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    NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

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    [ ] : Thoughts
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    MANGA 623 : My Surname is....
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    (Madara is standing near the river and Hashirama is sitting beside him looking at the flowing river)
    MADARA : Looks like...this time I got one over...now you're not the only one.... who got to the other side....
    [b][u]HASHI : Huh? (looks at Madara) hehehe...(smiles) (looks at the flowing river again) Yeah... we both got to the other side.
    ------Scene Change------
    HASHI-DAD : (slaps Hashirama) Damn you little brat!!! How many times I told you not to roam freely in the forest.(turns around and walks away) Do you want yourself to get killed like Itama. That brat .... he was useless after all.
    HASHI : ?!!
    TOBI : .......
    HASHI : (holding his cheek and looking at his father walking away) I don't ..... I don't want to lose Tobirama now!! Itama....(tears rolls down) your ruthless rules killed Itama!! You killed Ita- (a punch hits him from one side) Argh!!!
    (Hashirama's father stops as he hears Hashirama's words and then the punch)
    HASHI-DAD : ?!!
    HASHI : To...Tobirama?
    TOBI : Shut up brother!!
    HASHI-DAD : Hmm (stops) (look at Tobirama like a proud father) [ "That's my boy" ]
    TOBI : It's useless to bark in front of these cold blooded murderers.
    HASHI-DAD : (stops) ?!!!
    TOBI : These adults....(remembers father's words) [ "he was useless after all" ] we're just a tool for them so that they can show off their manliness.
    HASHI-DAD : (angry) How dare you? You little brat!! (walks towards Tobirama) ?!!
    (Hashirama stands in his way)
    HASHI : I already told you. I don't want to lose Tobirama.(glares at his father)
    HASHI-DAD : (frustrated) Tsk. (spits on one side) Keep your big mouth shut. You too both are useless.(walks away)
    HASHI : (as soon as his father goes out of sight) phewww.(turns to Tobirama) What the hell were you thinking?!! We both would be dead right now. Have you lost your cool? (sits on a rock) Damn, now I'm talking as being in your shoes.
    TOBI : ....We must train....
    HASHI : Huh?!! (stands up)
    TOBI : ..train harder so as to protect ourselves.....protect each other.
    HASHI : ....to protect the children...children of our clan.
    TOBI : ?!! (then a smile appears on his face) That's my big brother.
    ------Scene Change------
    (river is flowing, flowing with the hot sun caged inside it)
    (The ripples enlarges on the surface of water as the stone skips and reaches the other side)
    HASHI : He's late again.
    (Madara pops out of the forest and stands near Hashirama)
    (grounds his fan)
    MADARA : You look energetic today?
    HASHI : You mean I am always dull. (-.-)
    MADARA : Why are you such a moron?
    HASHI : Now I'm a moron? Just decide yourself and then talk.
    MADARA : Shut up!!
    HASHI : Then why you asked so many questions in the first place?
    MADARA : Forgive me!! I made a mistake of asking you.
    HASHI : So should I answer your first question?
    MADARA : What?
    HASHI : "You look energetic today?" That was your question.
    MADARA : O.O You smart-a*s. What are you doing here?
    HASHI : Huh? hahahahaha.. Sorry. I want to tell you something.
    MADARA : What is it?
    (Time passes by as he explains everything about the incident happened)
    HASHI : That's all.
    MADARA : ...... Why are you telling me all this? I might be a spy and one of your enemy. (Holds his fan to show Hashirama that he might attack him)
    HASHI : You might be a spy.... You might be one of the enemy.
    MADARA : .....
    HASHI : But.... you are still one of us. The children who can rebuild the future.
    MADARA : ?!!
    HASHI : I want to protect the future. And I need your help.
    MADARA : How can I help you? How can I trust you? (Puts his fan on his back)
    HASHI : My surname.
    MADARA : Huh?
    HASHI : My surname is...My surname is-
    (explosive kunais are thrown at the place)
    (some falls on the land and some in the river)
    (The kunais blasts)
    (The water spills out everywhere and the dust covers the land)
    (both the kids jump on either sides)
    (The dust clears out)
    HASHI : ?!!
    MADARA : ?!!
    (Both are caught by Shinobis)
    MADARA/HASHI : These are?
    MADARA : (looking at the shinobis holding Hashirama) Uchihas?!!
    HASHI : (looking at the shinobis holding Madara) Senjus?!!
    (The shinobis are covering the mouth of their hostage)
    SENJU 2 : Leave that kid. Or else (points kunai at Madara's neck) he dies.
    UCHIHA 1 : Same goes for this kid.
    SENJU 1 : ?!! [Hashirama?] Okay. We'll both exchange the kids. (to his subordinates silently) be ready.
    MADARA : ?!!
    (Senju shinobis covers Madara's mouth)
    UCHIHA 2 : Ok. (to subordinates) get ready.
    HASHI : ?!!
    (Uchihas covers Hashi's mouth)
    (Both of the clans pushes their hostage)
    (Hashirama and Madara walks on the river on the other side)
    (They both look at each other and then on the opposite sides watching the Shinobis about to attack)
    (As both of them passes each other)
    SENJU 1/UCHIHA 1 : Attack!!
    (Both clans throws kunais at their hostages)
    MADARA/HASHI : ?!!
    (Hashirama removes kunai to attack)
    (Madara removes his fan to attack)
    UCHIHA 1 : Kill him!!
    SENJU 1 : Attack him!!
    (The thrown kunais are deflected by the kunai and the fan)
    (Both are facing each other with their weapons at the point)
    SENJUS/UCHIHAS : Kill him!!
    (Both of them pass each other)
    SENJUS/UCHIHAS : ?!!
    (Hashirama and Madara are shown with their back to each other and facing their own clans in defense to protect each other)
    HASHI : (in defensive pose facing the Senjus) Madara....
    MADARA : (in defensive pose facing the Uchihas) Yes?
    SENJUS : What the hell are you doing?
    UCHIHAS : (activates Sharingan) What is all this?
    HASHI : My surname is Senju. Senju Hashirama from the Senju clan.
    SENJUS : ?!!
    UCHIHAS : ?!!
    MADARA : ?!! I... I am Uchiha Madara from the Uchiha clan.
    }
    EDO HASHI : That day, we first introduced ourselves as a true Shinobi.
    (Hashirama will reveal the hurdles in a Shinobi's life)
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    really well done
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Nice work...
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great. Now Hashirama's dad is perceived as an abusive parent.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Loved it!!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    like always a great job man
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    good...i liked it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    very good, enjoyed it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great job as always
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    OMG, just epic!! ...i've lost my words for it, this was a very good chapter :D
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Nice Prediction.... :D :D
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Good job man, I especially liked the back-to-back introduction/combat...
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    this is really good, the manga doesnt get any better than this
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction.. Sounds like the real thing!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great job
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    well done. I love it
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    nicely done, liking it a lot
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    nice bro, well done.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    nice prediction dude... :D
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 623 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    i think the whole 'abusive father' thing is being taken a bit overboard... however.. good effort
     
         
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