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    I'm at Peace

    I see her there looking at me,
    But this is impossible, it can not be.
    As I reach for her, my arms wide open,
    She fades away like a sudden mist.
    I fall to my knees, grasping my chest,
    Wondering if her being gone is best.

    As my tears fall and create ripples of emotions ,
    Everything seems to fade, even my deepest devotions .
    Just when I feel that I am about to give in,
    A strong hand lifts me up, and I look at him.
    My father who has always helped me is here,
    But just as I go to embrace him, he tells me he loves me then, disappears .

    Why must those dear to me fade?
    I would give up everything , even my happiness I will trade.
    When I turn around I find myself standing on clear blue sea ,
    Looking around wondering what else may be.
    I look up at the blazing sun ,
    Thinking of everything that I've done.

    Soon the sun turns into the moon,
    And the howling wind creates a sorrowful tune.
    When I look up it begins to rain,
    As if the heavens feel my pain.
    I place my hand over my face, as I smile like a fool.
    For I start to believe life is indeed cruel.

    I realize I have those who love me,
    And I am soon able to clearly see.
    I look up and blue skies begin to appear;
    So long as I have my family, I have no fear.
    I begin to see figures in the distance,
    And I realize my family feels my existence .

    I was a lost traveler in this life ,
    But my family helped me get through this strife .
    I run to my father and hug him tightly ,
    Then look at the heavens for my mom and smile lightly .
    My family was my missing piece ,
    And now that I am with them, I feel true peace .
     
         
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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Nothing short of amazing.
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Quote Originally Posted by repulse View Post
    Nothing short of amazing.
    Thank you.
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Blown away my friend.
     
         
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    Re: I'm at Peace

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    Blown away my friend.
    I'm glad you liked it. Thank you
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Quote Originally Posted by Kayame View Post
    I'm glad you liked it. Thank you
    You deserve the compliment!~ It flowed very nicely, made sense, and I could relate to it.
    Now you've left a lasting impression on me :3
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Inichi Matsuka View Post
    You deserve the compliment!~ It flowed very nicely, made sense, and I could relate to it. Now you've left a lasting impression on me :3
    I'm very glad to hear that. ^^
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Wow, amazing!
     
         

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    Wow, amazing!
    Thank you!
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    This is one of the many reasons I look up the previous threads that have been made whilst I sleep.

    A beautiful read. thank you kayame.
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Truly amazing, words can't describe this, I just love it
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    Quote Originally Posted by Lonely Uchiha View Post
    This is one of the many reasons I look up the previous threads that have been made whilst I sleep.

    A beautiful read. thank you kayame.
    thank you , I'm very happy to hear the you liked it.
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    Truly amazing, words can't describe this, I just love it
    thank you very much
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    Blown away my friend.
    I'm glad to hear that
     
         

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    Re: I'm at Peace

    congrats you just moved a mountain
     
         

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    congrats you just moved a mountain
    Thank you very much !
     
         

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