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    beyond chapter 634 part 3: despair

    Here's the link to part 2. http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=392212&

    Minato uses a chakra arm to grab Kakashi and puts him Near Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. Sakura crouches near him.

    Sakura: HIS INJURIES ARE VERY SEVERE, BUT WE'RE NOT TO LATE TO SAVE HIM.

    Sakura begins healing Kakashi.

    Minato: OBITO? YOU'RE THE MASKED MAN?

    Obito: YES, I WASN'T JOKING WHEN I SAID THAT I WOULD RULE THE WORLD. I'LL HAVE MORE CONTROL THAN ANY KAGE, ANY FEUDAL LORD, OR EVEN THE SAGE OF 6 PATHS. REALITY ITSELF WILL BE MY KINGDOM.

    Minato: THE OBITO I KNOW WOULDN'T DO THIS TO THE WORLD, OR KAKASHI.

    Obito: OBITO DIED IN MADARA'S LAIR. I AM NO ONE. I HAVE NO NAME.

    Minato: ARE YOU BLAMING ME FOR WHAT HAPPENED, THAT I WASN'T THERE TO SAVE YOU AND RIN?

    Obito: NOT REALLY. THIS REALITY IS A FAKE. MY REAL SENSEI WOULD HAVE MANAGED TO SAVE ME AND RIN. HOWEVER, YOU DIDN'T, SO YOU'RE A FAKE VERSION OF SENSEI.

    Minato has a deeply depressed look to see his student this way.

    Obito: IT'S TO LATE NOW! THIS REALITY WILL CRUMBLE!

    He uses almighty push against Minato, but he uses FTG in an attempt to evade, however, the almighty push lasted long enough to hit him when he reached his kunai. Minato was blown away a great distance smashing into a boulder.

    Meanwhile, the hokages fight Madara. Madara activate perfect susanoo. Tobirama in sage mode uses water style:from the depths to make a huge amount of water that forms a sea serpent that attacks Madara.

    Madara: PATHETIC!

    Madara makes the susanoo cut the sea serpent in half strait through the middle. Tsunade and Hiruzen combined their attacks at the susanoo's gut. Madara was knocked back and suffered damage. They continued to attack again. However, Madara switched to sharingan and predicted their attacks and used timing to counter. He swatted them away and then slashed at them using the sword's shockwave.

    Minato and Obito traded failed blows. Minato would attempt to punch Obito. It would pass through him and Obito would counter attack. Minato used FTG to escape. Minato attempted to blitz Obito with KCM speed, but found that he couldn't catch him off guard. Obito used wood style as a suprise attack. Minato used FTG again, but Obito took this opportunity to use universal pull to rip out the kunai and compress them into a ball and crushed them. Obito tried to use fire vortex to overcome Minato's speed with the large size. Minato dodged it without trouble anyway. Obito keeps Minato at bay with mixes of taijutsu, giant ninja tools, and wood style.

    Madara; IT'S TIME TO END THIS LITTLE GAME!

    Madara activates the rinnegan and combines 25 wood clones with susanoo. He uses heaven's wrath to summon a meteor shower, each one as strong as the one used against Onoiki.

    Tsunade: THIS IS WHAT HE COULD HAVE DONE THE WHOLE TIME?

    Tobirama: TO THINK THAT I THOUGHT I COULD BEAT THIS!

    Naruto has a shocked look. Sasuke remains silent, but inside, he feels terror.

    Minato uses space-time barrier to teleport the meteors away.

    Obito(thought): HE CAN'T TELEPORT WHILE USING A BARRIER. HE'S MINE!

    Obito teleports next to Minato and sends him to his dimension with kamui.

    Naruto: DAD!

    Soon after, Obito releases him. Minato returns with injuries that he didn't have previously.

    Naruto: WHAT HAPPENED! HE WAS FINE JUST A SECOND AGO!

    Obito uses a reverse contract to break the edo tensei slowly, making Minato powerless in the mean time. Madara uses 2 sword slashes simultaneously in PS to wound the hokages. His clones use the reverse contract. Tsunade regenerates from the attack easily.

    Tsunade: I CAN'T BE BEAT WHILE IN SAGE MODE! MY SAGES SUPPLY ME WITH CONSTANT SAGE CHAKRA, KEEPING MY MITOTIC SEAL INTACT FOR AS LONG AS I WISH.

    Madara: YES, THAT MAY BE, BUT THERE'S AN EASY REMEDY FOR THAT.

    Madara uses deep forest emergence and wood spikes to kill the sages, reducing Tsunade to base mode.

    Madara: AND NOW IT ENDS.

    Madara stabs Tsunade with a susanoo sword and then uses a seal to disrupt Tsunade's chakra, getting rid of the healing ability is has. The ninja alliance looks on in horror.

    Sakura:WHAT CAN WE DO?

    Kiba: AW MAN! WE HAVE TO DEAL WITH THAT?!

    The alliance's will is broken. Despair's tight grip latches on to their fragile hearts. How will this be resolved?



    I hope you enjoyed part 3. If you did, + rep would be appreciated. Give me your input in the comments.
     
         

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    Re: beyond chapter 634 part 3: despair

    It was pretty good, I liked it can't wait for next part
     
         

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    Re: beyond chapter 634 part 3: despair

    Nice i need to see whats in the kumui dimension
     
         

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    Re: beyond chapter 634 part 3: despair

    I wish the new releases will have this much action. Great job as usual.
     
         

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