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    Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    { } - Thoughts

    ** - Realisation

    Ten pen chi causes thunder and typhoons........

    Killer bee : It's time to go biju mode. yeeeeeha

    8 tails : Make sure you two don't hurt alliances...

    Killer bee going in to biju mode and Naruto too. They started to create biju dama

    Bijumode Naruto : This time I won't screw up.

    Madara : Persistent.

    Juubi creates biju dama , it's size is 10 times compared to Naruto's and Killer bee's biju dama and juubi throws it.

    Scene changes to kages and taka and Orochimaru.

    Kages ,taka and Orochimaru moving through the forest..

    The sound of two biju dama colliding with juubi's biju dama makes a lot of light and sound

    Sasuke : what is that sound ?

    Orochimaru : Probably bijudama Sasuke kun...

    Suigethsu : { I have a bad feeling about this }

    Minato ** : Naruto's chakra is fading... I need to be faster.

    Tobirama : That Madara!

    Hashirama : Wood element fast forest eating technique

    Then the trees that standing before them destroyed in a second...and a clear path created.

    Now they see Juubi in the sky and Madara on top of it. In the ground all of the ninja alliance including Naruto and killer bee lying in the ground.

    Hiruzen : This is disastrous....He even revived juubi

    Orochimaru : { The power of juubi }

    Minato : Then Naruto's kyuubi would have absorbed and sealed ?

    Sasuke : Naruto.......


    Hashirama : Move on every one ! If we stay here Madara will win with his plan

    Every one them move with top speed.

    Madara : Now the stage is set for Hashirama. I should welcome him.

    Hashirama and others arrive at the place. They see a lot corpses and ninjas lying in the ground with out conciousness.

    Hiruzen : Shodaime sama you can heal others ?

    Hashirama : My healing abilities can only used for me. Hiruzen ....

    Hiruzen : Where is Tsunade then ? We need her times like these.

    Then suddenly a spiral motion appears on sky and Obito appear near to Madara

    Minato and Sasuke : That motion.....

    Orochimaru : Must be Tobi.


    Madara : Obito look, we have got a party here.

    ( kages,taka and Orochimaru can't hear what they talking because juubi in the sky and they are in the ground. A large distance is set between them.)

    Silence......

    Madara : Why are you so silent Obito ? Did anything happen at the other dimension ?

    Obito : Nothing. I have settled everything with that trash.

    Obito place hand on shoulder of Madara and tries to absorb him. But Madara just like Naruto moves from that position with top speed.

    Madara : !? Why ?

    -END-
     
         
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    Seems possible.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Quote Originally Posted by HIS0KA View Post
    Seems possible.
    Thank you ...thank you.
     
         

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    Look legit , i like it :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    I can actually see the next chapter being about Kakashi and Obito more, but good prediction c:
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Isn't Naruto getting tired? Not sure where he'd get the chakra to go BM again, unless Minato shows up soon.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Obito place hand on shoulder of Madara and tries to absorb him. But Madara just like Naruto moves from that position with top speed.

    tht was gud..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Great prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    I can definitely see obito tricking madara
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    everybody seems to want sauske and naruto to meet in the next chapter, and i do too, but it wont happen. authors love dragging out the plot. all in all a good prediction
     
         

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    Dude good chapter but madara saying why oh please he would say let's settle this before the main event begin or you are finally ready
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Quote Originally Posted by OWanime View Post
    I can definitely see obito tricking madara
    agreed, obito will probably betray madara for sole power over the juubi and infininte tsukiyomi
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Nice prediction
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Quote Originally Posted by FaHaD 5212 View Post
    Great prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by OWanime View Post
    I can definitely see obito tricking madara
    Quote Originally Posted by magicman420 View Post
    everybody seems to want sauske and naruto to meet in the next chapter, and i do too, but it wont happen. authors love dragging out the plot. all in all a good prediction
    Quote Originally Posted by lordmadarauchiha View Post
    Dude good chapter but madara saying why oh please he would say let's settle this before the main event begin or you are finally ready
    Quote Originally Posted by magicman420 View Post
    agreed, obito will probably betray madara for sole power over the juubi and infininte tsukiyomi
    Quote Originally Posted by CeeRock Damigro View Post
    Nice prediction
    Thanks all of you
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    meh, i dont think sasuke would EVER be that caring towards naruto. he would be more like "even though he's a moron, i have to admit, he can hold up the juubi" and even saying that is too much
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Quite awesome Keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Your prediction is one of the better ones out there. However, that isn't saying much. I've found a lot of bad predictions. I decided that instead of being silent, I'd offer some constructive criticism. Before anything else though, I want to thank you for putting your ideas out here!

    People have already pointed out a few problems to you. I'll skip those. Here's a list of things that I noticed:

    1. A large tailed beast bomb from the Jubi doesn't feel right to me. Tailed beast bombs are compressed balls of
    chakra. In a very common sense kind of way, I'd think that the more compressed it is, and the larger the chakra you
    put into it, the more explosive it would be. So, yeah, I wouldn't do that. The thing is, it is really hard to predict what
    the Jubi will do, so I can't really criticize you much.

    2. I suggest using "Gyuki" where you have "8 tails". It will look a lot more refined.

    3. Madara's single word response didn't feel right to me. I think you imagined his face as you wrote it, so it made more
    sense to you. Unfortunately, that didn't come across to me. Sometimes, communicating the full effect of something
    can be hard. I suggest being thorough and detailed.

    4. I'd suggest using a line for each scene change. The idea of explaining the scene change was nice, so well done on
    that!

    5. "Kages ,taka and Orochimaru moving through the forest.." should be changed to, "The four past Hokage, team Taka
    and Orochimaru move swiftly through the forest." The problems I attempted to fix are listed below:
    a. The punctuation was incorrect. "Kages ,taka" -> "Kages, taka"
    b. I added an adjective "swiftly" to add impact.
    c. I think that the pluralization of Kage is Kage, and not Kages. I might be wrong though. Since it wasn't a general
    gathering of Kage, I thought it would be more appropriate to change it to "The four past Hokage."
    d. I used present tense here because it felt right. If nothing else, it gives a sense of action. I wish I could find the
    grammar rule for this and give you solid reasons for it. I was thinking of this sentence in a square box at the top of
    the scene like they sometimes use in comics (I'm not sure if they're also used in manga).
    Of course, this isn't the only solution, or even the best one. I'm just trying to point out some things to think about.

    6. You totally ignored the fact that the Kage were going to teleport to the battlefield.

    7. Suigetsu, not Suigethsu.

    8. There are twin stars next to Minato that aren't explained.

    9. "That Madara!" not, "That Madara !" I'll skip over the rest of the grammar errors for now. If you wish, just contact me. I'll help you fix them, if you want.


    10. I loved your idea for Hashirama's technique. Something that takes away a forest instead of creating it. Simply brilliant!

    12. Minato is a smart guy. He wouldn't think that Naruto's Kyubi is sealed. The evidence tells him otherwise, so he'd
    conclude that it has somehow been revived without Kyubi. I'm not sure he'd go so far as to say "Naruto's Kyubi". The
    use of the possessive doesn't sit right with me.

    13. Biju dama on colliding on that scale and that close by would likely result in most of the alliance being obliterated.
    Would there be anything but mangled corpses left?

    14. Hiruzen is likely to know whether or not Hashirama could use his technique to heal others. That question would \
    probably not be asked.

    15. Hiruzen's question about Tsunade is interesting. He doesn't know that Tsunade was made the Hokage. I loved that
    you touched on that. Or maybe you weren't thinking that, but it was cool that I was reminded of it, anyway!

    16. How in heaven's name did Madara reconnect to the Jubi. I must say I'm surprised he hasn't re-established the
    connection in canon. Everyone was distracted for a bit. I'm not sure how that will play out, actually.

    17. How in heaven's name is Madara fast enough to avoid Kamui? There's no evidence that he's that fast.

    Anyway, I hope you find my observations helpful. Thanks for sharing.
     
         

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    its awsomeee
     
         

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    Amazing, i like it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto manga 629 : Finally they meet Hashirama and Madara

    Quote Originally Posted by monsoonfox View Post
    Madara : Obito look, we have got a party here.
    hahahahaha... this line just made my day... TOP class
     
         

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