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    Season in my mind

    Everything feels different now
    It feels as if I'm just drifting along the coast of life
    Were we all meet
    That place labeled as "heaven"
    Being pulled apart in diff directions
    Everything is circling me
    My mind starting to overflow
    My mind screaming out
    Pulling me down
    Telling me I'm alone
    I feel awake
    But I'm sleeping
    Hearing everything around me
    The silence is so loud
    I wish sometimes i can just choose and reright the role I play
    What I's my purpose
    In life ur born to fit a role
    What is mine?
    Have to break out of this amor
    I want to feel loved
    Love
    Love
    Walk away from reality
    Throw it away
    Just wanting to run away
    Feeling like my life is a chess board
    I'm repeating all my moves
    My mind lost it's meaning
    It's strive
    I need to find out what to do
    I need to predict the outcome
    Losing sleep
    Thinking bout everything
    Hiding it all away
    When I step into my existence
    Start at 9 end at 3
    I wanna let it go
    Dramatic music playing in the background
    Never wanted to be so cold
    Wondering what was wrong wit me
    I want to lock myself inside
    Drowning in my thoughts
    Everything is just so confusing
    Let it go
    Anything is better then to be alone
    God this melody is beautiful
    Haunting making me more focused but dazed a dangerous combo cuz I might giv any second
    The second melody starts off slow
    Why does everything I belive in or give faith in is so distant
    Why do I deny my hopelessness in myself
    All I feel is this grove swaying wanting me blending wit the beat the instruments god the voice
    Only thing keeping me going
    Only one
    I try to feel lik I belong here
    But I'm just as scared as the next
    Wash away the dirt all these shadows that surround me to become clean
    Hoping this will clear the way
    Cleansing my body
    I'm lost in this nightmare called a "paradise"
    The next ballad is a more angelic then the last being thrown into the fade
    The drums piano gituars that voice
    Never finding away to heal myself
    Heal my soul
    Just letting the lyrics take me
    Where I've gone b4 but never at this velocity never in this form
    I feel like I'm being drugged wit this mixture of beats instruments and ..the voice
    It's so loud I feel almost not alone anymore
    Releasing me from myself
    I can't hold on from this feeling
    But then it's taken away as the song has ended

    Left dazed and sleepy the session is over
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    is thsi a poem u rote?
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    Could you explain it in your own words to me? You summed up quite a lot.
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    Quote Originally Posted by Dęvîa Puęrî View Post
    Everything feels different now
    It feels as if I'm just drifting along the coast of life
    Were we all meet
    That place labeled as "heaven"
    Being pulled apart in diff directions
    Everything is circling me
    My mind starting to overflow
    My mind screaming out
    Pulling me down
    Telling me I'm alone
    I feel awake
    But I'm sleeping
    Hearing everything around me
    The silence is so loud
    I wish sometimes i can just choose and reright the role I play
    What I's my purpose
    In life ur born to fit a role
    What is mine?
    Have to break out of this amor
    I want to feel loved
    Love
    Love
    Walk away from reality
    Throw it away
    Just wanting to run away
    Feeling like my life is a chess board
    I'm repeating all my moves
    My mind lost it's meaning
    It's strive
    I need to find out what to do
    I need to predict the outcome
    Losing sleep
    Thinking bout everything
    Hiding it all away
    When I step into my existence
    Start at 9 end at 3
    I wanna let it go
    Dramatic music playing in the background
    Never wanted to be so cold
    Wondering what was wrong wit me
    I want to lock myself inside
    Drowning in my thoughts
    Everything is just so confusing
    Let it go
    Anything is better then to be alone
    God this melody is beautiful
    Haunting making me more focused but dazed a dangerous combo cuz I might giv any second
    The second melody starts off slow
    Why does everything I belive in or give faith in is so distant
    Why do I deny my hopelessness in myself
    All I feel is this grove swaying wanting me blending wit the beat the instruments god the voice
    Only thing keeping me going
    Only one
    I try to feel lik I belong here
    But I'm just as scared as the next
    Wash away the dirt all these shadows that surround me to become clean
    Hoping this will clear the way
    Cleansing my body
    I'm lost in this nightmare called a "paradise"
    The next ballad is a more angelic then the last being thrown into the fade
    The drums piano gituars that voice
    Never finding away to heal myself
    Heal my soul
    Just letting the lyrics take me
    Where I've gone b4 but never at this velocity never in this form
    I feel like I'm being drugged wit this mixture of beats instruments and ..the voice
    It's so loud I feel almost not alone anymore
    Releasing me from myself
    I can't hold on from this feeling
    But then it's taken away as the song has ended

    Left dazed and sleepy the session is over
    i like that word
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    Quote Originally Posted by 0TailBijuu View Post
    is thsi a poem u rote?
    Yes0.0 lml
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    Quote Originally Posted by the big boss View Post
    i like that word
    It likes u 2
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    Quote Originally Posted by Valen View Post
    Could you explain it in your own words to me? You summed up quite a lot.
    Well my mind tends to drift a lot on diff topics expceially when I'm listening to music it's like everything is flashing in my eyes the music is guiding my emotions there for guiding my moods and how I write


    I feel as though everywhere my mind just wonders
    Like life isn't real anymore idk I was OD out of it
    I Dnt remember shit lmao
    It just feels weird as though I'm not real I'm imaginary I know I sound dumb lml
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    Quote Originally Posted by Dęvîa Puęrî View Post
    Well my mind tends to drift a lot on diff topics expceially when I'm listening to music it's like everything is flashing in my eyes the music is guiding my emotions there for guiding my moods and how I write


    I feel as though everywhere my mind just wonders
    Like life isn't real anymore idk I was OD out of it
    I Dnt remember shit lmao
    It just feels weird as though I'm not real I'm imaginary I know I sound dumb lml
    Emotions through music. I can relate.
     
         

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    almost like its another
    world.. my very own world.
     

    Re: Season in my mind

    Still producing the goods I see.

    Keep me posted dude, I'd love to read all your work.
     
         

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    Re: Season in my mind

    what a super long poem but... great otherwise
     
         

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