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    Hei Uzumaki


    Basic Information
    Name: Hei Uzumaki
    Nickname: Silent Serpent
    Gender: Male
    Age: Unknown (Estimated to be 70 plus.)
    Clan: Uzumaki

    Looks: Hei seems to me a young man, with black hair and dark blue eyes. When off duty, Hei can be seen in the casual attire. When operating on Missions, however, Hei wears a black trench coat with green trim. under the coat is a standard Anbu Uniform, full of supplies. To complete his look, he also wears a white mask that cover his face. The mask has a purple "bolt" that crosses his right eye and a plain look to it. Under the coat is an array of weapons ranging from needles to combat knives and wires. Hei also has an Old Konoha Jounin Uniform that is grey in color. he has kept this as an momentum of his Clan that was once a great name of the village.

    Personality: Hei, is an unexpectedly softhearted, kindly individual who is quick to give compliments but loath to accept them. He appears to care very little for his own well-being, much less his dignity, and is therefore often put in situations that give him the impression of being goofy or eccentric. He is Slow to anger and apparently a bit of a pacifist, Hei would much rather talk out disputes than fight, frequently doing so even while he himself is under vicious attack. Chief among his personality traits appears to be his hopeless romanticism, given his propensity for spouting sappy lines about his love for an unknown women, his readiness to weep openly over her and his charming treatment of women in general. Hei lacks the ambition of others, clearly content to take his time dealing with things that do not demand urgency.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Land of Whirlpools
    Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Unofficial Sage
    Specialty: Katon | Suiton | Taijutsu | Kenjutsu | Curse Seal of Heaven | Jeet Kun Do
    Elements:

    -Fire Release: Mastered
    -Water Release: Mastered
    -Earth Release: Mastered
    -Lightning Release: Mastered
    -Wind Release: Mastered
    -Sound Release: Needs Training (Kumogakure Tournament Prize)

    Custom Elements

    -Jade Release: Mastered
    -Volcanic Ash Release: Mastered

    Your Ninjutsu:

    -Ninjutsu: Mastered
    -Genjutsu: Mastered
    -Taijutsu: Mastered
    -Kenjutsu: Mastered
    -Fuuinjutsu: Mastered
    -Kinjutsu: Mastered
    -Summoning: Eels
    -Custom Jutsu: Approved


    Background Info.
    History: As a Child Hei grow up as a fisherman's son. knowing nothing about Ninjutsu or the ways of a shinobi. Hei was seen as nothing special until his 5 birthday when pirates attacked. They laid wasted to the land and fishing villages for 3 days until the Uzumaki Shinobi arrived to fight them off. After the attack he found grate respect for Shinobi and decided to join the Ninja ranks. Several years passed and Hei found himself to be a full fledged Ninja of the Uzumaki Clan. After fighting many battles and defending his land Hei was called upon a mission to the mainland. Hei along with the love of his life "Mizki" where accompanied with 5 other Uzumaki officials. They met with the Senju Clan leaders Hashirama and Tobirama and the Uchiha Clan leader Madara. with the approval of the Uzumaki Clan they helped form the first Ninja Village Konohagakure. Upon relocating Hei and Mizki settled down and had 3 kids. Maru, Hei jr. and Saku. Upon Madara's defection from the village all three kids and Mizki where killed. this lead Hei into an Deep disrepair.

    Upon the Death of his family. Hei studied the art of Kinjutsu, looking for ways to bring his family back from the netherworld. Hei has become so Skilled in forbidden techniques that it caught the attraction of the now 2nd Hokage Tobirama. Tobirama worked on a Jutsu that would bring the loved ones back from the dead. however upon the final steps Tobirama revised the Jutsu and decided not to share it's completion with Hei as the risk of the Jutsu is to much. Hei, after finding out the completion of the Kinjutsu was enraged that it was hidden from him. this lead him to attack Tobirama. after a long fight that stretched from Konoha to the coastline hei was left half way alive floating out to see.

    Hei found himself washed up on an unknown island where he was greeted by a Giant Serpent, larger then anything he has seen before. after befriending the beast Hei trained in the uses of water element in order to over power the man that he blames for not being able to bring back his family. Years and Hei aged. Hearing the news of Tobirama's death and the death lead hei to the understanding that he will never learn the way to bring back his family. Hei now in his old age returned to Konohagakure where he visited the graves of his family and the 2nd Hokage Tobirama often. One night, upon entering the graveyard Hei noticed a young man with pail skin recovering the remains of the 2nd hokage Hei fallowed the man and watched as he sacrificed a man's life as he converted him into Tobirama himself. No knowing the final pieces to the Kinjutsu, Hei could bring back the ones he loves.

    It's unknown if Hei ever used the Kinjutsu on his family, but what is known is that Hei is believed to still be alive and staying somewhere inside the land of lightning.

    Other


    Hei is naturally gifted in the uses of Katon, after many years in the practice of the Fire Element, Hei has managed to use it faster and with a single handseals.


    The first state of Hei's curse mark is rather simple, Random lines of "Jagged" shaped marking will spread out around his body. The Second state of his Curse Seal is not very unique. When activated, the cursed seal grants him enhanced speed, strength, durability and chakra, it also corrupts both his body and his mind, giving Hei a darker personality and making him vulnerable to evil influence. After training with Nexus, Hei enhanced his Cursed Seal to The second level. This cursed state turned Hei's skin dark grey, his eyes yellow, and makes no changes his hair, Dark-blue venom lipstick appears on his lips and a darkened "void" around his eyes giving his yellow eyes an more intense glow. Upon these changes the only major change seems to happen to his back. 2 cannon like growths will form giving him special ability to release high amounts of chakra from them. this grants him the ability to fly at a cost of a move. Flight is also able to be sustained at a cost of one move per turn.

    (Fuuinjutsu: Juin Jutsu) - Sealing Technique: Cursed Seal
    Rank :A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A(-5 per turn to target if they us it and target can be self)
    Description:This jutsu creates a seal that gives its target more chakra and more strenght.(Curse Mark of Heaven: +10 Nin - +5 Tai. Curse Mark of Earth: +5 Nin - +10 Taijutsu)
    Note:Level 2 is double the gain and the damage to the one with the seal)



    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Quick fingers and an eye for detail were the Dollmaster's trademarks. But only once did he use his skills to create a weapon. This was the result, as colossal as his dolls were delicate. In a small town once known as "Arashi" lived a man known as the Dollmaster, he was well known for his craftsmanship, building and designing anything from furniture to houses but nothing compared to his Dolls, every single doll different in detail from it's previous. ranging in sizes and styles. Over the years he made thousands of Dolls, all made for his private collection. Every year during the week long "Festival of Lights". The Dollmaster placed is Dolls out on display to shine under the fireworks. After seeing the delicate Dolls, the Leader of the town admired his craftsmanship and asked the Dollmaster to make a Sword for him. Although the Dollmaster had never made a sword, he was excited to take on the challenge. Over the fallowing weeks, the Dollmaster spent most of his time on the sword, he crafted an unique blade. Upon finishing it's final details. the Dollmaster was killed by having his neck slit, his blood spilling out over the blade, his body lied bleeding out over the blade for weeks until he was found in his workshop under his home. it is unknown why the Dollmaster was assassinated. Later, after the creation of the Ninja Villages, the remaining Dollmaster's Dolls where collected and put on display in a museum located in the Land of Waves. his sword was placed as his most regarded piece of work and held as his homesteads most prize treasure. After seeing the Blade and unknown Ninja stole it for himself, only then did he learn the blade's Dominic past. Hearing the Dollmaster's voice echo throughout his mind.
    Abilities Notes:
    -Because of the Blood absorbed from the Dollmaster, this blade gained his chakra and soul, allowing for the sword to contaminated with it's user as if it was the Dollmaster himself. This allows the Dollmaster's Blade to alert it's wielder of anyone up to a Mid-range area.
    -Once per battle the Dollmaster is able to Infuse his Chakra into it's wielder. by using this foreign Chakra the Dollmaster is able to dispelled any Genjutsu up to A-rank, giving it's wielder a clean slate.
    -The Style of it's blade, is unique as it is a chain blade, allowing it's wielder to extend it's reach and un-extend it's reach up to a Mid Range area.
    -Because of the Dollmaster's eye for detail, this blade is razor sharp and made out of an unknown metal that and never dulls, it is as sharp as it was the day it was forged.
    Restriction Notes:
    -Can only Extend reach once per turn.
    -Can only Un-extend reach once per turn.
    -Must be at least S-class Ninja Rank to wield.
    -Must have training in Kenjutsu to wield.



    Theme Song and Background Music: N/A

    Battles

    Won: Some
    Lost:
    Some

    ~Approved~ edited stuff, according to your own history you are not an Uzumaki by blood, so no you do not have their life force, so you are not going to be looking young either. By now your ball sacks are hitting the floor and your face has more relief than a box full of legos.
     
         
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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Very nice bio
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Shouldn't the hair be red?
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Simple, but nice bio. Funny this is, I just finished watching Darker Than Black a few days ago. Y U NO give him the nickname "Black Reaper"?
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Why Uzumaki.... and who made that first pic for you?
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    -I changed the CM ability's as requested by Caliburn. [Link Here]
    -The changes have been made from this bio as asked. [Link Here] Changes include, CM ability revamp, History revamp and Suiton ability.
    -Curse Mark of Heaven lvl 2 and Sound Release where won in the 1v1 Tournament in Kumogakure while back.
    -As stated in the before thread, Scorps confirmed that I can have Kinjutsu on this bio as I have mastered it and it is not bio bound. [Conversation Here] I do understand however that with this I will not gain the ability to use all Kinjutsu as some Kinjutsu's are bound to bios like Orochimaru's Kinjutsu. I will gain the ability use my own custom Kinjutsu's as well as custom Kinjutsu's taught to me, and the use of Edo Tensei.
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Nice bio man.
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Kages View Post
    Very nice bio
    Thank you ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by FireBird Marco View Post
    Shouldn't the hair be red?
    Shoudn't Naruto's? :ets just say his dad had black/blue hair >_>

    Quote Originally Posted by ItachiLeeHatake View Post
    Simple, but nice bio. Funny this is, I just finished watching Darker Than Black a few days ago. Y U NO give him the nickname "Black Reaper"?
    I never really liked that Nickname lol

    Quote Originally Posted by Gèckö View Post
    Why Uzumaki.... and who made that first pic for you?
    Because I am thinking about starting an Uzumaki Clan Group >_> and I made the picture.
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Unless I'm totally wrong; custom Kinjutsu's been banned for quite some time.
    And you should write Kinjutsu on your ability-list if you intent to have it on your bio .-.

    I like it, though, but your history really lacks 'drive'. His family is essentially just there to get killed. It has no purpose.
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    Unless I'm totally wrong; custom Kinjutsu's been banned for quite some time.
    And you should write Kinjutsu on your ability-list if you intent to have it on your bio .-.

    I like it, though, but your history really lacks 'drive'. His family is essentially just there to get killed. It has no purpose.
    Custom Kinjutsu's where allowed at once point, and then banned. now you need permission from Nexus to submit one. Goro and Zenji have plenty of them and I myself have a few approved. and I did add Kinjutsu to the list of abilities lol

    As for the history, yeah I know lol. I'm not good at coming up with stories
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    planning on making a uzumaki clan group? how that gonna work? o_0
     
         

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    Re: Hei Uzumaki

    How did you get the picture with the flat jacket? Very nic ebio by the way!
     
         

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