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    Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Who Is He !?
    This is the Full chapter 3 (No Parts)
    ~The Previous Chapter~
    Charcter Appearance's .....
    [Sally]
    Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
    [Ageria]
    Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
    [Valton]
    Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.


    He walks to the side of the bed and lifts the bed and throws it aside easily and Sally screams as loud as she can in fear.
    All she can see is a person standing unable to see his face due to the thundering-lightening ... a moment of silence remains till the lightening stops and as soon as the lightning stops "Blood" a voice that seems to be heard from all surroundings ...and the lights turn back on and the door breaks down and Ageria enters the house repeating Sally's name.. Ageria finds Sally in the Room that is at the end of the hall way lying there Eye's wide open as if seen a ghost and suddenly faints.

    [Sally Hears a the same voice repeating "Blood" countless times]
    Suddenly wakes up .. Its early morning the sun has yet to rise, She finds her self in an un common place(Hospital) and looks at the side and Algeria is sleeping right next to her Bed side ... She smiles suddenly someone is sitting on the window facing Sally. Sally could barely see anything except red light reflecting from his eyes ... Sally screams for help and no one arrives ..."No can hear you" Said Valton. Sally keeps screaming for help,
    "How pathetic" Says the unknown guest to Sally's room. "Who are you !?...And What do you want from me" Asked Sally In a screaming and fearful voice...Valton Instantly Appears next to Sally and says "Who am I ? and What do i want ?".

    "Well My Name is Valton...and Oh I don't need any thing from you...[Smirks] what i need is the one who is after you" Said Valton. Sally moves backwards in fear ... "Don't worry... its not like i am going to hurt you or anything" Said Valton. "I need you to come with me.. before he comes looking for you again" Said Valton. " I'm not going with you, i'm not leaving Algeria here" Said Sally in a angered tone.
    "Algeria ?... Oh you mean this human .. don't worry he will be safe as long as you are not with him" said Valton. "What do you mean as long as i am not with him !?" asked Sally in a shouting tone.

    "Well if you are so desperate to know than i shall explain ...
    You see about 1300 years ago the world world was set into fear by these unknown monsters which were called "Jails"..
    the thing is if one of the Jails was to be fed on a human the human that was fed would itself become a part of the Jails... years later 5 mere humans researched on these Jails and found out as much as they could and when they far succeeded the knowledge of Jails they started an Organization Named as Corkz. Their main goal was to Hunt down Jails... by making killer machines ... the killer machined were Human bodies in which Jail's cells and flesh was planted in their bodies taking years for the body to absorb the cells and the killing machine was ready like this they created countless Killing machines and gave each of them name's ........ and once the name Jails was completely vanished from the world the organization had nothing left ... years passed and people nearly forgot about the organization Until the day the Organization decided to make the world we live on be the world of Jails ... the World govorners could not accept this they tried to object to the Organization but failed Countless times as the Organization Created countless Jails The word population rapidly started to decrease until one of the Organization's killer Machine turned against the Organization and he eliminated all the other Killing Machines and as well as all the Organization .. And the Organization was dead and that same Killing machine Killed all the existing Jails and world peace was once again achieved .. as time passed the Machines name was forgotten and so was the name Jails. Later a Jail appeared and destructed many humans and died unknowingly the name Jail was then known as VAMPIRES ....


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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Not bad bro
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Not bad. Not bad at all.

    You have a follower.
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    m interesting backstrory , like the apocalypstic theme.
    good job!
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by NobleRider View Post
    m interesting backstrory , like the apocalypstic theme.
    good job!
    Thank you
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Quote Originally Posted by EliteRamenNinja View Post
    Not bad. Not bad at all.

    You have a follower.
    Follower huh
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Nice One....
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

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    Nice One....
    Why ty
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    cool chapter
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

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    cool chapter
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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    bravo i hope these arent twilight vampires lol
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    i like vampire fics.great job anyways.
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Love the backstory
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

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    bravo i hope these arent twilight vampires lol
    Hell No
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Ooh vampires! Shit just got serious.nice fanfic bro.
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Sorry so late. I was thrown by the vampire part, but I am still enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    I was wondering how Sally would get out of her situation and luckily for her, Algeria appeared at the right time. The next events that were to unfold was definitely surprising. This FF finally took a huge twist and is beginning to shape a plot. So Valton may or may not be an antagonist? I wonder what will happen next-good job! ^^
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 2

    Very good, just as good as the others.
     
         

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