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    Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Juubi: ROOOAARRHHH!!!!!

    The Shinobi Alliance looks on as the Juubi is trapped by the Shisekiyoujin and Myoujinmon.

    Hashirama: All right! Now's the time to attack!

    Naruto: Let's go!!

    All the Shinobi charge towards the Juubi.

    Sasuke: We'll start off with the first attack!

    Sasuke activates Susanoo which aims an arrow at the Juubi's head while Naruto forms a Rasen Shuriken in his hand. Both of them attack at the same, but leaves only a scratch on the Juubi's forehead.

    Naruto: ?!! It's no use!!

    Hashirama: I said earlier!! You all have to defeat the Juubi with a combined attack!!!

    Shikamaru: (Thinking) That's easier said than done. Even with a combined attack by the entire alliance... it's not going to be easy taking down something this big... In that case... Ino!

    Ino: Yes!

    Shikamaru (through Ino): Everyone!! We can only defeat the Juubi step by step! We'll start by attacking the tails!

    Temari leads a group of Shinobi and their combined wind techniques slash through one of the Juubi's tail. The Samurai follow up with their long range sword techniques which further dismembers the Juubi's tail.

    Naruto: Take this!!! Rasen Shuriken!!!

    Naruto's Rasen Shuriken finishes up the combined attack and cuts off the tail!

    Sasuke: Katon!! Goukakyuu no Jutsu!!!!

    Sasuke sets another tail ablaze and other shinobi and samurai join to attack. The tail is also severed.

    Sakura, Lee, Gai and the Hyuuga lead a whole platoon to the next tail.

    Lee: Sakura!! After you!!

    Chakra is concentrated on Sakura's fist and she launches a direct punch on the tail.

    Lee: Konoha Whirlwind!!!

    Gai: Gate of Wonder open!!! Hirudora!!!!!

    Hinata: Hakkeshou Kaiten!!

    All the other shinobi follow up with their attacks! The third tail is cut off from the Juubi!

    Shikamaru: All right..it's working!

    Madara: Hmph... (Forms hand seal to control Juubi)

    Juubi: GWAAHHHH!!!!!!!

    Minato: ?!!!

    Hashirama: Shit! The Juubi's stronger than I thought!!!

    One of the Juubi's tail breaks free from Hashirama's Myoujinmon and swings at the Shinobi.

    Shinobi: UWAAHHH!!!

    Naruto finds himself protected by Sasuke's Susanoo. Sakura then jumps and deflects the Juubi's tail by one punch.

    Naruto: Sasuke! Sakura! Let's do this! (Forms a bijuudama in between his hands)

    Sasuke's Susanoo holds out its blade ready to attack.

    Sakura punches the tail one more time, causing it to fling into the air.

    Susanoo slashes into the tail while Naruto fires the bijuudama at it. The fourth tail is severed!

    Juubi: GWOOAHHH!!!!!!!

    Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura, all panting, stand together looking on at the Juubi.

    Minato: (Smiles) Naruto...you sure have grown!

    Hiruzen: Watch out!! It's attacking!!!

    A Bijuudama forms at the Juubi's mouth.

    Everyone looks on in shock at the Juubi.

    Madara: (Smirks) What shall you do now?!!! Hashirama?!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Needs to be longer. But otherwise good job.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Wut ??
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    amazing you rule man
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Excellent pt/
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    just okay bro its not even close to whats going to happen.
    Add more emotion(kishi does that a lot)
    Create better cliffhanging(at end)
    Make naruto remember about time with Team 7.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    very cool to read
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    You cud make it better at the start firing a susanoo arrow wasn't a good start when a hach's bijudama wasn't able to bend his finger.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    I dnt think techniques like Rasenshuriken or fire ball jutsu work on Juubi ,Shikamaru comeup with a new stratagy is pretty cool but ur stratagy wont work on juubi,I think Hokage are already comeup with a plane to defeat Juubi
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Great Prediciton
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    great prediction bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Shikamaru and Ino part is cool but the attack not that great but good try
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    The prediction was alright, But I think you put the Juubi down way too much..That much power can't take it down ._.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Way too short, this whole prediction is about them attacking his tails lol.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    you should've wrote more but great read
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    there is no time lift they will attack it directly and i donot think madara will let them hert the ten tails after all he needs it for his big plan
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    good pre bro.wtg
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Quote Originally Posted by sagemode07 View Post
    Needs to be longer. But otherwise good job.
    You have the same avatar as me, now I have to change mines. DAMMIT!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Has everyone forgot about Obito and Kakashi??? Kishi will probably make 632 about Obito vs Kakashi and he might kill off one of them.
    Given what Kishi has done in the past, I doubt that there will be a battlefield story next week
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 632 Prediction: Tails [By Hoonaninator]

    Ahh, its a good thought. I honestly think sakura will get whiped out of the fight quickly. Shes trying to be the center of attention and to be honest its kind of pissing me off. Dont get me wrong, i like team 7. But its not team 7 without kakashi there. Sakura is just a really annoying charcter to me. I honestly think kishi should kill her off in the next chapter. Ot would draw more reader since no one really likes her in the first place, and it would give sasuke and naruto more motivation while at the same time giving them a connection to kakashi and obito.
     
         

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