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    Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    (Scene shows Tajima Uchiha and Izuna on their feet)

    (Scene shows Butsuma Senju & Tobirama on their feet)

    Madara: Father pls. lets stop this

    Tajima: Silence!!! This guys dont know how to fear us Uchihas!!

    Izuna: Brother I guess its the best time to try our new genjutsu on these Senjus huh???

    (Scene Shows Uchiha Tajima and Izuna Triggered their Sharinggan)

    (Butsuma Senju thinking: This is bad)

    Butsuma: Tobirama, Hashirama Get Ready!!!

    (Scene Shows Visibile hue Chakra, Physical Force surrounding Butsuma and Tobirama)

    Butsuma: Lets just try the effectiveness of Sharinggan on our sage force!

    Tobirama: We can easily get out with your genjutsu with our natural energy, (Thinking)

    Butsuma: (Thinking) Yeah Natural Energy Increases our Danger Prediction earlier than happening so...

    Hashirama: Pls. End This... (Nodding his Head)

    (Scene Shows Butsuma Charges at Tajima)

    Butsuma: Doton! Dorhyuuu Hekii!

    Tobirama: Suiton! Water Blast!!

    (Scene Shows Earth Wall surrounded Tajima and Izuna)

    (Scene Shows Water falls trying to drowned Tajima and Izuna Inside the Earth Wall)

    Tajima: Now! Izuna!

    Izuna: Katon! Fire Ball Jutsu!

    Tajima: Kuchiyose no jutsu! (A big Black Elephat Appears!)

    (Scene Shows the Black Elephant Blows the Fire Jutsu of Izuna to make it Bigger and Wider)

    (Scene Shows Water Blast Evaporated)

    (Scene Shows Tajima and Izuna Jump high, landed at High Stones)

    Madara: Father... When will this war end???? Their deaths??? what is the prized in there??? fame??? is that all???

    Tajima: Shut Up and Help us kill them..

    Izuna: Brother??...

    (Scene Shows Butsuma and Tobirama Jumps at top of the Earth wall)

    Hashirama: Is Love bound us in killing other clans specially Uchiha??? Father!!! is that love is???

    Butsuma: Ignore your brother Tobirama, Lets go (Ready to Charge position)

    Tobirama: ... but...

    (Scene Shows Butsuma with Tobirama Charges at Tajima and Izuna)

    (Scene shows some distraction)

    (Scens Shows Huge Wildfire and Wild Trees Sprouted at the Middle of the Ninjas going to Clash)

    Butsuma: No doubt,,, Mokuton!! you!!

    Tajima: Fire Jutsu, but with great area of effect, madara....

    Hashirama: (Holding is hands clapped) With this developed Jutsu, I can somehow relate with Madara and knew his intentions to end this conflict

    Madara: (Sharinggan Activated) To where a village with clans, villagers, family, shinobi, fortified by love and peace..

    (Scene shows Flash Forward)

    (After 10 years)

    Madara: It happened Really huh???

    Hashirama: Tomorrow this will be officially called hidden village of Konoha

    (Scene shows Hashirama and Madara at valley of end but without the statues)

    Hashirama: So Uchiha Madara... Ur next plan for this alliance and maintained peace village??

    Madara: Lead them, Make a strong advocate to other countries in maintaining balance within the region...

    Madara: With the existing Tailed beast we will scatter them to assure that we mean peace!!!

    Hashirama: Hmm... But i think we need a sole leader for Konoha from now on... (Thinking deep)

    Madara: (Thinking ) you mean only one???

    Madara: So Hashirama Senju... How do you plan in making the next move??

    Hashirama: Since Senju & Uchiha the powerful clans of Konoha, the Clan that build the village itself...

    Hashirama: Reason is... with those many people, so many opinions, so many suggestions,

    Madara: (Thinking) Hashirama plans to....

    Hashirama: We will vote for a sole leader that will be the official head, decision, plans, presentation of the village Konoha!!!

    Madara: (Eyes Glared) It cant be.... we worked on this one for so long... and you want to break it and go for solo???

    (Scene Shows Madara is disappointed with Hashirama's Decision)

    starts for voting might angered Madara and he knew that Uchiha also voted for Hashirama's suggestion.
    This is based on so many decisions made by Uchiha and Senju, Conflicts occur due to lack of consistency and unity among decisions so thats why Hashirama suggested to have a sole leader that will represent the whole village.

    END HOPE U ALL LIKED IT!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    sorry I stopped reading after sage force.. really sage force? I would think it'll be more along the lines of hashirama showing his wood techniques
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Quote Originally Posted by Seventh Hokage View Post
    sorry I stopped reading after sage force.. really sage force? I would think it'll be more along the lines of hashirama showing his wood techniques
    after seeing this ^ i was like "no no no i wont read it."
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    well it was gud but nt that impressive and madara being jelelous of hashi jst cuz he wanted to vote fr 1 leader..thats nt so much convincing...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    You have two weeks. Bring out a good one. Best of Luck.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    hehehe good efforts... keep it up bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Good work... keep it up.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    This was a predictable prediction thats cool but lets see more creativity or somethings we didn't expect. good job and we still have plenty of time for predictions
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Good job :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    it got a bit boring :/
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Wow cool nicely done
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    This predictiion need teo thunbs up
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Really really cool
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    I liked it. Sage force is iffy, but nice work.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Hehe this naruto will be the hokage
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    it was ok, but there's room for improvement. working on one myself
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    No bad at all, especially since English doesn't seem to be your first language I think you've scripted out exactly the way it was playing in your head. Interesting
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Yawn.......this is boring....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    water blast? he's a blastoise? Kidding. Good attempt though and interesting summon used in combination with the specific attack.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    the fathers will kill each other and then madara's hate grows
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    sorry! i did not enjoy reading it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Quote Originally Posted by Seventh Hokage View Post
    sorry I stopped reading after sage force.. really sage force? I would think it'll be more along the lines of hashirama showing his wood techniques
    Sage force?? Errrrrrrmmm.... C'mon, this isn't the Power Rangers...



    Nice attempt tho
     
         
    Last edited by SilverfoxUchiha; 03-12-2013 at 03:44 PM.

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    nice job keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    nice..keep up the good work...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 624 Prediction (Reason)

    Madara: Father pls. lets stop this
    dolan pls.
     
         

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