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    Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    Hey guys!, Here's the new chapter! Also I took the time to make a logo for my series, You'll see it below... Enjoy!

    (If any FF writer's need a logo for there series feel free to comment below or send me a VM or PM)
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    Hikaru's hatred towards the Uchiha starts to bellow into the air, a Hatred towards this clan, a Hatred towards this Kekkai Genkai, Is something Hikaru was never able to forgive....Hikaru had a look of blood lust...His brown eyes turned to dark green, With a circle and cross in the middle of it.

    Kakashi: !?

    Naruto: !?

    Kakashi: *the Hanshonome!?*

    Hikaru turns to the front and moves to his location at the speed of light

    *Flashback start*

    *a gleaming red eye with 3 tomoes appear*
    Little Hikaru: NO!!!! DAD!!!!!
    ?: It'll be alright...Hika-
    *Flashback end*

    Hikaru: ....

    Naruto: Dammit.

    Haru: Leave him alone, He's always like this when he hears about the uchiha or the sharingan

    Naruto: Really!?

    Haru: It's pretty natural for him....

    Naruto: Well then...I'm relieved.

    Kakashi stares at the location Hikaru was in recently

    Kakashi: I'll need to go guys, There's something I need to take care of.

    Naruto: Kakashi Sen-

    as Naruto was about to finish speaking Kakashi has already left

    Naruto: BUT NOW WHO'S GONNA PAY FOR THE RAMEN!?!?!?!?!?!

    Haru: WHAT!?, YOU MEAN YOU FORGOT TO BRING MONEY BEFORE TREATING US!?!?!

    Naruto: I INVITED KAKASHI-SENSEI FOR A REASON!

    Haru: WAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Naruto: WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Yuki: WAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

    Ayame: WAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!

    Naruto: What! Ayame, does that mean today we got our meals on the house today!?

    Ayame: No.

    Naruto: Aw.

    -Meanwhile-

    Kakashi starts to pinpoint Hikaru's location, He uses his advance tracking skills to track him...surprisingly Hikaru was sitting in the training fields.

    Kakashi sees Hikaru sitting on the field of grass

    Kakashi: I used to train here alot with Naruto in his genin days.

    Hikaru: !?

    Kakashi: Cmon, relax I haven't come here to hurt you

    Hikaru: Don't come close to me, You have the sharingan

    Kakashi: Oh you mean this?

    On Kakashi's right eye, he lift's his headband that act's as a patch revealing a red eye with 3 tomoe going in 3 directions...the Sharingan.

    Hikaru: !?

    Hikaru brings out a kunai and is holding it as if he was ready to stab someone

    Hikaru: Huh?

    Kakashi laughs

    Kakashi: What were you expecting?

    Hikaru: *It didn't kill me!?*

    Hikaru put's away his kunai

    Hikaru: I suppose Haru told you that I always react when I hear about the uchiha or the sharingan...Yet you still come to chase after me?

    Kakashi: Yup.

    Hikaru: Why?

    Kakashi: Because you had the wrong idea.

    Hikaru: !?

    Kakashi sits down beside Hikaru
    Play this song for a special effect for the next part


    Kakashi: This eye was given to me from a friend of mine.

    Hikaru: Your friend!?

    *Flashback start*

    Obito(Younger) : Oh yeah, Kakashi..I forgot to give you a present for you becoming jonin...Take my sharingan.

    Kakashi (Younger): !?

    *Flashback end*


    Kakashi: He and I had a bond that just started, His name was....Obito Uchiha.

    Hikaru: !?

    *Flashback start*

    -Takes place during the war arc-

    *Obito is on the brink of death

    Obito: Kakashi....

    Kakashi: !?

    Kakashi: OBITO!

    Obito: You're student thought me a valuable lesson

    Kakashi: !?

    Obito: a Dream world is not the key to peace...The key to it.....is believing in the people you trust...and I have decided to put my trust...in you.

    Kakashi: But..but...Rin.

    Obito: I'll be with Rin on the other side...

    Obito: Also...

    Obito: Take care of my eye...Keep it as a memory...Our bond that was started that day has never broken yet.

    *Flashback end*


    Kakashi: He protected me and someone else but at the same time of the price of sacrificing his own life...That was when He offered me his sharingan

    Hikaru: That kinda sounds like Haru.

    Kakashi: Hmm, Really?

    Hikaru: Yeah, He has a will to never give up and protect his friends

    Kakashi: Heh, He sounds alot like Naruto...

    Hikaru: Really?

    Kakashi: Yeah, All his friends used to believe in him and Naruto believed in them...and He would protect his friends to the very end....And he chooses never to give up.

    Hikaru: Heh, I have an interesting teacher

    Kakashi smiles

    Kakashi: You have yet to see his full potential.....

    Hikaru started to have a special interest in Kakashi after that, His hatred of the Uchiha started to wither away a bit.

    *End the music here*



    Naruto: Alright guys!, Now its time for our first mission!

    Sunagakure Crisis arc: Start

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    Great Read.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    Hm, not bad. I believe the father is Sasuke.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    Hm, not bad. I believe the father is Sasuke.
    Feel free to think upon that :P
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    Hikaru had a change of heart towards Kakashi, good job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    Quote Originally Posted by Sir Derp Obito View Post
    Hikaru had a change of heart towards Kakashi, good job
    I'm trying to make this FF as close to the real anime and manga as possible :D

    Thanks!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 05] "Trust."

    I want more more please!!!
     
         

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