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    [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    I hope I put this in the right category! xD

    ()= actions (way too many of these, lol.)
    []=thoughts
    ~ = Battle scene switch
    Hey everyone :D This is my first prediction…so I put a lot of effort into it, and it’s not the best. That’s all you really need to know.
    I figure there are a few problems, but I couldn’t quite work everything out perfectly xD

    Naruto Chapter 629 prediction:
    The Final Showdowns Begin!

    (Scene shows the battlefield. Shinobi are looking to the sky and panicking)

    Kiba: What the hell… is this…?!

    Naruto: [Kakashi-sensei…]

    (Lightning, extremely heavy winds begin to batter the alliance, Naruto is still struggling to control the chakra to help them dodge)

    Naruto: (Falls to one knee) Damn…I don’t have enough of Kurama's chakra left to control the cloaks much longer…

    Shikamaru: (shielding his face from the wind) Naruto, this isn’t good! We need to execute the plan as soon as possible, but in conditions like these…!

    (Juubi roars, making Shikamaru and the others stumble, some sort of transformation starts taking place)

    Shikamaru: This isn’t good! [Dad….I don’t think even you could have predicted this level of power…what do I do…?] (pained expression, struggling to come up with something)

    (Cuts to Madara on the Juubi)

    Madara: [Tch…Obito, all that talk and you’re taken away from the battlefield by one man…] Besides that… With him coming to the battlefield, you all seem even more like specks of dust. (Vicious grin)

    Naruto: (looks up at madara) What are you talking about? Who?

    (In Naruto’s mind)

    Kurama: This chakra… the hokage…and…?! (eyes widen)

    Naruto: (Shock) What... did you say?!

    (Exit naruto’s mind. A flash fades, and a hand is seen on Naruto’s shoulder.)

    (Wide shot of the four hokage and Taka standing, an exhausted Naruto kneeling in front, looking back at Minato.)

    Naruto: DAD?!

    (Shows reaction of other Konoha shinobi)

    Minato: (Smiles down at Naruto) You seem to be having some trouble, Naruto.

    Naruto: (Silent for a moment, then speaks) How… (looks behind minato to the others) The four…hokage…

    Third: It’s been a while, hasn’t it, naruto?

    Naruto: Old man! How are you all edo tensei?!(makes eye contact with Sasuke and Orochimaru.)

    Naruto: Sasuke and Orochimaru…? (stares in shock, then looks angry) Are you here to help Madara?

    Sasuke: (stares back solemnly)[Naruto…]

    Orochimaru: (grins slyly) No… interestingly enough, this time… we fight on the same side.

    Naruto: (glares) [I don’t trust Orochimaru…]

    (Sudden blast of wind hits them)

    Naruto: I guess we have no other choice… (looks to the juubi and madara along with the others)

    ~Cuts to Kakashi and Obito~

    (They land on their feet in the alternate dimension)

    Kakashi: Looks like you don’t have Madara and the Juubi to back you up. This time…I won’t show any mercy! (pulls a kunai in sync with obito, they clash face-to face)

    *Caption: Kakashi vs Obito! The Final Showdown Begins!*

    /END

    What do you think? Cut me a little slack since it’s my first time writing a prediction. I think it’s a bit long, but I tried to fit in as much as possible. I think I had too many actions, haha! xD
     
         
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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    short but very good effort since that you are new like me
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    interesting
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Amazing & Interesting, good work sir.
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Very interesting only wish is was a bit longer
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Thank you ^^
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    great predication
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Very interesting and i enjoy reading it , keep it up bro :D
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Great prediction
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Interesting prediction indeed. Characterizations and pace in your prediction are handed well, although you didn't focus too much on making very detailed descriptions of scenery, actions but still action is easy to follow so this is good prediction I said. You should work more to improve next predictions but this is still well done man

    However I just read that it was your first prediction, so I can say that this very good prediction for you first try

    Keep it up man
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Great for the first one. good job
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Thanks to all of you. I'm glad it got such positive feedback.
    To KCMNaruto, thanks for the tips, I'll try applying them next time.

    Oh, and by the way... I'm a girl. xD But I have no problem with being called dude or bro, honestly, lol.
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Any idea when is Naruto 629 is coming? Lots of sites comes out with predictions though.
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Too damn short!
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Haha, sorry, sorry. I'll make it longer next time. xD
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Quote Originally Posted by lillabees View Post
    Any idea when is Naruto 629 is coming? Lots of sites comes out with predictions though.
    Ah, yeah. It's coming out on the 8/9th of May. I thought I already responded to you but it didn't show up here... so I dunno. *shrug*
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Very nice. I want more!
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    this prediction actually seems like it could happen.

    good prediction.
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Nice first prediction but yes a lil short
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    cool prediction
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    its super awesome.
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    I could see that happening easily
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Its interestin.
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Too short but apart from that it's the best prediction I've read yet! Good job
     
         

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    Re: [NARUTO 629] The Final Showdowns Begin! (First prediction)

    Good job man! Loved every part of it!
     
         

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