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    NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    ( ) : Actions
    [ ] : Thoughts
    SFX : Sound Effects
    ENJOY READING
    MANGA 634 : GOING FORWARD II
    KAKASHI : (raikiri activated) The fond memories I have of the old you....I'll never give them up... The only one who's denying them.... is the present you.
    OBITO : .....(lowers his head) (a focus on his sad face below his nose)
    KAKASHI : [ He's... ]
    OBITO : Hehe.. (smirks) (raises his head)
    KAKASHI : ?!!
    OBITO : The present me.....(a big villainous smile) denies all those non-sense because I'm the one who'll create the new world.
    KAKASHI : .....[ Obito... ] (deactivates raikiri)
    OBITO : Do whatever you want with those fond memories of yours....(turns to Kakashi) you're just a Trash of this world. And I'll clear all of it.
    (makes handsigns)
    (lowers his body)
    OBITO : Fire Style : Chaotic Dance of the Storm!!
    (Kakashi widens Sharingan)
    KAKASHI : ?!!
    SFX : MOVE!!

    (gets caught in the attack)
    (The attack covers a huge area destroying the pillar on which they were standing)
    SFX : CRACK!! CRACK!!
    (A slant part of the pillar parallel to the expanding attack is destroyed ahead of Obito)
    SFX : FALL!! FALL!! CRACK!! FALL!!!
    (The ground ahead of Obito is destroyed)
    (dust covers the frontal area)
    OBITO : (while blowing the wind for the fire style attack) ?!!
    SFX : TAP!!
    (run) TAP!! (run) TAP!! (run)
    (Legs are shown in the air running out of the attack approaching Obito)
    (Kakashi emerges out of the attack in front of Obito unharmed)
    (extends his right arm)
    (slams his right hand palm on Obito's face thus covering left part of the face only leaving the Sharingan)
    (holds Obito's right arm with his left hand to block attack)
    (pushes him back and simultaneously make him fall on the ground)
    (Their Sharingans glares at each other)
    (The picture begins to get watery then blurry and then splashes)
    SFX : CHIRRRRRPPPP!!!
    (Obito is shown on the ground and Kakashi is shown with his extended right arm with raikiri activated)
    (Obito raises his left hand)
    SFX : EXTEND...GRAB...
    KAKASHI : ?!!
    SFX : PULL...

    (Obito grabs Kakashi's right hand and pulls towards him)
    SFX : THUD!!!
    (Throws a left leg kick in Kakashi's gut)
    KAKASHI : Gahhhhhh!! (coughs blood)
    (blood is spilled on Obito's left leg which is still intact)
    SFX : CHIRRRRRPPPPPP!!!
    (raikiri is dispersed and then vanishes)
    (Obito with the support of Kakashi's right hand and his gut, raises his own body and throws another kick on Kakashi's face with his right leg)
    SFX : THUD!!! BLOCK!
    (Kakashi blocks his right leg kick with his left arm)
    OBITO : Hmm.
    SFX : RETRACT!! TURN!! EXTEND!! SLAM!! THUD!!!

    (retracts back his right leg and slams it on Kakashi's chest)
    KAKASHI : Gyaahhhhh!! (coughs blood and is thrown back)
    SFX : SLIDE!!!
    (Kakashi while moving back puts his left hand on the ground and stops himself)
    SFX : PANT!! PANT!!
    KAKASHI : (panting) [ He's stick to his resolve... Then I have no other option... Either he or me. ]
    SFX : CHIRRRRPPPPP!!!
    (activates raikiri)
    OBITO : Will you stop your blabbering now? I'm fed up of your talks. Nothing can change me now. I'm the one who'll change....everything.
    SFX : GROW!! TURN!! GROW!!
    (A wooden branch grows out of his right hand circulating around his right arm)
    KAKASHI : .....
    SFX : GROW!! EXTEND!!
    (The branch is extended over a huge length)
    SFX : WHIP!! WHIP!!
    (Kakashi charges towards Obito)
    (Obito whips the branch towards approaching Kakashi)
    SFX : WHIP! TWIST!
    KAKASHI : ?!!
    (sings his hand)
    SFX : BREAK!!
    (breaks the approaching branch with his raikiri)
    SFX : TAP!! TIP!! TAP!! TIP!!(runs) JUMP!! EXTEND!!
    (Kakashi runs towards Obito, leaps towards him and extend his right hand to thrust into Obito)
    KAKASHI : (mid air) Raikiri!!
    SFX : CHIRRRRRPPPP!!!
    OBITO : ....(widens his rinnegan) Shinra Tensei!!
    KAKASHI : ?!!
    SFX : PUSH!!! THROW!!
    (Kakashi is thrown back)
    KAKASHI : Gyaaaahhhh!!!
    SFX : GRAB!!
    (The wooden branch grabs Kakashi's leg during the push attack)
    SFX : SWING!!
    OBITO : You're weak Kakashi!!
    (swings Kakashi and throws him on one of the surrounding pillar)
    SFX: CRASH!!!
    KAKASHI : (his hands raised and is slammed on the wall of the pillar on his back) ....
    SFX : LIFT.... PULL!!! SWING!!! SLAM!!!

    (lifts Kakashi from the crushed pillar and slams on the current standing pillar)
    KAKASHI : ....
    (Obito smirks)
    OBITO : I'll make your death painful. So you'll understand how painful it is when there's no one to save you.
    SFX : RELEASE... WHIP!!
    (releases Kakashi from the branch and then beats him with the branch like a whipper)
    SFX : WHIP!!! WHIP!!! WHIP!!! WHIP!!
    (Kakashi's clothes is torn into bits showing the wound on his body)
    (The wound is bleeding)
    (Kakashi is not moving)
    SFX : WALK....
    OBITO : (stop) Hmm? (turns Kakashi's body with his leg) Dead already?
    (bruises on Kakashi's face cutting the mask in slight depth)
    KAKASHI : (panting heavily) (coughs) [ Am I going to die here? Doing nothing to save my friend.. ] (looks at Obito's blurry cold eyes glaring at him) (remembers)
    [
    (a light falls on Kakashi while his discussion with his father)
    KAKASHI : ....What?
    SAKUMO : Looks like it's not your time yet. You still have things to do.
    ]
    KAKASHI : [ Could it be this (looking at Obito) the unfinished business I've to finish? My death written in Obito's fate.... by his hands? ] Could it be....?
    OBITO :b Hmm. Still breathing. But its useless.(looks at Kakashi's Sharingan) And... Tha-.... -ingan is usel-...-w. In ei-....-y, you'll di-..... -'ll just take it aw-....-rom you.(extends his left hand towards Kakashi's eye)
    KAKASHI : (remembers)
    [
    KAKASHI : Obito....what you left me in the past.... is still here! What I can do now is to protect Naruto!
    NARUTO : I won't let you kill my friends!!!
    ]
    KAKASHI : [ All this time... it was in front of me. The people I wanted to protect (remembers Team 7) ]
    (moves his fingers)
    KAKASHI : [ .... My duty isn't fulfilled yet... because.... ]
    (moves his arms)
    KAKASHI : (remembers)
    [
    (Team Minato)
    (obito's crushed face below the boulder)
    OBITO : I leave Rin....to you...

    (Raikiri piercing through Rin's heart)
    RIN : Kakashi kill me...they're using me...!! I might end up attacking the Leaf!

    (Kakashi stopping Naruto's Rasengan and Sasuke's chidori on the top of the hospital)
    KAKASHI :
    (to Sakura) Sorry..I haven't been a very good Sensei...
    KAKASHI :
    (to Sakura) I will take the burden from you. It's my duty.
    SASUKE : Bring back my clan!! Then I will stop!!
    NARUTO : I'll shoulder your hatred and die with you....
    OBITO : You let Rin die!!

    ]

    (Obito's left hand is near Kakashi's eye)
    KAKASHI : [ ...saving him (looking at Obito) from his illusionary dream is also included in my mission. ]
    SFX : GRAB!!

    OBITO : ?!!
    (Kakashi grabs Obito's wrist)
    KAKASHI : Until then.....I refuse to die!!

    (Kakashi's determination to save his friend before death!!)
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Sweet Easta,Gr8 work
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great One!!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Your predictions are always great
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great work it was so exciting
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Thats good prediction I can see that happening :P keep it up
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Great prediction, but not quite sure if I want the scene to change just yet. But if does..oh well.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    great work..
    though i really want someone beat the ultimate jutsu of the series,tnj.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Nice!! "Friendship" )
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    I could literally picture that in my mind.. great one brah
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Damn that was fast, but great prediction...I love how none of your predictions are biased, you follow the plot with strict detail and that's what's great about your predictions...keep it up
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by sasukexx13 View Post
    Sweet Easta,Gr8 work
    Quote Originally Posted by Alex storm View Post
    Great One!!
    Quote Originally Posted by Animeniak View Post
    Your predictions are always great
    Quote Originally Posted by nanacha View Post
    great work it was so exciting
    Quote Originally Posted by Joelroll23 View Post
    Thats good prediction I can see that happening :P keep it up
    Thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by Beautiful Hime View Post
    Great prediction, but not quite sure if I want the scene to change just yet. But if does..oh well.
    Thanks . Can't think of their (slug and the snake) names )
    Quote Originally Posted by vasu 32 View Post
    great work..
    though i really want someone beat the ultimate jutsu of the series,tnj.
    I doubt that'll ever happen. BTW Thanks
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    Nice!! "Friendship" )
    Thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by sandy uzumaki View Post
    I could literally picture that in my mind.. great one brah
    That's an honor for me. Thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by kmw1811 View Post
    Damn that was fast, but great prediction...I love how none of your predictions are biased, you follow the plot with strict detail and that's what's great about your predictions...keep it up
    Thanks
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Your Predictions are always Great
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That was an awesome prediction.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Impressive well done
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Awesome prediction man! I really enjoyed the Kakashi v Obito fighting and especially the ending!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Fantastic prediction *claps*
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    your predictions are always awesome, i think kishi will not rush to Kakashi and obito's scene lol but i can see this happening
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    That was awesome! I could picture it in my mind and everything! Sadly, I don't see it happening BUT it would be a nice turn of events
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

    Excellent prediction as always ahhimane

    Amount of content you put in your prediction is fitting amount of content Kishi put in real manga panels/pages

    Very good and entertaining interraction between Kakashi and Obito, nice dialogs and easy to follow but well detailed action.

    Really good sound effects, I could actually picture it in my mind, each page of manga with details what is happening in each panel etc.

    Splendind work, keep it up
     
         

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