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    my bio (needs work)

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    Name: Phantom Malpense
    Nickname: The Mad Demon
    Gender: Male
    Age: 27
    Clan: --

    Looks: tall, about 6'3'' with light grey, almost silver hair that is mid length but covers his right eye. He wears a sleeveless blue shirt with crimson red tattoos depicting dragons cover his arms. He has deep purple eyes. He has red bands going up his arm. He seems to have a permanent smirk. He wears long black pants and red sandals. when committing a murder or planing on doing so he wears a mask made out of human bones.


    Personality: most people think death isn’t funny, unless you’re Phantom that is. Then it becomes hilarious. Most people think of him as completely insane, kind of like Jugo with his bloodlust but Phantoms urge to kill doesn’t go away, and unlike Jugo he doesn’t want it to.
    Village Info: born in kirigakure, banished to suna, moved to konoha. phantom has a burning ambition to invent his own release, nightmare release. nightmare release is an idea he had to make a set of ninjutsu that could literally scare someone to death. this release also takes some aspects of dark release(which he wants to learn to).

    Village of Birth: kirigakure.
    Village of Alliance: sunagakure and iwagakure(all has been forgiven)

    Rank//Chakra Info: genin
    Suiton: needs training.

    Ninja Rank: genin.
    Specialty: N/A
    Elements: suiton (needs training)
    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)





    Background Info/history: Phantom was born, well completely insane. By the time he was six he had been accused of 479 cases of murder in kirigakure. Soon, he was banished to the deserts surrounding suna. One day while wandering around, close to starving to death, a Konoha Shinobi named Minato found him. Minato wasn’t much help…. But he did give him a map to show him how to get back to kirigakure. Problem was Minato gave him the wrong map, this was one directed to Konoha. Finally he reached Konoha. After 2 years of working he got a reputation in Konoha. “That one really insane dude” was what they called him, and he liked it. He is now a genin in konoha and has only been accused of 17 cases of murder, the prosecutors always failed, probably because they ended up dead. famous quote of phantom- "i used to be crazy... really crazy! they put me in a room. a round room. there were rats... round rats..... on wheels.... they drove me CRAAAAZY..... speaking of crazy.....i used to be crazy... really crazy! they put me in a room. a round room. there were rats... round rats..... on wheels.... they drove me CRAAAAZY..... speaking of crazy.....i used to be crazy... really crazy! they put me in a room. a round room. there were rats... round rats..... on wheels.... they drove me CRAAAAZY..... speaking of crazy.....



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    this picture is with his mask on.


    Theme Song and Background Music: theme song, not afraid by Eminem.

    Battles

    Won: ----
    Lost: -----
    how do i insert the jutsu list? also needs editing but lol i thought i would put it out tell me if it's ok-ish. also i know the character is really creepy but ha ha that's what makes him different. also how do i get weapons approved for him?
     
         
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    Re: my bio (needs work)

    Nice one for a first
     
         

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    Re: my bio (needs work)

    Quote Originally Posted by 0TailBijuu View Post
    Basic Information

    Name: Phantom Malpense
    Nickname: The Mad Demon
    Gender: Male
    Age: 27
    Clan: --

    Looks: tall, about 6'3'' with light grey, almost silver hair that is mid length but covers his right eye. He wears a sleeveless blue shirt with crimson red tattoos depicting dragons cover his arms. He has deep purple eyes. He has red bands going up his arm. He seems to have a permanent smirk. He wears long black pants and red sandals.


    Personality: most people think death isn’t funny, unless you’re Phantom that is. Then it becomes hilarious. Most people think of him as completely insane, kind of like Jugo with his bloodlust but Phantoms urge to kill doesn’t go away, and unlike Jugo he doesn’t want it to.
    Village Info: born in iwa, banished to suna, moved to konoha.

    Village of Birth: iwagakure.
    Village of Alliance: sunagakure and iwagakure(all has been forgiven)

    Rank//Chakra Info: genen
    Suiton: needs training.

    Ninja Rank: genen.
    Specialty: killing things.
    Elements: water needs training.
    Your ninjutsu:




    Background Info/history: Phantom was born, well completely insane. By the time he was six he had been accused of 479 cases of murder in Iwagakure. Soon, he was banished to the deserts surrounding suna. One day while wandering around, close to starving to death, a Konoha Shinobi named Minato found him. Minato wasn’t much help…. But he did give him a map to show him how to get back to Iwa. Problem was Minato gave him the wrong map, this was one directed to Konoha. Finally he reached Konoha. After 2 years of working he got a reputation in Konoha. “That one really insane dude” was what they called him, and he liked it. He is now a genen in konoha and has only been accused of 17 cases of murder, the prosecutors always failed, probably because they ended up dead.



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    Theme Song and Background Music: theme song, not afraid by Emenem.

    Battles

    Won: ----
    Lost: -----
    how do i insert the jutsu list? also needs editing but lol i thought i woudl put it out tell me if it's ok-ish.
    Go to the jutsu section and copy and paste all the E ranked ninjutsu.
    Also you have no speciality they are for serious things not just "killing people" or stuff like that.
    It's Genin and Eminem.
    And when did i give you a map? *trollface*
     
         

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    Re: my bio (needs work)

    thanks technically I've made 2 but they were so bad they don't count, they didnt get approved.... ya but how do i condense the jutsu list into a little link? because right now its a huge glop of words... eh yonkou i did it lol. any feedback would be great! probably sounds dumb but how do i go into advanced post? nvm i got it. you said that when i reached 50 posts u would make me a bio also that my bios were really terrible and i admit they were but so u like this one? and i made it so dont make one. also who or what rank an approve or deny it? also lol can i and were do i post what weapons my bio uses.
     
         
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    Re: my bio (needs work)

    Quote Originally Posted by 0TailBijuu View Post
    thanks technically I've made 2 but they were so bad they don't count, they didnt get approved.... ya but how do i condense the jutsu list into a little link? because right now its a huge glop of words... eh yonkou i did it lol. any feedback would be great!
    Use the spoiler tag, go in to advanced post and just press the spoiler button and put the list in there.

    [SPOILER]Like this.[/SPOILER]
     
         

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    I'm Yonkou, what did you call me here for?
     
         

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    hey dudes i made some edits and changes so tell me if you like it! please give feedback this is my first real bio.
     
         

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    Re: my bio (needs work)

    Quote Originally Posted by 0TailBijuu View Post
    hey dudes i made some edits and changes so tell me if you like it! please give feedback this is my first real bio.
    You cannot have magnetism for three reasons, all of which can be found here.
    Also, you can't start with a specialty in Fire, unless your an Uchiha. Simply put N/A for specialties.
     
         

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