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    Ensui Nara



    Basic Information:

    Name: Ensui Nara

    Nickname: None

    Gender: Male

    Age: 27-30

    Clan: Nara

    Appearance: Ensui is a middle-aged Shinobi with black hair tied up in a short, high ponytail. He also sports a goatee and green markings under his eyes which gives him an aloof, lazy expression. Ensui wears the standard attire for a Konohagakure shinobi which includes a standard Flak Jacket. Ensui however does not wear a standard Konohagakure forehead protector instead opting to go without one.

    Personality: Ensui is level-headed an analytical much like Shikamaru and Shikaku. He is a capable shinobi who follows through with orders even under duress and in the heat of battle.

    Background Information:

    History: As a member of the Nara Clan Ensui is proficient with all of the clans secret techniques. Utilizing shadows to restrain and attack their opponents, the Nara Clan is one of Konohagakure's great clans. Ensui made his first appearance as a shinobi of the Third Division under Kakashi Hatake. There he aided the division with his Shadow Possession to successfully restrain Hidden Mist swordsman Zabuza Momochi. Ensui was later seen restraining Mist Swordsman Jinin Akebino in order for Sai to seal him. Ensui would later appear as part of the combined Shinobi Alliance, and with the rest of his clan received Kurama's chakra in order to restrain the Juubi.

    Village Info:
    Village of Birth: Konohagakure
    Village of Alliance: Konohagakure


    Rank/Chakra:

    Ninja Rank: Tokubetsu Jounin
    Chakra Nature: Raiton - Needs Training
    Elements: None - Needs Training
    Your Ninjutsu: Nara Clan Techniques - Needs Training

    Taijuutsu: E-Rank
    Ninjutsu: E-Rank
    Genjutsu: E-Rank

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


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    Battles Won: None
    Battles Lost: None
     
         
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    Re: Ensui Nara

    This is getting approved, welcome to the RP!

    Edit: Why is it so short? The history has to be long, and add a song... Sorry, but i had to do this <-<
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    Quote Originally Posted by Yonkou Pandaman View Post
    This is getting approved, welcome to the RP!

    Edit: Why is it so short? The history has to be long, and add a song... Sorry, but i had to do this <-<

    This is actually what I was looking for, I've put off getting into RP for so long, and now that I've finally decided to give it a try I still need advice and whatnot on how to perfect my bio. I'll add a song and lengthen the history though! Thanks for the advice!
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    I dont understand
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fair Warning View Post
    I dont understand
    It's for RP lol
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    Aside from length, don't forget to actually establish both the Other and Battle sections that are in the template.
    It may seem trivial but it's not a good idea to irk Caliburn and whomever else takes time out to check and approve the bios.
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    Dissonant, here is the link to the Official Bio Template, people usually post around Five Lines lf history, but i guess three goes aswell.
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1950
    And this is my Template, but it has custom coding...:


    [IMG][/IMG]
    "" -


    [color=]B[/color]asic Information | 基本情報

    [border][font=century gothic]


    Name:
    Nickname:
    Gender:
    Age:
    Clan:

    Looks



    Personality





    [img][/img]


    [color=]V[/color]illage Info | 村の情報




    Village of Birth:
    Village of Alliance:


    [img][/img]


    [color=]R[/color]ank//Chakra Info | ランク/チャクラ情報





    Rank: S-class
    Specialty:
    Elements

    My Ninjutsu:
    Basic E-Rank
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    [img][/img]


    [color=]B[/color]ackground Information | 基礎的な情報




    History

    Birth





    [color=]O[/color]ther | その他






    Background or Theme Song




    [color=]B[/color]attles | 戦い




    Won:
    Loss:




     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    Quote Originally Posted by Yonkou Pandaman View Post
    Dissonant, here is the link to the Official Bio Template, people usually post around Five Lines lf history, but i guess three goes aswell.
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1950
    And this is my Template, but it has custom coding...:


    [IMG][/IMG]
    "" -


    [color=]B[/color]asic Information | 基本情報

    [border][font=century gothic]


    Name:
    Nickname:
    Gender:
    Age:
    Clan:

    Looks



    Personality





    [img][/img]


    [color=]V[/color]illage Info | 村の情報




    Village of Birth:
    Village of Alliance:


    [img][/img]


    [color=]R[/color]ank//Chakra Info | ランク/チャクラ情報





    Rank: S-class
    Specialty:
    Elements

    My Ninjutsu:
    Basic E-Rank
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    [img][/img]


    [color=]B[/color]ackground Information | 基礎的な情報




    History

    Birth





    [color=]O[/color]ther | その他






    Background or Theme Song




    [color=]B[/color]attles | 戦い




    Won:
    Loss:




    Thank you sir, I went ahead and tweaked it just a bit to fit the template.
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    Not perfect, but good enough ^^
    Getting approved for sure
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yonkou Pandaman View Post
    Not perfect, but good enough ^^
    Getting approved for sure
    Some day I shall be perfect. But until then...
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    So I just realised I need 1000 posts to have a Nara Clan Bio accepted. Therefore, I'm closing this bio and putting it "On Hold" until I reach 1000 posts.
     
         

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    Re: Ensui Nara

    Quote Originally Posted by DissonantValues View Post
    So I just realised I need 1000 posts to have a Nara Clan Bio accepted. Therefore, I'm closing this bio and putting it "On Hold" until I reach 1000 posts.
    My apologies for multiposting on my thread, but we're back open for business. Just awaiting approval from Caliburn and any constructive criticism is much appreciated.
     
         

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