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    EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

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    Naruto 621 Prediction: Valley of the End
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    Clash! Hashirama vs Madara!

    Hashirama: !? this is...
    Madara: Perfect Susano!
    Hashirama: It's enormous, even bigger than the kyuubi! Madara, the amount of hatred in your heart is shown clearly to me now...
    Madara: You know nothing about my hatred, you who has everything will never know despair.
    Hashirama: Why!? It doesn't have to come to this. There's still time to turn back Madara!
    Madara: Impossible. Even if I stopped, I would be targeted every night for assassination, I wouldn't be surprised if it would be your coward brother.

    Hashirama: Don't talk as if he's a nobody, he's my brother dammit!
    Madara: And a coward who uses the Uchiha like dogs.
    Hashirama: That's not t--
    Madara: It's one hundred percent true! You, my closest friend, betrayed me!
    Hashirama: !!?
    Madara: If someone as close as you would do it, why wouldn't the world!

    Madara takes out his sword from perfect susanoo

    Hashirama: *Shit, I can't dodge*

    Madara swings and destroys the wood dragon

    Hashirama's body is shown ripped in pieces


    Madara: .... I'm not satisfied yet friend.

    The 9 tails starts charging up it's bijuu-dama aiming at the body pieces

    Suddenly the 9 tails collapses


    Madara: !? What?
    Madara: !!!?

    Madara's eyes start to shut

    Hashirama comes out the ground like a tree


    Madara: I..see.. a wood clone......but ..when?
    Hashirama: When you gazed your eyes on my seals for the wood dragon, that gave me the opportunity to slip into the ground. You let your guard down.

    Madara's perfect Susano fades and he slams on the ground near Hashirama

    Madara: Then why....am I sleepy....
    Hashirama: The clone you destroyed was my flower clone, it released a chemical in the air, putting you and the 9 tails to sleep. It's over.
    Madara: ...ha.....good to know. Thanks.

    Madara bursts into flames

    Hashirama: A fire clone!?

    Madara comes out of the kyuubi's mouth

    Hashirama: !? How did you..

    Madara's eyes are bleeding

    Hashirama: No way! You used that?
    Madara: Of course, it's my signature move after all.
    Hashirama: Dammit...*No matter what I do...he always manages to pull off his backtrack jutsu...I can't....no..I have to.*
    Madara: I will defeat you.

    Madara reforms Perfect Susano

    Hashirama: I won't allow it.

    Hashirama starts to create flower world

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    Hashirama: And...we continued to fight for the next few days...that is..until he ran out of chakra.
    Sasuke: And you killed him, right?
    Hashirama: No, I didn't.
    Minato and Hiruzen: !?
    Tobirama: !? What?
    Hashirama: Allow me to explain.
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    Madara impaled with swords

    Hashirama on his knees with a bloody face in front of Madara


    Madara: I...can't believe it....you ....
    Hashirama: This entire time...I was stalling....to figure out a way....to get passed your backtrack....
    Madara: How....my eyes allow me to rewind any situation at my will....explain...
    Hashirama: Genjutsu.
    Madara: !?? Bullshit, no one can use genjutsu on me... not even Izuna...
    Hashirama: It's true...I used a secret jutsu known only to my wife...it allows me to channel illusion waves into my pollen, I made you think you re-winded an event that resulted in your death, when in reality you did no such thing...
    Madara: A senju...to best me in genjutsu.....unheard
    Hashirama:.....
    Madara: Just...finish me....like a dog.

    Hashirama grabs Madara by the arm and starts healing him

    Madara: !? What? Why?

    Hashirama: Because that's what shinobi do to other shinobi of the leaf.

    Madara: !
    Hashirama: You are not a dog....my rank may be higher, but to me everyone in the leaf are equals and should be treated no differently than others...

    Madara puts his hand on Hashirama shoulder

    Madara clenches it


    Hashirama: What are you...
    Madara: YOU ARE NOT IN THE POSITION TO BE SHOWING MERCY RIGHT NOW!

    Madara rips a sword out of his chest and tries to impale Hashirama, but as he does that he freezes and collapses from the amount of blood loss

    Hashirama: Disappointing....maybe I should keep you here..I won't kill you...but I won't save you.

    Hashirama walks away

    End panel shows Madara licking the blood of Hashirama from his hand with sinister eyes

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    Chapter ends, btw this isn't mine. Just a warning for some people
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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Nice.
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    DAMN.
    This can the new chapter look disappointing if its not very good.
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Hashirama besting Madara in Genjutsu is unreal
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    lol dude you copied it from somewhere its not your prediction
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    pretty good. seriously.

    the attitudes seemed fitting. nice fight flow. gj sir.
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Nice!
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by awesome One View Post
    lol dude you copied it from somewhere its not your prediction
    Did i write anywhere its mine?
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Good prediction, I like it.
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Usman View Post
    Did i write anywhere its mine?
    no but i read it before like 2 days ago
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by awesome One View Post
    lol dude you copied it from somewhere its not your prediction
    I don't think he took credit for this at all, just sharing a post or maybe he did make it
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    I liked how you described a genjustu released through the flower spores.
    Not crazy about the dialogue but i get the gist of it.
    Overall pretty epic as you intended.
    Usually the predicted fights scenes are bland but you seemed to think outside the box on this one + rep

    I also like the fact that the hashi sparing madara has gained prevalence.Its the only thing that makes sense
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by awesome One View Post
    no but u read it before like 2 days ago
    Dude, stop suggesting stuff srsly. I didnt read this until an hour ago on a random website i came across
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Pretty sweet prediction. Very entertaining to say the least.
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    I like it
    It's dark but still naruto

    And I like how hashirama pulls a batman begins

    I won't kill u,but I won't save u
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by DeadManWonderLand View Post
    I liked how you described a genjustu released through the flower spores.
    Not crazy about the dialogue but i get the gist of it.
    Overall pretty epic as you intended.
    Usually the predicted fights scenes are bland but you seemed to think outside the box on this one + rep

    I also like the fact that the hashi sparing madara has gained prevalence.Its the only thing that makes sense
    ...Its not mine haha but thanks? i outlined it , at the end...
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    i like it
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    very nice indeed, even tho u didnt make it, thanks for sharing it
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    It didn't start well but it was kinda good....I FIGURED IT OUT I THINK. NINIGI MADARA'S BACKTRACK JUTSU IS NINIGI, COULD IT BE? OMG. OT good but the ending is kinda funny Madara licking blood lol. NINIGI I need to research.
     
         

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    Re: EPIC Naruto 621 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by awesome One View Post
    lol dude you copied it from somewhere its not your prediction
    I remember reading this too.
     
         

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