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Hokages enter the battlefield.
I was not striving to be perfect with this prediction, but have put a lot of thought into it. I could of went longer, but writers block sucks sometimes lol. This is my first real prediction. Enjoy!
(Minato, along with the other Kages appear at the battlefield)
Minato: (Sees Naruto and the gang going up against Obito and Madera, giving it all they have to defeat these two) Naruto, I can't believe how strong your getting.
Naruto: (Hears a familar voice, looks at his father in absolute shock) D..Dad? H.How?
Minato: I was brought back to life along with the other Hokages by Oroachamaru.
Naruto: (Surprised) Why?
Minato: Sasuke wanted to know the real truth of what really happened to his clan. After we told him everything that has happened, Oroachimaru allowed us to come to the battlefield to help aide everyone.
(Naruto's eyes fills with tears, and finally gives his father a hug)
Naruto: I can't believe you're here.
Minato: It has been a long time son, I can't believe I get to hold you one more time.
(Naruto and Minato have tears in their eyes as they hug.)
(Obito sees a familar face when he sees Minato)
Obito: well, if isn't Yondaime.
Minato: Who are you?
Obito: You don't remember our fight 16 years ago?
Minato: (eyes wide open) T..That was you?
Obito: It was me, indeed.
Naruto: (Also surprised) He was that masked man you fought 16 years ago?
Minato: I guess he is.
Obito: Let's see what your really made of, Yondaime.
(Minato prepares for his fight against Obito)
Minato: This time, I will kill you.
(Meanwhile, Hashirama walks over to where Madera is, who is sliced in half and barely alive.)
Hashirama: Madara..
(Back at 3rd Hokage, who is just in shock with everything he sees. Juubi is one corner, thousands of dead shinobi all around. He feels uneasy.)
Sarutobi: What has happened here?
Kakashi: Madera was brought back with Edo Tensai by Kabuto. Tobi has revealed himself as Obito
Sarutobi (Shocked) Obito is alive? How?
Kakashi: He has survived. He was led to believe that I killed Rin. After that, he just gave up. He didn't care anymore.
Sarutobi: I think Obito needs to learn the truth.
(Meanwhile, someone else shows up to the battlefield. Naruto turns around as well as everyone else, and sees a familar face.)
Naruto: Sasuke?
Sasuke: I have made my decision. I have decided not to take my revenge on the leaf
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
Its too fast paced. Kishi will never put that all into one chapter. Though, I quite liked the Ending.
Also what do you mean by, " I can't believe I get to hold you one more time. "
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★Sentimental Member★
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
ending blows.........the rest is good
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God of Wood O_O
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
I love the ending, but I think Sasuke's actions will speak for him.
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Hyuga Princess
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
Minato is more in a physical sense now that he has been revived. I don't think Naruto and Minato really had the time to bond during their last meetup during the Pein arc. So I think this time, they have the time to hug.
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
well some criticism
-i would not think that minato would just go out and say i will kill you he would want to talk to him about what happened
everything else i liked a lot especially the ending it would be epic !
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Academy Student
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
Not bad i think it's too fast but great prediction by the way :D
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
 Originally Posted by Beautiful Hime
Minato is more in a physical sense now that he has been revived. I don't think Naruto and Minato really had the time to bond during their last meetup during the Pein arc. So I think this time, they have the time to hug.
You might need to change it around abit. Simple because Minato infused some of his Chakra inside Naruto so that one day, when Naruto goes like that. Minato would meet him and fix the seal. He doesn't even know what his son looks like right now.
So he has never met him. It was just Chakra that someday Naruto would know who his real father and mother was
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
I thought it was a good try, at least. I also should of been more clear in the beginning, this would not be all in one chapter..its more spread out in possible future chapters. I know at the end, it's all up to Kishi. We never know what surprises are thrown our way. It certainly did when all for Hokages were revived.
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
 Originally Posted by HashiramaDescendant
I love the ending, but I think Sasuke's actions will speak for him. 
u read my mind buddy
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The Pervert
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
well thats a really nice prediction.. hope that happens... it was quite a lot in one chapter..kishi will never do that....but was really nice..and naruto and minato's reunion was also quuite intresting... nd that kakshi's talk wid 3rd was also quite intresting.. the fact that theres a truth behind the story of rin....rep fr this one...
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Academy Student
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
 Originally Posted by Nemesis.
You might need to change it around abit. Simple because Minato infused some of his Chakra inside Naruto so that one day, when Naruto goes like that. Minato would meet him and fix the seal. He doesn't even know what his son looks like right now.
So he has never met him. It was just Chakra that someday Naruto would know who his real father and mother was
Not really i think he sad something like he sealed some chakra in to his psyche so that he would appear and he now knows everything that happened.
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-$Dedication Soldier$-
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
I Liked it. I feel that sasuke wouldnt give reason as to why he's there, but straight away just help in battle
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
Eh... Not the worst I've ever read, but certainly not the best.
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Deeper
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
not bad at all.. i loved it
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Re: Hokages enter the battlefield.
Unlikely, for a few reasons. Sasuke deciding to not take revenge on his own would be sort of anti-climactic and basically ruin his character, as well as Naruto's whole "save Sasuke" sub-quest. I don't see that happening. It's more likely Sasuke will reject Hashirama as an idealistic fool (like Naruto) or that Orochimaru temporarily takes Sasuke's body and unlocks Rinnegan.
Let's not forget it's unlikely the Konoha elders are going to sit by and let the Hokage get Edo'd and not show up. They'll probably attack Sasuke on sight, since they are retarded like that. For one thing, if Sasuke decides against revenge this early, I think it essentially ruins the entire focal point of his character.
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