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    Random poem

    not sure if aloud but eh

    I don’t know why I wake up
    Or why I give a f*ck
    My life lost its meaning
    I cant move past
    My heart used to be iron
    Cast into the play that was life
    Only to be shot down in the final act
    Pain pain go away
    Why wont you
    Just leave me alone
    The words still ring clear
    But there is nothing but fear
    Theres nothing to look forward too
    Then out of the blue BAM
    I wake up still in pain
    Still in the game
    That put me here
    Always 2nd best
    But hes your one and only
    He stole you from me
    Why do I still wait
    You say you need me
    But you’re with him
    There’s only so much I can take
    But I cant learn to hate
    This must be love
    Anyone else would have left
    But yet I stay
    Waiting
    Slowly dying
    Each second
    Passing
    But you have no idea what youv'e done
    My princess of the black
    The contract signed
    Promise made
    That’s why I wait
    I have no choice
    I bound myself
    The chains of love
    Becoming my noose
    To overtake my life
    But the last 16 months strife
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    You don''t really feel that way, do you?!
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Orochimaruofthesound View Post
    I'm a "rapper."
    That's good to know!
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Nothing rhyms in it. (IMO)
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    Nothing rhyms in it. (IMO)
    poetry doesnt always rhyme
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Quote Originally Posted by i OblivioN i View Post
    That's good to know!

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    Nothing rhymes in it. (IMO)
    Corrected your post, and it's a poem, they don't have to rhyme always! :D
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Tamaki View Post
    You don''t really feel that way, do you?!
    lifes kinda depressing
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Orochimaruofthesound View Post
    lifes kinda depressing
    Cheer up a bit then! :D
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    its not that great, im a good writer my self i could give you some of my poems i know you'll like it, and you could give it to the girl you like..
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Awsome poetry man ........
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Lawliet L View Post
    its not that great, im a good writer my self i could give you some of my poems i know you'll like it, and you could give it to the girl you like..
    im a better writer than this just writers block hinders my work but thanks though
     
         

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    Re: Random poem

    impressed
     
         

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