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    Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    Studying and Homework is troublesome ._. this will be the last chapter until friday, saturday, sunday....I apologize...
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    It is a bright day in Konohagakure...A Perfect day for new genin's to find new sensei's...That's right..Today is the Genin Test...A day where a young shinobi's journey has just begun...Just like that one day 12 years ago...But now the Shinobi ranking system changed..

    Haru: FINALLY IT'S TODAY!

    Haru rushes out of bed and put's his clothes on...At his wardrobe as he's putting on his red scarf he notices something on his drawer table...It was a Konoha Headband! Haru stares blankly at it until he makes a grin and put's it on...

    Haru: Mom I'm leaving!

    Naiya: ♪Wait before you go♪

    Haru: Huh?

    *Haru's Mom hands him a necklace*

    Naiya: You're father wore this on his genin test, Have it as a good luck charm

    *Tears rush down Haru's eyes*

    Haru: *Dad, I'll make you proud!*

    Haru: Mom, I'm off!

    Naiya: Don't fail me or your father!

    *Tears run down Naiya's eyes*

    Naiya: *He's definitely a spinning image of him.*

    Haru rushes to the academy but as he does he bumps into a friend.

    Hikaru: Oh hey Haru, wanna wal-

    Haru: CAN'T TALK, GOTTA MAKE DAD PROUD.

    *Haru dashes to the academy as fast as he can*

    Hikaru: *Oh yeah, I forgot this was a really special day for him...He needs to surpass..someone..Who was it again?*

    *Hikaru wanders deep in thought*

    Haru reaches the gate of the academy and stares blankly at the academy

    *Flashback*

    Little Haru: When I become hokage can you come back?

    ?: Let's shorten that...When you become Genin!

    *A hand pats the head of little Haru*

    *Flashback ends*

    Haru: Dad, This is my moment...To make you proud!

    Haru Step's into the academy and heads into class 1-A, When he enter's, He see's several other genin and jounin lining up behind The class's academy teacher everyone was talking about the man with blond hair...Haru takes his seat but when he looks at his academy teacher he notices the man...and goes into shock.

    Haru: *EEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH? NARUTO UZUMAKI!?*

    Haru: *IS THIS LIKE A DREAM?*

    Haru: *NO, I MUST BE DREAMING*

    *Haru pinches himself*

    Haru: *OUCH! I NEVER KNEW HURTING MYSELF IS WORSE*

    Haru: Maybe if I try rubbing my eyes.....

    *Haru rub's his eyes*

    Haru: Nope, didn't work.

    *Haru lays his head on his desk*

    Iruka: That's the new you I was talking about.

    Naruto: Heh, He doesn't seem so bad, He's acceptable!

    Iruka: *sigh* Even as a jounin you never change.

    Naruto: Hmm what should give to my student's when they pass?.......Ramen?...YES RAMEN!

    Iruka: Alright student's calm down!, Now's the time we announce your sensei's!!

    Haru: YOSH!

    Iruka: And now, Team 7 is.....

    *Haru stares intently at his academy teacher*

    Iruka: Team 7's Jounin is: Naruto Uzumaki, following genin's are: Haru Uzumaki, Yuki Ayano, Hikaru Kasai

    Hikaru: *Ugh, dammit I wanted to be in a team with Aiko*

    Yuki: *Yosh!, I'm in a team with Haru....I won't lose!*

    Haru: *NARUTO UZUMAKI!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?*

    Iruka: Team 8's Jounin is: Hinata Hyuuga following genin's are: Saburo Manabu, Yuzuki Shigeko, Kouhei Kaito

    Iruka: Team 9's Jounin is: Rock Lee following genins are: Yuuta Shou, Megumi Kumiko, Kiyoshi Takuya,

    Iruka: Team 10's Jounin is: Shikamaru Nara following genin's are: Kenzo Isamu, Aiko Satsuki, Ryo Sarutobi

    Iruka: And those are you're teams, You're Jounin will now guide you to there desire of location for you all to introduce yourselves, Wish you all luck!

    Naruto non-hesitantly greets his student's and brings them all to the same spot 12 years ago. everyone sat down but Haru remain standing.

    Naruto: Alright!, So everyone's here!, Lemme start off with where you are at right now, This is same spot me and my teammates were in 12 years ago...We were like you guys are, Team 7!, But lets not really talk about that it brings back to many memories, Anyways i'll introduce myself last...Who wants to go first?!

    Haru: ME!

    Naruto: OKAY!

    Haru: I AM HARU UZUMAKI! MY DREAM IS TO BECOME THE HOKAGE, MY FAVORITE FOOD IS, RAMEN, SUSHI, PIZZA ROLLS, MY HOBBY IS FLOATING LIKE THIS SEE?

    *Haru floats in the air*

    Naruto: Next! *, that's an interesting hobby...I might take a special interest in him*

    Hikaru: Hmph, My name is Hikaru Kasai, I come from the Kasai clan, with one the strongest Kekkai Genkai's the Hanshanome (Reflex Eye), I'm pretty advanced Suiton and Raiton ninjutsu.

    Naruto: Next!, *Hmm, Learning 2 chakra releases at the age of 12..Thats pretty impressive I might show him off to sensei*

    Yuki: Um, My name is Yuki Ayano my chakra nature is Doton and i'm really good a-at u-um close combat.

    Naruto: Alright!, My name is Naruto Uzumaki my dream is to be the hokage but not until I finish something...My favorite food is ramen..And i'm currently chasing after a per-

    Naruto: Alright!, starting tomorrow were gonna do the bell test, when you wake up make sure you don't eat anything..Get plently of rest!

    *The group looks at eachother*

    All: EEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!????

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    Not bad. You have improved the story after the original with Naruto as a jounin. You give very detailed description. I like it.

    But unfortunately, there isn't enough room for two Jounin Naruto's on this base. So I'm going to have to ask you to step down.

    Hahahaha, Just kidding of course, continue to work.

    And please send me links every new chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    Not bad. You have improved the story after the original with Naruto as a jounin. You give very detailed description. I like it.

    But unfortunately, there isn't enough room for two Jounin Naruto's on this base. So I'm going to have to ask you to step down.

    Hahahaha, Just kidding of course, continue to work.

    And please send me links every new chapter.
    Haha, I read your ff's not so bad yourself...and ohh a subscriber?...If thats you're desire it shall happen! :scorps:
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    Quote Originally Posted by RasenToad View Post
    Haha, I read your ff's not so bad yourself...and ohh a subscriber?...If thats you're desire it shall happen! :scorps:
    When you have stories like this, you'll notice subscribers will become abundant. Thanks, much appreciated. I though I saw you reading it in the viewers of the thread section...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    When you have stories like this, you'll notice subscribers will become abundant. Thanks, much appreciated. I though I saw you reading it in the viewers of the thread section...
    heheh....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    This was an interesting read. Keep up the good work, it is enjoyable to read.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

    I'm impressed now good work....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 03] "New Sensei"

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    This was an interesting read. Keep up the good work, it is enjoyable to read.
    Thanks!, I'll add more and more new stuff each part!
     
         

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