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    Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Tobirama : I can't use my space time jutsu in a situation like this.
    Hashirama : m then we.......walk
    Hiruzen: Hasirama-sama by that time the war will be over -_-
    Minato : I can use my space time ninjustsu to get us at the battlefield
    Tobirama : How?
    Minato: My space time ninjutsu is based on a jutsu formula which makes a
    marking on a place, object or even on a person.
    Sasuke So you have a marking at the battlefield?
    Minato : The kyuubi jinchuriki is at the battlefield i sealed the kyuubi
    within him and i also used the jutsu formula in addition to the seal.

    Tobirama: In a way that surpasses my own space time ninjutsu,
    i expect no less from a kage

    Minato: Well ..... thank you lord second.
    Sasuke : ( Naruto........)

    Minato : Everyone touch my back and let's go! wait...... give me a minute
    the distance is great i need to use a few more seals because of the greater
    chakra use.

    Hashirama : Yeah at last!!




    The battlefield

    Naruto( Bijuu mode ): Madara take this RASENSHURIKEN
    Madara stopped his susanoo to stop the Rasenshuriken.
    Madara : How foolish you should know by now tricks like that
    don't work ...

    Naruto : It made you stop Susanoo hehehe

    Madara : ?
    Naruto (Kagebunshin): RASENGAN!
    Madara : not bad
    Naruto hit Madara in the stomach and was blown 10 metres further away

    Madara :........ 2 can play that game.... naruto..


    Tobirama: No way a kid like that doing that to Madara!?
    Hasirama : The will of fire still burns bright hahahaha
    Hiruzen: and new leafs shall sprout or not naruto ha ha ha
    Minato: I knew you could do it..

    Sasuke : Madara......
    Orochimaru From the moment he mastered that jutsu's as a kid
    i knew he would become dangerous )

    Madara : TAJUU MOKUTON BUNSHIN NO JUTSU
    40 Madara Bushins were Madara in Susanoo

    Obito :don't overdo it ..... those bushins will kill the entire shinobi alliance.
    Kakashi : no way that many Susanoo and they have an entire body!! (
    Sasuke Susanoo only had an upperbody )

    Minato : Obito!
    Obito : !

    Madara : Hashirama , Tobirama this is unexpected
    Naruto turned behind

    Naruto : Father!.... and Sasuke?
    Minato : Naruto you are doing a good job.
    Naruto : Thanks dad, i still trying to the anwser though.
    Sasuke : To wha!!!!!

    Madara : I would allow you to talk ..........
    20 Susanoos Approach Naruto, Minato and Sasuke

    Sasuke : No way i can barely maintain susanoo and he's clones
    can use it !

    20 Susanoo's : YASAKA MAGATAMA
    Minato: Space time barrier
    The magatama's where sucked in an other dimension

    Minato : Naruto , Sasuke deal with these clones
    i must deal with Obito.

    Naruto : Right


    Tobirama : I will attack the real Madara, Brother use you're healing
    ninjutsu to heal the shinobi

    Hashirama : Wait............ Madara why are you still going on with this.
    Madara.

    Madara : Entertainment, and the world will have peace in the
    infinite tsukiyomi.
    Madara Mokuton : Deep forest emergence!
    Hashirama : Mokuton : Deep forest emergence !
    The jutsu countered eachother

    Hashirama:My jutsu ! what have done to your self!
    Tobirama : Hashirama i sensed it he has your power
    combined with his own he is stronger than you probably.

    Juubi AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
    Hashirama : The juubi how could you!?

    Madara : Is almost done.

    Obito : Minato sensei.......
    Minato: Why did you do this.
    Obito: I want Rin back and with this jutsu
    i can make it happen .
    Minato: Obito ..... i thought you better than this
    Obito : Times are different, but war is always the same
    this is the only way to solve it.

    Madara: PERFECT SUSANOO
    Hashirama WOODSTYLE : MULTIPLE WOOD DRAGONS!
    The perfect Susanoo was strangled
    Madara : Damn

    Tobirama : Water dragon jutsu!
    Tobirama jumped on the water dragon the fly toward
    the head of Susanoo where Madara was.

    Tobirama: Water style : Gigantic water Bullet!
    A hole was made in Susanoo's head.

    Madara Strangle my Susanoo while you fight me Tobirama.
    Tobirama Water style : Multiple water dragons!

    Madara : Return of the Uchiha
    The fan repelled the water dragons

    Tobirama and Madara fought a Taijutsu battle on top of Susanoo's head

    Obito : I have no choice i'll have to use the Rinne tensei no jutsu
    Minato : Do you know what happend to Rin....

    Obito : !?

    Sasuke: So Naruto any plans?
    Naruto: not really...

    Kurama : Naruto these clones don't have the Rinnegan abilities.
    Naruto: Hey your right! Sasuke use your strongest Ninjutsu
    Sasuke: Inferno style : Yasaka magatama!
    Naruto : Bijuu dama!

    The Susanoo clones where destroyed in the blast.

    Naruto: Nice!
    Sasuke: I am going to Madara

    Naruto : I am going to help the shinobi with those clones
    Sasuke :....

    Madara No choice i must release Susanoo.
    Hashirama: Now i can attack you with Tobirama.

    Madara :That won't help your chances......SUSANOO

    Madara's full body Susanoo appeared and was making hand seals

    Everyone looked in the sky

    Hashirama : No way a six meteorites!!
    Tobirama : Brother Sage mode now!.

    Hashirama .......
    Tobirama .........

    Hashirama and Tobirama where entering Sage mode.

    Hashirama : Sage arts : A Thousand hands!
    Tobirama: Sage arts :A Thousand water dragons!

    The water dragons redirected three of the six meteorites while
    Hashirama's thousand hands destroyed the other three.

    Hashirama : Madara would you have really killed so many people?....
    i don't know you like this....

    Sasuke: ......... Madara
    Madara : Izuna!
    Sasuke No i am Sasuke Uchiha

    Madara You resemble my little brother...... and now you have to die..
    Sasuke !

    Obito : Rinne tensei no jutsu....
    Madara At last

    Minato I couldn't convince him..............


    Naruto 636 : The Ten tails jinchuriki unleashed
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    I like it . Great prediction .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Wow this is entertaining. It actually felt like I'm reading a cannon material.
    Love the fact that Tobirama has a sage mode here!
    Good job bro!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    tobirama? cant use his hiraishin? whaaaaat? id rather go sleep than read dis sh*t.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Seriously you? Its a good prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    nice prediction,it made sense.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Quote Originally Posted by Sage of all Shinobi View Post
    Wow this is entertaining. It actually felt like I'm reading a cannon material.
    Love the fact that Tobirama has a sage mode here!
    Good job bro!
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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    I like it great prediction except
    -minato doesn't need seals for ftg no matter the distance
    -tobirama has no sage mode that we know of but it could happen so nice touch
    -didnt like tobirama saying madara is stronger than hashi (but that's just my own opinion)
    -hashi wouldn't freak out over a couple of meteors when he was taking bijjudamas like they where meatballs

    It sounds like I'm being judgmental but I like the prediction I'm just relly critical
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Quote Originally Posted by Mark101 View Post
    Tobirama : I can't use my space time jutsu in a situation like this.
    Hashirama : m then we.......walk
    Hiruzen: Hasirama-sama by that time the war will be over -_-
    Minato : I can use my space time ninjustsu to get us at the battlefield
    Tobirama : How?
    Minato: My space time ninjutsu is based on a jutsu formula which makes a
    marking on a place, object or even on a person.
    Sasuke So you have a marking at the battlefield?
    Minato : The kyuubi jinchuriki is at the battlefield i sealed the kyuubi
    within him and i also used the jutsu formula in addition to the seal.

    Tobirama: In a way that surpasses my own space time ninjutsu,
    i expect no less from a kage

    Minato: Well ..... thank you lord second.
    Sasuke : ( Naruto........)

    Minato : Everyone touch my back and let's go! wait...... give me a minute
    the distance is great i need to use a few more seals because of the greater
    chakra use.

    Hashirama : Yeah at last!!




    The battlefield

    Naruto( Bijuu mode ): Madara take this RASENSHURIKEN
    Madara stopped his susanoo to stop the Rasenshuriken.
    Madara : How foolish you should know by now tricks like that
    don't work ...

    Naruto : It made you stop Susanoo hehehe

    Madara : ?
    Naruto (Kagebunshin): RASENGAN!
    Madara : not bad
    Naruto hit Madara in the stomach and was blown 10 metres further away

    Madara :........ 2 can play that game.... naruto..


    Tobirama: No way a kid like that doing that to Madara!?
    Hasirama : The will of fire still burns bright hahahaha
    Hiruzen: and new leafs shall sprout or not naruto ha ha ha
    Minato: I knew you could do it..

    Sasuke : Madara......
    Orochimaru From the moment he mastered that jutsu's as a kid
    i knew he would become dangerous )

    Madara : TAJUU MOKUTON BUNSHIN NO JUTSU
    40 Madara Bushins were Madara in Susanoo

    Obito :don't overdo it ..... those bushins will kill the entire shinobi alliance.
    Kakashi : no way that many Susanoo and they have an entire body!! (
    Sasuke Susanoo only had an upperbody )

    Minato : Obito!
    Obito : !

    Madara : Hashirama , Tobirama this is unexpected
    Naruto turned behind

    Naruto : Father!.... and Sasuke?
    Minato : Naruto you are doing a good job.
    Naruto : Thanks dad, i still trying to the anwser though.
    Sasuke : To wha!!!!!

    Madara : I would allow you to talk ..........
    20 Susanoos Approach Naruto, Minato and Sasuke

    Sasuke : No way i can barely maintain susanoo and he's clones
    can use it !

    20 Susanoo's : YASAKA MAGATAMA
    Minato: Space time barrier
    The magatama's where sucked in an other dimension

    Minato : Naruto , Sasuke deal with these clones
    i must deal with Obito.

    Naruto : Right


    Tobirama : I will attack the real Madara, Brother use you're healing
    ninjutsu to heal the shinobi

    Hashirama : Wait............ Madara why are you still going on with this.
    Madara.

    Madara : Entertainment, and the world will have peace in the
    infinite tsukiyomi.
    Madara Mokuton : Deep forest emergence!
    Hashirama : Mokuton : Deep forest emergence !
    The jutsu countered eachother

    Hashirama:My jutsu ! what have done to your self!
    Tobirama : Hashirama i sensed it he has your power
    combined with his own he is stronger than you probably.

    Juubi AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
    Hashirama : The juubi how could you!?

    Madara : Is almost done.

    Obito : Minato sensei.......
    Minato: Why did you do this.
    Obito: I want Rin back and with this jutsu
    i can make it happen .
    Minato: Obito ..... i thought you better than this
    Obito : Times are different, but war is always the same
    this is the only way to solve it.

    Madara: PERFECT SUSANOO
    Hashirama WOODSTYLE : MULTIPLE WOOD DRAGONS!
    The perfect Susanoo was strangled
    Madara : Damn

    Tobirama : Water dragon jutsu!
    Tobirama jumped on the water dragon the fly toward
    the head of Susanoo where Madara was.

    Tobirama: Water style : Gigantic water Bullet!
    A hole was made in Susanoo's head.

    Madara Strangle my Susanoo while you fight me Tobirama.
    Tobirama Water style : Multiple water dragons!

    Madara : Return of the Uchiha
    The fan repelled the water dragons

    Tobirama and Madara fought a Taijutsu battle on top of Susanoo's head

    Obito : I have no choice i'll have to use the Rinne tensei no jutsu
    Minato : Do you know what happend to Rin....

    Obito : !?

    Sasuke: So Naruto any plans?
    Naruto: not really...

    Kurama : Naruto these clones don't have the Rinnegan abilities.
    Naruto: Hey your right! Sasuke use your strongest Ninjutsu
    Sasuke: Inferno style : Yasaka magatama!
    Naruto : Bijuu dama!

    The Susanoo clones where destroyed in the blast.

    Naruto: Nice!
    Sasuke: I am going to Madara

    Naruto : I am going to help the shinobi with those clones
    Sasuke :....

    Madara No choice i must release Susanoo.
    Hashirama: Now i can attack you with Tobirama.

    Madara :That won't help your chances......SUSANOO

    Madara's full body Susanoo appeared and was making hand seals

    Everyone looked in the sky

    Hashirama : No way a six meteorites!!
    Tobirama : Brother Sage mode now!.

    Hashirama .......
    Tobirama .........

    Hashirama and Tobirama where entering Sage mode.

    Hashirama : Sage arts : A Thousand hands!
    Tobirama: Sage arts :A Thousand water dragons!

    The water dragons redirected three of the six meteorites while
    Hashirama's thousand hands destroyed the other three.

    Hashirama : Madara would you have really killed so many people?....
    i don't know you like this....

    Sasuke: ......... Madara
    Madara : Izuna!
    Sasuke No i am Sasuke Uchiha

    Madara You resemble my little brother...... and now you have to die..
    Sasuke !

    Obito : Rinne tensei no jutsu....
    Madara At last

    Minato I couldn't convince him..............


    Naruto 636 : The Ten tails jinchuriki unleashed
    Brilliant theory. But I guess they will talk more and fight less. You described like 4-5 chapters together. And you could work better on the dialogues. Still, great thinking. Repped.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    ****. Sage art of thousand dragons. Thts 2 OP, **** shit man. thts amazing
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Lost me at Minato easily showing up Tobirama...When he was obviously going to teleport them all there before.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Probably way too much content for one chapter lol but nice job
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Madara: PERFECT SUSANOO
    Hashirama WOODSTYLE : MULTIPLE WOOD DRAGONS!
    The perfect Susanoo was strangled
    Madara : Damn

    lol, but dat.. strangled a giant ethereal warrior.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Great comment
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    well this one was the best prediction I've read so far... nice job..!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    well, cool the best so far i tell you
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    not bad.......way too much put into one chapter though
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    I didnt want this prediction to end.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Nice Prediction + rep but don't you think that if madara becomes the juubi jinchuriki noone will stop him
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    nice prediction, too much talking and less fighting.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    How come hiruzen did not do anything, this is a crappy prediction.lol
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Your predication is actually feasible. Seems like something Kishi would write out in his manga
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    sucked hard
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 628 : The Kage on the battlefield extended

    Awesome prediction
     
         

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