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    Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way






    NO. 622 始まる
    A Coward's Way


    Kid Hashirama: Currently, we could say I am your rival in playing stone skipping.


    ''Flashback ends''


    Hashirama: That was when I first met Madara Uchiha.
    Sasuke: Then what. How did the fight end.
    Hashirama: Ah yes, I remember that as if it was yesterday.


    ''Flashback''


    Hashirama: ...I'm coming, Madara!
    Madara: Come Hashirama!!
    Hashirama: Sage Art: Divine blow of several thousand hands!
    Madara: Kyuubi! (Tailed Beast Ball)
    Hashirama: If I get this one right..! Ngh!
    Madara: What...? He is blocking the tailed beast ball? This is impossible!
    Hashirama: Hōbi!


    ''Light Flash ➨ Explosion''



    Madara: AAAAARRGGGGGHHHHH!


    ''Smoke Clears'' - ''Hashirama's Hobi Crumbles''



    Hashirama: The Susanoo armour took the hit?! It is still up.. damn.. Madara.. as expected.. you're really tough.
    Madara: ''Huff.. Huff..'' Shut up.. coward. What will you do? Keep running
    Hashirama: ''Sigh..'' You will never learn, will you?
    Madara: You are nothing compared to me! ... Ugh...! What's happening..? aaarrrghhhhh! (Susanoo Armour vanishes)
    Hashirama: He is exceeding his limits..NOW!


    ''Hashirama approaches the Kyuubi''



    Hashirama: I will contract the seal, and release the Kyuubi from Madara's control!
    Kyuubi: ''Falls asleep''
    Hashirama: It worked.. that's one down..


    ''Hashirama approaches Madara''



    Hashirama: ''Grabs Madara's collar'' ''SFX GRIP'' Will you open your god damn eyes?
    Madara: Coward... I will never bow for the likes of you! ''Forms handseals quickly''
    Hashirama: Shit!
    Madara: Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu!
    Hashirama: That last attack nearly consumed all of my Nature Energy... I will have to take this hit! ngh!
    Madara: My chakra.. I've used all my chakra... HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE????!!!! NOOOO!! NO! NO! NO!!!
    Hashirama: ''Burning wounds are covering his body'' Madara... It's over... you lose..
    Madara: I can't accept this!
    Hashirama: Like I said before, I won't kill you, you are my friend. Even in the state you are in now, consumed by darkness. I will do everything to help you find the light within you again, I know it's there, I've seen it.
    Madara: You are humiliating me! I can't accept this...! The likes of you.. Hashirama!
    Hashirama: ''Grabs Madara's collar'' ''SFX: GRIP'' Uchiha Madara... Right now... I will give you two choices..
    Madara: ...
    Hashirama: You come back to the Konohagakure with me and end your evil ways ... or ... You will never show your face again.
    Madara: ''Spits blood on Hashirama's face'' ...
    Hashirama: ... I see.. never have I seen someone as consumed by darkness as you are .. Madara.. I wish I could save you.. but I can't .. You are too far gone.. ''Cries''


    ''Hashirama leaves the Battlefield!''


    Madara: How could I have lost.. I need more power... ugh..


    ''Flashback Ends''


    Hashirama: Never have I ever seen Uchiha Madara again untill my death since that moment, I told the villagers I killed him, to keep them calm. I just knew Madara would never show his face again.
    Sasuke: I see.. ''Flashback in Sasuke's mind - Him hanging above unconcious Naruto at The Valley of the End - ''
    Tobirama: You didn't kill him?! Oh my God..! Are you kidding me brother?!
    Hashirama: I just couldn't ...
    Sasuke: Now.. fourth.. : ''What did really happen during the night of the Kyuubi attack on Konoha?''
    Minato: ?!




    NO.622 終わり
    Next Time: Revelation



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    Last edited by Edo Valen; 02-24-2013 at 01:42 PM. Reason: Changed 621 to 622, was typo

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    That was pretty awesome
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Nice one. Although you left out Mito's involvement with the Kyuubi.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Not bad but I think there'll be a chapter that shows Hashirama and Madara and how everything escalated to the point where they battle.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    That was pretty good actually, and the pics, and the ost made it way better.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Quote Originally Posted by -S- View Post
    Nice one. Although you left out Mito's involvement with the Kyuubi.
    Where did it say Mito helped hashi?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Quote Originally Posted by Hashīrama View Post
    Where did it say Mito helped hashi?
    Mito arrived at the battle to become the Kyuubi's jinchuriki. Everyone should know that...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Nice read. Good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    That was soooo good.
    I just hope there wont be to much flash backs :l
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    i don't watch yaoi but i could see where that is going
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Pretty nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Quote Originally Posted by Hashīrama View Post
    Where did it say Mito helped hashi?
    Mito helped him by becoming Kurama's junchuuriki..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    I like ur theory that hashi only pretended that madara was dead. makes more sense than how the manga explained it so far
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    I loved what you did with it , the music the prediction everything.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Great One.... :D :D
    Especially the presentation.... Brilliant work.... :D :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    That was good
    Great Job
     
         

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    you worked hard
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Oh nice

    And if hashi really let madara live then it would only hurt his ego more

    rep and thanks
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Awesome One Dude
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Awesommmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeee.... I wish kishi could really see this..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Awesome. Like it!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    This is the most decent prediction story telling -- with the background music and pictures and stuff. Great job! :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Quote Originally Posted by SharinganUser1 View Post
    That was pretty awesome
    Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by -S- View Post
    Nice one. Although you left out Mito's involvement with the Kyuubi.
    Thanks bro.

    Quote Originally Posted by TheHokage View Post
    Not bad but I think there'll be a chapter that shows Hashirama and Madara and how everything escalated to the point where they battle.
    Thanks, we will just have to wait and see.

    Quote Originally Posted by Okami the butcher View Post
    That was pretty good actually, and the pics, and the ost made it way better.
    Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by Narutohokage7 View Post
    Nice read. Good job
    Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by GreenBeast View Post
    That was soooo good.
    I just hope there wont be to much flash backs :l
    Haha, thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by Imperius View Post
    i don't watch yaoi but i could see where that is going


    Quote Originally Posted by zamki View Post
    Pretty nice prediction
    Thank you very much.

    Quote Originally Posted by Darth Vulcanis View Post
    I like ur theory that hashi only pretended that madara was dead. makes more sense than how the manga explained it so far
    We will see, I hope so it happens.

    Quote Originally Posted by manufran02 View Post
    I loved what you did with it , the music the prediction everything.
    No problem.

    Quote Originally Posted by Shouri Uchiha View Post
    Great One.... :D :D
    Especially the presentation.... Brilliant work.... :D :D
    Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by FaHaD 5212 View Post
    That was good
    Great Job
    Haha, thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by PredictionGuru View Post
    Oh nice

    And if hashi really let madara live then it would only hurt his ego more

    rep and thanks
    Thanks for the rep.

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    Awesome One Dude
    Thanks bro.

    Quote Originally Posted by lazybee View Post
    Awesommmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeee.... I wish kishi could really see this..
    If he could.

    Quote Originally Posted by ThiefOfNavarre View Post
    Awesome. Like it!
    Glad you enjoyed it.

    Quote Originally Posted by onimarutakeshi View Post
    This is the most decent prediction story telling -- with the background music and pictures and stuff. Great job! :D
    Thank you very much.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    That was nice. + rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 622 - A Coward's Way

    Epic man.. You gotta do more of these :P i really hope Sasuke will ask Minato that question in the end xD!
     
         

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