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    Naruto Revolution #10# The Tournament



    10 years later, In the Uzumaki residence, Naruto was taking a break from his hokage duties and he just lay their on his comfy arm chair, just being lazy while watching Television, He was very unsure of what he going do on his break and said " What a drag. so this is what shikamaru means about being lazy and stuff." then a person show up in the living room door, his son has taken appearance.

    Naruto: *a little energetic* Haruto? what are you doing here, I thought you have a mission or something?

    Haruto: *smiles* It got postpone a few days, so i just decided come here.

    Meet Haruto Uzumaki, The only child of Naruto and Hinata Uzumaki. He definlty look like Naruto, but has Hinata eyes. He is in team 5 with Temari and Shikamura daughter name Shimai Nara, and Sasuke and Sakura Son name Tsubaki Uchiha *Tsubaki means camellia flower in Japanese would actually means is "Honest excellence". Haruto is the next in line for the Head of the Hyuuga clan. He is powerful and a little exciting like his father, but a little shy and kind like his mother.

    Naruto: *thinking* hm. a few days you say...(then his face got exciting of a sudden then he get off his chair and zoom to Haruto) If your not busy these few days...(shove a piece paper on Haruto face) ENTER THIS!?!

    Haruto: what.. (get the paper out of his face and take a good look at it and after he finish looking at it, he had a puzzle face) a Tournament?

    Naruto: (Completely joy) The Winner will win 2,400,000 yen!? *close to $25,000* AND A YEAR SUPPLIED OF RAMEN!?!

    Haruto: (Have a disgusted face on him) Ughhh, Ramen, Sorry i'll pass..(Begin to walk away)

    Then Haruto felt heavy on his legs and realize Naruto was on a hold on his leg, begging hard

    Naruto: (Really Begging) PLEAAASSSEEE!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!? CAN YOU DO THIS FOR A 35 YEAR OLD MAN!?!

    Haruto: (has a blank face then take a deep sigh and answer) okay okay, I do it. But I and I ONLY to have the whole prize money to myself

    Naruto: (hysterical) TAKE IT!? I DON'T MIND!?

    Haruto: *smirk* Thank you Dad



    And so Naruto let go of Haruto legs then Haruto walk up to his room and start to wondering " I wonder is Aster and Luna going be there, if they are then I will totally join!". as he open the door to his room which is very clean, as Hinata taught him house cleaning and cooking he joyfully jump to his bed and feeling the comfort of his bed, He turn around and just stare at the blank white ceiling for awhile then look at his window, seeing the normal life in Konaha: Children are playing, Elders are talking and everybody being peaceful and happy. And it all thanks to his father and his friends for saving the world from the clutches of Obito, and finally he peacefully doze off...

    Meanwhile....

    Luna: (piss off) Give me back my cookies you smartass!?

    Aster: (Have a calm face) You can't keep eat cookies everyday Luna

    Luna: (Really piss off) YOU"RE JUST THE SAME AS ME!?

    Aster: No i'm not (keeping his cool) I eat cookies once of a while...

    Luna: (shouted angrily) THAT'S STILL THE SAME THING!?!

    Then Gaara appear out of nowhere and have a very weird smile

    Gaara: (smile) Hey you two...(then have a very piss off face) WOULD YOU KEEP IT DOWN!? I'M TRYING TO GET SOME REST DAMMIT!?

    Aster and Luna: (Scare s***less) S-Sorry father!? We won't do it again!?

    Gaara: (His piss off face turns into a happy face) Thank you *mumbles* Goddamn Teenagers.Can a 35 year old man get any rest in this house...

    As Gaara left, Luna and Aster look each other while have that still s***less face on them

    Aster: That smile creeps me out....

    Luna: (agreeing) I know....

    Aki: That's your father for you (Drinking green Tea, Japanese style) just don't be loud when he at the house from his kazekage duties please...

    Aster and Luna: Alright Alright Mom....

    Then a sound just rang out of nowhere and the three of them was confuse as what that noise is then Luna face starts freaking out

    Luna: Oh sorry...That was my phone (take out her phone and answering it)

    Aster: Mom i have a question?

    Aki: Yes?

    Aster: Since when do Phones was created?

    Aki: (Panicking) OH...UMMM...HEY I THINK YOUR FATHER IS CALLING ME!? GOT TO GO! (Zoom off)

    Aster: (Got a cuckoo face on his) Um...Okayyyyy...(What the hell is her problem, oh never mind)

    Luna: (Excited) Aster!? Their's going be a tournament in two days and the winner will get 2,400,000 yen!?!

    Aster: (His mouth completely drop to the ground) 2,400,000 YEN!?! WHO TOLD YOU THIS!?

    Luna: Uncle Naruto told me and Haruto going be there!

    Aster: (Have a evil smile on him) hehehehe....I can't wait to get my revenge on him for that cheap move he did to me awhile back!



    A Few hours later

    Aki: Aster? (open the door to his room) can i talk to you (hesitated) alone?

    Aster: Sure mother (Go with her and they outside at the balcony) So...what's the matter

    Aki: (concern) Are you feeling well? Ever since you come back home 10 years ago, you've been really depress and won't say anything, Did something really happen?

    Aster: (was a little surprise then he remember to keep his cool and smile) I'm fine Mom, Nothing happen to me when I was gone, (Lying) It was just to clear my head, that's all

    Aki: (Relief) Oh okay, Just remember Aster if you have any trouble at all, tell us and we will handle it..Okay?

    Aster: Okay mother, I'm going to my room so good night (walk away)

    As Aster walk away, he felt a very deep guilt in his heart as he know what truly take place on that day, The first day and last day he saw his Aunt ...as he left to his room, Aki just stand their, slowly putting her hand on her heart area and look at the beautiful night sky

    Aki: I knew it, He's Lying about that day, but why? why he got to lie? Does something traumatize him badly that he refuses to tell anybody?

    Then Aki walk out of the balcony door then slowly turn around to see the night one last time before going to bed and thinking about her children and husband, and mostly....her Fraternal Twin Sister and asked herself " Maki...where are you right now?" then she close the door and walk to her and Gaara Bedroom and knowing that something going happen to her family...

    To Be continue...

    Next Episode: The Tournament (part 2)
     
         
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