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    "Death is not the end.
    Loss of conviction is the
    end."
     

    630 - Peace within Grasp

    () = Events.
    [] = Thoughts.



    (A close-up of Kakashi´s Sharingan is shown)
    Kakashi: Its true that our Shinobi system isnt free of hatred but do you really want to punish the entire world for that?
    Obito: Dont you listen? Im not trying to punish the world, I will create a better world.
    Kakashi: But at which cost? Countless people died in this war.
    Obito: Dont worry, they will live on in my Genjutsu.
    (Obito´s chest is shown slowly healing)
    Kakashi: Yes..as mere illusions, dont fool yourself.
    Obito:... (makes a thoughtful face but quickly gets serious again.
    Kakashi: Lets end this.
    (The chirping sound of a second Raikiri is heard just moments before it hits Obito´s neck who cant react in time because of the hole in his chest, decapitating him and leaving his lifeless body at the ground)

    (Suddenly the world around Kakashi starts to melt, showing Kakashi still standing over Obito with his Raikiri activated)

    Obito: ?!
    Kakashi: You´re getting careless Obito..we share the same set of Sharingan eyes, we can easily see through each others Genjutsu.
    [Obito: This present really got me into trouble..]
    Obito: Now, can you finally pull the trigger?
    Kakashi: No.
    (Kakashi releases the Raikiri)
    (Obito is shown with a surprised face)
    Obito: Not even trying to capture me while you have the chance, seems like you lost your mind?
    Kakashi: We all payed a high price for it but you already reached your goal of a better world, theres no need to fight each other any more.
    Obito: What are you babbling about?
    Kakashi: Look at the bigger picture Obito. This crazy plan of you and Madara managed to unite all 4 Nations and form an alliance..something that no one before managed to do. The Nations wont have a reason to fight each other anymore after this war is over..if we win.

    (Obito is shown motionless, slowly realizing that Kakashi could be right)

    Kakashi: Those who break the rules are trash, but those who abandon their comrades are worse than trash!
    Kakashi:These were your words, thats what I teached to my students and I will follow your words till the end.
    Kakashi: It is your choice but we could need your help against Madara and the Juubi. If they win your whole ambitions will be wasted, all the deaths will become meaningless and it will be the end of the world.

    (Kakashi puts out his hand towards Obito to help him get up)
    (Obito hesitates for a while, still beeing in shock and finally grabbing his hand and getting up)


    Kakashi: Finally, Obito.
    Obito: ...Kakashi, Im not stupid. I know that I lost my place in the world, no one will accept me even if we defeat Madara. But I dont care anymore, its like you said..all of my actions would become meaningless if Madara wins. And I wont let him destroy the perfect world I wished for my entire life.

    (Scene switches to Naruto and the SA)

    Madara: Thats it, you annoying flys stalled my plan way too long already.
    [Madara: And I can feel the chakra of Hashirama.. seems like the real fun is just about to start]
    (Madara is shown in his incomplete Susano´o)
    (Naruto and everyone else are shown completely exhausted)
    [Kurama: Naruto I cant collect enough chakra in time...]
    Naruto: Ugh...
    (Madara is shown preparing a huge Yasaka Magatama to finish them off)
    Madara: Come back after you had some Dance Lessons! (Fires the Yasaka Magatama)
    (Kakashi and Obito teleport to the battlefield facing Madara)
    (Madara looks surprised)
    (The Yasaka Magatama is about to hit)
    (Obito uses Kamui and teleports it)
    (Kakashi uses Kamui and opens a portal in front of Madara with surprise)
    (Yasaka Magatama hits Madara head on with all its original force)
    (A huge explosion follows)
    (Naruto and the SA are still in shock about what just happened)


    (The Dust around the impact point starts to settle)
    (The left and the right eye are finally reunited, about to unleash their full power on Uchiha Madara!)
     
         
    Last edited by Fluffyman; 05-10-2013 at 12:49 PM.

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Obito + Kakashi team-up = Win, but I doubt it will happen, Good prediction though!
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    yeah i could really see this happing because as a kid Obito wanted to fight together as equals with Kakashi this would give him his chance which would ultimately lead to his heroic death, plus rep
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Nice prediction
    Now my reactioin;
    Ahhhhhhhhhh!
    Ahhhhhhhhhh!
    Ahhhhhhhhh!
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Nice prediction
    Now my reactioin;
    Ahhhhhhhhhh!
    Ahhhhhhhhhh!
    Ahhhhhhhhh!
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    nice! especially the ending sequence with kakashi+obito
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    I would if that happend. nice prediction thow
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Great job I only wish it would really happen
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Nice prediction bu I really don't want this to go to this way. And why are you telling that after the last chapter there is no way back? Personally, Obito declared that he doesn't want to become like Naruto and that he will remain evil.
     
         

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    "Death is not the end.
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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Thanks to everyone for the good words, happy that you enjoyed reading it

    Quote Originally Posted by Byron123 View Post
    And why are you telling that after the last chapter there is no way back? Personally, Obito declared that he doesn't want to become like Naruto and that he will remain evil.
    The last chapter showed that Obito isnt pure evil. He just did evil things to achieve a noble goal (changing the shinobi system, creating peace) because he couldnt find any other way to create peace, pretty much the exact same thing that happened with Nagato. And I think that he reached his goal already, just in another way (forcing the 4 Shinobi Villages to form an alliance instead of just casting an Genjutsu on everyone).

    There will be peace once/if this war is won so I dont see a reason for him to keep fighting against the SA. He would be trying to destroy his own dream if he kept fighting them.
     
         
    Last edited by Fluffyman; 05-10-2013 at 12:08 PM.

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Nice one
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Great Prediction
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    All in all it was a good read.
    (Kakashi and Obito warp infront of the Alliance at the last second. Kakashi Kamui´s the Yasaka Magatama and Obito warps it back in Madara´s direction
    I would like to change this
    (Kakashi and Obito teleports to the battlefield facing Madara)
    (Madara looks surprised)
    (The Yasaka Magatama is about to hit)
    (Obito uses Kamui and teleports it)
    (Kakashi uses Kamui and opens a portal in front of Madara with surprise)
    (Yasaka Magatama hits Madara head on with all its original force)

    Because at last moment Kakashi can't use Kamui with such speed. And Madara will easily dodge Obito's attack from faraway. Kakashi can do the job efficiently.
     
         
    Last edited by -ahhimane-; 05-10-2013 at 12:39 PM.

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    "Death is not the end.
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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Quote Originally Posted by ahhimane View Post
    All in all it was a good read.

    I would like to change this
    (Kakashi and Obito teleports to the battlefield facing Madara)
    (Madara looks surprised)
    (The Yasaka Magatama is about to hit)
    (Obito uses Kamui and teleports it)
    (Kakashi uses Kamui and opens a portal in front of Madara with surprise)
    (Yasaka Magatama hits Madara head on with all its original force)

    Because at last moment Kakashi can't use Kamui with such speed. And Obito can't use Kamui on faraway objects or surrounding. That's Kakashi's ability.
    The master has spoken
    Yeah it really looks and reads better that way and you have a point with Kakashi not beeing able to Kamui objects so fast (atleast not without the Chakra Cloak which he doesnt have right now), thanks for the correction
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    dear friend
    obito completly lost it .he is asycho path now there is no way in hell he well be agood nice little boy again but it could happen oro and sasuke are agood guys now but if every one will change his mind and become good then this manga is sucks .
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    well, cool
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    Nice .
     
         

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    Re: 630 - Peace within Grasp

    that would be awsome.
     
         

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