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    Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    WELL THIS IS MY FIRST TIME TRYING OUT A PREDICTION ,SO GO EASY ON ME. ALSO I DON'T THINK THERE WILL BE A FIGHT FOR 2 MORE CHAPS. SO.......IT'S REALLY BIG...SO TAKE UR TIME AND ENJOY.

    Chapter – 628

    The chapter starts with scene showing the hokages standing on the mountain top of their respective faces.Below them Sasuke’s company is looking at them.
    (the hokages teleport back next to them)

    Tobirama:
    Well then ,let’s not waste any time,shall we.

    Hiruzen: Yeah, it seems the battle is getting tense and tense by every passing minute.

    Hashirama: Hahahaha....yeah lets go to the battlefield.But,huh! How will we get there?Tobirama,you ca’t teleport us so far.

    Minato: Well,if I may speak, I can get us all there in an instant.

    Tobirama: How so,you too use S/T jutsu which should have a same limitation as mine.

    Minato: Yeah well,my limitation is only that I can’t teleport anywhere like you,not the distance. I can sense,one of my marker kunai is there at the battlefield with my student kakashi. We will be teleported just some distance above him.

    Orochimaru: Great then, well I didn’t want to be a part of this stupid war,but forget about it.
    Everyone(except sasuke) : !!?
    Sasuke : You sure about that Orochimaru. I’m not forcing you,you know.You now have the strength enough to try take my body and destroy the village.Just Release Shodai Hokage’s edo tensai .

    Hiruzen: What are you saying Sasuke? Don’t provoke him.......

    Oro : Relax Sensei,well that’s a rather tempting idea but I pass. I already told you Sasuke why I did it.

    Sasuke(smiling): Well then let’s go help that loser ‘cause I don’t think that even when he is your son Yondaime,he can take Madara alone.

    Hashirama: Your son?

    Minato (smiling while scratching his head) : Yeah well.....(I wonder how you know Sasuke). Alright, let’s go,put ur hands on my hands.Here we go...........

    [They disappear in a flash]

    (Scene changes to (1 hour ago) showing the current kages,everyone is fully healed except Tsunade)

    Mei:
    Lady Tsunade,get up; Don’t tel me she........

    Slug: No,she isn’t but will surely if not treated within 15 min.

    Onoki: Dammit,its all my fault. We should’ve just gave up.

    A : No ,it’s not. That Madara,he is a monster. I thought he would be on the same level as that Sasuke considering they both possess the same power,but he is on a whole other level.

    Gaara : Maybe what he said is true,we can’t defeat him .Only one person is capable enough to do so. But this is no time for that,we have to help her.

    Mei: But how,she gave all of her chakra to save us and none of us are medical ninja’s.Hell ,in her condition,I don’t think that any medical ninja can help her.

    Slug : There is one, her student Sakura. But she is in the battlefield. It will be too late till we reach there.

    Voice : Allow me.

    Everyone ; !!?

    A : It’s you….. (charges up )

    (Suddenly a snake bites him parallysing him for couple of min. )

    Mei :
    -What the? (She throws her lava on the strange person,when suddenly wood rises out of no where covering him)

    Oonoki : What are you……? Explain!

    Anko : Sorry but,there is no other way to stop Raikage.

    Yamato: yeah,the same goes for Mizukage as well.

    Kabuto : It’s alright . I haven’t expected a warm welcome after what I did. I’m the one who revived him afterall.

    (The scene shows Tsunade’s body inside the slug and recovering fast,and finally fully recovered and she regains her consciousness)

    Tsunade:
    What? How? I’m still alive.

    Kabuto: Well ,it seems you forgot my medical capabilities,Lady Tsunade.

    Tsunade(shocked) : It’s you (tries to punch but couldn’t lift her arm)........what?

    Kabuto : Well, your hands will be normal automatically after a couple of minutes.

    Yamato: He is not an enemy anymore. Punishment can wait till the war. He rescued me and Anko and came here to help you after I sensed your low chakra.

    (A few minutes later)

    Kabuto:
    So this is what happened.

    Tsunade: I...ta...chi !! But why? How? He was an edo too.

    Kabuto : It seems before fighting Sasuke,he gave naruto the eyes of Shishui Uchiha,with an KA ordeing “Return and Protect KONOHA “.

    Gaara : what?

    Kabuto : it was supposed to be automatically come into action,as soon as Sasuke uses MS against Naruto if they fight and cast it on him.But it turned out another way.

    Oonoki : So he was the one who saved the Shinobi World? But why?......Wait a min., Could it be that there is something we don’t know about him and because of that Sasuke gone against the village.

    Gaara: I was right ! he didn’t attacked the Kage summit to take us hostage.He came only for Danzo.He is not a member of akatsuki.

    Tsunade : May be. Tsk...What’s the meaning of this? What is it that you’re hiding Naruto?....

    Anko : We can ask him later,let’s go. It will take us 20 min. To reach there.

    (The scene changes to battlefield (15 min. Before the teleportation) )

    Naruto:
    " And I don't wnat them to break their bonds either".

    (Madara and Obito gets seperated by JUBI and it began to go berzerk )

    Madara:
    Obito...

    Obito: I'm on it. [B](Teleports instantly on top of the Jubi and connects again).

    Kakashi (panting) : Shit!..

    Naruto (Lands near Kakashi) : His Kamui is the problem.We have to deal with him.

    Madara ( Standing b/w Obito\Jubi and ALLIANCE) : I've had Enough!...I'll deal with them.Sorry Obito, guess their won't be anyone left to cast the Tsukoyomi.We'll have to create everyone in there...

    Obito:Huh ! .do as you wish,old man.

    (The 5 Kages+ Kabuto,Anko and Yamato lands near the alliance )

    Everyone : !!!

    Fodder 1:
    It's the kages....

    Fodder 2: Yeah,now we win...

    K-11 : !!!

    Naruto (sees them and give a smile):
    Alright,great. I thought you all died,especially you Grandma......

    Bee:Yo brother, how's it hanging...

    Kakashi: Kabuto,you?

    Naruto: It's okay Sensei. There is no darkness\hatred inside him anymore.Seems as if you finally got back at your senses.I knew he wouldn't kill you.

    k-11: !!?

    Tsunade ( Shocked !) [Thinking- No doubt he is talking about Itachi]

    Kabuto:
    Yeah,well I wasn't sure you know,considering that Sasuke was their too helping him stop the Edo tensei.

    K-11,Kakashi,Guy: Sasuke !!?

    Naruto: What ? That moron helped him.......well it seems it can't be helped.

    Bee: It seems ,he really is one hell of a shinobi,hehe....

    Naruto: Yeah...

    Kakashi:Naruto,you mean it's all true then.the truth........

    Kages and K-11 (thinking); The truth!...

    Naruto (sad):
    Yeah,I never thought that the third.....! Well let's forget about that and show them what we got........

    (The battle happens which wasn't shown.Panel shows,everyone is panting heavily.Fodders blood and bodies all around)

    Fodder:
    What is he?

    (Panel shos Naruto collapsing and K-11 and kages and other main char. on their knees leaving Madara standing on his perfect Susano'o)

    Madara:
    I told you before ,Whoever see this "POWER OF MINE" never lives to tell its tale,considering if by miracle.Like you Kages.But don't worry,miracles never happen twice.Though I will not finish you off with my power. How about........?

    (Madara removes his Susano'o and makes handsigns)

    Shikamaru:
    He is unbeatable.Our stragegy failed.Naruto is down as well,damn.

    Hinata ( Holding Naruto in her laps): No,this can't be happenning..........

    Madara(smiling evily):Nothing personel though...."MOKUTON:DEEP FOREST EMERGENCE".

    (The scene shows Sakura infront of all, making her the first die target,on her......the Mokuton branches emerges,just like when naruto destoyed them with Rasengan Spam)

    Sakura:
    We will all die.Help!...someone ,please (usually useless as always).

    Everyone (eyes closed;some crying): So this is the end.....

    Sakura:Help , help........... Sasuke(shouts).......

    (Just when the branches were about to hit her and others,a sudden flash appears above the battlefield in air and a huge Lighting came crashing down the earth destroying all the trees and branches . The battlefiel gets covered with dust becoming clear and clear. The other panel shows the Hokages along with Taka and Oro with Sasuke standing in the middle )

    Sakura:
    Sa.....su......ke!

    Everyone (shocked):!!? The Previous Hokages........
     
         

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    Alrighty then!!!!!!!!!!
     

    Re: Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    That was damn cool esp the last part was epic
     
         

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    Pretty good xD.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    i love it
     
         

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    Sakura:We will all die.Help!...someone ,please (usually useless as always).
    ^^^^^^^
    LULed at this
    Good try though
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    Long, fun and entertaining, bout 3-4 chapters worth lol.

    Sakura:We will all die.Help!...someone ,please (usually useless as always). LMAOROFL

    For the most part it seemed convincing.
    the only parts that are off to me would be obito listening to madara and kabuto revivng yamato already.

    naruto n co. getting owned is depressing, but if its to stage the next fight(edo hokages), then i would be happy.
    Gj. *****
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    thanks guys
    personally i would reply to everyone,but i'm on ma 4 year old phone and ma net is sucking so....
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 : Arrived at Last

    best prediction i have read ... wont happen in a single chapter but can happen now ... it would be funny that when sasuke n team arrive they think they are a evil team
     
         

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    great predication
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghost of Uchiha View Post
    best prediction i have read ... wont happen in a single chapter but can happen now ... it would be funny that when sasuke n team arrive they think they are a evil team
    thanks...

    i love it
    Thank.....
     
         

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    Everytime something unexpected happens. Great Job.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by ahhimane View Post
    Everytime something unexpected happens. Great Job.
    thanks...

    BTW its "Never before,Never Again" thing.......
     
         

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    Why are people thinking madara is gonna starting to get some whopping
     
         

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