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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
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    Naruto: dark chronicles ch 3

    Naruto looks around a bit… and notices how far they are from the village and gives a smile to Orochimaru. He had kept his promise the first promise someone has ever… kept to him. He sucked up his emotions however not wanting to cry… he has cried too much today anyway. *This guy… is really nice. I can't wait to be out of this stupid village… no more… no more pain* Naruto thought o himself with a hopeful outlook. Naruto hugged Orochimaru and the snake hugged back. "Don't worry Naruto-Kun they will never hurt you again" *Yes… but… you're going to be my little puppet. * Orochimaru thought after saying those comforting words. He stopped and decided that Naruto walking into a village like the way he looked would scare people… and publicity is one thing they do not need at the moment. "Naruto I need you to trust me one last time before we are out of here. Ever heard of a henge?" Orochimaru said with a grimace smile forming. "Yes… is like where you transform yourself to look like something" Naruto responded while scratching his head in question. "Good… then… I am going to Henge you so you look like you're "Normal"" Orochimaru explained, placing his palm over the boy, "Why?" Naruto questioned, "Because if you look normal… you're going to be able to leave more easily. Now… hold still." Orochimaru ordered in a calm voice.

    Naruto stands at attention waiting for the Jutsu to do the deed. "Henge!" Orochimaru said out loud. Naruto was consume in a puff of smoke… he walked out coughing. However, he noticed something by looking into a pool of water. His ears were that of a human, his tails are gone… and his eyes... a light blue. His hair is the same though. Naruto looked at himself, rubbing where his fox ears used to be. He looked at Orochimaru and smiled… "Thank you…" he muttered… his heart warm and fuzzy.

    Kabuto jumps to a tall tree and looks down. A man with a crossed scar on his face moves below him. Iruka looks up and notices something off… he has been traveling in circle… *genjutsu… well shit* "Come out I know you're here… trust me Illusionary Jutsu does not work so well on me." Iruka barked Kabuto steps out of a tree from behind him. "Hello… now why is a lead Shinobi so close to the border of the sound village?" Kabuto asked the ninja standing before him. His chakra dissection blades already extended. "I am looking for… a friend" Iruka said with a growl, he gets a tanto that he kept sheath to his back. "Well… can you name this friend… oh… would it happen to be a demonic brat?" Kabuto said mockingly, if Iruka was not mad he is now. He charges at Kabuto. "Die you mother ****er!" He shouted at Kabuto, slashing where he used to be as Kabuto takes a step back. *Damn… he is fast very fast… wait… that scar… so he is from "That" clan* Kabuto thought in detest.

    They clash. Iruka swings his hand in an arc hoping to cleave Kabuto with the tanto. Kabuto blocks with his arm hitting Iruka's and tries to stab him with the dissection blade. However, Iruka does the same, but head buts Kabuto. "Awww **** that hurt!" He yelped, backing away. Iruka brings his Tanto done. He cuts a gash into Kabuto. "You son of a ***** where is Naruto!" Iruka shouts, and brings the tanto to Kabuto's throat backing him into a tree. Iruka takes the opportunity and knees Kabuto in the stomach. Bringing him to his knees. "Fine… but you're not going to like the answer… He is with Orochimaru Sama… he went willingly… you stupid prick!" Kabuto shouted at the end, Iruka eyes open wide… Orochimaru is an S rank criminal and founder of a terrorist organization hell bent of the destruction of Kohana.

    "Where are they?" He said with venom in his voice. "Oh they are going to "Go **** yourself!"" Kabuto said laughingly… Iruka retorts by plunging the Tanto into Kabuto's neck. "I hope you burn *******" he muttered in Kabuto's ear. He pulls the blade out and spins and cuts into the spinal column severing the head. He then cleans the blood and heads east. From where Kabuto came from, and where Naruto may be at. Iruka now seething with hate and anger speeds off faster than he has ever has run. Soon he sees footsteps that indicate a walk. He throws an explosive Kunai to signal where he was. Several other ninja see this and head into that direction.

    Naruto walks with Orochimaru… when he hears a large explosion. *Kabuto… too bad… should've never been that weak* Orochimaru thought to himself… *then… again this maybe what I need.* "Naruto… I need you to run ahead of me… keep running east" Orochimaru said with a smile, Naruto nodded and began to run. "Naruto!" a man shouted, Orochimaru stood there and waited. "Naruto!" the voice getting closer, he can make out a figure in the trees. "Naru… you!" the Man suddenly yells in a rage, he lands near Orochimaru. "Where is he? Where is Naruto!" he shouted. Orochimaru gave a slight chuckle. Iruka looked at the palish man standing before and realized this was Orochimaru. The Sanin. He remembered read a file of him back at Kohana a long time ago.

    -Flash back-

    Orochimaru:
    Sex: Male
    Skin color: Snow white.
    Element affinity: Dark and wind
    Skills: Genjutsu and tracking
    Weapons: Kisangani… the great sword

    Team mates: Jiraiya, and Tsunade
    Status…: Missing ninja.
    Last known location: to the east.

    "So this Orochimaru guy, lord Hokage… how strong is he?" Iruka asked, "Well… I taught him and his teammates… he was an exceptional student… very talented and very skilled." He responded to Iruka question. "Geez… I hope I don't have to fight him… I mean I get creamed" Iruka retorted with a laugh.

    -End of flash back-

    "Where is Naruto… don't play games you're friend told me before I killed him… Orochimaru." Iruka said with much venom sending a lot of Killer intent. Orochimaru raises his eyes open at the pressure. "Oh... Naruto-kun… tell me… why do you think he left?" Orochimaru asked, he smiles. "You took him and forced him you goddamn snake." Iruka hissed… Orochimaru shakes his head and "tsch tsch tsch… Ninja… you're very wrong… Naruto left with me… I know he is young… but do you know how I found him?" Orochimaru asked the man, he looks him dead in the eye. Iruka eyes open wide… "No… please tell me… that… Naruto was… "Iruka said with a sense of dread hitting him. "He was beaten… he was beaten to a point where if I even touched him he would cry… and sob… Ninja… you're village does not deserve think about something… why would you want him back there?" Orochimaru asked with a snicker. "Because I am his teacher… I am his friend!" Iruka yelled. "No… teachers and friends protect one another… you taking him back… well that's a punishment that is worse than a verbal reprimand… and Naruto would be killed in another mob." Orochimaru said with a sick sense of happiness creeping into his voice. "But… I…" Iruka starts to think about the times Naruto had been beating and travels back to another time not so long ago.

    (God you're gonna hate me)

    -Flashback-

    Naruto runs from a massive group of people inside the center of Kohana. He gets cornered by another mob and pushed into the middle of a giant circle. "Kill him that bastard is why my husband is dead." Naruto looked at the women leading the mob, he shakes his head. "I did not kill anyone… please… I don't know what I did." Naruto said with a sob, tears flowing out of his. The woman grabs him and punches him in the face, breaking his nose. Naruto grunts at the pain, but his wound quickly heals. He brings his tail up to block the second strike. "Kill him Ashigure!" a man shouts. She slaps Naruto around and slams him to the ground beating him. Another by standing villager joins in. Hitting him with a large stick. Naruto cries out in pain. They keep hitting and another one stomps on his head. Naruto curls up in a ball and sobs. Another after another join beating, cutting him. Finally they stand back and one has a sword in his hand. He walks over and reverse wields it. Before he can bring it down Iruka blocks it. Naruto looks and has tears coming out of his eyes along with blood. "By order of the 3rd Hokage… disperse away from here! Now!" he yelled in rage. The people look ready to disobey him but he pulls out three explosive kunai. "I want ask again." They run in panic afraid that he might throw the kunai. Iruka looks at Naruto… he sees where someone has failed to stab him. He picks him up and begins to walk him to the nearest hospital.

    a few hours later the doctor lets Iruka hear his oppion. He states that Naruto had gotten luck if he arrived later a poison from the stab wound would've set in. Iruka nods… and looks at the boy. "I'm sorry Naruto… I wasn't there to protect you" he said while rubbing his hand on the sleeping Kitsune's head

    -End of flashback.-

    "Orochimaru… you're right… please… just go… I'll tell them… that" he begins to sob at the idea…. "That Naruto is gone… "Orochimaru smiles with a devilish grin and nods "good boy… I got to catch him." Orochimaru said, he activated a genjutsu and Iruka collapses screaming. "Now to get Naruto-kun away from here and into my hands." He said, he then begins to run eastward towards Naruto and his new future as the trainer of the boy. "Naruto I'm so sorry" Iruka shouts, he cries with many tears.
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
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    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
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    Re: Naruto: dark chronicles ch 3

    you know... i may get reported for a false

    but these are mine
    Blazeraptor54 is me ladies and gentlement and i will not post any lemon chapters if i do create them in fanfic.net. the only reason why i would is well... to see how much i can make my audience go for
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: dark chronicles ch 3

    Uhm.... your fan fics look almost the same you should invest time n the visual department
     
         

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