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    The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

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    The life of Itachi Uchiha, Chapter 1: The life of a young Uchiha, Part 1, Part 2

    The life of Itachi Uchiha

    Itachi - Introduction/Explanation
    Introduction: For this fan fiction I will be making up a different version of Itachi's life with some events that happen in the original series and some that don't, Itachi will be the main character in this fan fiction.

    P.S This is my first fan fiction so please if you see any mistakes please tell me so I get better.

    I hope you will enjoy it!

    Itachi - Chapter 1: The life of a young Uchiha, Part 1

    (Itachi at this time is at the age of 7 and is just about to start the ninja academy)

    Fugaku Uchiha: Itachi get up already it's your last day at the ninja academy...

    -There was no reply so Fugaku calls again shouting louder then before, but he still gets no reply making him slightly frustrated as he wants Itachi to grow strong. Fugaku walks up the stairs and opens the door with an annoyed look on his face and begins to shout...-

    Fugaku Uchiha: Itach-

    -Fugaku realises that Itachi isn't in his room and wonders where he is, he goes back down the stairs and into the kitchen and starts to talk to his wife, Mikoto Uchiha.-

    Fugaku Uchiha: Dear, do you know where Itachi is? He's going to be late for his graduation day at the Ninja Academy.

    Mikoto Uchiha: Don't worry he got up about an hour before you did, he said something about training at the training grounds, maybe you should go and see him there.

    Fugaku: -An hour before me, huh? Well let's see exactly what he's doing.- I'm going to find Itachi, I'll be back soon.

    Mikoto Uchiha: Ok dear.

    -Fugaku then heads out of his home and to the training field.-

    -Scene switches to Itachi-

    Itachi Uchiha: I have to perfect this technique before the graduation...

    -Itachi puts both of his hands in two different ninja tool bags and then jumps in the air with three shuriken in each of his hands, he then releases them towards six targets, five hit but the sixth one doesn't land a hit.-

    Itachi Uchiha: That's the seventh time I've missed... -This is nothing like Dad's version...-

    Fugaku Uchiha: So this is what you're doing Itachi... remember it's your graduation day at the ninja academy today.

    Itachi Uchiha: I know Dad. Could you quickly help me with my Shuriken Jutsu before I go?

    Fugaku Uchiha: Umm... I guess I could but not for long or you'll be late.

    Itachi Uchiha: Thank you Dad.

    Fugaku Uchiha: All you need to do is throw four of the shuriken the same as you did before, the only difference is with the fifth and the sixth. With the last two throw the one just below the target and throw the last shuriken at the bottom of the previously thrown shuriken so that the above one rebounds upwards to the fifth targets and the last one rebounds downwards to the sixth target.

    -After the long explanation from Itachi's Father, Fugaku Uchiha, Itachi Uchiha starts to focus and think about what his Dad explained.-

    Itachi Uchiha: Rebounding the Shuriken off of each other? I think I've got this!

    -Itachi jumps in the air like before and throws five shuriken and throws the sixth one at the fifth shuriken making all six shuriken hit exactly in the middle of the targets.-

    Fugaku Uchiha: -Well, he is a genius after all, he did that perfectly after just one brief explanation and I didn't even have to show him...- Good job son, now go to the Ninja Academy you're going to be late.

    -Itachi smiles at his Dad and runs off towards the Ninja Academy, Fugaku smiles back as he see's his Son run of into the distance.-

    Fugaku Uchiha: He's going to be a strong one.

    -Time skip: 20 minutes, scene switches to the Ninja Academy class that Itachi's in-

    (The teachers name is Razan)

    Razan: Now listen up! Today I will be announcing the teams that you will be put into, this will be done after todays test with a pairing of three people, the strongest will be paired with the weakest and joining them will be someone with a medium amount of marks. This will help balance out the teams to make it fair for everyone.

    -Everyone shouts out yes and waits for their next order.-

    Razan: Good, now let's begin, first each one of you will have to form a Bunshin and if you fail this then you will have to train for another year.

    -Razan reads his sheet of paper and instructs many students to have a try and then it was finally Itachi's turn.-

    Razan: Ok, Itachi your turn.

    -Itachi walks forward and gathers up chakra and creates a perfect Bunshin.-

    Razan: As expected you're top of the class so far. Good job Itachi.

    -Razan allows the students to move on to Taijutsu, Ninjutsu and Genjutsu training.-

    -Time skip: 3 hours-

    -Itachi runs home after finding out him and 1 other person out of 11 students had passed the exam-

    Itachi Uchiha: Dad will be proud of me today, I'm finally a Genin!

    -Itachi finally gets home and tells his Dad the news-

    -Time skip: 3 years-

    -End of Chapter 1, Part 1.

    Notes:

    1. It wont be this boring for long I just need to get past the introduction to Itachi
    2. If you have any feedback please leave a comment, all help is appreciated
    3. Each Chapter will have 1-4 parts depending on how long I want it (the bold is obvious but I thought I would add it anyway)


    Next: Chapter 1: The life of a young Uchiha, Part 2 - Released soon!

    Previous: N/A



    Thanks for reading!
     
         
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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Y isn there a new chapter this week r they taking a break?
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

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    Y isn there a new chapter this week r they taking a break?
    Did you have to post that on here? :/ Anyway, no there isn't.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    I really enjoyed reading this. it was very good ...I feel like saying...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Quote Originally Posted by foxyladyland View Post
    I really enjoyed reading this. it was very good ...I feel like saying...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
    Hah, thanks. This will get better as the story goes on.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Wonderful. Only story I've really enjoyed reading on here.

    I'm actually making a fanfic about Kakuzu.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Quote Originally Posted by DrProof View Post
    Wonderful. Only story I've really enjoyed reading on here.

    I'm actually making a fanfic about Kakuzu.
    Wow, really? Thanks, I'll check out your FF as well. Thanks again.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    that was great dude keep up the good work!
     
         

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    that was great dude keep up the good work!
    Thanks.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Hey, it was not bad at all! I am really not into fanfiction, but to be brutally honest I liked it.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Quote Originally Posted by Penguin2640 View Post
    Hey, it was not bad at all! I am really not into fanfiction, but to be brutally honest I liked it.
    Thanks and I'll send you the link to part 2 but as you're not into fan fictions that much you don't have to read if you don't feel like it.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

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    Thanks and I'll send you the link to part 2 but as you're not into fan fictions that much you don't have to read if you don't feel like it.
    I will read it! I enjoy some stories. I will stop reading it when I stop getting amussed.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

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    I will read it! I enjoy some stories. I will stop reading it when I stop getting amussed.
    Ok, great.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    Awesome :scorps:
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    It came out rather well I must say.
     
         

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    I expect nothing less from an ardent itachi fan
    Looking forward for the next chap.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

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    Awesome :scorps:
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    It came out rather well I must say.
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    I expect nothing less from an ardent itachi fan
    Looking forward for the next chap.
    Thanks, part 2 will be out today.
     
         

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    Re: The life of Itachi Uchiha, Introduction and Chapter 1, part 1

    wow, amazing finish
     
         

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    wow, amazing finish
    Thanks.
     
         

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