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    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Series, All Previous Chapters [In Chronological Reading Order]:

    The Legendary Sage of Konoha;

    [1] Chapter 1

    [2] Chapter 2

    [3] Chapter 3

    [4] Chapter 4

    [5] Chapter 5

    [6] Chapter 6

    --->
    Sasuke Chronicles;

    [7] Chapter 1

    --->
    [9] Chapter 7

    [10] Chapter 8

    [11] Chapter 9

    [12] Chapter 10

    [13] Chapter 11

    --->
    Kakashi Chronicles;

    [14] Chapter 1

    [15] Chapter 12

    --->
    --->
    [18] Chapter 13

    [19] Chapter 14

    [20] Chapter 15

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    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns;

    [22] Chapter 1

    [23] Chapter 2

    [24] Chapter 3

    [25] Chapter 4

    [26] Chapter 5

    [27] Chapter 6

    [28] Chapter 7

    [29] Chapter 8

    [30] Chapter 9

    [31] Chapter 10

    [32] Chapter 11

    [33] Chapter 12

    [34] Chapter 13

    [35] Chapter 14

    [36] Chapter 15


    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns, Chapter 16;
    The Final Coffin Appears!:


    After sealing away Tobirama with his Reaper Death Seal, Naruto had not hesitated one minute to move on to his next target, as he had fired up a totally new jutsu, the Super Deadly Reaper Seal Rasengan!

    Naruto: Arrrrrrgh!

    Charging off at insane speed, Naruto smashed the Rasengan right into Orochimaru's chest before anyone could realize what happened.

    Naruto: That's two down!!!

    Orochimaru: Impressive...

    As his Rasengan was still in touch with Orochimaru, his body slowly began to disappear, as if sucked into the core of it. In a few seconds, Orochimaru was completely gone... He had been sealed away!!

    Naruto: Your turn!

    With the Rasengan still intact, Naruto turned around as he aimed straight for Hashirama, flying over to him and landing on the arm of the statue. Zigzagging between the countless roots Hashirama sent at him, Naruto finally reach out for him as he smashed the Rasengan into his chest.

    Hashirama: Well done, until we meet again in the afterlife...

    Naruto: Don't worry, I'll find away to set free your souls for good. I have a feeling we will meet again, Shodaime Hokage!

    With a smile on his face, Hashirama slowly vanished into the Rasengan as Naruto leaped off from the disappearing wooden statue. As he was still in mid-air, he set his sight for Madara, as he dived in straight at him at immense speed. In responds, Madara combined his Susanoo swords with fire style techniques, completely blocking Naruto's advance.

    Naruto: Heh!

    Just as Madara was about to hit Naruto with the Susanoo sword, Naruto then disappeared as he reappeared from within the Susanoo behind Madara, as he struck his Rasengan into his back.

    Madara: !!... Not bad... Make sure you actually find the key to peace, kid... Only Hashirama had been able to best me in battle twice...

    Naruto: I will.

    As Naruto landed on the ground again, the immense forest around him began to break down and diminish as Minato, Kushina, Hiruzen and Jiraiya appeared all around him, charging at him from all directions.

    Naruto: Perfect...

    Minato: This is your chance, do it now son!

    As they were inches away from him, Naruto preformed some quick hand-seals with his left hand, as four shadow clones appeared all around him with a Sealing Rasengan each in hand, racing right for the remaining Edo Tensei.

    Naruto: Gotcha... *Grind*

    Timing it perfectly, three of the clones managed to hit their target as Hiruzen, Jiraiya and Kushina slowly started to disappear into the Rasengan. Minato however managed to dodge the attack by teleporting through his FTG.

    Naruto: Old man, Ero-Sennin, Mom... Thank you for believing in me. I will not fail you!

    Hiruzen: Never give up, always trust your instincts.

    Jiraiya: Gehehehe, you have surpassed me by miles Naruto. Until we meet again! Oh, and tell Tsunade I said hey, will you?

    Kushina: Naruto, my son... My lovely son... If we only had more time in life together.

    Tears of joy, sadness and pride began to stream down her chin as she reached out her hand towards Naruto, whom then met it with his own. The body of his mother slowly began to vanish as all that was left was her warm smile and her hand touching his, before she was completely gone.

    Naruto: I-... *Sniff* Will make you all pride, I promise you from the bottom of my heart!

    Barely holding his act together, a tear-drop fell from his right eye towards the ground, as he felt the presence of Minato, appearing behind him, the moment the tear left his eye. He turned around in an instance with the Sealing Rasengan still in his right hand, and clashed it with the Rasengan Minato had in his right.

    Minato: It's all over now son... I'm so proud of you. I believe you will become the greatest Hokage to ever live in Konoha! Until we meet again.

    Naruto: Thanks dad.

    Naruto's Sealing Rasengan slowly overpowered and devoured Minato's Rasengan, as the Rasengan vanished into the seal, before Minato quickly followed. As he was gone, Naruto's tear hit the ground, as the final remains of the dense forest created by Hashirama earlier, vanished.

    Naruto: *Inhales Deeply* Thank you... Thank you all... I will find the key to peace, and bring on a new era of harmony and true peace; I promise you that!

    Reaching his right thumb up in the air, a big smile formed on his face as his Bijou Mode chakra cape was waving back and forth in the light breeze that had slipped though the cracks in the floor, wall and the roof.

    Kabuto: Well, well, well... Seems like you've managed to end the fun already! Guess it was about time I showed up here then.

    Naruto: !!

    From behind Naruto, Kabuto's mind had returned to him, as Kabuto slowly got back up on his feet again. Naruto turned around to face him, as he slowly approached the barrier.

    Naruto: Kabuto...

    Kabuto: Who did you expect, *Smirk.* I had to return eventually, it has been like three hours since I let lose the Edo Tensei at you again after all... I take it that they were impressed by your ability?? Heh, doesn't matter anyways now I guess...

    As Naruto got closer and closer to the barrier protecting Kabuto, a familiar feeling struck though him, as Naruto realized that one of his clone's knowledge and experience had returned to him.

    Naruto: !!

    Kabuto: ...

    Naruto: I... So that's what you've been up to. Damn you, you scum! I will rip you apart when I get this barrier down, you hear me!

    Kabuto: Hmm... Things didn't go exactly as I planned, but I guess things turned out fair enough.

    Naruto: So that was your plan all along... It's still not enough to stop us from defe-...

    Kabuto: Heh, I managed to get rid of the old hag Tsunade and kill the other old Kages too, including a lot of your friends! I even managed to deal with Akashi as planned, although that turned out rather unfortunately with Kakashi awakening Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan and all... You could not protect your friends, and you're barely able to stand on your feet yourself now, and you're trying to tell me that my plans failed?! If you ask me, it seems like they succeeded!... This is just a minor setback, victory will still be mine, and there is nothing you can do to stop me! You hear that?! Nothing!!

    Naruto: Are you ready to face me yet, you coward!

    Stretching his hands out in the air, Naruto let of a carefree attitude, as if mocking Kabuto to fight him.

    Naruto: I mean, I've dealt with anything and everything you've thrown at me! It's not like you have much of a choice left now, do you? You've used up every one of your trick, Kabuto!

    Pointing his finger at Kabuto with high confidence, Kabuto then responded by breaking out in maniacally laughter, as Naruto gave him an intense glare.

    Naruto: What can it possibly be that you have to throw at me now if I may ask? Or are you laughing in fear because you'll finally have to face me now? Hah, all your plans have failed Kabuto! Everything you've put forward has been crushed by the alliance. Don't you see it? The power of many will triumphant over the power of one! You might as well just give up alread-...

    Kabuto: You fool! You child, you fu*king little prick! Don't try to lecture me, when you certainly have no clue yourself, Naruto-Kun! This fight is far from over I assure you... Kehehehe, this fight has only just begun!! You've already forgot why we're here in the first place, no??

    Naruto: ...

    Kabuto: Prepare yourself for the challenge of your life Naruto, tremble in fear before his might! I give you- Uzumaki Naruto, the Sage of Six Paths!

    Naruto: !!

    As he said, another coffin appeared between the barrier and Naruto, as Kabuto pushed the remains of the Sage of Six Paths off the stone table behind it, and seated himself on top of it.

    Kabuto: This will be the end! The end of you, the end of the world, and the end of everyone you know and love! I will reign supreme!

    The coffin blasted open as powerful chakra flew in all direction, forcing Naruto to cover his face. The man stepped outside into the light, revealing the face of a man who looked identical to Naruto himself!

    "So it has come to this..."

    Naruto: It's-...

    Kabuto had resurrected the Sage of Six Paths himself!

    *The final Coffin appears as Naruto's fight goes into a new stage!!*

    ~ End Chapter 16.


    * The resurrection ritual a success?! How will Naruto be able to deal with this new threat that is the Sage of Six Paths himself? Find out, Next Time! *

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    Fun Facts & Author's Note:

    1: I know that this is a short chapter by my standards... a very short one in fact. The reason for this is simple, It had to end with the Sage of Six Paths getting resurrected, but I didn't have anything else to fill into this one beside what it already contained... It was quick, simple and epic (IMO), and that was just the way I wanted it to be. If you look back at my original work (the first 15 chapters), you'll find that I didn't write too big of chapters to begin with, and the very first ones were around this size. But fear not! My upcoming chapters will be bigger for sure, and even if I doubt I'll ever be writing gigantic chapters like chapter 10 again (you never know though, lol), they'll at least be the same size as chapter 11-15 have been, if not bigger. I got a lot of stuff happening from now on, so the next few chapters will be stuffed with a lot of content for sure! ;)

    2: With this chapter, I'm certain that I won't have to worry about what Kishi does in the manga ever again (him doing the same or getting something done before I get there), but like on earlier occasions, you might never know what he'll pull off xD

    3: I originally planned for the Edo Konoha Shinobi's fight with Naruto to last longer (as in content/chapter length, not in number of chapters), but felt that I didn't have too much to show without dragging it on for too long (with the conversations at least). I might have done some more fighting, but in the end, I felt that I wanted to get the story going as I was more eager to get to this part where the SoSP gets resurrected. On the other hand, I guess we'll get to see a lot more of them in the manga, so it could have been too similar, or looked pale in comparison, if I did a different approach with more fighting.

    4: The next chapter (chapter 17) is still in its early stage, and I've only written about a few lines of it as of now. I'll pick it up again soon, but as of now, I want to focus on my daily life for the remaining part of time I have left here (got two weeks left of this study, and after that I'll head home for "good"). For those of you who don't already know, I'm currently close to the end of my course which I'm attending further up north in my country (which is also the current location of where I live), a course which is a one year study... So as you might figure, I want to focus my time on my friends here for the next two weeks. I'll be home at the 13th of May, and I'll pick up chapter 17 shortly after that and aim to release it sometime in May! ^_^

    Hope you liked this chapter (even with its short length), thumbs up if you enjoyed, and as always people, have an awesome day!
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Love it
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Love it! Keep it up bro
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    that was a sweet chapter
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    loved it especially that old font
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    It was very good. I don't think you should have released a chapter until you know the Hokage's fighting style. It would have been nice to have a longer chapter to read... But like you said, you didn't want to drag it on, which I get.

    Again, very well done as usual.
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    It was short and quick but epic
    Loved it
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Quote Originally Posted by Zanka View Post
    Love it
    Glad to hear =]

    Quote Originally Posted by Danielgf04 View Post
    Love it! Keep it up bro
    Thanks, and I will ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by UchihaKyru View Post
    that was a sweet chapter
    Thanks =)

    Quote Originally Posted by Horidora Chan View Post
    loved it especially that old font
    Haha, thanks =P I know you're not a fan of that font, but I prefer it over the normal one for my chapters =]

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    It was very good. I don't think you should have released a chapter until you know the Hokage's fighting style. It would have been nice to have a longer chapter to read... But like you said, you didn't want to drag it on, which I get.

    Again, very well done as usual.
    Thanks =) Well yeah, that could have turned out both ways really, as I would have had to wait with my release and possibly end up with something too similar. Also, I finished this chapter with chapter 11-15, which was done in the end of March. The reason for this being shorter was basically because Naruto was suppose to do short process with them the moment he fired up his new rasengan... If I was to make it longer, I would have had to end the previous chapter earlier, in order to add in some more fight in this one before Naruto's new rasengan.

    Quote Originally Posted by pandu View Post
    It was short and quick but epic
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    Thanks, glad you liked it ^_^
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Great Job Writing
     
         

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    s*** just got real
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by FaHaD 5212 View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by danivass View Post
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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Nice one once again but very very short, shortest one ever i think hardly took 2 min to read
    There is nothing much in this one,edo sealed and SOSP revived, thats all so . . . . . Every edo got a nice end, specially hashi and madara. ( you typed best,where madara sealed away) it think it should be beat). Dont know why but i have a feeling we will see these 8 edos again in future.
    Talk between naruto and all nice too,bit emotionaly .
    Finally SO6P back. Cant wait 2 see him in action/ GOD vs naruto. Just one thing want 2 ask, how will kabuto control SO6P?? I mean so6p create all jutsu,he is a god. . .how can kabuto make him work undercontrol??
    Nice work once again, keep it up and release next chapter asap
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Quote Originally Posted by +Kyon+ View Post
    Nice one once again but very very short, shortest one ever i think hardly took 2 min to read
    There is nothing much in this one,edo sealed and SOSP revived, thats all so . . . . . Every edo got a nice end, specially hashi and madara. ( you typed best,where madara sealed away) it think it should be beat). Dont know why but i have a feeling we will see these 8 edos again in future.
    Talk between naruto and all nice too,bit emotionaly .
    Finally SO6P back. Cant wait 2 see him in action/ GOD vs naruto. Just one thing want 2 ask, how will kabuto control SO6P?? I mean so6p create all jutsu,he is a god. . .how can kabuto make him work undercontrol??
    Nice work once again, keep it up and release next chapter asap
    Glad you liked it my friend =P
    Yep, you're actually on to something there with Kabuto losing control, you'll see next chapter
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    This is indeed crazy-a Rasengan that once upon contact; acts as its own version of the reaper sealing and I see now, hence its name and another thing that sets this Rasengan apart is the fact that it continues to remain intact even after contact. That is really thinking outside the box and it is very interesting. I liked Hashirama’s parting words. To my surprise, it seems as though Madara had somewhat of a change of heart which is shocking as it appeared as though his heart was forever hardened ^^ As expected Minato would be the most difficult to capture via his space-time jutsu. I liked the method you used to catch Minato. I was wondering just when Naruto would receive knowledge from that one clone and finally its come lol For Kabuto to not be so unfazed must mean he still has something(s) planned. Wow, Naruto’s attempt to Kabuto raddled really worked as his reply unstable lol Okay, this was absolutely not expected and I almost can’t believe it. I’m shocked that Kabuto would be able to find some type of Rikou remains in order to resurrect him and he also looks like Naruto?!!! Also, Naruto has been fighting for so long and now has to fight literally the best. Even if Naruto was at full potential I’m sure it would be the most difficult fight he ever faced and yet he isn’t thus I can’t imagine just how he will be able to fight! Nevertheless, I think this was one of your best as I loved how battle oriented it was but also because of what you chose to do with this chapter-phenomenal! The next chapter is going to be sick I’m sure

    P.S. You had very minor misspellings which I’m not even going to bother to point out as I’ve had them as well plenty of times-its natural however there was one word used completely incorrectly. Naruto’s quote "I-... *Sniff* Will make you all pride, I promise you from the bottom of my heart!"

    The word in bold-pride was supposed to be proud I’m thinking. Its your choice if you want to change it just though you may want to know
     
         
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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    This is indeed crazy-a Rasengan that once upon contact; acts as its own version of the reaper sealing and I see now, hence its name and another thing that sets this Rasengan apart is the fact that it continues to remain intact even after contact. That is really thinking outside the box and it is very interesting. I liked Hashirama’s parting words. To my surprise, it seems as though Madara had somewhat of a change of heart which is shocking as it appeared as though his heart was forever hardened ^^ As expected Minato would be the most difficult to capture via his space-time jutsu. I liked the method you used to catch Minato. I was wondering just when Naruto would receive knowledge from that one clone and finally its come lol For Kabuto to not be so unfazed must mean he still has something(s) planned. Wow, Naruto’s attempt to Kabuto raddled really worked as his reply unstable lol Okay, this was absolutely not expected and I almost can’t believe it. I’m shocked that Kabuto would be able to find some type of Rikou remains in order to resurrect him and he also looks like Naruto?!!! Also, Naruto has been fighting for so long and now has to fight literally the best. Even if Naruto was at full potential I’m sure it would be the most difficult fight he ever faced and yet he isn’t thus I can’t imagine just how he will be able to fight! Nevertheless, I think this was one of your best as I loved how battle oriented it was but also because of what you chose to do with this chapter-phenomenal! The next chapter is going to be sick I’m sure

    P.S. You had very minor misspellings which I’m not even going to bother to point out as I’ve had them as well plenty of times-its natural however there was one word used completely incorrectly. Naruto’s quote "I-... *Sniff* Will make you all pride, I promise you from the bottom of my heart!"

    The word in bold-pride was supposed to be proud I’m thinking. Its your choice if you want to change it just though you may want to know
    Yeah, it's also known as the Wormhole Rasengan, but that's not official just yet =p It was basically just a crazy idea I had, but I'm glad that I seemed to pull it off without it being unbelievable.
    Thank mate, really appreciate it ^_^ Yep, I got a lot of things stored up for you guys for sure

    Oh shoot! I knew there was going to be something wrong when I, after having gone through the whole thing once only to see my internet freeze and the auto-save not getting everything, just edited the ones I remembered (that my correction program won't take out) and posted it. Too bad it's too late to edit now, but at least I know it's there.

    Again, thanks for an awesome review mate, really appreciate it =)
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Quote Originally Posted by Michael92 View Post
    Yeah, it's also known as the Wormhole Rasengan, but that's not official just yet =p It was basically just a crazy idea I had, but I'm glad that I seemed to pull it off without it being unbelievable.
    Thank mate, really appreciate it ^_^ Yep, I got a lot of things stored up for you guys for sure

    Oh shoot! I knew there was going to be something wrong when I, after having gone through the whole thing once only to see my internet freeze and the auto-save not getting everything, just edited the ones I remembered (that my correction program won't take out) and posted it. Too bad it's too late to edit now, but at least I know it's there.

    Again, thanks for an awesome review mate, really appreciate it =)
    Nice to know about that alternative name which also sounds cool. Yes kudos to you and I can't wait to see what what else you have to offer ^^

    Please, that error was so minimal and it happens to the best of us don't worry about it-I just wanted to let you know in case you felt the need to edit if you were able but I informed you too late. However, its nothing and your writing is just perfectly fine and understandable

    Your welcome and again you don not need to reply to this post lol
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    I'm months late, but it's still so great. Your style of writing is awesome and you should really keep this up. You're literally so creative it's crazy!
     
         

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    I'm months late, but it's still so great. Your style of writing is awesome and you should really keep this up. You're literally so creative it's crazy!
    Thanks mate, your views are always appreciated, late or not I have Chapter 17 90 % done, more or less, so I might release it tomorrow! =)
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Ok, so the story never continued after the interval
    Haha....very short chapter indeed.

    You sealed them off in a jiffy. I mean, I wouldn't prefered some more action b4 being sealed away.....but I understand...it would only mean extending the series haha.

    I liked the carefree Naruto here. Matched his personality.
    However I would've preferred Kabuto's dialogues to be more 'evil' (if you know what I mean )

    So now, Naruto vs Naruto? More like Naruto vs Menma?? .
    Its gunna be epic!!! Hope there is audience who watch this match and get confused whom to cheer lol xD
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 16 [31]

    Quote Originally Posted by Flash07 View Post
    Ok, so the story never continued after the interval
    Haha....very short chapter indeed.

    You sealed them off in a jiffy. I mean, I wouldn't prefered some more action b4 being sealed away.....but I understand...it would only mean extending the series haha.

    I liked the carefree Naruto here. Matched his personality.
    However I would've preferred Kabuto's dialogues to be more 'evil' (if you know what I mean )

    So now, Naruto vs Naruto? More like Naruto vs Menma?? .
    Its gunna be epic!!! Hope there is audience who watch this match and get confused whom to cheer lol xD
    Interval?? What interval?? You mean between Chapter 15 and 16?? It jumped there for the sake of Naruto getting a chance to talk to them for longer without me having to portrait it... Or maybe you're referring to Jiraiya, Sakura and the rest heading over to Kakashi, or Gaara and Killerbee at the headquarter, or even Sasuke and the rest on their way to back the rest up, whom are trying to get to Naruto?? If that's what you're referring to, then I can say that It's only Sasuke and the rest in the cave whom will make another appearance during this war arc.

    Yeah, I had to think of something or else it would have become too long. I also got a ton of chapters with the SoSP to come, so still much to look forward to

    Truest me, Kabuto is going to get more and more crazy as the chapters goes on

    Haha, read on, that's all I can say ^_^
     
         

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