though he keeps his senses on peek in case he has to counter on the fly.

    (Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) -Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short -Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.


    (Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.
    As the Golem's left arm begins it's motion towards the area in front of Naruto and Dodai, Naruto's clone would have had already been successfully transported on the field from MT Myobokuzan. Judging by the way things appeared at that point of time, Naruto decides to disperse the clone immediately after it gets summoned, for the transference of Natural Energy from it to him. With that, Naruto enters Sage Mode while Dodai kept the Raikage busy by erupting several large earthen spikes that come from both the Raikage's left and right, impaling him. Bullseye! (Just a note for you, you probably could still move, if you destroy the spikes that are pierced into your body right now, seeing as the Raikage has quite the durability and stamina. Plus, the spikes aren't really sharp). The rest of the spikes obstructs the pathway on the Golem's left arm, making it impossible to go through without maneuvering through or jumping over the spikes (they are barely just 1 meter over the Golem's left arm). Two spikes erupt from beneath Dodai and Naruto, that moves diagonally backwards. It does no harm to both Naruto and Dodai, who maintain chakra in their feet to keep them steady on the spike. Naruto, on the other hand, does not stay on the spike for long and times his next move particularly right, activating Frog Kata while on the spike. Naruto then after, pushes his feet against the spike and makes a significant leap, high over the electrified senbons, and towards the Raikage. Naruto bends his right elbow and pulls his right arm backwards. Take this, you ol' fart!. Naruto thrusts forward his right arm towards the Raikage's chest just about half a meter away from him. The pressure and force of the punch could be felt by the Raikage, even before it makes contact with the Raikage's body, due to Frog Kata. Naruto lands the hit and sends the Raikage's lifeless body smashing diagonally downwards into the Golem's left forearm, and then into the ground while Naruto remains standing on the Golem's left arm. The Golem's left arm gets detached from the Golem's body and crumbles before Naruto, who just skips . After the damage the Raikage has received, the spikes impaling him and Sage Mode, enhanced Frog Kata punch into the earthen body of the Golem and then the ground, would leave the Raikage unable to move at the least due to the breaking of several bones in his body. Note that the Chidori Senbons only puncture the spike, so the spike that holds Dodai only falters and doesn't actually, crumbles into pieces.

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to Taijutsu, + 10 Ninjutsu and Genjutsu)
    Description: The user by standing in a state of motionless (user must stay still for 1 turn) will draw in the energy of nature and inside of them blending it with their own chakra adding a new dimension of power the the sages chakra, resulting in the creation of Senjutsu chakra. This chakra cannot be seen by anyone other than those who have been trained in senjutsu. This new chakra allows the user to enter an empowered state called Sage Mode, which then drastically increases the strength of all ninjutsu, genjutsu by + 10 damage and taijutsu techniques by +20 damage. There are two ways to learn senjutsu. One must have a contract in either the Toads or Snake contract. When the user from the toad contract awakens their sage mode they gain the additional effects and features. Toad sages gain coloured pigmentation around his eyes, horizontal bar-like pupils. This is known as the Perfect sage mode. The inperfect sage mode which shown by Jirayai has some adverse affects on their physical features. They take a number of toad-like traits such as enhanced nose size with warts on their nose. They also gain the ability to change their limbs (hands and feet) to aide in combat. Their physical strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, and durability dramatically increase. The user can harness the natural energy surrounding them, turning it into an extension of their body, which increases the reach of their attacks through the use of Frog Kata and the user gains the ability to sense natural energy around them. The Snake sage mode gives different effects and features. The user gains yellow eyes with a black sclera. They gain further access to snake anatomy, such as their brille, which can be used to lock out some light as well as stop visual-based genjutsu from affecting them. They are also able to perform abilities that are characteristic of snakes, such as dislocating their jaw, although this is not exclusive to this mode. Their perception abilities, reflexes and speed dramatically increase along with their Ninjutsu, genjutsu by +10 damage and taijutsu techniques by +20 damage points. When Sage mode ends the user then experiences physical exhaustion reducing their capabilities the following turn no techniques above A-Rank, no Taijutsu above B-Rank. A user can prevent this by using the amphibian technique, using shadow clone to collect natural energy and dispelling them before or after sage mode ends and unique to kabuto by possessing the dna of jugo's clan he can passively absorb natural energy whilst still moving. While sage mode is active, minor wounds heal slowly as time passes and the user gains the ability to passively sense his surroundings through the natural energy, in a similar but more precise and enhanced way as normal chakra sensing. While Sage Mode is active, the user will take little damage from techniques C-Rank and below, specially Taijutsu.
    Note: Sage Mode lasts for a total of 5 turns, unless a clone or amphibian technique is used.
    Note: if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.
    Note: Can only gain sage mode through having either the snake or toad contract.



    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (doesn’t use normal chakra)
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The Frog Katas is a fighting style available exclusively to those who have mastered the art of Sage mode. The natural chakra used for sage mode activates the users body in many ways, enhancing speed, power, stamina and durability. The user uses the sage chakra in frog katas to enhance their taijutsu skills and also to surround and encapsulates the user with an aura of natural energy. The user can use this aura as an extension of their body giving them longer reach within their taijutsu even if they do not directly connect. Punches that appear to have missed actually strike using the aura and sending the opponents flying.

     
         
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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Quote Originally Posted by Yūsuke View Post
    As the Golem's left arm begins it's motion towards the area in front of Naruto and Dodai, Naruto's clone would have had already been successfully transported on the field from MT Myobokuzan. Judging by the way things appeared at that point of time, Naruto decides to disperse the clone immediately after it gets summoned, for the transference of Natural Energy from it to him. With that, Naruto enters Sage Mode while Dodai kept the Raikage busy by erupting several large earthen spikes that come from both the Raikage's left and right, impaling him. Bullseye! (Just a note for you, you probably could still move, if you destroy the spikes that are pierced into your body right now, seeing as the Raikage has quite the durability and stamina. Plus, the spikes aren't really sharp). The rest of the spikes obstructs the pathway on the Golem's left arm, making it impossible to go through without maneuvering through or jumping over the spikes (they are barely just 1 meter over the Golem's left arm). Two spikes erupt from beneath Dodai and Naruto, that moves diagonally backwards. It does no harm to both Naruto and Dodai, who maintain chakra in their feet to keep them steady on the spike. Naruto, on the other hand, does not stay on the spike for long and times his next move particularly right, activating Frog Kata while on the spike. Naruto then after, pushes his feet against the spike and makes a significant leap, high over the electrified senbons, and towards the Raikage. Naruto bends his right elbow and pulls his right arm backwards. Take this, you ol' fart!. Naruto thrusts forward his right arm towards the Raikage's chest just about half a meter away from him. The pressure and force of the punch could be felt by the Raikage, even before it makes contact with the Raikage's body, due to Frog Kata. Naruto lands the hit and sends the Raikage's lifeless body smashing diagonally downwards into the Golem's left forearm, and then into the ground while Naruto remains standing on the Golem's left arm. The Golem's left arm gets detached from the Golem's body and crumbles before Naruto, who just skips . After the damage the Raikage has received, the spikes impaling him and Sage Mode, enhanced Frog Kata punch into the earthen body of the Golem and then the ground, would leave the Raikage unable to move at the least due to the breaking of several bones in his body. Note that the Chidori Senbons only puncture the spike, so the spike that holds Dodai only falters and doesn't actually, crumbles into pieces.

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to Taijutsu, + 10 Ninjutsu and Genjutsu)
    Description: The user by standing in a state of motionless (user must stay still for 1 turn) will draw in the energy of nature and inside of them blending it with their own chakra adding a new dimension of power the the sages chakra, resulting in the creation of Senjutsu chakra. This chakra cannot be seen by anyone other than those who have been trained in senjutsu. This new chakra allows the user to enter an empowered state called Sage Mode, which then drastically increases the strength of all ninjutsu, genjutsu by + 10 damage and taijutsu techniques by +20 damage. There are two ways to learn senjutsu. One must have a contract in either the Toads or Snake contract. When the user from the toad contract awakens their sage mode they gain the additional effects and features. Toad sages gain coloured pigmentation around his eyes, horizontal bar-like pupils. This is known as the Perfect sage mode. The inperfect sage mode which shown by Jirayai has some adverse affects on their physical features. They take a number of toad-like traits such as enhanced nose size with warts on their nose. They also gain the ability to change their limbs (hands and feet) to aide in combat. Their physical strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, and durability dramatically increase. The user can harness the natural energy surrounding them, turning it into an extension of their body, which increases the reach of their attacks through the use of Frog Kata and the user gains the ability to sense natural energy around them. The Snake sage mode gives different effects and features. The user gains yellow eyes with a black sclera. They gain further access to snake anatomy, such as their brille, whichcan be used to lock out some light as well as stop visual-based genjutsu from affecting them. They are also able to perform abilities that are characteristic of snakes, such as dislocating their jaw, although this is not exclusive to this mode. Their perception abilities, reflexes and speed dramatically increase along with their Ninjutsu, genjutsu by +10 damage and taijutsu techniques by +20 damage points. When Sage mode ends the user then experiences physical exhaustion reducing their capabilities the following turn no techniques above A-Rank, no Taijutsu above B-Rank. A user can prevent this by using the amphibian technique, using shadow clone to collect natural energy and dispelling them before or after sage mode ends and unique to kabuto by possessing the dna of jugo's clan he can passively absorb natural energy whilst still moving. While sage mode is active, minor wounds heal slowly as time passes and the user gains the ability to passively sense his surroundings through the natural energy, in a similar but more precise and enhanced way as normal chakra sensing. While Sage Mode is active, the user will take little damage from techniques C-Rank and below, specially Taijutsu.
    Note: Sage Mode lasts for a total of 5 turns, unless a clone or amphibian technique is used.
    Note: if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.
    Note: Can only gain sage mode through having either the snake or toad contract.



    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.



    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (doesn’t use normal chakra)
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The Frog Katas is a fighting style available exclusively to those who have mastered the art of Sage mode. The natural chakra used for sage mode activates the users body in many ways, enhancing speed, power, stamina and durability. The user uses the sage chakra in frog katas to enhance their taijutsu skills and also to surround and encapsulates the user with an aura of natural energy. The user can use this aura as an extension of their body giving them longer reach within their taijutsu even if they do not directly connect. Punches that appear to have missed actually strike using the aura and sending the opponents flying.

    After releasing the storm of senbon at his opponents Shunsui hears a rumbling sound from both his right and left side which is created from the large stone pillars emerging from the ground. Knowing that he is going to need a defense that protects him from several directions he wastes no time and uses his raiton chakra in such a way that it is manipulated in a vortex like manner around him thus fusing with the wind current in the area and being molded into a lightning/wind dragon tha coils around the Raikage. By that time, the stone pillars would be closing in on his position but he quickly manipulates the dragon to rotate around him twice whilst breaking through and stopping the pillars from reaching Shunsui's body. With the pillars successfully defended from and Naruto's now making a huge leap over the senbon the Raikage quickly continues his sprint down the golems arm but before he reaches the next set of pillars he manipulates the remaining dragon's head to fire itself at the descending Naruto but in quick succession the Raikage does a single hand seal which allows him to emit a power blast of condensed lightning. The spear made of lightning covers the distance between the Raikage and Naruto in a quick pace and would arrive a split second after the dragons head. "Hmm, this mode this kid's in could be troublesome. I'll use 'that' technique to even the odds around here." The Raikage than, with no hesitation, controls the lightning chakra with him in order to activate his raiton shroud which instantly boosts his physical attributes to insane levels. As Naruto deals with the two lightning techniques the Raikage dashes from the sight of Dodai but maneuvers through the pillars, down the golems arm until suddenly he reaches Dodai's left side, only being mere feet from him. The moment the Raikage reaches a spot near Dodai where his arm reach is enough to land a punch he delivers a full on blow to the side of Dodais face thus crushing his skull due to the raw strength of the Raikage plus the lightning shroud that is covering his body. This would be near impossible if not impossible for Dodai to track or react to due to the speed that is achieved by the Raikage.

    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) -
    Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.


    (Raiton no Yori) -Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography
     
         

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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

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    After releasing the storm of senbon at his opponents Shunsui hears a rumbling sound from both his right and left side which is created from the large stone pillars emerging from the ground. Knowing that he is going to need a defense that protects him from several directions he wastes no time and uses his raiton chakra in such a way that it is manipulated in a vortex like manner around him thus fusing with the wind current in the area and being molded into a lightning/wind dragon tha coils around the Raikage. By that time, the stone pillars would be closing in on his position but he quickly manipulates the dragon to rotate around him twice whilst breaking through and stopping the pillars from reaching Shunsui's body. With the pillars successfully defended from and Naruto's now making a huge leap over the senbon the Raikage quickly continues his sprint down the golems arm but before he reaches the next set of pillars he manipulates the remaining dragon's head to fire itself at the descending Naruto but in quick succession the Raikage does a single hand seal which allows him to emit a power blast of condensed lightning. The spear made of lightning covers the distance between the Raikage and Naruto in a quick pace and would arrive a split second after the dragons head. "Hmm, this mode this kid's in could be troublesome. I'll use 'that' technique to even the odds around here." The Raikage than, with no hesitation, controls the lightning chakra with him in order to activate his raiton shroud which instantly boosts his physical attributes to insane levels. As Naruto deals with the two lightning techniques the Raikage dashes from the sight of Dodai but maneuvers through the pillars, down the golems arm until suddenly he reaches Dodai's left side, only being mere feet from him. The moment the Raikage reaches a spot near Dodai where his arm reach is enough to land a punch he delivers a full on blow to the side of Dodais face thus crushing his skull due to the raw strength of the Raikage plus the lightning shroud that is covering his body. This would be near impossible if not impossible for Dodai to track or react to due to the speed that is achieved by the Raikage.

    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) -
    Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.


    (Raiton no Yori) -Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography
    Slightly before Naruto makes the leap, both him and Dodai notice the formation of the electrified vortex of wind around the Raikage as the spikes attempt to pierce him by the sides. Naruto continues on with his plan, but instead of leaping directly towards the Raikage, he jumps at a much higher angle that will make a steeper arc as he falls towards the Raikage from above. As Naruto is in the air, he concentrates wind chakra in his dominant hand to form a Rasenshuriken, that he encases in sage chakra after he forms it. At this very point of time, the Raikage would have just launched both the Dragon & Gian. Naruto launches the Rasenshuriken as a counterattack and it easily proves to be a worthy defense against both techniques, and explodes upon contact with Gian.

    While of all the above occurs, Dodai was awaiting any sudden movements of the Raikage and could easily notice how he was steadily dashing down the Golem's arm while continuously launching lightning techniques at the airborne Naruto. Being a kumogakure ninja, he was aware of the special trait of the current and past Raikages, it being close-combat with the aid of the Lightning Armour. Without further thinking, Dodai removes all chances of the Raikage being able to reach Dodai by turning all the land in between the Rock Golem's arm and the spike he is currently standing on, into lava. Currently, Naruto would be the only person besides the Raikage on the other side of the lava field. Dodai observes the Raikage carefully, awaiting to fulfill his role as a support for Naruto.

    Naruto...Its all up to you now! I believe in you, Naruto!

    Smoke envelops the air above the Raikage and Dodai, Naruto being above the spreading smoke cloud, begins concentrating his natural-energy sensing ability to sense both Dodai's and the Raikage's humanoid presence on the battlefield. Upon locking target against the Raikage, Naruto pulls his knee up high and then thrusts his foot downwards, accurately at the Raikage's position, allowing him to speed downwards at the intended target. The Raikage would be completely oblivious to Naruto's whereabouts and is caught surprised the moment Naruto passes through the bottom of the smoke cloud in a swoosh-like manner. With that, Naruto lands a destructive heel kick directly over the Raikage's head, breaking every single bone in his body, even cracking the earth beneath him as the kick lands. The Raikage's eyes turn completely white as his pupils seem to fade out of the sheer pain he is experiencing.

    Game...OVER!

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 90 (SM)
    Description: Sage arts: spiraling shuriken is a stonger version of wind style: spiraling shuriken. The user encases the sprialing shuriken with sage chakra to maintain its form and remove any possibilty that the technique can cause damage to the user, this then allows the user to also throw the spiraling shuriken at their target/s and when near the spiraling shuriken will expand some distance with incredible force and explode. (user is unharmed by the affects of this technique due to the use of sage mode)
    Note: can only be used in sage mode and after two consecutive uses will automatically end sage mode.


    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A jutsu that helps bring out more substance for magma jutsu, can also add a certain twist to the battlefield by changing a rocky terrain to a fiery terrain of lava.


    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Using the enhancement of natural chakra the user will deliver a Heel kick to the opponent causing the earth to split up to short range from the additional power boost. This technique can be used in supplementary methods to shock the ground and split it to cause the opponet to become off balance.
    Note: Must know Frog Kata and Sage Mode.

     
         
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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Where'd the smoke come from?

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    After launching the 2 lightning techniques the Raikage notices that naruto has used some unknown spinning wind technique that held enough power to counter both lightning techniques at once, thus making him admire the power of the young shinobi. Hmm, this kid is definitely a worthy opponent"
    He also notices that his former underlining Dodai has used an advanced lava technique to turn the ground separating them into lava which he knows is to keep him from coming to close and completely obliterating the shinobi ant. Without any hesitation he comes to a sudden halt whilst manipulating lightning chakra in his right hand to form a powerful chidori, though he quickly uses shape manipulation to form the chidori into a powerful abundance of lightning bolts. Without a second thought he decides to kill both opponents off with this single jutsu, he begins unleashing the bolts forward thus destroying everything in front of him including Dodai, but as the shower of bolts leave his palm he also rises his hand up vertically thus allowing the bolts to also shoot upwards in attempts to shoot through the smoke and devastate the descending uzumaki child. Naruto's position would be unknown to him but since naruto was going to land above him he'd get hit by the shower also since I shoot it in an arc starting forward and going above my head, it would also be extremely hard for him to notice until the bolts are very close.

    The Raikage would then in quick succession of the chidori thunderstorm, knead a large amount of katon chakra within his gut followed by swiftly unleashing a series of condensed dragon heads upwards, towards the sky. These dragon heads would be meant to heat up the atmosphere and form storm clouds above the battle field, but since naruto took such a high leap upwards then the dragon heads would be heading straight up at him, unknown to the Raikage though. The four dragon heads would move at high speeds and reach Naruto's position in no time at all due to him being in a free fall downward.

    After that, the Raikage's raiton shroud would ware off thus bringing him back down to his normal physical traits, though he would have no worries at all due to him being confident in his own abilities without the boosts.

    (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.


    (Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) -
    Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short -Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.
     
         

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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Quote Originally Posted by william24 View Post
    Where'd the smoke come from?

    |

    After launching the 2 lightning techniques the Raikage notices that naruto has used some unknown spinning wind technique that held enough power to counter both lightning techniques at once, thus making him admire the power of the young shinobi. Hmm, this kid is definitely a worthy opponent"
    He also notices that his former underlining Dodai has used an advanced lava technique to turn the ground separating them into lava which he knows is to keep him from coming to close and completely obliterating the shinobi ant. Without any hesitation he comes to a sudden halt whilst manipulating lightning chakra in his right hand to form a powerful chidori, though he quickly uses shape manipulation to form the chidori into a powerful abundance of lightning bolts. Without a second thought he decides to kill both opponents off with this single jutsu, he begins unleashing the bolts forward thus destroying everything in front of him including Dodai, but as the shower of bolts leave his palm he also rises his hand up vertically thus allowing the bolts to also shoot upwards in attempts to shoot through the smoke and devastate the descending uzumaki child. Naruto's position would be unknown to him but since naruto was going to land above him he'd get hit by the shower also since I shoot it in an arc starting forward and going above my head, it would also be extremely hard for him to notice until the bolts are very close.

    The Raikage would then in quick succession of the chidori thunderstorm, knead a large amount of katon chakra within his gut followed by swiftly unleashing a series of condensed dragon heads upwards, towards the sky. These dragon heads would be meant to heat up the atmosphere and form storm clouds above the battle field, but since naruto took such a high leap upwards then the dragon heads would be heading straight up at him, unknown to the Raikage though. The four dragon heads would move at high speeds and reach Naruto's position in no time at all due to him being in a free fall downward.

    After that, the Raikage's raiton shroud would ware off thus bringing him back down to his normal physical traits, though he would have no worries at all due to him being confident in his own abilities without the boosts.

    (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.


    (Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) -
    Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short -Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.
    The Rasenshuriken, by itself, explodes once reaching its limits. Explosion empowered by the clash with the destructive lightning technique. Your usage of the Thunderstorm technique is questionable but continuing on. Also, this is my final turn with Sage Mode, just so you know. (3rd turn)

    Btw, take note that if you don't engage me in a taijutsu fight right now, I won't try to initiate one anymore. lol.
    _________________________

    While the Rasenshuriken deals with the lightning technique, Naruto himself, notices the formation of a chidori in the Raikage's hands. With the occurring explosion, Naruto was still aware of the occurrences happening beneath the smoke cloud thanks to his innate, passive ability to sense nearly anything on the battlefield in contact with Natural Energy. Lightning bolts were launched straight at Dodai. Naruto decides to take action to protect his ally and reverse summons himself, Dodai and the Raikage into the stomach of a giant toad, where the Raikage's body is stuck in the lining of the stomach, leaving only his head exposed to the hollow stomach. Naruto can be seen short-range of the Raikage, already in-motion to land a devastating blow to the Raikage's face with his open-palm right hand. Get ready for the face-palming of your life, ol'man! Dodai is behind Naruto, mid-range to the Raikage. While Naruto engages the Raikage in a taijutsu fight, Dodai performs a single handseal and conjures several flaming ghosts that light up the inside of the toad and surrounds Naruto and the Raikage from going anywhere else except fight in a cage-like area of short-range diameter. The demon lanterns are on standby, awaiting to attack the Raikage if he attempts to escape the immediate vicinity.

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique bears resemblance to the Summoning: Toad mouth bind technique. However instead of warping the battlefield into the digestive tracks of a giant toad, the user reverse summons themselves and their opponents into the stomach of a giant toad and capture and isolate the target/s inside the stomach, cutting them off from allies and immobilizing their movements while the stomache starts crushing the opponent/s to death.


    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: While performing the Frog Kata in Sage Mode, The user delivers a powerful open-handed strike to the intended target.


    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra releasing several fire ghosts that are like heads with horns and yellow eyes that then attack the target/s in a swarm.


     
         
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    Re: [Sandaime Raikage Test] William24

    Test Failed

    While for the most part the test was okaish, you had tons of help from Yusuke. He clearly tried to engage in close combat yet you barely did. that is one of the core skills you need to show for the test. Not only that but you forfeit which by itself is auto-fail. I just thought you'd need to get a reading how how you did regardless.

    This bio cannot be gained if you aren't a close combat master. You need to engage in close combat to take advantage of the bios speed and abilities. So if you ever wish to try the bio again, please be sure to work on that part.
     
         

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