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    Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    In this chapter Naruto and company are starting to get a slight advantage. But Madara and Obito aren't really worried because everything is going to their plan. Just as soon as the joint forces think they have the juubi held off. Obito unleashes some of its power and kills some the members.
    Madara looks at Obito and tells him that " He didn't have to do that".
    But Obito says " I know but I just thought they should be erased from this world , They have no purpose here. No-one does not even us".
    Madara : -glares at Obito- What the hell do you mean?
    - Just as Obito is about to explain to Madara- -He's sensing Some Strong Chakra levels- Someone's coming.
    Madara: Hmm.. I know I can see about 5 strong chakra type and one of them is Hashirama and the other is grr!! Tobirama -glares- I guess I'm so powerful they needed to bring them back to fight me. Makes me feel like a god.
    Obito: Whatever.. But anyways lets finish off these fools first. Because if we don't then we will be in trouble.
    Madara: Calm down -sits down and crosses his legs- Let us wait for them to show up. I want to see how much of a difference they can make.
    Obito: -Face Palms- You can't be serious. approaches
    -Naruto and the others look at them in confusion-
    Naruto: Do you feel that chakra?
    Kakashi: Yes I think one of the chakra's im feeling is Sasukes'.
    Naruto: Yeah and I can Orochimaru's but there's more with them.. But who?
    Hinata: Whoever it is we'll soon find out in a minute.
    RockLee: guy sensei whoevers coming do you think they'll be on our side?
    Might Guy: Who knows. We'll just have to hope.
    -meanwhile Sasuke , Team Taka, Orochimaru, and The First 4 Hokages are heading to the battlefield-
    Hashirama: I can't wait to get there. I can see my long time friend/rival Madara. I wonder how strong he's become?
    Tobirama: Uhh! I can't see why you still feel so friendly towards him after all he's done?
    Hashirama: Eh I'm a nice person.
    Sarutobi: Well one things for sure when I get out there. Stand back because I'm going all out.
    Minato: I hope Naruto is okay. I want to give him something. Something that can help him win this war.
    -Sasuke still thinking about his answer as he heads to the battlefield-
    Orochimaru: (Thinking- What is his answer?)
    Obito: How long do we have to wait?
    Madara: Not long just be patient. You're finally about to see a real battle in a few moments.
    Obito: -Arms folded- hmph.. I'll give them 5 minutes. If they don't show in 5 minutes. I'm going to start to wipe out people.
    Madara: Alright fine with me.
    Obito: -Yells to Naruto and the others- You have 5 minutes for you reinforcement to arrive. After that I'm gonna to annihilate you guys 1 by 1 until they show up.
    Naruto: -growls- You bastard.
    Kakashi: Obito this isn't like you.
    Obito: Shut up Kakashi or you'll be the first.
    -Time is ticking- -Will The Hokages , Sasuke, Team Taka, and Orochimaru be able to make in time?-
    (Upcoming Chapter Predictions)
    Chapter 629- The Ultimate Reinforcements Arrive
    Chapter 630- Gods At War
    Chapter 631- Rampage of The Juubi
    Chapter 632- Juubi complete
    Chapter 633- Rin's Return
    Chapter 634- Madara The Unstoppable
    Chapter 635- The Ultimate battle between Obito and Kakashi
    Chapter 636- Infinite Tsukiyomi
    Chapter 637- All Hope is Lost
    Chapter 638- Darkness and Light
    Chapter 639- Destory The Moon
    Chapter 640- Naruto and Sasuke vs Madara: The Final Showdown
    -More Chapter Predictions coming soon-
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    Terrible dialogue, looks like a child wrote it....

    Sorry man you need to work on the way the characters speak, none of it sounds like something someone would say. Obito would never say someone needed to be erased from the world, there is much more to his personality than that. He wants everyone to be happy and have peace and thinks that it can only be done through a huge genjutsu.

    Take some more time and really think about each person talking, where they are coming from and what they would be likely to say to each situation you are dreaming up for them.
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    Question, how can Naruto and Kakashi feel Sasuke and Orochimaru's chakra and not the others?

    They met Karin, Hiruzen, and Minato before right?
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    Quote Originally Posted by Nupp View Post
    Terrible dialogue, looks like a child wrote it....

    Sorry man you need to work on the way the characters speak, none of it sounds like something someone would say. Obito would never say someone needed to be erased from the world, there is much more to his personality than that. He wants everyone to be happy and have peace and thinks that it can only be done through a huge genjutsu.

    Take some more time and really think about each person talking, where they are coming from and what they would be likely to say to each situation you are dreaming up for them.

    Ha ha ha ! You made me laugh . Not because of what you wrote, but because of your incompetence . At least this guy tried to make a decent prediction . Unlike you who can only write hateful comments . If this is what you'll write in threads, this place is not for you .

    Try making a prediction . Let's see if its better .
     
         
    Last edited by Django; 04-20-2013 at 07:32 PM.

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    This reminded me of DBZ
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    well, why is it that there is no fight in the epic
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    Quote Originally Posted by AvalokiteĊ›vara View Post

    Ha ha ha ! You made me laugh . Not because of what you wrote, but because of your incompetence . At least this guy tried to make a decent prediction . Unlike you who can only write hateful comments . If this is what you'll write in threads, this place is not for you .

    Try making a prediction . Let's see if its better .
    Sorry for trying to improve on the amatuer's style, I guess I should just pander to his poor writing style so he never gets better?
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    lol really?
     
         

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    Re: Chapter 628 The Ultimate Team Approaches

    actually i can write better it's just this is what i thought of for a prediction.
     
         

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