Page 1 of 2 12 Last»
Results 1 to 25 of 35
  1. #1
    Takatsuki NamikazeNagato's Avatar
    Status
    NamikazeNagato is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Mar 2012
    Location
    Georgia
    Posts
    217
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    The panel is a colored panorama of Konoha. The streets are barely filled and not much noise radiates out of this usually robust village. Down below, a shot of three youngsters are shown.

    Moegi: Hurry, guys! We're gonna be late for our shift on patrol.

    Udon: (Running) I'm coming, i'm coming!

    Konohamaru: (Walking slowly) I wonder how Naruto is doing . . . this strange aura in the air. Huh?

    A whirlwind of leaves blow past him down the street. Surprised he turns around to see the peculiar sight when suddenly his eyes lock onto the clear view of the Third Hokage's stone face. Someone is standing on top of it! [/B]

    Hiruzen: (Gazing at Konohamaru, smiling nostalgically) Let's go, shall we?!

    Minato: Yeah!

    Tobirama: Hmph.

    Hashirama: Ya--hoo! (Cups hands) Sasuke! Hurry up and get over here.

    Sasuke: (Turns around) You all go on without me. There's something I have to do first.

    Orochimaru, Suigetsu, Juugo, and Karin: !!!

    Hashirama: (Sly smile) Yosh! Alright, how do we get there?

    Tobirama: Although i'm a sensor, there's no way I could pin-point exactly where the battle is. Most likely I could get us close.

    Minato: ?! I may have a way! You see Second Hokage, I used your Ninjutsu style to come up with unique seals that I put on to Kunai to be able to teleport to them! My student Kakashi is most likely with them at the battlefield and I gave him one to hold on too. He may still be carrying it!

    Hiruzen: Hmm ... good. Shall we Find out?

    Minato: (Everyone jumps onto his head) Alright! Here we go! ~~~ teleports

    Sasuke: Hmph. (Turns around)

    Suigetsu: Hey, hey hey! Where are we going?

    Orochimaru: (Smiling) That boy Naruto still bothering you?

    Sasuke: Before I go there, I must get stronger. I won't allow myself to one-upped by that idiot.

    Suigetsu: But there's no time to train! I mean don't we have to go there now?

    Orochimaru: (Ignores) There is one way, Sasuke-kun.

    Sasuke: !

    Orochimaru (cont.): If your up for it. (Tongue rolls out)

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Madara and Obito stand opposite of Naruto and Co. The two villains are separated from the Juubi which is steadily falling into a frenzy, lashing it's massive tails around and wiping out injured Shinobi.

    Naruto: (Serious face) Looks like we got you cornered! (Behind him are the K11) Give up now and we won't have to mess your face up even more, Tobi!

    Obito: (Glare) My name is Obi ---

    Naruto: No it's not! The Obito my sensei talked about was kind and valued friendship! He's not the coward in front of us now.

    Obito: Why you ...

    Madara: Obito! You must hurry and use Rinne Tensei. The Juubi is about to reach it's final state. Now is your choice.

    Kakashi: No ... Obito!

    Obito: . . . Fine, but be sure to guard my body after this. (Puts hands into seal)

    Kakashi: Obito! Wait! Don't do this!

    Obito: No more talking, Kakashi. Lies are the only crap you spit out of your mouth. Rin will live on in the dream world, safe from a murderer like you who killed his own teammate!

    Naruto: !!! What?

    Kakashi: Yes ... it's true. I did kill Rin . . . but you don't understand! She was ---

    Obito: Enough! No more! Shut your mouth. Don't speak of Rin any longer! (Frantic)

    Kakashi: No ... you must here me out! Rin --- Rin was . . .

    Minato: A traitor.

    Naruto and Co. : !!!!!

    Kakashi: !!!!!

    Madara and Obito: !!!

    The four Hokages stand behind the present generation. Minato stands tall, gazing sadly at his old student Obito. Madara is shocked to see the First and Second Hokage, too! What is the truth Minato will speak about? Continue reading Naruto to find out!
     
         
    Last edited by NamikazeNagato; 04-19-2013 at 06:51 PM.

  2. #2
    Member southern sun's Avatar
    Status
    southern sun is offline
    Join Date
    Apr 2013
    Location
    .....................................
    Posts
    800
    Post Thanks / Like
    BAN...KAI
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    bravo! bravo!
     
         

  3. #3
    Legendary Uchiha Makoto Uchiha's Avatar
    Status
    Makoto Uchiha is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Pluto
    Posts
    473
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    i hope we see them fight in the next chapter
     
         

  4. #4
    sagemode jinchuuriki's Avatar
    Status
    sagemode jinchuuriki is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Location
    village hidden in the leaves
    Posts
    8,632
    Post Thanks / Like
    When life gives you a bad day
    remember to look on the bright
    side of life
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Well done interesting to read
     
         

  5. #5
    Member dboli's Avatar
    Status
    dboli is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    In me spaceship
    Posts
    171
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    that was straight up Dattebayo well done!!!
     
         

  6. #6
    thug life itachi4real's Avatar
    Status
    itachi4real is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Feb 2013
    Location
    floating on a damn cloud with a pound of some stank dank next to me
    Posts
    6,465
    Post Thanks / Like
    the law is like a cobwebb, it
    captures the weak but
    insuffiecient to hold the
    strong
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    This is REAL GOOD!!!!!
     
         

  7. #7
    Guts Ganta's Avatar
    Status
    Ganta is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Posts
    710
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Good but i dont like that sasuke doesnt go with them
     
         

  8. #8
    Member Megaprince's Avatar
    Status
    Megaprince is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Mar 2013
    Location
    Naruto's future.
    Posts
    149
    Post Thanks / Like
    When you're happy, you enjoy
    the music....But when you're
    sad, you understand the
    lyrics...
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Just awsum
     
         

  9. #9
    TEAM 7 xkakashi's Avatar
    Status
    xkakashi is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Location
    Singapore
    Posts
    125
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    AWESOME TOTALLY!
    good job good job!

    but it would be epic if konohamaru reacts to his grandpa hahaha
     
         

  10. #10
    TEAM 7 xkakashi's Avatar
    Status
    xkakashi is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Location
    Singapore
    Posts
    125
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    AWESOME TOTALLY!
    good job good job!

    but it would be epic if konohamaru reacts to his grandpa hahaha
     
         

  11. #11
    Member SEEDLESS's Avatar
    Status
    SEEDLESS is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2012
    Location
    ASIA
    Posts
    522
    Post Thanks / Like
    playing with flames
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    whoever uses the rinne tensie DIES!!!
     
         

  12. #12
    Awesome Member! bahram's Avatar
    Status
    bahram is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Feb 2011
    Location
    Iran ,Lorestan ,Boroujerd
    Posts
    2,098
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has finally found
    some energy!
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    I liked the curse mark part
     
         

  13. #13
    Member Cobra the Sage's Avatar
    Status
    Cobra the Sage is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Posts
    761
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    nice read
     
         

  14. #14
    Member manufran02's Avatar
    Status
    manufran02 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Location
    Where ever JUSTICE is needed , I will decide
    Posts
    517
    Post Thanks / Like
    "peace ,there is peace
    its within yourself either
    embrase it or deny it ...just
    get there and you'll know true
    peace even though this world
    is at war."
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    very good indeed
     
         

  15. #15
    ....has used FTG FaHaD 5212's Avatar
    Status
    FaHaD 5212 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2013
    Location
    Behind you holding a Kunai (Kakashi Style)
    Posts
    1,008
    Post Thanks / Like
    "Thinking of peace whilst
    spilling blood is something
    that only humans can do."
    - Uchiha
    Madara
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Great Prediction
     
         

  16. #16
    KAMUI!!!!! SharinganUser1's Avatar
    Status
    SharinganUser1 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2012
    Location
    In an alternate dimension, where they don't serve Mcdonalds or Burger king!!!!
    Posts
    856
    Post Thanks / Like
    Right now I'm fighting the
    kraken and a cyclops with a
    trident.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Good job man
     
         

  17. #17
    Senior Member -ahhimane-'s Avatar
    Status
    -ahhimane- is online now
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    INDIA
    Posts
    7,886
    Post Thanks / Like
    BEING ALONE IS BETTER THAN
    BEING WITH A WRONG PERSON.
     



    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    It was worth reading until you put that CURSE MARK on Madara. Why the hell he gets a curse mark? There's no logic to that curse mark part at all. Obito is of no use if Madara himself can use Rinne Tensei.
    3/5
     
         

  18. #18
    Member
    Status
    Newkage is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2012
    Posts
    145
    Post Thanks / Like
    Its called Naruto Shippuden
    for a reason he is NarutoVerse
    without him there will be no
    Naruto same for Saskue its
    kishimotos two favorite
    characters lol people lol
    BAKAS
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    very well said hope it happens
     
         

  19. #19
    phoenix Phoenix110's Avatar
    Status
    Phoenix110 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    nigeria
    Posts
    232
    Post Thanks / Like
    The evil men do catch up with
    them in d end
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    It was good until the curse seal that's a deal breaker
     
         

  20. #20
    Becoming More Son Ryuto Uzumaki's Avatar
    Status
    Son Ryuto Uzumaki is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Location
    Looking at the Earth Die
    Posts
    1,525
    Post Thanks / Like
    As You Watch the World Die You
    live your life, but did you
    forget if the World dies you
    DIE
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Quote Originally Posted by Phoenix110 View Post
    It was good until the curse seal that's a deal breaker
    great job nice
     
         

  21. #21
    Becoming More Son Ryuto Uzumaki's Avatar
    Status
    Son Ryuto Uzumaki is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Location
    Looking at the Earth Die
    Posts
    1,525
    Post Thanks / Like
    As You Watch the World Die You
    live your life, but did you
    forget if the World dies you
    DIE
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Great Job Guy
     
         

  22. #22
    Artistic Shinobi Nakamazi Itchigo's Avatar
    Status
    Nakamazi Itchigo is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    South Africa
    Posts
    4,783
    Post Thanks / Like
    OK, listen up..!! Heroes are
    people who share their booze
    with other people!!! 'I' WANNA
    DRINK MY BOOZE!!! - Roronoa
    Zoro
     



    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Very nice, you got me intrigued there
     
         

  23. #23
    Senior Member rashida chan's Avatar
    Status
    rashida chan is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Distric 9
    Posts
    1,138
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    Fu** ing amazing!!!! But sasuke come on dude that won't be a fair fight
     
         

  24. #24
    our last hope Gdamon's Avatar
    Status
    Gdamon is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Mar 2012
    Location
    why do you care?
    Posts
    2,539
    Post Thanks / Like
    what Status?
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    it was cool I guess... I would prefer if Sasuke came with them....

    and Obito doesn't care what Naruto calls him...
     
         

  25. #25
    Senior Member OWanime's Avatar
    Status
    OWanime is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Sep 2011
    Posts
    5,124
    Post Thanks / Like
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: Naruto: 628 --- Reunion

    I love this I wish konohamaru got to talk a bit with his grandfather but overall I liked the dialogue, it's exactly what they'd say :D
     
         

Page 1 of 2 12 Last»

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •