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    NB's Loyal Knight FitzChivalry Farseer's Avatar
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    I am Fire . . . . I am Death
     

    Forgiveness Comes From Within

    From failure to stunning failure

    Humiliation and embarassment intertwine

    Like thorns around my heart that align

    Memories bind me to the past I had left behind

    Small moments that I will forever relive through my mind

    Punishing and cursing myself is how I get by

    Lost loves and missed romances have left me dry

    There are wounds that wont heal even if I did cry

    Again memories infect my brain by day and night

    And I even pray to a God that I dont believe in

    To at least confide all my tragedies that are cutting me from beneath

    "Oh my sorrow, would I ever find the forgiveness that comes from within?"
     
         

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    I just wanna be SWEET
     

    Re: Forgiveness Comes From Within

    Nice job, brah.
     
         

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    I am Fire . . . . I am Death
     

    Re: Forgiveness Comes From Within

    Quote Originally Posted by Fair Warning View Post
    What kind of rap was that
    Its not rap and its barely considered poetry. Just think of it as an expression of self
     
         

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    Re: Forgiveness Comes From Within

    I liked it. Good job man.
     
         

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    Thinking again? There's
    nothing wrong with thinking.
    But you're smart enough, so
    why not just solve the
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    Re: Forgiveness Comes From Within

    Quote Originally Posted by Fair Warning View Post
    What kind of rap was that
    it was a poem
     
         

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