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    Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1



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    Tsunayoshi Sawada sat on a leather wheel-chaired, doing a tedious amount of paperwork. It wouldn’t have taken someone of high intellect to know that he was bored, given the frown on his face and the slouchy way he leaned in his seat.

    Gradually losing concentration, Tsuna’s big, brown eyes began to stare blankly at the wooden desk placed in front of him. All of a sudden….boom! The windows to the right of him shattered in an explosion of countless crystals. Only five fragments of airborne glass were of large size, as well as in odd shapes; they resembled the letters “C”, “H”, “A”, “O”, and “S”. Tiny specks of the morning’s sunlight danced off the crystals and onto the walls of the spacious office.

    Tsuna hovered thirty yards above the floor, his brown hair nearly touching the ceiling. Refined flames engulfed his hands and forehead. His suddenly reddish-orange eyes no longer gave off the expression that he was bored; his suddenly reddish-orange corneas focused intensely toward the broken windows.

    Tsuna stared at the strange pieces of glass whilst they were still in mid-air. “Wha? You’ve gotta be kidding me. Does that spell —“

    “Chaos!” said a tan teenage boy wearing a black fedora-style hat with a thick orange stripe running across the sides of the cone. He had black eyes and wore a suit that composed of orange and black. A few things were strange about the adolescent, regarding his appearance—his long sideburns were shaped like spirals, a live chameleon was on the brim of his hat, and despite being strikingly handsome, his face was quite intimidating.

    Tsuna descended back down to the floor, and the disappearance of his flames followed. His serious facial expression transitioned into a dumbfounded one. “Reborn! Do you really needa overdo everything? How did you get all the way up here anyway? This is the top floor and because Gokudera is always so protective of me, he installed those windows that were made out of glass that could deflect rockets!” He then placed his right hand’s palm on his face and shook his head in response to Reborn’s extreme behavior.

    The world’s strongest hitman was standing behind the Vongola’s tenth boss in a flash. Not even the glass on the floor gave away his swift movement.

    “Enough chitter-chatter, No-Good Tsuna.” Reborn flicked the back of Tsuna’s head, which caused him to fly out through the fresh opening he made with the destructive flame bullets of his gun/pet, Leon.

    Tsuna screamed at the top of his lungs as he plummeted towards the ground of Namimori. And then he came to the obvious realization that he could fly. Thanks to the Dying Will flames he was blessed with at birth and had strengthened throughout his special life, he flew back upwards to his wrecked office and landed directly in front of the man who had forever changed his fate.

    “You’re okay? That’s good. Anyway, listen up. There’s some major trouble stirring up in Tokyo and you’re obligated to handle it, given that it relates to the Yakuza.” Reborn informed him.

    Tsuna scratched the back of his head out of both confusion and pain. “Huh? The Yakuza? Haven’t they been living in silence for centuries?”

    “Yeah, but that’s old news. I hope you’ve enjoyed these ten years of peace because things are about to get real ugly.”



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    So, how ya like it? Should I continue or not? Honest feedback please! :D
    By the way, the scene with the glass spelled as "Chaos" is like this, but not with rocks obviously:
     
         
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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    DUDE you wasted all your time cuz this is on the naruto discussion go to the chat box jeez la weez
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Hm... Interesting can't wait to read the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    lol it made lmao at the part where it said the thing about gokudera
    otherwise awsome story!!!!!!
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Quote Originally Posted by narutocentral View Post
    DUDE you wasted all your time cuz this is on the naruto discussion go to the chat box jeez la weez
    shut up, he put alot of effort into this,and it was really good. it sounds like it was really made by Akira
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Quote Originally Posted by sagemode jinchuuriki View Post
    Hm... Interesting can't wait to read the next chapter
    Thanks. I will try to keep it intriging.
    Quote Originally Posted by narutocentral View Post
    DUDE you wasted all your time cuz this is on the naruto discussion go to the chat box jeez la weez
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    Quote Originally Posted by AnimeKingXD View Post
    lol it made lmao at the part where it said the thing about gokudera
    otherwise awsome story!!!!!!
    Glad to have made you laugh. :D Thanks, man. You sound like a fan who's a keeper. That's as long as I continue to put effort into it.
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    I enjoyed the good read man ^-^ Keep it up.

    1. More people need to see this.
    2. We need more Reborn fans..

    Anyways for the story, i would like to think that Tsuna would have matured completely and can now compete with reborn and not let himself be tossed around like a rag doll by a teenager. That's just me...Even though a baby was doing that already...Poor Tsuna.
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    pretty good. i liked it.
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Quote Originally Posted by PrettyFlacko View Post
    pretty good. i liked it.
    Thanks, dude. I won't disappoint with the following chapters. That, I swear.
    Quote Originally Posted by Jellal Fernandes View Post
    I enjoyed the good read man ^-^ Keep it up.

    1. More people need to see this.
    2. We need more Reborn fans..

    Anyways for the story, i would like to think that Tsuna would have matured completely and can now compete with reborn and not let himself be tossed around like a rag doll by a teenager. That's just me...Even though a baby was doing that already...Poor Tsuna.
    Haha thanks, man!
    1. Ehh. I'm all about quality over quantity. As long as I have at least a few dedicated fans, I will be satisfied.
    2. Hell yeah. People are missing out on such an amazing series. Smh.
    LMAO well, Tsuna hasn't changed much. However, he is boss when he needs to be--when sh*t gets real. Plus, I feel like he and Reborn should always have that kind of relationship, and Tsuna still hasn't surpassed him. Too much change is bad, I say.
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Nice, nice. I wish they carried on Reborn with the Manga, anyways good job and yes you should carry on.
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Very interesting think you should continue making them
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    wellmade fan fic
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    This is pretty good. I like the introduction of a new villain in the Yakuza. One thing bothers me, is Reborn an imperfect arcobaleno then in this FF? Shouldn't he be at least 30?
     
         

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    Re: Hitman Reborn!: Resolve: Chapter 1

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    This is pretty good. I like the introduction of a new villain in the Yakuza. One thing bothers me, is Reborn an imperfect arcobaleno then in this FF? Shouldn't he be at least 30?
    Ehh. I don't want to spoil it for you. Believe me, with the passing of ten years, Reborn will be like 12 or 13.
    Thanks for the feedback btw.
     
         

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