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    Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    Valton's Determination !? Kill Muaro !?
    This is Chapter 8 Full no parts
    ~Link to previous Chapter~
    Characters Appearance
    [Sally]
    Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
    [Ageria]
    Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
    [Valton]
    Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
    [Reed]
    Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.
    [Kuroko]
    Wears a white cloak with a white uniform has black hair and brown eyes.
    [Junto also known as the "guy in the black cloak"]
    Wears a black cloak which is torn from every edge....is bald and has a tattoo near his eyes.
    [Muaro]
    Wears a scarf around his neck and a blue cloak and is neatly dressed, has white hair combed backwards and wields a katana

    *Raining*

    Junto : U-Ugh .....B-but How...you w-were dead !?
    Reed : I had doubts that this would happen so i activated my rukkon before i came here.
    Junto : You mean instant - regeneration... Ugh lord Kuroko ...Save me.
    Kuroko : Now why would i waste my time on that ? your as good as dead, i don't need you anymore .
    Junto : You bastard .....if it wasn't for me you would never have achiev..... !!!
    Reed : I think you have spoken too much ... now die, Kuroko you truly are pure evil you never had a place for us in your goal we were mere sacrifices.... now i can see..the truth.
    Kuroko : Save your speech....tell me something, how do you plan plan killing me.
    Reed : How will i ? ....i won't but he will *Suddenly slashes Prada and Kuro, Valton sets free from the Spell that keeped him from releasing his power*
    Valton : ALRIGHT ! Now we're talkin in action ........ Well then Kuro lets settle our left out bat...!!! *An Explosion of light* What the ? ....
    Kuroko : You should have known that i would have come prepared... you see ...right before the gathering i already merged your blitz with the Rejigerna, and it needs an hour for it to break the seal, so its about time.
    Valton : You....DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT YOU HAVE JUST DONE !?
    *Someone steps out of the light*
    Muaro : Its pretty Noisy out here....... Its been a while....Valton !?

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    Reed : What the .....this feel its so heavy ....i can barely breath.
    Kuroko : Welcome ..... Muaro ....my 300 years work finally paid off .....Now...Muaro fol...!!!!*Gets sliced*
    Muaro : Who are you !? are you the one who used that Technique on me to close my mind ?
    Kuroko : B-but it should have worked how come you still have your own mind and control over your body !???!?
    Muaro : Its funny that you thought for a second that my own technique would work on my own self...how foolish, i don't know who you are but i have no time for a weakling like you, what i want to see dead is YOU ....VALTON !
    Valton : REED !? Get out of here as fast as you can.....i am not sure if i make it out of this one alive.... but if i don't i lend you an task...Protect Sally !
    Reed : .....I see so thats how it is....i might be weak but someday i will kill you myself so don't die...and don't worry about sally ..... i will protect her.
    Valton : Glad to hear that ... And i don't plan on dying here cause i owe you .. Go !
    ...Well then Sorry to keep yah waiting Muaro *smirks*
    Muaro : Don't get too cocky...cause this time the results will be different i wont fall for being sealed away like before.
    Valton *draws sword* Kuroko its annoyable that the mess i first cleaned up long ago has once again been kicked out of the trash......now i have to clean up the mess again thanks to you Kuroko.
    Muaro : *Draws sword* Its an Honor to be able to settle this again with you......Valton
    Valton : *Clashes with Muaro* If the world assumingly had to suffer by your action i would be ashamed to have you as a brother Muaro... so thats why i will finish you with my own hands so the world of tomorrow won't have to suffer the same fate as 1000 years ago. *While clashing with Muaro*
    Muaro : It was nice to hear you call me your brother....after all we do share the same blood.*While countering Valtons attacks*
    Kuroko : .....what is this power.....what have i done ? ...why couldn't i see this coming.
    *Muaro and Valton clashing*
    Kuroko : ....300....3-300 years i wasted...just for me to be killed like this ? Valton....WHY !? JUST TELL ME WHY !?
    Valton : Huh !? *looks at Kuroko*
    Muaro : Please don't take your eyes of your opponent it seems boring to just finish you off.
    Kuroko : No...just no....i can never ACCEPT MY DEATH LIKE THIS !! JUST Who do you think i am *Starts to transform*
    Valton : What the !? What is this power !?
    Muaro : Umph......this power....its has the feel of rage to it.
    Valton : Kuroko....Stop you're not being yourself don't let hatred take over you...stop when you can.
    Kuroko : STOP ??? AFTER ALL THE SUFFERING AND TIME I WENT THROUGH TO ACHIEVE MY REVENGE !? *Transforming*
    Muaro : His Rage is responding to his suffering..... this can get worse....worse to the level that he could even exceed the power of MY OWN SELF !
    Reed : What the .....this pressure its coming from Valtons Direction....
    Valton : Seems words won't work ....Forgive me i have to break this fight of for the moment..
    Muaro : Do you really think i will just wait for you to finish of your other matters ? i will kill you off right here and now.
    Kuroko : *Suffering* Ughhhhh aghhhh * Transforms completely*.....H*Pant, pant* I feel....i feel so good what is this immortal feeling i feel like a king *laughs*
    Valton : WHAT is that....what have you become Kuroko....*Counters Muaros attacks*
    Muaro : *Charges at Valton* *Kuroko attacks Muaro and punches him to the ground*
    Valton : What the !? ..... *Kuroko suddenly appears infront of Valton and kicked to the ground*
    Kuroko : Whats the matter...... weren't you two acting very tough moments ago...Now the world will realise the name ........... KUROKO !!!


    Until next chapter
    This is Chapter 8 Full no parts
    ~Link to previous Chapter~

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    Nice. it's much longer than before. I like it. Yesh, it's action time Hahaha keep it up M3U I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

    btw, why did you cancel the OneShot??
     
         

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    LOL I'm JK it's awesome bro I loved it, u get a whole jar of cookies for this
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    Dude, this chapter was the most epic, I loved it !
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    Quote Originally Posted by HazuRima View Post
    Nice. it's much longer than before. I like it. Yesh, it's action time Hahaha keep it up M3U I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

    btw, why did you cancel the OneShot??
    Too lazy, although i had such an good idea for it
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    LOL I'm JK it's awesome bro I loved it, u get a whole jar of cookies for this
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    Dude, this chapter was the most epic, I loved it !
    Thanks and be patient about ur sig it will take a while
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    I like the fact that this chapter is a lot longer. I didn't even know Valton had a brother so that was mind boggling. Great chapter, the story is really progressing, keep up the good work!
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    That was a long Chapter than usual.... Great Job as always....
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    So it was an every man for themselves type of situation. Reed thought that may happen and prepared for it while Junto was confident in his necessity and paid the ultimate price. I was kind of thinking that Kuroko was a selfish individual and I was right as everyone else was expendable to him. A truce has been formed between Valton/Reed-thats interesting. Muaro is Valton’s brother-woah! In the end the tables quickly turned seemingly in Kuroko’s favor via his transformation and I wonder if he has exceeded Mauro’s strength. Overall it was a great battle oriented and revealing chapter and good job with the extra length this time
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    Amazing!Love it!
    It would make cool anime
     
         

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    Re: Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 8

    Wow amazing as always great read bro and I loved the way you portrayed the action sequences awesome

    No wonder I look forwards for your chapters.
     
         

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