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    Bio (Second Attempt)

    Basic Information

    Name: Zebra
    Nickname: "The Bat"
    Gender: Male
    Age: 26
    Clan:

    Looks: Zebra is an incredibly large and muscular man. He has slicked back dark purple hair and a large number of vertical wrinkles on his forehead, due in large part to his almost constant scowl. Zebra's most distinct feature is his half 'Glasgow smile', forming a large ragged tear from his lips all the way to his ear on the left side of his face, exposing all the teeth on that side.

    Personality: Zebra is described as a savage. He is a violent and cruel fighter who cannot see a bad opportunity to partake in a battle, especially when enraged. The man is not a fan of liars as during his life, he was constantly plagued by them. Zebra has a massive appetite and little regard for how much he eats. A normal person would run away if they ever came across him.

    Village Info

    Village of Birth: Amegakure
    Village of Alliance: Otogakure

    Rank//Chakra Info

    Ninja Rank:
    Specialty:
    Elements: Wind - *needs training
    Your ninjutsu:

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    Background Info

    History: Zebra was born in Amegakure to two loving parents who tried the best they could to raise him inside a harsh country currently under civil strife. They originally hailed from Kirigakure, but were forced to leave once the fourth Mizukage put a manhunt on Kekkai Gekkai users.

    Their life went on normally, living in a small wooden cabin where everyday, Zebra and his father would go hunting and fishing. His mother took care of his younger sister and brother as well as maintained the living space and prepared the laundry and food. This routine continued for nine years, brutally ending on Zebra's tenth birthday where everything changed.

    Returning home from hunting, Zebra and his father journeyed back to their house where they found a shocking surprise. His mother, sister, and brother were being held by rogue shinobi that demanded a warm place to stay and food as they were on the run from the mysterious organization that ruled over the country.

    Zebra's father tried to negotiate that they could share the house and for a while it worked until winter struck and food became scarce. One day, Zebra's father sent him to the lake to try and get some fish while he stayed at home with the family and others. Once at the lake, a dangerous blizzard kept Zebra pinned down on a row boat in the middle of the lake. It took him 23 days to escape and no one came to help him.

    As he traveled back home, he suddenly became overcome with fear as he approached his "silent" house that was usually buzzing with noise despite the situation. He began to wonder if "that" organization had found them. He crept into the house where he meant the three men that were staying with them. No one else was around.

    Scared, Zebra asked where his parents were. They were silent and carefully watched him as he searched the house. What he found... was disturbing. Half-eaten carcasses lay in the basement. The men had consumed his family out of hunger. As he gazed at the terrified expression on his dead brother's gnawed of face and the silent scream his sister had, he felt a violent rage overcome him. In his frenzy, he screamed, the entire house was torn apart from the force. Soon after, he realized that his voice projected "sound" that turned out to be his family's secret Kekkai Gekkai.

    Dead, he walked up the stairs to see the fate of the men, but was surprised to meet a snow white man with long black hair and snake-like eyes wearing a black robe decorated with red clouds. The man had killed the three attackers and revealed his name to be Orochimaru. He offered Zebra a place to sleep and eat to which Zebra numbly replied. Suddenly, he felt a pain around his mouth. He went to go touch it but all he felt was teeth. His scream had ripped the skin of his jaw. Later, wanting it to be fixed, he asked Orochimaru who disagreed with his decision, saying it was beautiful.

    Eventually, Orochimaru quit the Organization and him and Zebra traveled around until Orochimaru revealed his dream to create his own village. Soon, he did and refugees from all around the world came to it, reveling in their hope of Orochimaru. After that, Orochimaru asked Zebra's permission to use his Kekkai Gekkai and give it to others. It worked after much experimentation and the Sound Four were born.

    After Orochimaru's death, Zebra found a will stating that he was the rightful heir to the village, but believing himself to be unworthy, he decided to leave the village in the fate of his friends hand and train in order to become stronger.

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    Theme Song and Background Music:




    Battles


    Won: N/A

    Lost:
    N/A
     
         
    Last edited by Uzumaki Menma; 06-09-2013 at 05:55 PM.

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Sound release?
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Is sound release an element ?
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Quote Originally Posted by Ventalus View Post
    Is sound release an element ?
    I saw it on the RP Guide but not sure if it is ... I'll check and update shortly.
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    not bad but you do not have neither wind nor sound release, you need to be trained for wind, and for sound be an s-class ninja (2400 posts)
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Quote Originally Posted by Okami the butcher View Post
    Sound release?
    it does exist.
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

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    not bad but you do not have neither wind nor sound release, you need to be trained for wind, and for sound be an s-class ninja (2400 posts)
    But if he doesn't have an element yet he can still have it. I just read and if I understand right then he can have it. As long he write " - Needs training" next to it right?
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Quote Originally Posted by Ventalus View Post
    But if he doesn't have an element yet he can still have it. I just read and if I understand right then he can have it. As long he write " - Needs training" next to it right?
    No, he can't. Sound Release operates under it's own rules and can't be acquired by most people.
    If and when he meets all the requirements and earns the permission to use it, then he may state he needs training.

    With that being said, everything involving the following statement must be removed.

    He realized that his voice projected "sound" that turned out to be his family's secret Kekkai Gekkai.
    Not only does Sound Release already exist, he's attempting to make a custom clan; only Official Sages can submit them.
     
         
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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Quote Originally Posted by Pekoms View Post


    No, he can't. Sound Release operates under it's own rules and can't be acquired by most people.
    If and when he meets all the requirements and earns the permission to use it, then he may state he needs training.
    Oh stupid of me to fail write. I meant wind release. Sorry.

    I mean he can type wind release and then say "needs training"?

    My apologizes.
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    ok, but remember you can't make your own kekei genkei yet.
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    You could make it look better but still nice bio
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    it looks ok from my view but sound release is S-rank
     
         

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    Nice bio :D
     
         

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    Re: Bio (Second Attempt)

    Nice bio, I like it
     
         

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