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    Naruto Sedai(Generations) Chapter 1: A New World and Old Faces

    Naruto Sedai(Generations)


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    It has been 7 years since the final battle of the 4th Ninja War. The landscape of the Ninja World as change dramatically, the time of strife and class between the villages is gone, and a time of peace has come to the land. The Shinobi Alliance still stands strong but with one notable problem. The Hidden Mist Village, a strong member of the alliance, has become occupied by the Hidden Leaf's Missing-Nin Sasuke Uchiha and the group of followers he has amassed.

    If anyone wants to collaborate with me on drawing this fanfiction, then just let me know and we can go to work on it. Currently I already have 18 chapters of this fan fiction written, and I will work to upload them at least once or twice per week. I hope everyone enjoys it!

    Please remember this is only a fanfiction, all the characters and story are owned by Masashi Kishimoto, Weekly Shohen Jump, and Viz Media. I write it just for fun, and I want no profit from it. I tried to make things very accurate or possible to happen in the story line, but most are just thoughts and theories of mine. And be honest; tell me what you think of it.

    Naruto: Generations
    Chapter 1: New World, Same Faces


    (Panel: Opens up to Gaara sitting at a table and a sand ninja walks up to him.)


    Sand Ninja: Lord Kazekage, The Leaf’s Hokage has just arrived…

    Gaara: Good let him in, so that we can get started...

    (Panel: It jumps to a picture of the door as it opens.)

    (Panel: Next frame is a collage of clothing but not the face. The person is wearing a black robe with orange flames. Also it changes to a shadow of three people with their backs turned. )

    Gaara: I see you have finally made it…

    (Panel: Jumps to a frame of Naruto, Sai, and Shino standing at the table)

    Gaara: ….Naruto

    Naruto: Sorry guys I was late, so shall we begin…

    (Panel: Naruto takes a seat, while Sai and Shino stand behind him)

    Gaara: Indeed, we all know why we are here, and that is to address the issue of Sasuke Uchiha and his followers.

    (Panel: The frame changes to all the kages and village leaders sitting around the table, the Hidden Rock are missing.)


    Hidden Rain Representative:
    He has become a thorn in our sides we try to grow as a village; we are always worried that we will be attacked by some of his shinobi.

    Hidden Grass Leader: I feel the same way; I have lost countless shinobi trying to track him down. With Sasuke's forces with him he will try and destroy us all one by one. We have also noticed even some of the Hidden Mist shinobi working with him!

    (Panel: Frame changes to all the leaders discussing the situation)

    (Panel: Naruto leaps from his seat)


    Naruto: Don’t continue wasting your men on Sasuke! He is a Missing-Nin of the Leaf, which makes him the responsibility of our village. He will be made top priority and I will personally take care of him.

    Raikage A: Naruto, though I respect you, I must question your intentions in regards to Sasuke. Yes, it is true with his help we survived the war, but he is still a S-Class Criminal, and the most deadly at that. If he is allowed to continue what he is doing how much longer do you expect for us to let you take care of it.

    Gaara: Raikage, though I am sure everyone and even myself understands where you are coming from. I still think it would be best if we let the Leaf Village will take care of Sasuke and his allies. And we will support them in any we can.

    (Panel: One of Shino’s insects lands on his shoulder)

    (Panel: Shino whispers in Naruto’s ear)


    Shino: Naruto, there is a drastic problem back home!

    (Panel: Naruto looks concerned)

    Naruto: What is it …?

    Shino: The village is being attacked by a large group of Hidden Rock ninja!

    (Panel: Naruto notices that none of the Rock shinobi are present at the meeting)

    Naruto: Gaara, where are the Hidden Rock?!

    Gaara: They informed me at the last minute that they would not be able to attend or send a representative.

    Gaara: Why, what has happened?

    (Panel: Naruto stands along with Shino and Sai)

    Naruto: We have been attacked by the Rock village…

    Gaara: Hmmm…Why would they attack the Leaf?

    Naruto: Sorry Gaara I have to cut this meeting short.

    Gaara: It is okay Naruto; tell me if you need our assistance.

    (Panel: Naruto smiles and gives a thumbs up to Gaara)


    Naruto: Ok will do…. Sai, Shino lets go

    Sai and Shino: Understood

    (Panel: Naruto, Sai, and Shino disappear)

    (Panel: The scene changes to Shikamaru and Kakashi fighting multiple ninja, Chouji is shown holding back giant stone walls that are trying to fall over the walls of the village and break thru)


    Shikamaru: What the hell is going on, Kakashi-sensei? Why would the Hidden Rock attack us?

    Kakashi: I have no clue, they don’t seem as if they are not acting like themselves, don’t kill them just immobilize them.

    Shikamaru: That’s easier said than done.

    Kakashi: They knew just when to attack since most of our ninja are out on missions and Naruto is away in the Sand.

    Chouji: Shit, there are so many of them. How are we supposed to hold back this many ninja without hurting them?

    Shikamaru: Chouji, just make sure they don’t break through the walls, we are going to push back most of their forces outside the village. Then will we take a few into custody for interrogation.

    Shikamaru: Shadow Possession Jutsu!

    (Panel: Shikamaru is holding a group of rock ninja still with shadow possession jutsu)

    Shikamaru: (Speaking to himself) What would cause the Hidden Rock to send in such a powerful attack force on us? We can’t hold out much longer without hurting them.

    (Panel: A group of rock ninja launch a barrage of stone spear shuriken at Shikamaru from behind)

    Kakashi: Shikamaru, Look Out!

    (Panel: Shows Shikamaru in the background, with the spears in the foreground coming towards him)

    Shikamaru: What a drag…
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Sedai(Generations) Chapter 1: A New World and Old Faces

    Leave Comments of your Opinions. Or what you think will happen next
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Sedai(Generations) Chapter 1: A New World and Old Faces

    Hidden Rock mm. I would like to message you back and forth on this matter. (It's all speculation, don't worry! :D)

    HHEEEEEEERRRRREEEESSSS REVIEW TIME! (I do this with everyone, don't worry)

    Things I disliked:
    Description was lacking (-1)
    Grammar a tad bit off. Nothing too major. (-.5)
    Length (-.5)

    Things I liked:
    Concept (1)
    Initial Writing Skills (.5)
    Organization (.5)

    Total as far as Writing: 2/4

    Total as far as fandom: 3/5

    Frankly, you remind me of when I first started, just more organized. (I sound like an old man, but I've only been writing since I joined...) I like the plot-line so far. I will continue reading to see where this goes. Welcome to the base btw!

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    Re: Naruto Sedai(Generations) Chapter 1: A New World and Old Faces

    Thanks man! The thing is I actually wrote this about 3 years ago. It was when I was a real rookie at writing, I have written 18 chapters of this so far, I thought about going back and editing my story in this chapter but I wanted to show my growth as a writer.

    But thank you for the honest review, things will make a lot more sense in further chapters, I wanted to have a bit of ambiguity but maybe I had to much in this chapter and in the description. Also I will def fix the grammar! Maybe I will post the next chapter tomorrow or tonight, because it is done!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Sedai(Generations) Chapter 1: A New World and Old Faces

    awesome.. !!
    nice chapter.. plz carry one .. let me know about it though..
    plzz god
    kishimote never stop naruto after fourth world war..
    we want to see the future generations..
    konohamaru and naruto as teacher student ..
    lot more....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Sedai(Generations) Chapter 1: A New World and Old Faces

    Quote Originally Posted by chinku07 View Post
    awesome.. !!
    nice chapter.. plz carry one .. let me know about it though..
    plzz god
    kishimote never stop naruto after fourth world war..
    we want to see the future generations..
    konohamaru and naruto as teacher student ..
    lot more....
    I agree although we started the naruto series in 3rd generation I still think we deserve a 4th one, anyway nice future fan fiction
     
         

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