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    sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

    Arigato selendrile sensei i'm glad on being your student.
     
         

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    Re: sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

    My pleasure. Well, first tell me about the general abilities of the Sharingan, a bit of back-story and description, and anything else you think is relevant.
     
         

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    Re: sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

    Back story and description

    first of all sharingan means the copy wheel eye its one of the 3 various dojutsu and also a kekkei genkai for those in the uchiha clan, the sharingan can be activated through a near death/life threatening situations, or through the talents or genius of a person but this is in rare cases. the sharingan is red in color often and having at least a tomoe in it. the sharingan has the highest of 3 tomoes but when first awaken it has just a tomoe, now with each tomoe so does the ability of the owner increased. the sharingan can move on to the mangekyou sharingan which is achieved by skill or through itachi's fake means; kill your best friend or some one close to you. the next stage would be the eternal mangekyou sharingan which is achieved through the transplant of a relatives eye into your own, and the operation can be carried out by only an uchiha. Recent studies show that the sharingan is actually from the form of love.


    GENERAL ABILITIES

    The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the flow of chakra. The Sharingan itself gives colour to chakra, allowing the wielder to differentiate them. They are also able to tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular. The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognise genjutsu and different forms of chakra, in the area each tomoe has its limit,if its a single tomoe in both eyes then the user is able to perceive motions which a normal eye can't follow. the user also gain the power to see chakra flow and they also gain the ability to see through visual genjutsu (D rank), the 2 tomoe allows the user to perceive motion and copy the moves and perform them. The user can read the opponents hand seals and predict movements to some extent. also it lets the user to see through c ranked Genjutsu and also cast it but to a lesser rank than him. the 3 tomoe allows the user to perceive motions or predict them before the opponent performs it. it also allows the user to copy any jutsu performed. it also allow the user to see through up to B rank visual genjutsu and also cast iy but as said earlier on a lesser rank. we can move forward to the MS(mangekyou sharingan), this form of sharingan can do all of the 3 tomoes abilities and even more, being able to do a susanoo known as the ultimate defense and also an amaterasu, called the unquenchable flames and last but not least the izanagi and izanami though i wont go into it since it would be irrelevant in the narutobase universe
     
         

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    Re: sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    Back story and description

    first of all sharingan means the copy wheel eye its one of the 3 various dojutsu and also a kekkei genkai for those in the uchiha clan, the sharingan can be activated through a near death/life threatening situations, or through the talents or genius of a person but this is in rare cases. the sharingan is red in color often and having at least a tomoe in it. the sharingan has the highest of 3 tomoes but when first awaken it has just a tomoe, now with each tomoe so does the ability of the owner increased. the sharingan can move on to the mangekyou sharingan which is achieved by skill or through itachi's fake means; kill your best friend or some one close to you. the next stage would be the eternal mangekyou sharingan which is achieved through the transplant of a relatives eye into your own, and the operation can be carried out by only an uchiha. Recent studies show that the sharingan is actually from the form of love.


    GENERAL ABILITIES

    The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the flow of chakra. The Sharingan itself gives colour to chakra, allowing the wielder to differentiate them. They are also able to tell if a person is under a genjutsu because the person's chakra flow would be irregular. The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognise genjutsu and different forms of chakra, in the area each tomoe has its limit,if its a single tomoe in both eyes then the user is able to perceive motions which a normal eye can't follow. the user also gain the power to see chakra flow and they also gain the ability to see through visual genjutsu (D rank), the 2 tomoe allows the user to perceive motion and copy the moves and perform them. The user can read the opponents hand seals and predict movements to some extent. also it lets the user to see through c ranked Genjutsu and also cast it but to a lesser rank than him. the 3 tomoe allows the user to perceive motions or predict them before the opponent performs it. it also allows the user to copy any jutsu performed. it also allow the user to see through up to B rank visual genjutsu and also cast iy but as said earlier on a lesser rank. we can move forward to the MS(mangekyou sharingan), this form of sharingan can do all of the 3 tomoes abilities and even more, being able to do a susanoo known as the ultimate defense and also an amaterasu, called the unquenchable flames and last but not least the izanagi and izanami though i wont go into it since it would be irrelevant in the narutobase universe
    Izanami and Izanagi actually have been added to our RP. Other than that, nice job. So, there are two ways we can awaken your Sharingan. We can have a long, drawn out battle lasting for months so I can adequately drain chakra and unlock your Sharingan... or I can beat the fuzz outta you. Your choice.
     
         

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    Re: sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

    i would love to say that we fight! that would be interesting but that would take your time for other students, so i say beat the crap outta me....knock the sharingan into my eyes
     
         

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    Re: sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    i would love to say that we fight! that would be interesting but that would take your time for other students, so i say beat the crap outta me....knock the sharingan into my eyes

    Be careful, I might take things a little far. My art excites me..


    Deidara places his hands into his pouch, gathering some explosive clay. Once molded, he throws his hand forward, releasing two explosive clay lions. They expand in the air and begin to run towards you. Deidara leaps forward, riding one of the lions at you.

    (Bakuton: Kibaku Shiroi Raion no Kakudai o Hokori )- Explosion Release: Explosive Expanding Pride of the White Lion
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will put a single hand in his side pouches filled with clay, and begin to mold and shape it. Then, he will release the clay in the shape of 3 miniature male lions. After being thrown into/onto the battlefield, the user can expand the miniature lions into full size animals. The lions are able to individually controlled until they are destroyed. They function similar to clones in that respect, but cannot use any techniques except for physical attacks. At any time they have been released, the lions are able to be individually detonated by performing the Tiger hand seal, and by yelling, "Katsu!". Each lion explodes with the force of three C1 bombs.
    *Note: Must have a Deidara biography
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
    *Note: Can be used once per battle
    *Note: No Clay techniques for the next two turns
    *Note: Lions are able to travel as fast as regular lions


    Deidara leaps high upwards off one of the lions, as they rip into your body. He then detonates them with a seal, causing a massive explosion. He comes down through the smoke, forming a massive Rasengan in his left hand. Your body on the ground is left helpless, as he grinds it into your stomach. Afterwords, a massive crater is left on the ground, with you at its center.

    Rasengan!!

    (Oodama Rasengan) - Big Ball Spiral Sphere
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: Oodama Rasengan is an advanced Ninjutsu technique that creates a very large Rasengan ball.
    Note:Must already know rasengan.


    Now concentrate your chakra into your eyes, to attempt to awaken your new found ability. Don't defend from this either.
     
         

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    *Zeta watches deidara movements with all concentration, already from start trying to see deidara and predict his movements, Zeta takes a defensive stance one deidara chews on clay, zeta see's two lion s which race at him, zeta wishes to defend but in a split second he notices how fast the lion were, in order words zeta was too slow to retaliate, the lions crash into zeta and before he knows it an explosion occurs, zeta is thrown into the air because of this and fatally bruised, because the explosion was at point blank, zeta tries to regain posture as he falls from the air, as zeta fall he realizes that its hard to move hius body due to him being in so much pain, zeta falls to the ground with his back, as he hits the ground he coughs out blood and bounce a little, as zeta managaes to open his eyes so that he could attack his attacker; deidara, he sees deidara come at him from above with an unknown tech, zeta is filled with fear as he tries to brace himself for impact, zeta feels the trust of the thrust and drilling of the unknown tech in his gut, zeta feels the unknown jutsu get bigger and heavier on him, zeta then felt being drilled into the ground, unknown to him he was used to make a crater, zeta lays in the crater at the bottom of it feeling his life force fade away, zeta was still in fear of deidara but as he thinks of it he wonders and gets angry, what have i done to this man to deserve all this? he thinks to himself, the fear zeta ince had started to turn into anger, zeta's tries to get up with his last strength, struggling all the way up, zeta focuses and sends a burst of chakra into his eyes, and with anger in those eyes he looks at deidara*
     
         

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    Re: sharingan activation by selendrile sensei.

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    *Zeta watches deidara movements with all concentration, already from start trying to see deidara and predict his movements, Zeta takes a defensive stance one deidara chews on clay, zeta see's two lion s which race at him, zeta wishes to defend but in a split second he notices how fast the lion were, in order words zeta was too slow to retaliate, the lions crash into zeta and before he knows it an explosion occurs, zeta is thrown into the air because of this and fatally bruised, because the explosion was at point blank, zeta tries to regain posture as he falls from the air, as zeta fall he realizes that its hard to move hius body due to him being in so much pain, zeta falls to the ground with his back, as he hits the ground he coughs out blood and bounce a little, as zeta managaes to open his eyes so that he could attack his attacker; deidara, he sees deidara come at him from above with an unknown tech, zeta is filled with fear as he tries to brace himself for impact, zeta feels the trust of the thrust and drilling of the unknown tech in his gut, zeta feels the unknown jutsu get bigger and heavier on him, zeta then felt being drilled into the ground, unknown to him he was used to make a crater, zeta lays in the crater at the bottom of it feeling his life force fade away, zeta was still in fear of deidara but as he thinks of it he wonders and gets angry, what have i done to this man to deserve all this? he thinks to himself, the fear zeta ince had started to turn into anger, zeta's tries to get up with his last strength, struggling all the way up, zeta focuses and sends a burst of chakra into his eyes, and with anger in those eyes he looks at deidara*
    Deidara waits for a few seconds, but yet doesn't see the change in your eyes.

    Hm, guess ill have to keep going..

    Deidara grabs your injured body by the arm, and slings you up into the air, face down. As your rise, he focuses lightning chakra into his hands, and thrusts upwards into your stomach. He releases the lightning, sending a deadly current through your body. You rise up higher because of the strike.

    (Tsuin Ikazuchi Tajuu) – Twin Thunder Beast
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their arms in a rotational sequence to act like a spring increasing the power of the concentrated lightning chakra that envelops their arm showing the spiral and then the user will rotate their arms fists clenched and strike the enemy target in the stomach. The rotational effect of the punches helps to deliver the lightning with extra power and speed dealing a strong amount of damage whilst paralysing the target through the stomache preventing them from properly moving and drastically restricting their speed.
    Note: Numbing lasts 1 turn
    Note: Technique can only be used 2 times.


    You tumble back downwards, while Deidara waits for the opportune moment. He pulls back his arm, and empties a powerful shot to your sternum, which sends you crashing into the ground a few meters away. He walks back up to you, looking into your eyes. He spits on the ground in disgust.

    (Gangeki) - Rock Attack
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: 10
    Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest


    Try again, you damn Uchiha.
     
         

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    *zeta stands on the ground in the crater all battered and bruised, blood gushing outta of his mouth and nose, zeta sees deidara and tell himself that he would get him this time, zetagets surprised when the deidara he saw was standing not so far away from him had all of a sudden, gotten extremely close to him, zeta realises and tell himself tha deidara is fast, zeta tries to swing an arm which gets caught by deidara, zeta is about to kick when he is flung into the air, breathing hard and still not wanting to succumb to defeat zeta starts to fall back to the ground but he is intercepted by deidara's hand which is thrusted into his guts, zeta feels the painn of the thrust but then gets heavily shocked by deidara, and then thrown back into the air, zeta feels paralyzed as he starts falling back to the ground, half way to the ground he gets interrupted again by deidara who punches the hell outta him, zeta tumbles on the ground and rolls over and over and over, tearing and brusing his skin, still breathing hard with his mouth zeta refuses to accept defeat, still vexed, zeta wants to lay on the and regain some stamina, but gets a lot more angrier when he hears the "damn uchiha", zeta pushes himself up to his feet again while struggling and shaking just to get up, while looking at the ground*
    "damn uchiha"??...m! i will not allow a low life like your self to insult the elite clan, i may not be it but i am an uchiha and a man like you who plays in the mud does not have that right, watashiwa yu-ru-sa nai!(i will not forgive you)
    *having said this zeta releasing sudden bursts of chakra even to his eyes as he gets angrier which developes into hate for deidara, zeta stares at deidara with the intent of killing him!!*
     
         

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    *zeta stands on the ground in the crater all battered and bruised, blood gushing outta of his mouth and nose, zeta sees deidara and tell himself that he would get him this time, zetagets surprised when the deidara he saw was standing not so far away from him had all of a sudden, gotten extremely close to him, zeta realises and tell himself tha deidara is fast, zeta tries to swing an arm which gets caught by deidara, zeta is about to kick when he is flung into the air, breathing hard and still not wanting to succumb to defeat zeta starts to fall back to the ground but he is intercepted by deidara's hand which is thrusted into his guts, zeta feels the painn of the thrust but then gets heavily shocked by deidara, and then thrown back into the air, zeta feels paralyzed as he starts falling back to the ground, half way to the ground he gets interrupted again by deidara who punches the hell outta him, zeta tumbles on the ground and rolls over and over and over, tearing and brusing his skin, still breathing hard with his mouth zeta refuses to accept defeat, still vexed, zeta wants to lay on the and regain some stamina, but gets a lot more angrier when he hears the "damn uchiha", zeta pushes himself up to his feet again while struggling and shaking just to get up, while looking at the ground*
    "damn uchiha"??...m! i will not allow a low life like your self to insult the elite clan, i may not be it but i am an uchiha and a man like you who plays in the mud does not have that right, watashiwa yu-ru-sa nai!(i will not forgive you)
    *having said this zeta releasing sudden bursts of chakra even to his eyes as he gets angrier which developes into hate for deidara, zeta stares at deidara with the intent of killing him!!*
    Deidara views your eyes, as they suddenly shift to crimson. A single, black tomoe appears in your eyes.

    There's the cursed eye! It's appeared! Now get yourself to the hospital before you die.

    Deidara creates a couple clones, who tie you safely to an explosive hawk. The hawk rises in the air, in the direction of the hospital.
    __

    The one tomoe gives you minor tracking speeds, as well as the ability to pierce through visual D-rank genjutsu. If you wish to activate your Sharingan in battle, it'll require you to spend a move to do it.

    More information can be found >here< if you wish to look. I can answer any questions you have as well. ^^ Good luck with your journey to 3 tomoe!
     
         

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    *kefa falls back to the ground unconscious, right before deidara's bird carries him away*

    kefa: arigato selendrile sensei, mata kon do ka(till next time)
     
         

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