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    Naruto 623 - Deep Dive






    NO. 623 始まる
    Deep Dive


    Madara: This time it finally looks like there is one. At last not only you, but I got to the other side too.
    Hashirama: Madara, I have never met someone like you before in my entire life. I'm glad we met.
    Madara: Likewise Hashirama.


    ''Random Uchiha Shinobi Appear (3)''


    Madara: ..?!!
    Uchiha Shinobi: Get the Senju kid!
    Madara: What? Senju?!
    Hashirama: Huh.. what?
    Uchiha Shinobi: *Throws three shurikens*
    Madara: Look out!


    ''SFX: Drip.. Drip..''


    Hashirama: Madara!
    Uchiha Shinobi: What in the hell do you think you're doing. Uchiha.. Madara.
    Hashirama: Uchiha? Don't tell me?!
    Madara: ''Looks at his wounds'' Ugh... cough.. Don't... touch him.
    Uchiha Shinobi: What did you say..?!
    Madara: Don't try to lay one finger on him..
    Uchiha Shinobi: What do you think you're doing? I always knew you were one of those pathetic Uchiha kids.
    Hashirama: ..!!
    Uchiha Shinobi: Well then, I will just kill you both, since you're worthless too Madara. ''Raises Kunai''
    Hashirama: STOP IT! Mokuton! (He's not actually saying it).


    ''Tree Roots Arise From The Ground''


    Uchiha Shinobi: His body is overflowing with chakra!
    Hashirama: Hm! ''Clap'' Come on, it has to work this time!
    Uchiha Shinobi: Men, attack him! The kid knows how to use ninjutsu!
    Madara: Woah... Am..a..zing.. Ugh...


    ''Madara Faints''


    Uchiha Shinobi: ''Gets hit by a tree root with insane force and gets smacked into the river'' Ugh!! *Coughs blood*


    ''The Remaining Two Uchiha Shinobi Approach Hashirama With The Intent To Kill!''



    Uchiha Shinobi: Sharingan!
    Hashirama: At this rate I'm going to be out of chakra fast, so I have to deal with these two quickly!
    Uchiha Shinobi: ''Predicts Hashirama's movements and dodges the roots''.
    Hashirama: Shit!
    Uchiha Shinobi: ''Cuts Hashirama's shoulder with the tip of his small blade. ''SFX: Slash''
    Hashirama: Arrgghhh! ''Falls to the ground''
    Uchiha Shinobi: You're done for. ''Forms Handseals''


    ''Seven Senju Shinobi Appear Out Of The Woods!''



    Uchiha Shinobi: ..?!
    Tobirama: Hashirama! Are you alright?!!
    Hashirama's Father: Enough! Get your disgusting faces out of here Uchiha, or we will kill you!
    Uchiha Shinobi: Hmpf..


    ''The Remaining Two Uchiha Flee Into The Woods''



    Hashirama's Father: '''His eyes catch the ground'' Hmm.. strange.. what are these misplaced tree roots doing here.. it can't be... Hashirama..? Men! Heal Hashirama!
    Tobirama: Who's that guy lying over there? ''Points at Madara''
    Hashirama's Father: I don't know, but from those robes I can tell it's a child from the Uchiha, just don't get near him.
    Hashirama: ''Healed up'' You have to heal him too!
    Hashirama's Father: What are you saying Hashirama?! Heal our enemies? Have you turned insane, what did that traitor tell you.
    Hashirama: He hasn't done anything wrong!
    Hashirama's Father: Still.. he is an Uchiha.. and will stay an Uchiha for the rest of his life. We will spare him just, because he is a kid. We won't sink down to the level of the Uchiha by killing shinobi children. Let's go.
    Hashirama: You can go first, I lost the Kunai I got from mother here somewhere, I need to find it.
    Hashirama's Father: Fine.


    ''Hashirama runs back to Madara''


    Hashirama: Madara, are you alright? ''He starts to heal Madara''
    Madara: Ugh... I hate this god damn war. We need to become strong Hashirama, to fight these cowards!
    Hashirama: I don't care you're from the Uchiha clan, I see you as my comrade!
    Madara: ..?!
    Hashirama: We will bring peace to the Shinobi world! ''Reaches out to shake Madara's hand''
    Madara: Do you really think we are capable of such a thing?
    Hashirama: Ofcourse!
    Madara: If we could just erase our surnames.. ''Madara reaches out for Hashirama's hand''


    ''Senju and Uchiha Shake hands for the first time!''



    Madara: We will stop the violence, we will stop this everlasting war!


    ''Flash Forward - 8 years''


    Izuna: Ugh.. ''Coughs Blood'' ''A sword stabs trough Izuna's body!''
    Madara: IZUNA!
    Hashirama: What?!


    ''Flash forward to Madara's and Hashirama's Final Battle''



    Madara: I will never forget that day you traitor! You're over!
    Hashirama: ...I'm coming, Madara!
    Madara: Come Hashirama!!




    NO.623/ 終わり
    Next Time: Fragmented Hearts



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    If you want to make peace with your enemy, you have to work with your enemy. Then he becomes your partner.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Very Nice...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    lol @ da tittle i thought madara n hashi having swimming compition

    O.T : good prediction ..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Cool!
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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    double time skip.

    you crazy man.

    i like you , but you crazy.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Eh not bad. + rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    + rep for inputting pics too , nice touch there , good prediction too :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Not bad not bad at all
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Very cool bruv, kudos to ur hard work
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Nice one, the music made it better
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    . really nice prediction..great job.. rep fr this one...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Nice prediction.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Great Job
    The Presentation Was Great
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    It's really good ^^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    great thread i like the double time skip
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    wow...just great, i actually felt like i was reading the manga
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    nice job, and the music was a nice touch
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    nice that was pretty cool
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Nice man. ! But still dont have the element of surprise dude. ! Hehe
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Sorry but it didnt fit in at all...Too much plotholes

    But atleast you tried
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    I am a fan. I have officially dubbed you the alternate Naruto mangaka.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Quote Originally Posted by J O K E R View Post
    Very Nice...
    Thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuujinn View Post
    lol @ da tittle i thought madara n hashi having swimming compition

    O.T : good prediction ..
    Hehe, thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by PredictionGuru View Post
    Cool!
    \\\\\\\\\\\\
    Thanks!

    Quote Originally Posted by Putokage View Post
    double time skip.

    you crazy man.

    i like you , but you crazy.
    I know :o

    Quote Originally Posted by SandCoffin View Post
    Eh not bad. + rep
    Thanks, hope you enjoyed.

    Quote Originally Posted by rinnemaki View Post
    + rep for inputting pics too , nice touch there , good prediction too :D
    Thanks, glad you enjoyed.

    Quote Originally Posted by manufran02 View Post
    Not bad not bad at all
    Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by dirklyn View Post
    Very cool bruv, kudos to ur hard work
    Thank you very much.

    Quote Originally Posted by Reverie View Post
    Nice one, the music made it better
    Yes, I spent quite some time on finding fitting music.

    Quote Originally Posted by Animeshg14 View Post
    . really nice prediction..great job.. rep fr this one...
    Thank you very much.

    Quote Originally Posted by -Nindo- View Post
    Nice prediction.
    Thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by FaHaD 5212 View Post
    Great Job
    The Presentation Was Great
    Thanks, I tried my best.

    Quote Originally Posted by Fusion Reborn View Post
    It's really good ^^
    Thank you ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by khaoz View Post
    great thread i like the double time skip
    Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by jvsluys View Post
    wow...just great, i actually felt like i was reading the manga
    Thank you, that's my final goal ^^.
    Quote Originally Posted by Natsu Titania View Post
    nice job, and the music was a nice touch
    Hehe, thank you very much.

    Quote Originally Posted by SharinganUser1 View Post
    nice that was pretty cool
    Thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by ntel View Post
    Sorry but it didnt fit in at all...Too much plotholes

    But atleast you tried
    Yeah, last time you were really pushed into predicting their final fight, which is a lot easier. Now we are being pushed into a gaiden, really hard to predict, because there will be all new content and information coming at you.

    You can call this some filler content, I just wrote it from the heart, didn't really think too much as with the double timeskip lol, but in my opinion Izuna is way younger than Madara. What age he died? I have no idea, but speculations.

    Quote Originally Posted by Uziha Uchimaki View Post
    I am a fan. I have officially dubbed you the alternate Naruto mangaka.
    Thank you very much ^^
     
         

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    I love how easily I could picture their actions, enjoy the rep I throw
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Very Nice
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 623 - Deep Dive

    Very very nice!..
     
         

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