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    [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Greetings, Vayne.

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    Rules:
    Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed.
    Terrain: Rocky flatland, with mountains in the horizon.
    You may use A's abilities up to your current rank as well as Basic 5, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu that you know.
    We start mid range from each other.
    If you have any questions please ask them through VM.


    I will be using a Sandaime Raikage biography for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing for and I will make the first move.

    No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.

    Good luck! Let's make it a clean one, shall we?
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Fuuuuu, I had A nice reply written then a internet glitch happens, fuuuuuu.

    Thanks for conducting my test, may it be a fun one. ^^ Also do I have to call you dad <_>
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Well, I'll ask you "who's your daddy!?" at one point during the fight; so yes.
    Anyway; I'll sometimes refer to the Sandaime as 'Sensho', just to give him a name <.< I've always thought it weird that he wasn't named in the manga.
    __________________________________________________ ___

    Sensho cracks his neck in preparation for the upcoming 'spar' and nods at his son.
    "You've come a long way, A, but the title of 'Raikage' is not hereditary. Even though you're my son; you'll have to earn it."
    The elder Raikage settles into an aggressive low stance and slams his hands together in a seal.
    "Show me how far you've come!" He roars.
    And the fight begins.

    With a pulse of power, patches of dark Lightning erupts from Sensho's back and wraps themselves around his left arm. With another roar emanating from his throat; the grizzly warrior leans forwards and blurs towards his son, zooming directly forwards with great speed while the Lightning around his arm grows into the shape of a fearsome Panther.
    As he reaches short range; Sensho punches forwards with his left arm, launching the Black Panther from his arm in an explosion of black sparks. The panther pounces on A, slamming into him with the force of a raging bull and surrounding him with a storm of electric energy.

    ( Raiton: Kuropansa ) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui

    Sensho, however, doesn't even slow down. The second he launches the panther from his arm; the Raikage veers to his left, crossing the rest of the distance between himself and A in a crescent-shaped pattern that has him approaching A's right flank as the Panther connects. Using the Black Panther as a distraction, the elder warrior rears his right arm back and delivers a lightning-infused uppercut to the bottom of his son's chin, aiming to send the younger Raikage flying upwards.

    (Raijin) - Zeus
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    True true, Kishi does has his mistakes, he should name him Zero Kelvin .-.

    And here goes nothing(expects to fail on first move ~_~)
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    "You should have trust in your son father" (Well F me for saying that >.<)

    As his father begins to move, A, observes and calculates his fathers trajectory, furthermore knowing of his fathers fetish-ness with CQC and lightning, he prepared himself for such attacks by taking a specific stance. As his father is approximately 5 meters away from him, he releases the panther trough his left arm, A swiftly wraps himself with lightning chakra, thus successfully activating his lightning armor, with the speed presented by the stimulation of the synapses, A takes of with his left foot in a dash towards his father whom is arcing towards his left(your right) with this action A dodges the panther.
    (Raiton no Yori) – Lightning Release Armor
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapse to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by a Raikage biography

    As soon as he moves towards his father, A delivers a left hand uppercutting palm(lightning infused) strike towards Sensho's abdomen, the strike's effect would be increased due to the momentum & the lightning armor, the strike would send Sensho flying(also making breathing harder due to the area of effect), but only by a bit(due to your B rank thingamajig resistance) however knowing of this A exploited the situation;
    (Raijin) - Zeus
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

    As Sensho was knocked into the air, A followed him through a jump, easily closing the distance between them, A grabs on to his father's left and right thighs, upon doing so, he throws his father with brute force to the ground "Liger Bomb Improvised" he shouted.
    As his father came into contact with the ground, A followed with a downwards kick towards Sensho's abdomen area, the attack would further damage Sensho, A then jumps forwards, landing at a 4 meter distance from his father, the jump would also cause damage to Sensho, since A pushed away with the foot he kicked his father with.(A's right foot)

    "Get up father!" He shouted.

    (Raigā Bomu) - Liger Bomb
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning amour, the user grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a power bomb manoeuvre. This is devastating enough to shatter a large area of the ground itself on impact.
    Note: Can only be used of Taught by a Raikage bio
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Quote Originally Posted by Vayne View Post
    True true, Kishi does has his mistakes, he should name him Zero Kelvin .-.

    And here goes nothing(expects to fail on first move ~_~)
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    "You should have trust in your son father" (Well F me for saying that >.<)

    As his father begins to move, A, observes and calculates his fathers trajectory, furthermore knowing of his fathers fetish-ness with CQC and lightning, he prepared himself for such attacks by taking a specific stance. As his father is approximately 5 meters away from him, he releases the panther trough his left arm, A swiftly wraps himself with lightning chakra, thus successfully activating his lightning armor, with the speed presented by the stimulation of the synapses, A takes of with his left foot in a dash towards his father whom is arcing towards his left(your right) with this action A dodges the panther.
    (Raiton no Yori) – Lightning Release Armor
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapse to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by a Raikage biography

    As soon as he moves towards his father, A delivers a left hand uppercutting palm(lightning infused) strike towards Sensho's abdomen, the strike's effect would be increased due to the momentum & the lightning armor, the strike would send Sensho flying(also making breathing harder due to the area of effect), but only by a bit(due to your B rank thingamajig resistance) however knowing of this A exploited the situation;
    (Raijin) - Zeus
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

    As Sensho was knocked into the air, A followed him through a jump, easily closing the distance between them, A grabs on to his father's left and right thighs, upon doing so, he throws his father with brute force to the ground "Liger Bomb Improvised" he shouted.
    As his father came into contact with the ground, A followed with a downwards kick towards Sensho's abdomen area, the attack would further damage Sensho, A then jumps forwards, landing at a 4 meter distance from his father, the jump would also cause damage to Sensho, since A pushed away with the foot he kicked his father with.(A's right foot)

    "Get up father!" He shouted.

    (Raigā Bomu) - Liger Bomb
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning amour, the user grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a power bomb manoeuvre. This is devastating enough to shatter a large area of the ground itself on impact.
    Note: Can only be used of Taught by a Raikage bio
    You've got the lefts and rights wrong. I veered towards my own left, but it doesn't really matter either way
    __________________________________________________ _______________________________

    Sensho's eyes widen in surprise as A activates their family's renowned Lightning Armor and uses the speed it grants to evade the incoming panther.
    The elder Raikage barely has time to blink before his son appears before him, but just before A's fist connects with his abdomen; Sensho manages to activate his own Lightning Armor, minimizing the impact of his son's Lightning-natured attack.

    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    Despite both Armor and natural toughness; Sensho's still knocked into the air with a wheezing sound escaping his lips. As A follows him upwards, however, the Third Lightning Shadow smiles and springs his trap.
    Two things happen simultaneously.
    One: Sensho inhales deeply and bends his upper body forwards, putting him within reach of his son as he tries to grab Sensho's thighs.
    Two: The electric shroud around the grizzly Raikage's left hand becomes more pronounced and shapes itself into a short, almost unnoticeable blade.

    Just before A's hands close around his thighs; Sensho rears his left arm backwards and attempts to deliver a powerful Hell Stab punch to his son's forehead. The power behind the punch should be enough to send A flying backwards and back onto the ground while Sensho lands safely on both his feet a few meters away.

    (Sempai Oshie: Roku Sacchi) Elder Teachings: Sixth Sense
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: (-10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Elder teachings six senses is a skill known only to those whom achieve mastery in meditation and fighting arts. The user unlocks the six senses which is also known as a clear state of mind where the user eliminates the factors clouding the mind such as fear and regret and allows the user to be able to increase their reaction to incoming taijutsu attacks and not fear death making the user possible to react fast to the attacks.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times
    Note: lasts 4 turns.


    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Yonhon Nukite) -Lightning Release: Hell Stab: Four Finger CrossBeam Hand
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of all four of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This four finger concentration is the weakest level of the 3rd raikages technique and can be concentrated more into a three fingers for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Apologies for that ^^
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    As Senshou bends his upper body forwards, A become more wary of an attack, nebethelss he continued on with his previous plan, but just when he was about to lock on the thighs, he notices the retracting left arm of his father. A suspected that it would be a punch, and to his dismay it was, as the hand reached it's rear climax, it began to move forwards towards A's forehead. A wouldn't take such an attack, so he punched upwards with his right arm, his arm would connect to Senshou's left arm, specifically the wrist area(or below it by a bit) the punch would deviate Senshou's arm from it's path - sending it 'flying' into the air, thus missing A's forehead.
    However this was not the only thing A did, simultaneous to his right hand punch, a left hand one was delivered, it was aimed to hit Senshou's lower inner thigh, slightly above the testicles, towards a bone. The punch would send Senshou flying backwards, but only slightly, roughly 2 meters.
    (Kobushi Gachan) - Fist Slam
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user slams both his fists on the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage Bio.

    Upon landing A didn't waste a second, he knew that his father would be groggy from the attacks, so he decided to go with an attack of great power, but the cost of it was pricey, neverthelss A did it; A dashed towards his father, and with a simple action from his feet, he did an 180° spin(clockwise), this out A in an unfavored position, but that didn't stop him from taking advatange of it, he used the momentum from the spin, and delivered a left handed back chop to his fathers chest area, the strike would send his father flying several meters backwards.

    "Are you okay father? Hope that old age ain't affecting ya." A commented in order to aggravate his father, as well as to get him to stand up and fight.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Quote Originally Posted by Vayne View Post
    Apologies for that ^^
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    As Senshou bends his upper body forwards, A become more wary of an attack, nebethelss he continued on with his previous plan, but just when he was about to lock on the thighs, he notices the retracting left arm of his father. A suspected that it would be a punch, and to his dismay it was, as the hand reached it's rear climax, it began to move forwards towards A's forehead. A wouldn't take such an attack, so he punched upwards with his right arm, his arm would connect to Senshou's left arm, specifically the wrist area(or below it by a bit) the punch would deviate Senshou's arm from it's path - sending it 'flying' into the air, thus missing A's forehead.
    However this was not the only thing A did, simultaneous to his right hand punch, a left hand one was delivered, it was aimed to hit Senshou's lower inner thigh, slightly above the testicles, towards a bone. The punch would send Senshou flying backwards, but only slightly, roughly 2 meters.
    (Kobushi Gachan) - Fist Slam
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user slams both his fists on the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage Bio.

    Upon landing A didn't waste a second, he knew that his father would be groggy from the attacks, so he decided to go with an attack of great power, but the cost of it was pricey, neverthelss A did it; A dashed towards his father, and with a simple action from his feet, he did an 180° spin(clockwise), this out A in an unfavored position, but that didn't stop him from taking advatange of it, he used the momentum from the spin, and delivered a left handed back chop to his fathers chest area, the strike would send his father flying several meters backwards.

    "Are you okay father? Hope that old age ain't affecting ya." A commented in order to aggravate his father, as well as to get him to stand up and fight.

    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.
    As A attempts to deliver the double-punch; Sensho retaliates by twisting his left hand 180 degrees and leaning further backwards, thereby decreasing the impact of his son's attacks. Coinciding with A's attacks connecting; Sensho focuses a large amount of chakra through his left hand, replacing the Hell Stab technique with an unstable Chidori that immediately spreads from the Sandaime's arm and expands into a violent storm of electricity that rushes wildly about the field, most likely harming A considerably and pushing him away.

    (Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

    Using the combined momentum of his son's two attacks; Sensho twists his body in mid-air and quickly lands on the ground mid-range away from his son. The second he makes contact with the earth; the elder Raikage takes a half-step forwards with his left foot and disappears in a blur of motion, re-appearing on A's right side with three fingers of his right hand already extended in a piercing attack that he attempts to slam through the left side of the younger Raikage's neck.

    (Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Sanbon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stabe: Three Finger CrossBeam Hand
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Whilst the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of three of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This Triple finger concentration is the third strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique and can be concentrated more into two finger for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    As his father formed a Chidori Raimei, A was quite surprised, he didn't know that his father had such a technique in his arsenal, but then again he was the Raikage, however A was not going to fail his fathers expectations. As the Chidori began to spread out, A formed a vortex of wind & electricity, the vortex managed to stop the progress of the Raimei, thus leaving A unharmed for the time being.
    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

    As soon as he landed A notices his incoming father, as soon as his father stops towards his right side, A without any hesitation swings his right arm upwards, the attack 'takes the form' of a right backhand chop, the chop would connect to Sensho's chest/abdomen area, the sheer power of the attack would crush a multitude of bones, as well as injuring internal organs(debatable on where the attack hits) furthermore it 'knocks the wind' out of Sensho thus making breathing much harder. However A didn't stop at that, upon delivering the right backhand chop to Sensho, he exploits the fact that Sensho's right hand is still in front of him(it would have to be in order to his the left side of my neck) he grabbed onto the right hand of his predecessor using his left hand, he grabbed the area slightly above the wrist, as soon as that was done, A -using his right hand- took hold of Sensho's right hand shoulder/armpit(eww it smells <_>). With tremendous determination, A raised his father only to slam him into the ground towards his left side, while doing this A had bent his knees in order to make the task easier. Sensho would be in so much pain that he wouldn't be able to counter the slam. After delivering the slam A moves several meters backwards(5).
    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    Note to self: Remember to re-activate Lightning armor on next turn <_>.
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Hi. ^_^ I'll be kicking your ass for the rest of this test. Let me know when you're ready to die by vm and I will edit this post. :3

    Quote Originally Posted by Vayne View Post
    As his father formed a Chidori Raimei, A was quite surprised, he didn't know that his father had such a technique in his arsenal, but then again he was the Raikage, however A was not going to fail his fathers expectations. As the Chidori began to spread out, A formed a vortex of wind & electricity, the vortex managed to stop the progress of the Raimei, thus leaving A unharmed for the time being.
    (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

    As soon as he landed A notices his incoming father, as soon as his father stops towards his right side, A without any hesitation swings his right arm upwards, the attack 'takes the form' of a right backhand chop, the chop would connect to Sensho's chest/abdomen area, the sheer power of the attack would crush a multitude of bones, as well as injuring internal organs(debatable on where the attack hits) furthermore it 'knocks the wind' out of Sensho thus making breathing much harder. However A didn't stop at that, upon delivering the right backhand chop to Sensho, he exploits the fact that Sensho's right hand is still in front of him(it would have to be in order to his the left side of my neck) he grabbed onto the right hand of his predecessor using his left hand, he grabbed the area slightly above the wrist, as soon as that was done, A -using his right hand- took hold of Sensho's right hand shoulder/armpit(eww it smells <_>). With tremendous determination, A raised his father only to slam him into the ground towards his left side, while doing this A had bent his knees in order to make the task easier. Sensho would be in so much pain that he wouldn't be able to counter the slam. After delivering the slam A moves several meters backwards(5).
    (Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.


    Note to self: Remember to re-activate Lightning armor on next turn <_>.
    As Sensho arrives near his son, aimed to cut through him, he sees him beginning to throw his arm up with great speed, poised to do great damage. As A's arm raises, Sensho twists his arm downwards, stabbing through his son's right arm as he meets it with near equal force, drawing a finger inwards to isolate the power into only two fingers now, crippling the limb as he makes contact with A.



    Raiton: Jigokuzuki: Nihon Nukite) - Lightning Release: Hell Stab: Two Finger Crossbeam Hand
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: While the 3rd Raikage is cladded in the lightning Release Armor He builds up lightning chakra in the tips of two of his fingers and then uses that together with a piercing move. This Dual finger concentration is the second strongest variant of the 3rd Raikages technique and can be concentrated more into a single finger for a stronger attack.
    Note: Can only be used by the 3rd raikage whilst cladded in the lightning release armor. This technique is considerd similar in respect to the Raikiri and Chidori.


    As the hand goes through A's arm, Sensho spins swiftly, pivoting on his left foot and spinning to his left, delivers a high powered elbow to the face of Sensho with great speed, followed by a lariat with his right arm, sending him hurling away. The sight of him flying backwards mildly entertained Sensho as he began to laugh deeply.
    "Haha, who's your daddy?!" He roared, taunting his son. He hoped for a better fight from his raikage successor. Apparently, he would have to push him more....



    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio

    (Rariatto) - Lightning Plough Hot Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. Killer Bee was shown using this technique in his chakra cloak form, and the Raikage was shown using the Lightning Armour technique.
    Note: Technique can only be used whilst in a chakra cloak and can only be used and taught by a Raikage bio or Killer Bee bio
     
         
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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    As his father changes the direction of his attack, aiming it as his right arm, A does not waste a second to react, in a swift motion he pushes with his right foot, this push leads to A changing position so that he is standing sideways with respect to Sensho. This simple movement leads to Semsho's attack missing A, and since there is no body/object to connect with Sensho would stagger forwards, but not by 'that' much, just enough to cause discomfort to Sensho and hinder his movements. Of course the same issue happens to A his right arm has no target so it continues upwards into the air. Knowing of such results A would minimize the time his arm is extended upwards by swiftly 'yanking' it downwards.
    (Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 4 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography

    (Chiratsuki Kaihi/Undō) Flicker Evasion/Movement
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A (+20 when used with a Taijutsu move)
    Description:*Using the amazing abilities of the Lightning Armor technique, both the 3rd and 4th Raikages are able to move at insanely high speeds to dodge or evade incoming attacks, even those that would normally be unavoidable such as Amaterasu. This fast movement can also be used in conjunction with a Taijutsu move, including their own signature Lightning based Nintaijutsu moves, to use the momentum one can gather and add even more damage if the move allows it. The technique also alows the user to move in more elaborate patterns that one would think, although following a more or less linear path. The only weakness of this technique is that, since its purely fast and enhanced movement, you cannot use it in all battle grounds but only those that would otherwise enable its use. Not only that but although the user moves fast, he is still trackable by high Doujutsu users (3T, Byakugan and Rinnegan), Sensors and EIG Masters. This doesn't mean the opponent can react (that depends on his speed, mastery of taijutsu and techniques used) but rather that he can perceive the attack.
    Note: This version can only be used by 3rd and 4th Raikage bios, while having the Lightning Armor active and only once per turn.

    As soon as he changes his position A uses his left arm to deliver a punch to Sensho's right shoulder, the punch in addition to the staggering from before would lead to Sensho being sent sideways towards his left into the ground. A does not stop at there, as his father is sent sideways, he quickly dashes, and due to his speed it takes relatively no time to reach his father, and as he reaches him he kicks him once again in the right shoulder with his left foot, the kick sends his father into the ground several meters back.

    (Kobushi Gachan) - Fist Slam
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user slams both his fists on the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage Bio.
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    I'm assuming you punched my arm to cause my body to rotate and my back to be exposed to you as it would make more sense (and be more effective) if that's what you meant to do with your move.

    As Sensho's body twist, and he feels the initial punch to his shoulder and staggers to his side, almost falling. Due to his heightened reaction times, he quickly regains composure, stepping out on his right foot as he twists to stand more appropriately, and pivots on his left foot, looking over his shoulder to see his son rush at him once more, swinging his left arm backwards with great speed and power, channeling raiton chakra to his right arm and forming a Chidori. As he spins his left arm backwards swiftly in order to give his right arm more striking power and speed, he slams it into A with great power as he dashes forward.


    Raigyaku Suihei) - Lightning Oppression Horizontal
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user covers their selves with the lightning armour, they perform a simple backhand chop against the enemy target. This backhand chop was powerful enough to snap one of Susanoo's ribcage bones, as well as cut off one of the Eight - Tailed Giant Ox's horns.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio.



    As he spins and the arm makes connection, he thrusts his arm forward, creating a spear of lightning aimed to pierce through Ay's chest as he flies to his right, Sensho's left.



    Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Sorry for the delay. And I intended to cause you to stagger sideways, and when I kick you, you would also be sent sideways, the reason I didn't do like you said was to prevent rotation like you used, if you are sent sideways it would be much harder to rotate due to your feet 'not having a firm and strong grip on the ground'. Anyways enough talk let's dance fight.
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    As his father regains composure, A is not surprised, for the man he is facing is the one who is known to be the strongest defense, the third raikage of the cloud, his father; Sensho. A continues to run towards his father, and as his father attempts to deliver a strike to A's chest(I presume since you didn't specify) while running, A's brain goes blank, he collapses, his feet fail him, and from his previous running, he will skid/slide on the ground while on his knees, well that is what it would appear to the untrained and inexperienced fighter, to those who have trained, it would be clear that A had imitated the drunken fist style to come to his knees and slide towards his father. Simultaneous to 'falling' A would pull his upper body backwards, all this leads to Sensho's attack missing A. Also while A does that, he places his left arm slightly in front of him, it's purpose is to block any possible attacks that are based on Sensho's feet. His right arm however was formed into a fist.
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    (Suiken) - Drunken Fist
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points:15
    Description: This unusual taijutsu style is a unique style of combat Drunken Fist Fighters become human powerhouses who'll strike unpredictability, with no inhibitions, an explosive fury and without any second thoughts about their actions. The user can either make themselves drunk or immitate the method by use of swaying and uneven balance on their feet to attack their opponents a total of 12 variant attacks.


    A knows that if he continues to slide and if his father didn't stop his run, then collision was expectable, and for his father to stop his run would be a hard task, so A used his right hand which was formed as a fist, and delivered a devastating punch to his fathers reproductive area. And due to A previosuly pulling his upper body backwards, the punch would have slightly mre strength due to it gaining more momentum, since the shoulders will be further away from his fathers gentles.

    (Jōshō appākatto) - Rising Uppercut
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Whilst cladded in the Lightning Release Armor the 4rth Raikage A will deliver a devastating punch to his target lifting them up into the air.
    Note: Can only be used by 4rth Raikage A biography


    The punch would send Sensho into the air, and as that occurs A would skillfully maneuver his way back onto his feet, then behind Sensho in the air through a jump, once A is behind his father, he interlocks his fingers together, forming a 'hammer', A slams his connected hands down on his fathers neck area, the attack would send Sensho towards the ground.
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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    Test Closed

    I can't really comment on the majority of this test as I only did two moves against you, but those two moves were okay in my opinion. Good luck on the grading though! ^^
     
         

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    Re: [Yondaime Raikage Test] - Vayne

    ~Test Failed~

    Overall your usage of Taijutsu, which is one of the strong points of a Raikage biography was okay, but at times I was really confused with what was happening. Taijutsu, as a fighting form needs to be clear and precise with how you execute your moves. You need to mention the exact movements with it, which arm you're using for a punch, the direction of the attack, the impact point and the after-effects if the attack should land. Your lack of description was your biggest downfall with the test. I would have also liked to have seen you be a little more agressive as well, it seemed like you spent a lot of the fight defending against the attacks given to you.

    You can retake the test in a month.
     
         

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