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    Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    I dont think she is about to die but she death will increase Sakura;s development

    Orochimaru looks to see Tsunade bisected by a tree, clinging on to her life.

    Oro: My,my Tsunade chan, you seem to be half the woman you used to be.
    Tsunade: I must be closer to hell than I thought, come to see me off old friend, atleast I manage to save the other Kages...
    Tsunade eye become heavy, and she coughs a little
    Oro: shhhku,ku, ku Oh Tsunade you still amuse me, save your strength, I've come to help...
    Karin: Should I heal her, Orochimaru-sama.
    Oro: You are not required at the moment. In time, you will be of great use.
    (orochimaru licks out his tongues and smiles)
    Karin:...(creep out laugh) o-okay
    Tsunade: What do you want...Orochimaru?
    Oro: I can't let you die a dishonorable death, you were my friend after all.
    Katsuyu mini: Your services are not required here, you dont scare me orochimaru! I will heal Princess Tsunade
    Tsunade: Katsuyu...I dont think I will make it...tell Sakura...I...
    Katsuyu: Dont speak like that Princess, hang in there...if you want to help Orochimaru, move the tree.
    Oro: shkukuku, I dont take orders from slugs anymore, I have evolved beyond the 3way deadlock, and when I said I'd help I didn't say who I was helping
    Orochimaru summons a snake from his mouth 5 times the size of Katsuyu mini and then it fights her off, while he tends to Tsunade.
    Katsuyu:..!
    Tsunade: Why you...little.
    Karin: I dont understand...
    Suigetsu: uhh, Orochimaru sama
    Oro: Silence, Saskue-kun wants to be hokage, he needs her out of the way
    Orochimaru spits out a sword a beheads Tsunade. *My plan is almost complete, all I need now is Karin and Suigetsu*
    Orochimaru smiles and looks at them from the corner of his eye

    Scene switches.
    Jubbi is burning in flames, a loud scream of pain can be heard from the beast. It begans to go ballistic breaking free form the seals and it stops moving.
    Fodder: It's dead, Naruto and Saskue did it.
    Jubbi: (gleam of light)" Ahh, it's good to be free once again, that shell could only be broken by the combined might of those who descended from the sage him self. Now I must rid this world of your kind, and start over...(dark vader voice)
    Saskue: Damn it
    Naruto: Damn, looks like we didn't kill him
    Sakura: That in which doesn't kill you can only make you stronger.
    (Sakura feels as if a piece of her is missing, and Katsuyu informs her of Tsunades death by the hands of Orochimaru. A tear begans to run down Sakura cheek.)
    Sakura: Tsunade Sama, you didn't even get to see blossom, but dont worry i will carry on your legacy, know that you will of fire burn deep with in me, and I will avenge you no matter what. Even it that means...
    (Sakura has a faint memory of her trying to kill Saskue.)
    Shikamaru: I didn't think of this happening, I need a moment
    Ino: Something bothering Sakura, I can feel it...
    Jubbi: And you, foolsih mortal, trying to control what you can not comprehend, you are a fool. And for that I must end you. The Jubbi forms a Tail Beast Ball At Madara.
    Madara: Please, dont underestimate me beast, Shinra Tensei.
    (Madara raises his hand a pushes the attack away, right back at the beast, hurting it)
    Jubbi: You wield the eye of the Sage. DIE!!! GWauohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    Sakura jumps on Gamakichi, with a mini Katsuyu on her shoulder.
    Naruto: Whats up Sakura chan?
    Sakura: We need to attack it while it's distracted...
    Naruto: Right, Saskue Kun let get it while it's distracted.
    Sakura: Hold it right there, I'm helping this time! Seal Release
    Sakura forms a the ram hand seal and begans to change. Lines began to run down Sakura's body then disolve into her skin and a mark of buddha appears on her forhead. Sakura hair also grew as a side effect from regeneration. THen she began to float as cherry blossoms emerge from her head.
    Naruto: Sakura Chan...your amazing.
    Saskue: (thoughts) Sakura chan......she gotten better, she may be problematic...
    Sakura: Not only was I storing my own chakra in my forhead but I was storing natural chakra as well,(forms hand seals) Yin-Yang Release: Perfect Byakugo: Transcended Cherry Blossom. I am not some defensless woman, I am a force of nature, feel my wrath.

    *Thoughts: My perfect Chakra control allowed my to prefect and combine this technique with the slug sage mode. I have moved beyond simple chakra control, I have control over my physcial and spiritual enrgy, I have become enlightened, I am aware of my entire being, now I am able to manifest my chakra on the physical plane and manipulate it,I have been saving this for you Saskue...(no kun) *

    Naruto: Ready let go this.
    Naruto begins to form a Rasenshuriken and throws it up in the air, Saskue then adds his black flame to it. Sakura then uses her new found telekinetic powers and makes the attack even more stronger, by speeding up the rotation and causing it to grow, then she throws it at the Jubbi, with her mind.

    Naruto:?! Sakura chan, that jutsu. you're flying, and how did you do that!!!

    Saskue:....( his jaw drops and he try to identify that technique with his Sharrigan but fails.)
    Madara: That power
    Hashirama: That girl, she perfected Mito's byakugo and combined aspects of my sage mode to it. She may be a greater Shinobi that me and Itachi! But how? Could it be, she is the one...

    Next Chapter: Prophecy Girl! Cherry Blossom Finally Blooms.


    Hope you enjoy it, it was mostly for fun, but i could happen

    Greatly influence by my drawing but this is what she is doing.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    how much more can sakura develop?
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    Ur amazing artist Nd I could see this happening
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    please make her kishi also.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    Is Sakura flying?
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    lmao!

    Die hard Sakura fan! Nice drawing, just work on the proportions.(Advice from an artist)
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    Quote Originally Posted by Dęvîa Puęrî View Post
    Ur amazing artist Nd I could see this happening
    Thank you.
    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    please make her kishi also.

    Quote Originally Posted by HiddenSound View Post
    Is Sakura flying?
    Yes, she is my focusing the her chakra around her body, through a telekinesis like jutsu
    Quote Originally Posted by Dreckerplayer View Post
    lmao!

    Die hard Sakura fan! Nice drawing, just work on the proportions.(Advice from an artist)
    Yes i am. lol, yeah, some of them do look a bit akward, im learning though.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hypemaster View Post
    how much more can sakura develop?
    She has potential but, i think more development for will seem rushed but can be justified because of her storing Chakra for 3 years.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    Quote Originally Posted by FemmeFatale View Post
    I dont think she is about to die but she death will increase Sakura;s development

    Orochimaru looks to see Tsunade bisected by a tree, clinging on to her life.

    Oro: My,my Tsunade chan, you seem to be half the woman you used to be.
    Tsunade: I must be closer to hell than I thought, come to see me off old friend, atleast I manage to save the other Kages...
    Tsunade eye become heavy, and she coughs a little
    Oro: shhhku,ku, ku Oh Tsunade you still amuse me, save your strength, I've come to help...
    Karin: Should I heal her, Orochimaru-sama.
    Oro: You are not required at the moment. In time, you will be of great use.
    (orochimaru licks out his tongues and smiles)
    Karin:...(creep out laugh) o-okay
    Tsunade: What do you want...Orochimaru?
    Oro: I can't let you die a dishonorable death, you were my friend after all.
    Katsuyu mini: Your services are not required here, you dont scare me orochimaru! I will heal Princess Tsunade
    Tsunade: Katsuyu...I dont think I will make it...tell Sakura...I...
    Katsuyu: Dont speak like that Princess, hang in there...if you want to help Orochimaru, move the tree.
    Oro: shkukuku, I dont take orders from slugs anymore, I have evolved beyond the 3way deadlock, and when I said I'd help I didn't say who I was helping
    Orochimaru summons a snake from his mouth 5 times the size of Katsuyu mini and then it fights her off, while he tends to Tsunade.
    Katsuyu:..!
    Tsunade: Why you...little.
    Karin: I dont understand...
    Suigetsu: uhh, Orochimaru sama
    Oro: Silence, Saskue-kun wants to be hokage, he needs her out of the way
    Orochimaru spits out a sword a beheads Tsunade. *My plan is almost complete, all I need now is Karin and Suigetsu*
    Orochimaru smiles and looks at them from the corner of his eye

    Scene switches.
    Jubbi is burning in flames, a loud scream of pain can be heard from the beast. It begans to go ballistic breaking free form the seals and it stops moving.
    Fodder: It's dead, Naruto and Saskue did it.
    Jubbi: (gleam of light)" Ahh, it's good to be free once again, that shell could only be broken by the combined might of those who descended from the sage him self. Now I must rid this world of your kind, and start over...(dark vader voice)
    Saskue: Damn it
    Naruto: Damn, looks like we didn't kill him
    Sakura: That in which doesn't kill you can only make you stronger.
    (Sakura feels as if a piece of her is missing, and Katsuyu informs her of Tsunades death by the hands of Orochimaru. A tear begans to run down Sakura cheek.)
    Sakura: Tsunade Sama, you didn't even get to see blossom, but dont worry i will carry on your legacy, know that you will of fire burn deep with in me, and I will avenge you no matter what. Even it that means...
    (Sakura has a faint memory of her trying to kill Saskue.)
    Shikamaru: I didn't think of this happening, I need a moment
    Ino: Something bothering Sakura, I can feel it...
    Jubbi: And you, foolsih mortal, trying to control what you can not comprehend, you are a fool. And for that I must end you. The Jubbi forms a Tail Beast Ball At Madara.
    Madara: Please, dont underestimate me beast, Shinra Tensei.
    (Madara raises his hand a pushes the attack away, right back at the beast, hurting it)
    Jubbi: You wield the eye of the Sage. DIE!!! GWauohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    Sakura jumps on Gamakichi, with a mini Katsuyu on her shoulder.
    Naruto: Whats up Sakura chan?
    Sakura: We need to attack it while it's distracted...
    Naruto: Right, Saskue Kun let get it while it's distracted.
    Sakura: Hold it right there, I'm helping this time! Seal Release
    Sakura forms a the ram hand seal and begans to change. Lines began to run down Sakura's body then disolve into her skin and a mark of buddha appears on her forhead. Sakura hair also grew as a side effect from regeneration. THen she began to float as cherry blossoms emerge from her head.
    Naruto: Sakura Chan...your amazing.
    Saskue: (thoughts) Sakura chan......she gotten better, she may be problematic...
    Sakura: Not only was I storing my own chakra in my forhead but I was storing natural chakra as well,(forms hand seals) Yin-Yang Release: Perfect Byakugo: Transcended Cherry Blossom. I am not some defensless woman, I am a force of nature, feel my wrath.

    *Thoughts: My perfect Chakra control allowed my to prefect and combine this technique with the slug sage mode. I have moved beyond simple chakra control, I have control over my physcial and spiritual enrgy, I have become enlightened, I am aware of my entire being, now I am able to manifest my chakra on the physical plane and manipulate it,I have been saving this for you Saskue...(no kun) *

    Naruto: Ready let go this.
    Naruto begins to form a Rasenshuriken and throws it up in the air, Saskue then adds his black flame to it. Sakura then uses her new found telekinetic powers and makes the attack even more stronger, by speeding up the rotation and causing it to grow, then she throws it at the Jubbi, with her mind.

    Naruto:?! Sakura chan, that jutsu. you're flying, and how did you do that!!!

    Saskue:....( his jaw drops and he try to identify that technique with his Sharrigan but fails.)
    Madara: That power
    Hashirama: That girl, she perfected Mito's byakugo and combined aspects of my sage mode to it. She may be a greater Shinobi that me and Itachi! But how? Could it be, she is the one...

    Next Chapter: Prophecy Girl! Cherry Blossom Finally Blooms.


    Hope you enjoy it, it was mostly for fun, but i could happen

    Greatly influence by my drawing but this is what she is doing.
    This post is definitely a wet Sakura fanboy/fangirl dream.

    Yeah Kishi DID said Naruto and Sakura must grow up.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    LOL, at least it was amusing.

    That scene with the Juubi breaking free from its shell or whatever reminded me of DBZ: Wrath of The Dragon. It talking was...lame I guess is the right word.

    I can't take Sakura's New power seriously.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    Quote Originally Posted by Silverblade View Post
    This post is definitely a wet Sakura fanboy/fangirl dream.

    Yeah Kishi DID said Naruto and Sakura must grow up.
    I just amplify the facts given, lol. what do you mean, but what Kishi said?
    Quote Originally Posted by rikerslade View Post
    LOL, at least it was amusing.

    That scene with the Juubi breaking free from its shell or whatever reminded me of DBZ: Wrath of The Dragon. It talking was...lame I guess is the right word.

    I can't take Sakura's New power seriously.
    glad you enjoyed it, Aw what its too powerful, to Jean Grey-ish.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    lmao...i just read the dialogue...that's intense infatuation. Please make more!!
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    Quote Originally Posted by FemmeFatale View Post
    I just amplify the facts given, lol. what do you mean, but what Kishi said?

    glad you enjoyed it, Aw what its too powerful, to Jean Grey-ish.
    LOL, nah. Jean Grey did come to mind though. Thing is, you kinda strayed from being like a writer to essentially focusing on Sakura. I can't really put it into words. Basically, you let your inner Sakuea fan write this, so I find it hard to see it from a standpoint of the manga. It was creative, but Sakura's Powers don't really lean towards telekenises.
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    I know she is one of the main characters but this prediction had too much focus on her.

    In the other hand, it's pretty possible because Kishimoto hasn't put as much spotlight to her as he did with other more irrelevant characters...
     
         

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    Re: Ironic End? : Bisected Slug Princess

    no. ^shakes head
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    Sakura already got her moment. if she had another powerful technique. the Kh9 Sakura, SHikamaru, ino, already got thier moments. now the side characters can move out of the way.
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    naruto and Sasuke are the centerfold to the story and now we can continue to see them in action.
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    also alot of the fans didn't agree with Sakura's first power up so why would they agree to a second? Kishi knows not to mess up his story, by making a side character overpowered like that.
     
         

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