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    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

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    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Series, All Previous Chapters [In Chronological Reading Order]:

    The Legendary Sage of Konoha;

    [1] Chapter 1

    [2] Chapter 2

    [3] Chapter 3

    [4] Chapter 4

    [5] Chapter 5

    [6] Chapter 6

    --->
    Sasuke Chronicles;

    [7] Chapter 1

    --->
    [9] Chapter 7

    [10] Chapter 8

    [11] Chapter 9

    [12] Chapter 10

    [13] Chapter 11

    --->
    Kakashi Chronicles;

    [14] Chapter 1

    [15] Chapter 12

    --->
    --->
    [18] Chapter 13

    [19] Chapter 14

    [20] Chapter 15

    --->
    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns;

    [22] Chapter 1

    [23] Chapter 2

    [24] Chapter 3

    [25] Chapter 4

    [26] Chapter 5

    [27] Chapter 6

    [28] Chapter 7

    [29] Chapter 8

    [30] Chapter 9

    [31] Chapter 10

    [32] Chapter 11

    [33] Chapter 12

    [34] Chapter 13

    [35] Chapter 14

    [36] Chapter 15

    [37] Chapter 16


    The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns, Chapter 17;
    The Key To Peace,
    Naruto Vs The Sage of Six Paths!:


    "So it has come to this..."

    Naruto: It's-... It can't be...

    Kabuto: Oh, but it is! The very man himself, standing right before you! This is it Naruto-Kun, prepare yourself!

    "Naruto... Uzumaki Naruto??... the name I once had... You must be-... So history has come to a full circle. It must have been a very long time since my passing. I take it that you are the next one in line..."

    Naruto: Next one in line...??

    Kabuto: Hmm... I must say, I'm not really surprised.

    Naruto: ??

    Kabuto: He really does look a lot like you... Or maybe I should say, you really look a lot like him with your Bijou Mode appearance, Naruto-Kun, *Smirk*... Maybe you're his reincarnation after all, just like Tobi said... But that won't matter, you're still going down...

    "... This technique... It must be something that has been invented after my time... I've been summoned by you?..."

    Turning around to face Kabuto, the Sage of Six Paths looked at him as he continued.

    "You are??!... No... It can't be... The wizard can't still be alive..."

    Kabuto: Wizard??

    Naruto: I guess Tobi didn't tell you everything after all... The wizard was the one who bestow upon the Sage the Founding Book of Jutsu...

    Kabuto: I see...

    "What is your purpose summoning me??..."

    Kabuto: *Smirk* Even as almighty as you once were... I have no intention, nor need to tell you... I am your master now, and you will obey!

    Smashing his hands together, Kabuto let out a big moan as he focused all his attention on controlling the Sage...

    Kabuto: ?!!

    "??..."

    Naruto: ??

    Kabuto: You will obey me!!

    As if nothing happened, the Sage and Naruto looked at Kabuto casually, expecting him to do something, but to Naruto and Kabuto's surprise, he wasn't able to control him.

    Kabuto (In Thoughts): "What's happening?! He's blocking me out??! He's too strong??...."

    Naruto: !! It's not working?? Yo old man! Come quickly!

    Not seeing any reasons not to, the Sage slowly walked over to Naruto.

    Naruto: This dreadful technique is the Edo Tensei... It summons and traps the soul of the dead into a body that has been sacrificed. The only way to stop it is to seal away the target, or by forcing the summoner to cancel the technique... Seeing as you're able to resist his control, are you able to... break free??

    "The Edo Tensei... Hmm... You really must be my reincarnation of sorts, as you have the Jubi sealed within you... And the Bijou Mode as well..."

    Naruto: Yeah, but no time to explain! I need to know certain things while you're still in control... And I need time to reload my sealing techniques... If you really are the Sage of Six Paths-...

    "What are your intention in this world kid... in this life?? What do you want to achieve..."

    Naruto: What??

    "Tell me your resolve... It seems like the Curse of Hatred still exists in this world... The never-ending curse must be lifted... The unfulfilled task that I left behind, created by my very own hands and foolish idea. It must be stopped for true, ever-lasting peace to ever happen..."

    Naruto: So you know the key to create peace??!

    "No... You will have to break the curse..."

    Naruto: But how??

    "Look deep into your heart to find the answer you seek... If you truly are my successor, you'll find the key to peace eventually..."

    Naruto: I...

    "I can't give you the key, but I'll teach you something to guide you in your quest. I can sense your true resolve within your heart... Your will might even be stronger than mine."

    Walking even closer up to Naruto, the Sage reached out his right arm as he placed his hand on Naruto's forehead.

    Naruto: ?!... What just happened??

    Kabuto: Ruarghhhhhh!

    Just seconds later, the Sage retracted his hand as Kabuto roared intensely, finally managing to regain control over the Sage, as his eyes turned red.

    Naruto: Old man Sennin??

    Kabuto: You're mine!!

    Naruto: Ugh?!

    Before Naruto realized what happened, trying to call out to the Sage, he got attacked in the blink of an eye, as the Sage smashed his right fist right into Naruto's stomach, sending him crashing into the wall. As he stood up from the rubble, he looked up at him, realizing that he was under Kabuto's control again.

    Kabuto: * Pant, Pant*... It seems like I'm not able to utilize his full powers... Looking into his memory, it seems like he cast some sort of spell upon himself at his death-bed, to avoid being revived to his prime. Oh well, he should still be strong enough to beat you in your current condition, Naruto-Kun!

    Naruto: What you just did now Old-Man-Sennin... What did you mean??

    Jubi: Hey kid! If you plan on surviving this battle, I better let you have my full powers for awhile longer... Seeing the Sage himself being revived has sparked my interest. Let's see if you're able to overcome this challenge, and if you do, I might start cooperating with you, who knows...

    Naruto: Hehe...

    Kabuto: *Smirk*

    Naruto: ?! The walls??

    Suddenly, the room started changing, as the walls and the roof began to bend and twist themselves all around him and in all directions, as if transforming into another dimension. The torches lighting up the place began to diminish, as it got darker and darker. Everything around him got covered in the color of greasy oil. Before Naruto realized what happened, he suddenly found himself standing on top of a great vast sea.

    Naruto: What's going on?? Genjutus?? No...

    The sky above him was clear blue and the sea was at complete still. Then, a strong wind began to blew as big grey clouds began to appear and the color of the sky turned into rainbow-like appearance, with green, black, red and purple being the main ones. Naruto looked around, scanning the area as Kabuto's voice was heard through the Sage standing in front of him.

    SoSP (Static Voice): This is the Sage's Timeless-Space Transfer Jutsu... Meaning that everything that happens here, does not affect the time, nor the actions in the real world... It happens in matter of nanoseconds... It's similar to Tobi's dimensional transfer, or Itachi's Tsukuyomi in some way...

    Naruto: ...

    SoSP (Static Voice): Let the fun begin!

    Smashing his hands together and into the surface of the sea, the Sage shouted out.

    SoSP (Static Voice): Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning technique): Titans of the Underworld!

    Naruto: !!

    SoSP (Static Voice): Rise, Titans of the Sea!!

    As he shouted, three foul creatures rose from the sea, as the sea began to shake heavily and big waves erupted all around Naruto, before lightning bolts struck to the ground from the sky. One giant octopus, one giant killer-whale and one so foul and ancient, it was hard to describe.

    SoSP (Static Voice): Come, Titans of the Earth!!

    As he said, three foul creatures stepped forward from the land nearby and onto the sea, one giant T-Rex, one giant elephant-rhino like creature, and one foul mountain troll.

    SoSP (Static Voice): Deploy, Titans of the Sky!!

    From the sky, two dragons appeared in the distant, one made of the same material as the Sun, the Sun Dragon, and the other made out of freezing ice, the Moon Dragon. And finally, the Sage jumped up into the air as he landed on top of the head of the six elements dragon, stationed on top of the six headed elemental dragon.

    Naruto: This is bad... This is very bad...

    Kurama: Naruto... Do not falter! Nothing is impossible if you believe in yourself!

    The Nine Titans summoned by the Sage were of enormous size, bigger and more crazy than anything Naruto had ever seen before in his life.

    Jubi: Time to test your real strength kid...

    Looking up at the sky, Naruto realized that this was going to be the battle of a lifetime, as he uttered some words of being discontent, but he quickly followed up by showing his will to fight to the end, to protect everyone, and to bring on true peace.

    Naruto: Huff... Not those dragons again... As if Sasuke and I didn't have enough trouble with them last time, and now I have even more foes to defeat?? I don't think summoning Boss Gamabunta and the rest will cut it this time, as they will look like ants in comparison. Okay, only one thing to do... Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning technique)!

    *The Sage summons his Titans, as Naruto meets the challenge head on!!*

    ~ End of Chapter 17.


    * The Battle of Titans, Next time! *

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    Fun facts & Author's Note:

    1: Okay, I know this was yet another short chapter, and I was a bit surprised myself when I looked through my notes and realized that it barely had any content to offer. I think I know the main reason though, and that is because of the fact that when I decided to go for 30 chapters, I had to thin content out for a few of them. In other words, I went with more- and quicker releases for the chapters, but with less content, and I could perhaps have cut it to 24 chapters and gone on with the same gigantic length as Chapter 7, 8 and 10 had to offer, for the remaining ones. However! The very next few ones now will be big for sure, a looot bigger than this, as the fighting starts for real next time.

    2: As Kuroi hinted at in my previous chapter, I do take a lot of inspiration from other sources besides Naruto, like The Legend of Zelda. And basically, the whole idea of having the fight with the Sage in "another dimension" came from the final boss battle with Demise of the latest Zelda game, The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword. So I basically pictured that dimension, only bigger and... well badder I suppose.

    3: The fight between Naruto and the Sage will last until Chapter 23, and all of them will be quite big, so much to look forward to. I'm not sure when I'll release Chapter 18 yet, as I suspect it will be very big indeed, and it's going to take some time to complete. I estimate some time next week for release, so stay tuned!

    4: For those who are really interested, here's the name of the next eight chapters (Spoiler Warning);

    18; The Battle of Titans.
    19; The Sage of Six Paths' secret techniques.
    20; Sennin-Bijou Mode, and the God of War!
    21; Battle of Gods.
    22; The Legendary Master Sword. <-- Yep, another Zelda related something...
    23; Battle of Gods - Part 2.
    24; Last Man Standing.
    25; Yakushi Kabuto.


    The rest of the chapter's names, as well as the 6 chapter-ed follow up sequel, has also been decided, but I'll keep them for myself for now. I still need to find a proper name for the Short Movie as well...

    5: That's all I have for now, I hope you liked this chapter even if it was a bit too short, so thumbs up if you enjoyed, and as always people, have an awesome day ;)

     
         
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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Great chap
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by pandu View Post
    Great chap
    Thanks bro, appreciate it ^_^ Though it was a bit too short for my personal taste.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael92 View Post
    Thanks bro, appreciate it ^_^ Though it was a bit too short for my personal taste.
    I understand.It needed to be short inorder to make the next ones more interesting.Take your own time finishing the next one mate.We all expect nothing short of extraordinary from you.Good luck
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by pandu View Post
    I understand. It needed to be short in order to make the next ones more interesting. Take your own time finishing the next one mate. We all expect nothing short of extraordinary from you. Good luck
    Thanks ^_^ Yep, the last chapter (16) had to be short because it needed a proper cliffhanger, this one however really just didn't have much content on paper (from what I had written down in my notes), so I really didn't have much to work on. But, starting with the next chapter, they will go back to much bigger again, and due to this, it will take a bit longer time to prepare. I think the next six chapters are going to become my best ones yet

    Oh, and don't forget to "Thank" it if you liked it mate =)
     
         
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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Loved it, as usual

    Waiting for the next one, now more impatiently as seeing the next chapter's titles!!! Just hurry up with the eighteenth one
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by Danielgf04 View Post
    Loved it, as usual

    Waiting for the next one, now more impatiently as seeing the next chapter's titles!!! Just hurry up with the eighteenth one
    Good to hear mate, thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it, even with it's short content ^^
    Oh so you couldn't resist the spoiler eh? Haha, well yeah, got some interesting things for sure stored for you guys

    Will try my best to make it fast... This weekend and the beginning of the next, I'll be a bit occupied, but I think I should make it by Friday next week (if it turns into a huge chapter), or this week (if it's a standard lengthy one), we shall see
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Though it was short, the cliffhanger was literally perfect. After the last sentence I got so excited. I can't wait until this battle ends, and I want to know more about the Sage and everything. This chapter was awesome!
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by Inanimated View Post
    Though it was short, the cliffhanger was literally perfect. After the last sentence I got so excited. I can't wait until this battle ends, and I want to know more about the Sage and everything. This chapter was awesome!
    Thanks mate, appreciate it ^_^ Yeah, I can't wait to get going with the next one
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Woah, I don't suppose Naruto would be doing something like Hashirama's colossal wooden statue with his summoning? Anyways, I can't want for the whole battle to unfold, unlike Kishi's series 1 kage-level battle between Hiruzen, Oro, Hashi and Tobirama, this should be as legend-level as it gets (The bar is so high I can't even see it anymore lol)
    I hope you don't disappoint us (most of this comment is a shoutout to Kuroi who always feared that he'd let his readers down)
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by danivass View Post
    Woah, I don't suppose Naruto would be doing something like Hashirama's colossal wooden statue with his summoning? Anyways, I can't want for the whole battle to unfold, unlike Kishi's series 1 kage-level battle between Hiruzen, Oro, Hashi and Tobirama, this should be as legend-level as it gets (The bar is so high I can't even see it anymore lol)
    I hope you don't disappoint us (most of this comment is a shoutout to Kuroi who always feared that he'd let his readers down)
    You'll have to wait and see. The only hint I'll give is that it's nothing new, or at least new from Naruto's side (that he's summoning that is), at least for now, lol

    Haha yeah, this is sort of a "Sorry for not displaying Naruto and Sasuke's Toad, Kurama and Hawk army vs Tobi and his elemental dragons, here let me make it up to you with something better" type of thing =p I guess I wasn't ready to write something that massive back then, but I feel I'm up for the task this time around, so even I'm exited to start writing this new stage of battle, which will last for six chapter... six big chapters

    Hehe, I'll try and I'll do my best bro, don't worry ^_^
     
         

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    Great Job
    I waited Patiently
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by FaHaD 5212 View Post
    Great Job
    I waited Patiently
    Glad to hear that you liked it ^_^

    Edit:

    I got some news on Chapter 18! It's already twice the size of this chapter and the previous one, about the same size as some of the previous ones before that... And the good news is?? I'll tell you what the good news is! The chapter isn't halfway done yet, so it might get up to the same length as chapter 7 and 8!
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael92 View Post
    Glad to hear that you liked it ^_^

    Edit:

    I got some news on Chapter 18! It's already twice the size of this chapter and the previous one, about the same size as some of the previous ones before that... And the good news is?? I'll tell you what the good news is! The chapter isn't halfway done yet, so it might get up to the same length as chapter 7 and 8!
    Do you write everything in word?
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    Do you write everything in word?
    As in Microsoft Word?? Nope, I use Notepad instead... I started out with Word three years ago, but quickly changed to Notepad after getting countless of people urging me to do so, because it was so much better they said, and I agree =p
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael92 View Post
    As in Microsoft Word?? Nope, I use Notepad instead... I started out with Word three years ago, but quickly changed to Notepad after getting countless of people urging me to do so, because it was so much better they said, and I agree =p
    Something better than the organization of microsoft word? I don't think so.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    Something better than the organization of microsoft word? I don't think so.
    But it is... After I found out Notepad existed, I stopped using Word for everything except School related things.
    Notepad is much more "read-able" when writing FFs, more packed together, and you actually see whether you've written a lot or little. It has the same "style" as the writing on NB, meaning that it looks the same, and not something completely different and smaller, as when you convert Word onto NB. And even more so, it has a nifty replace button, which is a must when "coloring" your chapters.
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Michael92 View Post
    But it is... After I found out Notepad existed, I stopped using Word for everything except School related things.
    Notepad is much more "read-able" when writing FFs, more packed together, and you actually see whether you've written a lot or little. It has the same "style" as the writing on NB, meaning that it looks the same, and not something completely different and smaller, as when you convert Word onto NB. And even more so, it has a nifty replace button, which is a must when "coloring" your chapters.
    What do you mean by the replace button?
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by DoubleA49 View Post
    What do you mean by the replace button?
    You can search for any word in your text, like "Naruto:" then put it in the "word you want to replace" box, then you type in the word you want to replace it with in the other box and bam! All "Naruto:"s has been changed to "Naruto:"
     
         

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    I liked how you began this chapter ^^ The Rikudou being unaffected by Kabuto’s control was a good move on your part as Hashirama was also able to break away from Orochimaru. The Rikudou’s character has seen minor attention in the manga as you know and thus not much for the readers to get a feel of but I think you did a great job depicting him ^^ I’m glad that the Rikudou doesn’t physically look like Naruto and its only the bijuu-mode that compares them. Okay so Kabuto is simply more adept with this jutsu than Orochimaru thus even he can control the Rikudou. I also liked what you did with the Rikudou having him cast that specific spell I really liked that jutsu you chose for the Rikudou-it seemed very fitting ^^ The ending of this chapter has thus far bypassed any other chapter in terms of craziness! lol As if the Rikudou Sennin wasn’t enough-he also summons 9 monstrous creatures!!! I loved that you chose a killer whale as I’ve always been fascinated with them and love anything of the sea :D Naruto did in fact summon something in the end but being able to defeat 9 summonings let alone the Rikudou Sennin is still baffling. You closed with the biggest cliffhanger-epic job!
     
         

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    I liked how you began this chapter ^^ The Rikudou being unaffected by Kabuto’s control was a good move on your part as Hashirama was also able to break away from Orochimaru. The Rikudou’s character has seen minor attention in the manga as you know and thus not much for the readers to get a feel of but I think you did a great job depicting him ^^ I’m glad that the Rikudou doesn’t physically look like Naruto and its only the bijuu-mode that compares them. Okay so Kabuto is simply more adept with this jutsu than Orochimaru thus even he can control the Rikudou. I also liked what you did with the Rikudou having him cast that specific spell I really liked that jutsu you chose for the Rikudou-it seemed very fitting ^^ The ending of this chapter has thus far bypassed any other chapter in terms of craziness! lol As if the Rikudou Sennin wasn’t enough-he also summons 9 monstrous creatures!!! I loved that you chose a killer whale as I’ve always been fascinated with them and love anything of the sea :D Naruto did in fact summon something in the end but being able to defeat 9 summonings let alone the Rikudou Sennin is still baffling. You closed with the biggest cliffhanger-epic job!
    Yeah, I guess I was a bit inspired by that, but at the same time, I found it realistic for him to be able to oppose Kabuto at first.

    That's good to hear... As I really picture Naruto as a much older character, with similarities to Jiraiya and Hashirama, Tobirama and Minato. I guess I've borrowed something from several Canon characters to paste together the Sage of Six Paths.

    Well actually, I've described how he looks in the next chapter, so he basically have some similarities to Naruto. You'll just have to wait and see what I wrote there

    Yeah, the very next chapters will be the sickest and most crazy chapters I'll ever write, haha =p

    Glad you liked it bro ^_^
     
         

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    Yeah, I guess I was a bit inspired by that, but at the same time, I found it realistic for him to be able to oppose Kabuto at first.

    That's good to hear... As I really picture Naruto as a much older character, with similarities to Jiraiya and Hashirama, Tobirama and Minato. I guess I've borrowed something from several Canon characters to paste together the Sage of Six Paths.

    Well actually, I've described how he looks in the next chapter, so he basically have some similarities to Naruto. You'll just have to wait and see what I wrote there

    Yeah, the very next chapters will be the sickest and most crazy chapters I'll ever write, haha =p

    Glad you liked it bro ^_^
    You know you’re right, now that you mention it Naruto is older and I’ve forgotten about it at times but I think for an adult you portrayed him well. Well, now that I think about it, the Rikudou should have similarities to both Naruto/Sasuke seeing as the Uzumaki/Uchiha are his descendants so it would actually be logical ^^ I thought the following chapters will be loony Most climaxes are and I’m sure you’ll bring it together brilliantly!
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    You know you’re right, now that you mention it Naruto is older and I’ve forgotten about it at times but I think for an adult you portrayed him well. Well, now that I think about it, the Rikudou should have similarities to both Naruto/Sasuke seeing as the Uzumaki/Uchiha are his descendants so it would actually be logical ^^ I thought the following chapters will be loony Most climaxes are and I’m sure you’ll bring it together brilliantly!
    Hehe yeah... About that, I'll either release a new chapter today or tomorrow
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Another short chapter
    So I finished 3 chapters today haha xD

    A great chapter, I must say. Sage was so awesome. His dialogues, character and personality was so amazing!!!
    The way kabuto sh*tted his pants, trying to control the sage was awesome.

    His summonings were Titans?
    I thought it was the giant old toad in myobukuzan xD

    Totally epic chapter...the jutsu used was just out of the world

    Really liked it :D
     
         

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    Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

    Short one once again :P

    So6p's entry is perfect. KAbuto failed to control him at starting (sage didnt perform any jutsu to break it out),showing that how powerful sage is. So it was nice part. Naruto is as usual in his tone during talk with sage .

    And as i was expecting, kabuto get control at right time

    Sage's Timeless-Space Transfer Jutsu is just awesome(i wish i could see this in anime or manga ). Sea under blue sky,reminds tobi vs konan.

    Now the thing i never expect in Naruto universe " Titans of the Underworld ". This one is really shocking. Titans are from greek mythology i think. Plus they are 9. But is an amazing feel to read/see them in and against naruto.

    One thing i would like to say that you 100% succeed in showing Sage's attitude/character. Cool as ice and strong as hell . His summons,speed etc show how much powerful he was/is. I'm Still wondering how kabuto is controlling

    Overall nice chapter and perfect entry of Sage. Great work,keep it up
     
         

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