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    Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    The Beginning of The End

    Madara is shown standing ontop the juubi. The juubi frantically sways in an uproar
    Madara: The juubi is becoming more unstable, it seems to be getting a bit impatient, and that fool Obito got caught with his own technique, we need to stick to our plan or this could go wrong.

    Naruto and the alliance sense the juubis chakra and are all in shock.
    Naruto: kakashi sensei...!!
    Bee: Yo that aint coo, they both used their teleportation no jutsu!!
    Shikamaru: If i know Kakashi I'd say this is all apart of some plan to separate obito from Madara, lets just hope.. Naruto!! dispersing this amount of chakra is going to be too much for you, you need to concentrate on Madara by going on the offensive.
    Naruto: I won't let anymore of my friends get hurt.. I won't..!!
    Hinata: Na..Naruto, Shikamaru is right, if you keep this up, at this pace you'll be all out of chakra, then all of us will be gone.
    Kyuubi: Naruto, listen to them, im almost out of chakra and if that happens Madara won't give us the chance to build more, we have to attack him now while the juubi, is collecting chakra.
    Naruto: But...
    Kyuubi: I know, just have faith, we can do this together.

    Madara does hand signs, and jumps off of the juubis head.
    Madara: He's on the move, I've released the juubi so it can complete the chakra gathering, Hmm it seems like he's brought a few friends along too, never the less, i have to thank you for my new eyes!! Come HASHSIRAMA!!

    Hashsirama and the other hokages are seen speeding through the trees.
    Tobirama: If this truly is Madara then he has been training in the underworld more than us brother.
    Hiruzen: Why you say that 2nd?
    Hashirama: Because He's ten times as strong as he was when we last fought (Smiles)
    Hiruzen: !!
    Tobirama: ??
    Minato: Say what?! "Naruto must have really gotten stronger to be able to fend of a menace such as this"
    Hashirama: Hehehe! Leave to to Madara to have gotten stronger even through death, Im coming MADARA!!

    Kakashi is shown breathing heavily... The landscape is a lush green forest with a wide lake.
    Obito: Whats the matter kakashi? Does a simple technique such as kamui exhaust you? or is it because you are not an Uchiha?!!
    Kakashi: "That was a risky move (Flashback).. If he had caught my bluff of teleporting the juubi he could i would of be wide open to an attack, but still i used up almost all the chakra the kyuubi gave me to choose this location"
    Obito: Im talking to you.. Scum!!
    Kakashi: This eye was entrusted to me by my best friend, who died protecting me, im sorry you chose this path Obito and im sorry you couldn't see things the way i did.
    Obito: Hahaha! Your pathetic!
    Kakashi: That bridge behind me was where rin died..
    Obito: You mean thats where you killed her!! you piece of crap!
    Kakashi: ?? Rin was....
    Obito: Shut up you low life!! Mokuton: Wooden Prison.. A wooden sphere forms around kakashi
    Kakashi: Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Technique.. A dense fog envelopes the entire forest
    Obito: He's using the the lake to create this mist, Childs play kakashi!
    Kakashi: We may have the same eyes Obito but thanks to this eye I was able to copy 1000 jutsus, I copied this jutsu from one Zabuza Momochi a ninja from the hidden mist.
    Obito: Good ole Kakashi always stealing from someone, just like you stole Rins life.
    Kakashi: (Voice is heard through the mist) I've learned that our eyes can be easily fooled, so sometimes we have to rely on our other senses.
    Obito: Arrhgg!! Face me you scum.. Obito starts releasing kunais everywhere.
    Kakashi: (Voice is heard through the mist) This mist has several properties, one being it hides all presence of chakra, so teleporting back to the battlefield would be impossible, even the best sensory type couldn't find us in here, so you have no choice but to listen to me.

    I need to tell you how I failed you when I let Rin get killed...
    Next time: The Truth about Rin
     
         

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    good theory bub
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    it's a good read i like how you added the 1000 justu thing plus rep good sir
     
         

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    its pretty good
     
         

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    great predication
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by SasuketheGreat View Post
    The Beginning of The End

    Madara is shown standing ontop the juubi. The juubi frantically sways in an uproar
    Madara: The juubi is becoming more unstable, it seems to be getting a bit impatient, and that fool Obito got caught with his own technique, we need to stick to our plan or this could go wrong.

    Naruto and the alliance sense the juubis chakra and are all in shock.
    Naruto: kakashi sensei...!!
    Bee: Yo that aint coo, they both used their teleportation no jutsu!!
    Shikamaru: If i know Kakashi I'd say this is all apart of some plan to separate obito from Madara, lets just hope.. Naruto!! dispersing this amount of chakra is going to be too much for you, you need to concentrate on Madara by going on the offensive.
    Naruto: I won't let anymore of my friends get hurt.. I won't..!!
    Hinata: Na..Naruto, Shikamaru is right, if you keep this up, at this pace you'll be all out of chakra, then all of us will be gone.
    Kyuubi: Naruto, listen to them, im almost out of chakra and if that happens Madara won't give us the chance to build more, we have to attack him now while the juubi, is collecting chakra.
    Naruto: But...
    Kyuubi: I know, just have faith, we can do this together.

    Madara does hand signs, and jumps off of the juubis head.
    Madara: He's on the move, I've released the juubi so it can complete the chakra gathering, Hmm it seems like he's brought a few friends along too, never the less, i have to thank you for my new eyes!! Come HASHSIRAMA!!

    Hashsirama and the other hokages are seen speeding through the trees.
    Tobirama: If this truly is Madara then he has been training in the underworld more than us brother.
    Hiruzen: Why you say that 2nd?
    Hashirama: Because He's ten times as strong as he was when we last fought (Smiles)
    Hiruzen: !!
    Tobirama: ??
    Minato: Say what?! "Naruto must have really gotten stronger to be able to fend of a menace such as this"
    Hashirama: Hehehe! Leave to to Madara to have gotten stronger even through death, Im coming MADARA!!

    Kakashi is shown breathing heavily... The landscape is a lush green forest with a wide lake.
    Obito: Whats the matter kakashi? Does a simple technique such as kamui exhaust you? or is it because you are not an Uchiha?!!
    Kakashi: "That was a risky move (Flashback).. If he had caught my bluff of teleporting the juubi he could i would of be wide open to an attack, but still i used up almost all the chakra the kyuubi gave me to choose this location"
    Obito: Im talking to you.. Scum!!
    Kakashi: This eye was entrusted to me by my best friend, who died protecting me, im sorry you chose this path Obito and im sorry you couldn't see things the way i did.
    Obito: Hahaha! Your pathetic!
    Kakashi: That bridge behind me was where rin died..
    Obito: You mean thats where you killed her!! you piece of crap!
    Kakashi: ?? Rin was....
    Obito: Shut up you low life!! Mokuton: Wooden Prison.. A wooden sphere forms around kakashi
    Kakashi: Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Technique.. A dense fog envelopes the entire forest
    Obito: He's using the the lake to create this mist, Childs play kakashi!
    Kakashi: We may have the same eyes Obito but thanks to this eye I was able to copy 1000 jutsus, I copied this jutsu from one Zabuza Momochi a ninja from the hidden mist.
    Obito: Good ole Kakashi always stealing from someone, just like you stole Rins life.
    Kakashi: (Voice is heard through the mist) I've learned that our eyes can be easily fooled, so sometimes we have to rely on our other senses.
    Obito: Arrhgg!! Face me you scum.. Obito starts releasing kunais everywhere.
    Kakashi: (Voice is heard through the mist) This mist has several properties, one being it hides all presence of chakra, so teleporting back to the battlefield would be impossible, even the best sensory type couldn't find us in here, so you have no choice but to listen to me.

    I need to tell you how I failed you when I let Rin get killed...
    Next time: The Truth about Rin
    Cleverly made and well thought.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    what everyone else said lol
     
         

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    Awsome theory , i like it :D
     
         

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    Thanks for the positive feed back guys.. Much appreciated
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    I like it. But wouldn't the kages just space time ninjutsu themselves there?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Very creative ending! Really enjoyed it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Since when Obito can use Wood Release ? It is good theory.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by benzy View Post
    Since when Obito can use Wood Release ? It is good theory.
    Uhh...ever since Madara used senju dna to fix Obito up lol
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Magnificent prediction good sir!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Amazing thought into the new chapter, wonder how long it took you to put all that into text :P

    p.s i loved how you said madara:"come hashirama" , hashirama: "im coming madara". =3
     
         

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    Great Prediciton
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    nice prediction I hope madara gets some wood to the face
     
         

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    Excellent
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    superb ending
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    This is the best prediction I've read so far. I like the ideas you are presenting. Plus, you gave Hinata some more screen-time. As someone already pointed out, the Hokage, Sasuke, Orochimaru and the rest of team Taka are teleporting to battle. I'm really curious about what Karin senses from the Jubi. I don't know if she is sane enough to do so anymore though. I loved the idea that Kakashi would use the Hidden Mist technique to gain an advantage! I also loved how Obito used a Mokuton technique. He can use those, at least, in theory. I'd also suggest improving the grammar. I'd be happy to give you more details on how to do that by pointing out the erros I see, if you want.

    Thanks for sharing.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    nice,well thought,and logical theory it is better than other theories in terms that it isn't too OP,which is something kishi usually does.
     
         

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    good prediction!!
     
         

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    MANGA 629 : LONG TIME NO SEE
    The Juubi displays a piece of its power....
    (The whole battlefield is destroyed by the cyclones and the lightning covering entire area)
    JUUBI : Ooooooohhhhhhhhh!!!
    (The pitch of its roar goes on reducing as the scene changes)
    (A pitch dark black space forms a spiraling portal on it)
    (Two figures gets out of the portal)
    (Obito pace out from Kakashi by throwing a kick at him)
    KAKASHI : Gahhhh!!
    OBITO : .....
    KAKASHI : (coughs) (gets up) Obito I...
    (Both are facing each other)
    OBITO : (quietly) Shut up, Kakashi. I brought you here so that Naruto won't be here to protect you. This is similar to what happened with Rin.
    KAKASHI : (remembers killing Rin).... (turns his MS to normal Sharingan)
    OBITO : I am going gouge out that eye once I kill you. Since it's mine. (imports a sword from his eye and dashes towards Kakashi)
    (One whole page is shown showing traces of Obito left behind while he approaches Kakashi)
    (At their background, small small panels are shown containing Kakashi's memories running through his mind from his first meet with Obito till his last words at the Kannabi bridge)

    OBITO : ...I'm already...going to die...but....I can become your eye...and from now on I will see the future...

    (Obito raises his sword to stab him into his heart)
    (Kakashi remembers Naruto's words)

    NARUTO : (puts his hand on his heart)...Not having my friends hear...is the most painful thing for me.

    (Kakashi comes to senses)
    (A lightning runs through and cut the sword in two halves)
    KAKASHI : Raikiri!!! (focus on his Sharingan) This is the gift I got from my best friend Obito. He still lives on (puts his left hand on his heart) here.
    OBITO : ?!!
    KAKASHI : It does not belongs to you.
    (A bright light emerges from the black dimension as the scene changes)
    (Several shinobis are lying dead on the ground at a great distance)
    (The kyuubi cloak fades away)
    (The Juubi is surrounded by dust)
    NARUTO : (normal mode) Damn it.

    KURAMA : He got us this time.
    NARUTO : I could protect those who were around me.

    SAKURA : (place her hand on Naruto's shoulder) Naruto. Don't blame yourself.
    ???? : You had put up a good fight.
    SAKURA : ?!!
    NARUTO : ?!!
    (Four figures are shown into the dust showing their backs at the alliance)
    ???? : (One of the figure turns his head) Knucklehead Idiot.
    NARUTO : Sa...?!!
    SAKURA : ....su...?!!
    NARUTO/SAKURA : .....ke?!!
    (A blow of wind clears the dust showing Sasuke looking at Naruto and Sakura)
    MADARA : He's here.
    HASHIRAMA : Cool Madara!! You controlled the Juubi alone. [ No wonder he did that.] (remembers)

    MINATO : There is someone with my teleporatation seal on it nearby the battlefield. But the chakra density is very less.
    HASHIRAMA : Lets go. Young Hokage.
    (Teleports from the village)
    (reaches the place)
    EVERYONE : ?!!!
    (Everyone witnesses the defeated Kages)
    (Katsuyu is shown healing the Kages using Tsunade's chakra)
    KATSUYU : ?!!
    HASHIRAMA : Tsunade?!!
    KATSUYU : Shodaime Hokage? Orochimaru? Ho-
    TOBIRAMA : That will be explained later. Katsuyu. Didn't Tsunade summoned you? You were supposed to protect her.
    KATSUYU : I apologize Nidaime Hokage. Lady Tsunade didn't summoned me during her battle. She ordered me to save the other Kages as soon as possible.
    TOBIRAMA : Damn you Madara. I am going to kill that bastard.
    HASHIRAMA : Wait. (clap) (A wood emerges out from the ground and puts the fallen tree aside) ?!!
    (The whole gap between Tsunade's upper and lower body is covered with blood with some organs)
    (Suigetsu and Karin faints as soon as they watches it)
    OROCHIMARU : (gets up on the tree) It was a mistake to resurrect Madara.
    MINATO : Lady Tsunade.
    HIRUZEN : Shodaime Hokage, you must save Tsunade and the Kages.
    HASHIRAMA : I can't. My healing abilities are limited to myself.
    OROCHIMARU : Leave this to me.
    TOBIRAMA : That's impossible.
    HIRUZEN : What are you plotting Orochimaru?
    OROCHIMARU : Don't worry, Sarutobi Sensei. I have no intentions of killing the Kages. Tsunade won't be healed with only medical ninjutsu. Without Hashirama's DNA, she won't be able to survive. But I also now has his cells in my body. I'll be able to deal with this.
    HASHIRAMA : We have no other option left.
    HIRUZEN : Then, Shodaime, Nidaime and Yondaime Hokage, you go ahead with Sasuke. I'll stay here and join you later. You must head to the battlefield soon to stop Madara's madness.
    SASUKE : (looking at Suigetsu and Karin and then at Juugo)....Juugo. Stay here with Orochimaru.
    HASHIRAMA : Lets go Tobirama.
    TOBIRAMA : I can trace that bastard from here. Lets go.

    MADARA : (shown standing right in front of the Juubi) Long time no see, Hashirama. And you too, Tobirama. I cleared this for you, so that we can start our battle. This time with the Juubi. (devilish smirk)(remembers)

    MADARA : [ I was right... This chakra is..Hashirama!! ] I must welcome him. Nicely.
    (connects himself with the Juubi without anyone noticing him with his wood)
    MADARA : [ I'll handle Obito later. For now, lets clear the field. ]

    TOBIRAMA : I'll show you, Madara. This time I won't let my brother handle this alone.
    MADARA : (ignores Tobirama's words) Hmm. Who are those two?
    SHINOBI ALLIANCE : Does the Kages arrived?
    (Naruto looks at the figure standing beside Sasuke)
    (The coat of the figure says Yondaime Hokage)
    NARUTO : ?!! (remembers) [ I know you can do it. ] (tears rolls down from his eyes) D..Da...d?
    SAKURA : Dad?
    INO : Sasuke?
    KONOHA 11 : ?!!
    SHINOBI ALLIANCE : They are the former Hokages.
    NARUTO : ?!!
    SHINOBI 1 : Did Sasuke revived them?
    SHINOBI 2 : Is he planning to use them against us?
    SHINOBI 3 : We're doomed.
    NARUTO : ?!!
    KONOHA 11 : ?!!
    (Naruto dashes forward)
    SAKURA : Naruto?!!
    SASUKE : (as calm as always) .....(looking at Naruto approaching him with rasengan in his hand)
    NARUTO : How dare you, Saassukke?
    MINATO : ?!! (turns back) (looks at the rasengan) [ He is Naruto. But... ]
    HASHIRAMA : Huh?
    TOBIRAMA : .....
    NARUTO : Sasuke!!!
    (Naruto is about to hit Sasuke but Sasuke is still standing calm)
    Will Naruto believe in Sasuke's change of heart?
    Its a little long but I like this one best.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

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    I like it. But wouldn't the kages just space time ninjutsu themselves there?
    Possible but knowing Kishi, that wouldn't be much of a exciting wait..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Manga Chapter 629 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by ChakraSage View Post
    This is the best prediction I've read so far. I like the ideas you are presenting. Plus, you gave Hinata some more screen-time. As someone already pointed out, the Hokage, Sasuke, Orochimaru and the rest of team Taka are teleporting to battle. I'm really curious about what Karin senses from the Jubi. I don't know if she is sane enough to do so anymore though. I loved the idea that Kakashi would use the Hidden Mist technique to gain an advantage! I also loved how Obito used a Mokuton technique. He can use those, at least, in theory. I'd also suggest improving the grammar. I'd be happy to give you more details on how to do that by pointing out the erros I see, if you want.

    Thanks for sharing.
    Thanks any help would be welcomed, at least ur not bashing me
     
         

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