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    Okay, maybe I'm not who I
    thought I would be but I am
    who exactly I want to be.
     

    But i still love you

    This is not suppose to ryhme, its about some feelings. Its just poem story basically

    How much i love you, well its alot
    Ive never can see or feel you
    You push me away and treat me unfairly
    Shut me out of everything
    You are sometimes cruel to me
    Why do i still love you?
    You beat me up, you tear me down
    So i cause harm to myself
    to cover the bruises you gave me or you will
    But i still love you
    I know this love for you, is not good for me
    yet i continue to try and give my love to you
    not caring if i receive what i have gave
    you give me scraps of whats left in your heart
    But i still love you
    You dont know how much i love you
    And i can never express how deep it is for you
    is it deeper than the blade thats opens my skin?
    Richer than the blood that sheds
    Or darker than my melanin
    you do not know of this "love"
    Yet i still love you, and i continue to love you everyday
    I love you for all that you are
    I take you as you are
    all that you have been
    and all that you will be

    Yeah....i probably did horrible but its my first lolz.
     
         

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    Re: But i still love you

    So lovely poem
     
         

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    Senior Member l Forgotten l's Avatar
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    Okay, maybe I'm not who I
    thought I would be but I am
    who exactly I want to be.
     

    Re: But i still love you

    Quote Originally Posted by Steven Segal View Post
    So lovely poem
    Thank you!
     
         

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    what were those dreams I used
    to envision in past.you
    replaced all of them
     

    Re: But i still love you

    Its nice someday I shall also post some of mine
     
         

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    Re: But i still love you

    im getting freaking emotional here .. beautiful .. its so beautiful..

     
         

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    Senior Member l Forgotten l's Avatar
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    Okay, maybe I'm not who I
    thought I would be but I am
    who exactly I want to be.
     

    Re: But i still love you

    Quote Originally Posted by dark dreams View Post
    Its nice someday I shall also post some of mine
    I highly encourage
     
         

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    Re: But i still love you

    Great
     
         

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    Wutchu want m8?
     



    Re: But i still love you

    It's beautiful!
     
         

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    When the forest burns along
    the road, like gods eyes in my
    headlights. When the dogs are
    looking for their bones, it's
    raining ice picks, on your
    steel shore.
     

    Re: But i still love you

    Its so beautiful, words can't describe this....nice job! Here's ur reward

     
         

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    Re: But i still love you

    i barely know about people in here, but are you, asami, chibusa and foxlandlady sorority sisters or something.??

    or are you all just dudes.??
    (i wudnt be surprised with this btw)
     
         

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    Re: But i still love you

    "Richer than the blood that sheds
    Or darker than my melanin
    you do not know of this "love""
    Awesome metaphors
    now its time to give rapping a try haha
     
         

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    Re: But i still love you

    Beautiful ^^
     
         

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