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    >.> meh. This name sucks.. Voltron's Avatar
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    A Tag attempt

    My first tag..... tell me what you think! I feel the left side is empty......
    CNC is welcome!!!

    Hopefully I will get better
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    thats pretty awsome my man... WOW Always and forever !!!
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    Yeah it's pretty cool xD.
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    Quote Originally Posted by zexion333 View Post
    thats pretty awsome my man... WOW Always and forever !!!
    Thanks^^
    Quote Originally Posted by AngelicYami View Post
    Yeah it's pretty cool xD.
    thank you
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    I feel like there needs to be more red, like te color of the lightning, in the background! But, I like it ^_^
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    Main text is good, maybe some sub text instead of that really tiny writing, i don't quite like really small text. It also needs to be closer to the render so you are looking at the same general area of the tag, not glancing back and forth from the render and text.

    It's nice though for a first tag, the problem is that the dimensions of the tag are much too big. If you reduced the height and width, along with the render, there wouldn't be all that emptiness on the left hand side. It would be much easier to fill in, plus you have the text there to fill in some space.

    The lightning off his arms are a nice touch, you could even make his eyes glow more with a soft yellow brush on low opacity. Flow is nice, background doesn't look to bad but it needs more detail, a little more work on blending and depth and you will be all set.

    Keep up the good work.
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    Fantastic stuff! Keep it up
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    Whats this

    It has no blending terrible lightning and looks like its missing a bit of color you may want to use the dodge tool. And why the size so big? try 400x220 or 200 thats just me...
     
         

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    Re: A Tag attempt

    For a first time tag, that is awesome.
    I like it quite a lot!
     
         

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